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  1. Aug 2018
    1. eader of those Armies bright

      In the following verse Satan's status and valour etc is again proclaimed and exalted

    2. O Prince, O Chief of many Throned Powers,That led th' imbattelld Seraphim to WarrUnder thy conduct, and in dreadful deeds [ 130 ]Fearless, endanger'd Heav'ns perpetual King;And put to proof his high Supremacy,

      Further enhancing Satan's status, as a being of superior qualities

    3. yet not for those,Nor what the Potent Victor in his rage [ 95 ]Can else inflict, do I repent or change,Though chang'd in outward lustre; that fixt mindAnd high disdain, from sence of injur'd merit,That with the mightiest rais'd me to contend,And to the fierce contention brought along [ 100 ]Innumerable force of Spirits arm'dThat durst dislike his reign, and me preferring,His utmost power with adverse power oppos'dIn dubious Battel on the Plains of Heav'n,

      Heroic qualities of valour, fortitude and stern, bold resolution. A man of action and a leader of others. At the same time as being impetuous and ambitious.

    4. Thrice he assayd, and thrice in spight of scorn,Tears such as Angels weep, burst forth: at last [ 620 ]Words interwove with sighs found out thir way.

      Maybe this could be seen as an example of Satan's more heroic virtues? His nobility and camaraderie; an acknowledgment of his responsibility to his fellow angels, for it was he who lead them to war and their now lamentable state. Empathising with his troops and preparing to rouse them once again. Or is it his fellow angels that are in tears?

    5. Thus Satan talking to his neerest MateWith Head up-lift above the wave

      Satan is like a leading hero in the army of fallen angels.

    6. Have left us this our spirit and strength intireStrongly to suffer and support our pains,

      What a great spirit! Although they failed, Lucifer and their fellows are doing something needs great strength to do.

    7. That Shepherd,

      Is this Shepherd a reference to Satan? As a parody of Jesus being the Good Shepherd, Satan leads the innocent sheep Adam and Eve away from the religious path.

      Or is it a reference to God being the shepherd of the chosen seed Adam?

    8. Moloch

      Also see WP on Canaanite religion, and child sacrifice by the Carthaginians, who were transplanted Phoenicians. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ancient_Canaanite_religion

      https://www.theguardian.com/science/2014/jan/21/carthaginians-sacrificed-own-children-study

    9. thir Names then known, who first, who last

      Instead of Homer's catalogue of ships, Milton gives us a catalogue of devils.

    10. And Devils to adore for Deities:

      See WP on horned deities. I don't have the research to show how some of those deities came to be identified as devils. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Horned_deity

    11. that all the hollow DeepOf Hell resounded

      An echo of 1.177: To bellow through the vast and boundless Deep

    12. descry new Lands

      And so is Milton a discoverer of new lands.

    13. is ponderous shield Ethereal temper

      Also, of course, the shield of Achilles: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shield_of_Achilles

    14. The mind is its own place, and in it selfCan make a Heav'n of Hell, a Hell of Heav'n.

      (1) Hamlet II.2.249, when discussing Denmark as a prison:

      ...for there is nothing either good or bad, but thinking makes it so.

      (2) From the Stoic handbook of Epictetus:

      Some things are in our control and others not. Things in our control are opinion, pursuit, desire, aversion, and, in a word, whatever are our own actions. Things not in our control are body, property, reputation, command, and, in one word, whatever are not our own actions.

      The things in our control are by nature free, unrestrained, unhindered; but those not in our control are weak, slavish, restrained, belonging to others.

      (3) The first verse of the Dhammapada, attributed to Buddha:

      All that we are is the result of what we have thought: it is founded on our thoughts, it is made up of our thoughts. If a man speaks or acts with an evil thought, pain follows him, as the wheel follows the foot of the ox that draws the carriage.

    15. he stears his flight

      Wasn't he chained on the burning lake?

    16. How all his malice serv'd but to bring forthInfinite goodness, grace and mercy shewnOn Man by him seduc't,

      This implies that getting Eve to bite the forbidden fruit was part of God's plan. Not only that, it was better than no bite, and it allowed Jesus to show mercy.

