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Reviewer #3:

In this manuscript, Naetar et al. investigate the role of LAP2α binding to A-type lamins in the nucleoplasm. LAP2α was already thought to be important for maintaining the nucleoplasmic pool of soluble A-type lamins, because knockout of LAP2α has previously been shown to reduce nucleoplasmic signal from an antibody that recognizes the lamin-A/C amino terminus. However, by directly tagging A-type lamins with fluorescent proteins and by using an alternative antibody to stain them, Naetar et al. find that the presence of LAP2α does not appreciably affect the pool of soluble lamins in the nucleoplasm. Instead, they find that LAP2α affects the assembly state of soluble lamins within the nucleoplasm, preventing formation of higher order A-type lamin structures that impede the mobility of telomeres within the nucleus.

There is a lot to like about this paper. I admire the author's mechanistic approach to studying lamin assembly state. The complementary cell biology/microscopy approaches paired with the biochemical approaches in figure 5 lead to an overall convincing story. And finally, I appreciate the efforts the authors made to "show their work," including their genome editing quality control measures.

Major comments:

1) Although I appreciate the transparency of the authors in demonstrating their workflow and quality control measures (see above), some of the terminology makes the manuscript difficult to read. At times it feels more like reading a lab notebook than reading a manuscript. For example, The manuscript would be easier to understand if cell lines were given descriptive names (eg: LAP2α KO, or mEos3.2-lmna instead of "WT#21") rather than continuing to refer to them by the small guide RNA that was used to generate them. A second example: it is nice to show biological replicate data as in figure 1, but it took me a while to figure out that the second and third columns in panels A and B were biological replicates; I spent some time trying to determine which experimental condition was different. Perhaps one biological replicate could be displayed in the main text and the second could be moved to the supplement, especially considering that it appears that only one of the clones was used for the quantifications shown in the bottom panels.

2) Why was the choice made to disrupt LAP2α at the beginning of exon 4? How large are exons 1 and 2, which are not shown in the schematic in the supplemental figures? What percentage of the LAP2α peptide primary sequence is affected by a frameshift mutation at the start of exon 4? Why was this approach preferable to introducing a frameshift mutation closer to the 5' end of the gene? I am concerned that the "LAP2α KO" cells used in the experiments may have some partially functional truncated LAP2α protein.

3) On page 16, the authors describe a set of experiments that are meant to demonstrate that their failure to see a difference in nucleoplasmic A-type lamins in LAP2α mutants is not due to the fluorescent protein tag used, however, instead of looking at untagged lamins, they elect to look at a cell line that has all lmna alleles tagged. Wouldn't it be better to use the LAP2α KO cells from figure 1 and stain with both the 3A6 antibody and the N18 antibody to determine whether untagged lamins behave the same way as tagged lamins? Perhaps this experiment could be added along with the current data, as it would be nice to compare directly between a cell line with all lmna alleles tagged and a cell line with no lmna alleles tagged.

This experiment would also give the authors a chance to compare morphology and overall fitness of cells with all untagged lmna with cells with all tagged lmna, to determine whether the tagged proteins are fully functional. Even if the tagged protein is fully functional, it would be appropriate to add a brief discussion of the possibility that fluorescent tags do perturb lamin-A/C function. After all, many lamin mutations do not cause obvious phenotypes in tissue culture cells, but defects can still emerge during development and aging in the context of an animal.

4) The authors build a convincing case that binding to A-type lamins by LAP2α influences their ability to assemble. But how do cells leverage this relationship for biological functions? Do cells tune the amount of fully soluble vs. partially assembled A-type lamins in the nucleoplasm in order to control nuclear structure or function in response to certain stimuli? Have the A-type lamins in the nucleoplasm been found to be in a different assembly state in different cell types? As the study is currently written, it presents an interesting molecular mechanism but no biological mechanism.