    17. What reinforcement we may gain from Hope, [ 190 ]If not what resolution from despare.

      Fine words, but keep in mind that Satan is bragging- one might say strutting- to make up for his bad situation. Or as it says above:

      So spake th' Apostate Angel, though in pain, [ 125 ] Vaunting aloud, but rackt with deep despare:

    18. To bow and sue for graceWith suppliant knee, and deifie his power,

      This could be Milton himself, writing PL during the Restoration.

    19. courage never to submit or yield

      Echoed in Tennyson's Ulysses:

      One equal temper of heroic hearts,<br> Made weak by time and fate, but strong in will<br> To strive, to seek, to find, and not to yield.

    20. prepar'd

      Another echo of Dante (Inferno 3):

      JUSTICE URGED ON MY HIGH ARTIFICER; MY MAKER WAS DIVINE AUTHORITY, THE HIGHEST WISDOM, AND THE PRIMAL LOVE.

      BEFORE ME NOTHING BUT ETERNAL THINGS WERE MADE, AND I ENDURE ETERNALLY. ABANDON EVERY HOPE, WHO ENTER HERE.

      4Giustizia mosse il mio alto fattore; 5fecemi la divina podestate, 6la somma sapïenza e ’l primo amore.

      7Dinanzi a me non fuor cose create 8se non etterne, e io etterno duro. 9Lasciate ogne speranza, voi ch’intrate’.

      To approximate that theology, Genesis would have read:

      In the beginning, before God created Heaven and Earth, created He Hell.

      Of course, Milton does not say that Hell was created before creation.

    21. fedWith ever-burning Sulphur unconsum'd

      A devilish echo of Ex. 3:2:

      the bush burned with fire, and the bush was not consumed.

    22. waste and wilde

      Reminiscent of the chaos before creation.

    23. Adamantine

      From WP: in the Greek tragedy Prometheus Bound (translated by G. M. Cookson), Hephaestus is to bind Prometheus "to the jagged rocks in adamantine bonds infrangible".

      There's also a book on Prometheus and Lucifer, though I haven't read it. I imagine it's not the only one to have made the connection: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lucifer_and_Prometheus

    24. Th' infernal Serpent

      Note that Satan and the serpent are not the same in Genesis. Going further, Satan has quite a small part in the Old Testament. Even in Job, it's never assumed that he has any independent power. It was left to Christian readers to put Rev 12.9 together with Genesis.

    25. Lords of the World

      The Bible quote is true, but we never see them as generals in God's army (as it were). Genesis goes right from the creation of Eve to the apple, so we never see the humans having dominion over the rest of nature.

    26. I may assert Eternal Providence, [ 25 ] And justifie the wayes of God to men.

      Providence, from providere, to foresee, assumes that God foresaw the apple bite and it was all part of his plan. At the least, this smells like a mix of Greek notions read back into Genesis, or to use the words of Jesus, to pour new wine into old skins.

    27. And justifie the wayes of God to men.

      Housman (Terrence, This is Stupid Stuff):

      For Malt does more than Milton can To justify God's ways to man.

    28. pregnant

      Were Milton not a powerful poet, many of his positions would be considered heretical. The same could be said of Dante, despite those who see him as St. Thomas in verse.

    29. Dove-like satst brooding

      Shelly refers to this and Genesis in The Cloud:

      And when Sunset may breathe, from the lit sea beneath, Its ardours of rest and of love, And the crimson pall of eve may fall From the depth of Heaven above, With wings folded I rest, on mine aëry nest, As still as a brooding dove.

    30. th' upright heart and pure

      Perhaps the real subject of the poem: Milton's pure and upright heart.

    31. out of Chaos

      It may be considered heterodox, but it's also the position in the Jewish Study Bible:

      A tradition over two millennia old sees 1.1 as a complete sentence: "In the beginning God created the heavens and the earth." In the 11th century, the great Jewish commentator Rashi made a case that the verse functions as a temporal clause. This is, in fact, how some ancient Near Eastern creation stories begin-including the one that starts at 2-4b. Hence the translation, When God began to create heaven and earth. 2: This clause describes things just before the process of creation began. To modern people, the opposite of the created order is "nothing," that is, a vacuum. To the ancients, the opposite of the created order was something much worse than "nothing." It was an active, malevolent force we can best term "chaos." In this verse, chaos is envisioned as a dark, undifferentiated mass of water. In 1.9, God creates the dry land (and the Seas, which can exist only when water is bounded by dry land). But in 1.1-2.3, water itself and darkness, too, are primordial (contrast Isa. 45.7). In the midrash, Bar Kappara upholds the troubling notion that the Torah shows that God created the world out of preexistent material. But other rabbis worry that acknowledging this would cause people to liken God to a king who had built his palace on a garbage dump, thus arrogantly impugning His majesty (Gen. Rab. 1.5). In the ancient Near East, however, to say that a deity had subdued chaos is to give him the highest praise.

    32. for that Angels were long before this visible Creation, was the opinion of many ancient Fathers.

      It seems that Milton the Protestant agrees with the Church fathers when it suits his purposes, and considers then ignorant when it suits his purposes.

    33. drawing to his side many Legions of Angels,

      I'm assuming this is from Rev 12:9: And the great dragon was thrown down, that ancient serpent, who is called the devil and Satan, the deceiver of the whole world—he was thrown down to the earth, and his angels were thrown down with him.

      The larger question is when is Milton quoting scripture, and when is he using poetic license? The latter point could be put less sympathetically: when is he creating his own theology?

    34. wherein he was plac't:

      Gen 2.8: God did make him in one place, and then moved him to Eden: And the Lord God planted a garden in Eden, to the East, and He place there the human He had fashioned (Alter)

    35. Of dauntless courage, and considerate PrideWaiting revenge:

      Heroic virtues. Reminds me of the 'wrath of Achilles'

    36. Thus far these beyondCompare of mortal prowess, yet observ'dThir dread commander: he above the restIn shape and gesture proudly eminent [ 590 ]Stood like a Towr

      Adjectives and similes enhancing Satan's status.

    37. Fall'n Cherube, to be weak is miserableDoing or Suffering: but of this be sure,To do ought good never will be our task,But ever to do ill our sole delight, [ 160 ]As being the contrary to his high willWhom we resist. If then his ProvidenceOut of our evil seek to bring forth good,Our labour must be to pervert that end,And out of good still to find means of evil; [ 165 ]Which oft times may succeed, so as perhapsShall grieve him, if I fail not, and disturbHis inmost counsels from thir destind aim

      Here we see Satan has not given up, even after facing immense hardship and the loss of the comforts of Heaven. In a way, one could see this as Satan exhibiting bravery and believing in his convictions. In Satan's mind, in order to get even, he is trying to pervert God's intended purpose (by reveling in causing "evil") and bringing grief to his cretor. One could, perhaps, in a way even sympathize with Satan for a bit, Satan, after all, felt shackled and limited by the will of God, and wanted to break free. The rebellious spirit of Satan is strangely relatable, and people often experience a rebellious phase during the teenage years.

    38. Not by the sufferance of supernal Power

      cf. 133. Another example of self delusion. The rebel angels fail to see that their release from the amercement of the "Stygian flood" is due to the "sufferance" or allowance of God, ascribing this release to their own power "as Gods". Milton makes explicit that this is not the case.

    39. Whether upheld by strength, or Chance, or Fate

      An instance of the inherent atheism behind the rebellion of Satan and the other fallen angels. They cannot comprehend or choose not to see that God upholds his throne not by "strength, or chance, or fate" but by right of his eternal nature - a nature that sets him apart from all creatures.

    40. and in th' excess of joySole reigning holds the Tyranny of Heav'n.

      Had Satan won the heavenly battle and became ruler of all, would we have had a more just, good, better god/ ultimate ruler? Is God truly tyrannical?

    41. That witness'd huge affliction and dismay Mixt with obdurate pride and stedfast hate

      Trait of epic poetry: the hero witnessing some kind of horrible disaster, as well as establishing a damaging character flaw.

    42. Thither let us tendFrom off the tossing of these fiery waves,There rest, if any rest can harbour there, [ 185 ]And reassembling our afflicted Powers,

      This feels very much like the Aeneid after Aeneas and his men crash on Carthage

    43. He call'd so loud, that all the hollow DeepOf Hell resounded.

      Here character's will appears to be powerful and changes the world a lot, just like nobles in epic poems.

    44. That with no middle flight

      I'm curious what the poet meant here - is the epic composed of a description of the origin and fall, but not much of the "middle" ? Doubtful I would think from the length!

    45. OF Mans First Disobedience, and the Fruit Of that Forbidden Tree, whose mortal tast Brought Death into the World, and all our woe, With loss of Eden, till one greater Man Restore us, and regain the blissful Seat, [ 5 ] Sing Heav'nly Muse

      From the very beginning Milton's intention to write an epic are obvious, echoing the much older Odyssey and it's first line "Sing to me of the man, Muse, the man of twists and turns..." (Fagles trans)

    46. O Prince, O Chief of many Throned Powers,

      The style and the sense is also epic. The way of expression great and powerful.

    47. OF Mans First Disobedience, and the Fruit Of that Forbidden Tree, whose mortal tast Brought Death into the World, and all our woe,

      This first phrase, it seems to me an epic introdution. It has some sense from Homer, as start Iliad. It seems that disobedience is the prime theme in this poem.

    48. Say first, for Heav'n hides nothing from thy view Nor the deep Tract of Hell

      As in other epic poems, the author ask help, to reveal to him the details and the information, here ask nothing hide from him. It is an epic elemet.

    49. Let none admire [ 690 ]That riches grow in Hell; that soyle may bestDeserve the precious bane

      The "resource curse."

    50. but still his strength conceal'd,Which tempted our attempt, and wrought our fall.

      Sandbagging.

    51. in foresight much advanc't

      Ironic, considering Satan is saying this from a place that had been prepared for rebels, in advance of any rebellion.

    52. dislike his reign, and me preferring

      Why?

    53. till then who knewThe force of those dire Arms?

      How could Satan aspire to be God's equal in glory if he didn't even assess God's strength?

    54. If he Whom mutual league,United thoughts and counsels, equal hopeAnd hazard in the Glorious Enterprize,Joynd with me once

      Was Satan's intention to share his power sincere?

    55. Beelzebub.

      The syllable "Sabu" crops up frequently in stories such as this. See, for instance, the Anonymous hacker-turned-FBI-informant who used that handle.

    56. Eternal Justice had prepar'd

      If it was foreordained that some one(s) would rebel, to the extent that a prison was pre-built for them, can that be considered Justice?

    57. Sulphur

      Where does the association of Hell with sulfur come from originally?

    58. To set himself in Glory above his Peers,

      Several of Jesus's disciples argued about who would be first among them in the Kingdom of Heaven. By contrast with God in this poem, Jesus didn't punish these disciples for their ambition to sit "in Glory above [their] Peers," but taught them that whomever wanted to be first among them had to be like a servant to the rest.

    59. The idea of a heroic Satan seems undermined by the reference to a 'great argument … [that will] justifie the ways of God to men'. We need to wait to identify Milton's Aeneas.

    60. Seraphim
    61. What a wonderful word this is, 'Pandaemonium'. The poem deserves to be remembered for this creation alone! I guess is shows the benefit of a classical education.

    62. With Beelzebub we have the beginning of a long list of 'heroes', perhaps combatants is better. This is typical of Homer, especially the Iliad.

    63. OF Mans First Disobedience, and the Fruit Of that Forbidden Tree, whose mortal tast Brought Death into the World, and all our woe,

      This seems like a "thesis" to me, cementing the First Disobedience as the central object

    64. The mind is its own place, and in it selfCan make a Heav'n of Hell, a Hell of Heav'n.

      Reminds me of Buddhist thought: how the perceptions and views we have about experience can have a dramatic positive or negative effect on our happiness. It also makes me think the power S.T.Coleridge attributes to the imaginal faculty.

    65. force hath made supreamAbove his equals.

      Satan casting himself as hero fighting tyranny

    66. till one greater Man Restore us, and regain the blissful Seat

      The epic hero who will restore us from the consequences of the original sin

    67. His mighty Stature

      Description helping to create a sense of Satan as heroic

    68. and in th' excess of joySole reigning holds the Tyranny of Heav'n.

      An example of Satan's heroic stance? Engaged in combat against, injustice, despotism, tyranny?

    69. A Dungeon horrible, on all sides roundAs one great Furnace flam'd, yet from those flamesNo light, but rather darkness visibleServ'd onely to discover sights of woe,Regions of sorrow, doleful shades, where peace [ 65 ]And rest can never dwell, hope never comesThat comes to all; but torture without endStill urges, and a fiery Deluge, fedWith ever-burning Sulphur unconsum'd:

      this description of hell is so vivid

    70. bottomless perdition

      hell

    71. Lords of the World

      can it be a reference to Satan?

    72. transgress his Will

      God's Will for the Man he created

    73. And justifie the wayes of God to men.

      Milton considers him as mediator between God and men. He believes that God has chosen him to write poetry and justify the ways of God to men.

    74. What in me is dark

      Shows the basic nature of man. Milton here accepts that he is not capable to writing this epic poem without the help of his Muse, that is the Holy Spirit.

    75. Eternal Providence
    76. Thou from the first Wast present

      shows the trinity nature of God. Father, Son and Holy Spirit. From this we can understand that God was not alone when he created the universe.

    77. Things unattempted yet in Prose or Rhime.
    78. That Shepherd

      it can be a reference to Moses, who God chose to free the Israelites from Egyptian bondage.

    79. one greater Man

      Jesus Christ, Son of God who came to save the mankind from death

    80. Fruit Of that Forbidden Tree

      tree of knowledge of good and evil

    81. great Deep

      Hell

    82. prime cause

      Eating the fruit of the tree of good and knowledge causing disobedience to God.

    83. Invoke thy aid to my adventrous Song,

      in this line, to me, recalls back to Milton's efforts to mimic the Homeric / Classical Style of invoking (asking) Divine aid in telling or singing the tale of an epic hero, as can be seen in the opening lines of The Iliad, The Odyssey and The Aeneid. in this particular line, Milton explicitly asks for divine aid (line 6) in singing / telling his song (although in this line and previously, it is not abundantly clear (to me) who the epic hero(es) is (or are).

    1. Love without end, and without measure Grace

      This is the loving God of the new testament that I expect, and Grace for all, not just the elect few.

    1. Unrespited, unpitied, unrepreevd,

      sounds a bit like Hamlet's: "...unhousel'd, disappointed, unaneled..."

    2. His red right hand to plague us? what if all Her stores were open'd

      His red hand.... Her stores were o....

      Her referring to ?

    3. The perilous attempt; but all sat mute, [ 420 ] Pondering the danger with deep thoughts; and each In others count'nance read his own dismay Astonisht: none among the choice and prime Of those Heav'n-warring Champions could be found So hardie as to proffer or accept

      Here we see no one is brave enough to accept the task upon which the fate of their kind rests, no one but Satan that is. In the lines that come after, Satan offers to take up the role that no one else would, and in doing so he showcases heroism -he has the courage that others lacked. Yes, one could argue that doing evil deeds are not the hallmark of a hero, but one would have to concede that taking on a task that no one else is willing to take on has to be considered heroic.

    4. To be created like to us, though less In power and excellence, but favour'd more

      Here, we can see one more reason as to why Satan and his army might be displeased with God - humans even though less in power and excellence than them are said to be more favored. One could place themselves in the position of Satan and, perhaps, to a degree understand why Satan felt undervalued by God, when "lesser" beings were being given more attention.

    5. And Princely counsel in his face yet shon, Majestic though in ruin: sage he stood [ 305 ] With Atlantean shoulders fit to bear The weight of mightiest Monarchies; his look Drew audience and attention still as Night Or Summers Noon-tide air, while thus he spake.

      Here we see Beelzebub described in a grand manner, almost, as if he was someone to be admired; Milton seems to devote a good amount of time, initially, to set up the motives of the "evil" characters, and in doing so makes them easier to understand and feel sympathy for. While they are not without flaws, we do see them feeling the pain of being thrown out of heaven and that humanizes them in our eyes.

    6. Ulysses

      Satan has shown elements of Ulysses in his search: he talks his way through the gates, but is willing to faces challenges bravely.

    7. Springs upward like a Pyramid of fire Into the wilde expanse, and through the shock Of fighting Elements

      Satan, like a true warrior, a hero to the fore dealing to the challenge.

    8. thither he plyes, Undaunted to meet there what ever power [ 955 ] Or Spirit of the nethermost Abyss

      Here the heroic, undaunted by the tasks he faces.

    9. Ore bog or steep, through strait, rough, dense, or rare, With head, hands, wings, or feet pursues his way, And swims or sinks, or wades, or creeps, or flyes:

      Be he god, hero or mere man, he, Satan here, struggles in the confusion of anarchy and Chaos.