511 Matching Annotations
  1. May 2017
    1. Legislating is a very human experience in which trust and mutual respect play critical roles. But 1986 proved that when both are present, big things can get done.
    2. loopholes proliferated, and the tax code grew more complex

      correlated? causative?

      complexity in law, leads to more logic to parse and process - therefore more potential ambiguity in human-processing.

      does software engineering practices about code complexity (or lack thereof) have fruitful applications here?

  2. Apr 2017
    1. They already police their networks for pornography, and quite well.

      I'm no expert, but is this really the case?

    1. add mightily to a federal debt

      How can a party that claims to value reducing the deficit significantly increase the national debt?

    1. after it.

      Overall grade = C/ C+

      This is a passable attempt that unfortunately regurgitates political tropes from the late 1980s, moderately updated. In addition, more importantly, you have to provide more evidence in order to support your claims and steer clear of selective anecdotes. Stick with the actual sources.

    2. These days, the whole idea of Western civ is assumed to be reactionary and oppressive

      you haven't proven this. you've asserted this numerous times but your evidence primarily consists of a few anecdotes drawn from elite white men (in the previous paragraph).

    3. According to a study published in The Journal of Democracy, the share of young Americans who say it is absolutely important to live in a democratic country has dropped from 91 percent in the 1930s to 57 percent today.

      I notice you didn't link to this source. why? it's important to cite your sources so that readers can verify your claims.

    4. chilling intolerance

      have you been to a college campus? is not getting your $10,000+ honorarium the same as fearing for your life as a trans- student? is retreating to your $100,000+/ year job at a think tank or on cable tv the same as getting pulled over by police on a regular basis, or having your humanity questioned in print "weekly?" the former are the "fragile thugs" here, not the students.

    5. ragile thugs who call themselves students shout down and abuse speakers on a weekly basis

      weekly? avoid such hyperbole.

    6. Finally, there has been the collapse of liberal values at home. On American campuses,

      this is a false equivalency. the collapse of the European Union is not the same as student-led protests on college campuses.

    7. centrist parties

      is it fair to say that the "center" has collapsed because "centrist parties" have? do ideas only inhabit political parties?

    8. premodern

      why "premodern?" nepotism in this vein seems to be a particularly modern phenomenon. think about all the petty dictatorships in Africa, Latin America, Asia, etc. are those perhaps more instructive models?

    9. rise of the illiberals

      the early 20th century had literal monarchies. the mid 20th century had literal fascists. is this period any different? you seem to be forcing the facts into a pre-existing narrative. stick with your sources and see what they say.

    10. f they encounter it,

      have you looked at many college curricula? most general education requirements, particularly at state universities, require some sort of "Western Civ" course. Most nowadays take it as an AP class in High School.

    11. faith

      an odd word choice. should we have "faith" in a historical narrative? narratives, of course, aren't "truth." we have "faith" in things we can't otherwise prove.

    12. about the importance of reasoned discourse, the importance of property rights, the need for a public square that was religiously informed but not theocratically dominated

      that's not true. it applied mostly to white, protestant men. women's suffrage wasn't granted until the early 20th century in the US.

    13. That series encapsulated the Western civilization narrative that people, at least in Europe and North America, used for most of the past few centuries to explain their place in the world and in time

      as they discuss (and as many others have subsequently) that progressive narrative was a construction of the 19th century - laden with the weight of colonialism, imperialism, and racist nationalism that accompanied that project. Notice, for instance, they're all white men you mention...

    14. he series was phenomenally successful,

      does popularity necessarily correlate with rigor? explain your reasoning here.

    1. Overall, department stores employ a third fewer people now than they did in 2001. That’s half a million traditional jobs gone — about eighteen times as many jobs as were lost in coal mining over the same period.

      And this decline is rarely talked about.

    1. Another page note.

    2. These are page notes. Huh.

    3. children

      It's notable Dr. King was spurred by photos of Vietnamese children to end his silence.

    4. had torn a gaping budget hole in Johnson’s Great Society domestic programs.

      In other words, the war drew funds away from Civil Rights programs.

    5. Beyond signaling his growing radicalism, the Riverside speech reflected Dr. King’s increasing political courage — and shows why, half a century later, he remains a pivotal figure in American history.

      This looks like the thesis to me.

    6. David J. Garrow

      Who is David Garrow?

  3. Mar 2017
    1. the stereotype that the people working to end abortion hate women.

      I would not say that the stereotype is that pro-life people hate women, but that they fail to support women in whatever decision they make.

    2. This movement will thus be unable to unite American

      The language of this article is being exclusionary itself, ironically arguing against exclusion, by assuming that all women at the women march were American women. It also depends on what it means to be an American Woman is, who is considered in that.

    3. while the Women’s March claimed to stand for love, nonviolence and inclusion, its organizers staunchly refused to extend that “inclusion” to pro-life women.

      As a class we are reading Threshold Concepts, which tells us about the different waves of feminism, and how the 2nd wave was heavily based around the decision to legalize abortion. Feminist issues in America are still largely based on health care rights, especially now again that they are in crisis under President Trump.

      Class question: Can you be a feminist and be pro-life?

    4. The men I work with are creating a culture in which their own wives, daughters and sisters are empowered and supported.

      This sentence further perpetuates this false idea that men can only care about women in relation to them, wives and daughters, why not ever women as a whole or even women in a friend position.

      Class question: Are statements like these, about men caring about women only in relation to themselves, more helpful or harmful?

    5. The men I work alongside want to end abortion not because they want to control women, but because they agree that requiring the sacrifice of a woman’s children in exchange for her success is unimaginable.

      Technically, everything will be "unimaginable" to the men she works with because they will never experience women's issues, so bringing them up should have no effect on the reader.

    6. To us, “resistance” has to include opposition to the lie that freedom can be bought with the blood of our preborn children.

      Every woman has a different meaning of freedom and opportunity for it, especially when thinking about social status, class, race, etc. so the "us" statement is unclear who the writer is talking about. For example, 69% of women who have abortions, are economically disadvantaged.

      http://prospect.org/article/demographics-abortion-its-not-what-you-think

    7. How the New Feminist Resistance Leaves Out American Wome

      After reading the article, I was very confused at the end by the title. The articles main point is about the exclusion of pro-life women in the current feminist movement, such as the march, but what does that have to do with "American women"? Are they assuming maternal problems and abortion are only an American issue? That in itself is problematic.

  4. Feb 2017
    1. average grade of “D”

      what made the grade a D?

    2. saying it was unnecessary, The San Jose Mercury News reported on Sunday.

      what made it unnecessary?

    3. ordered the evacuation of nearly 200,000 people

      Where did they send them.

    4. In Peril at Oroville Dam, a Parable on Infrastructure

      What does this mean?

    1. What California’s Dam Crisis Says About the Changing Climate

      Overall scientific credibility: 'high', according to 3 scientists who analyzed this article.

      evaluation card

      Find more details in the annotations below and in Climate Feedback's analysis

    1. mothers that didn’t imbibe the probiotics were less caring and tended to neglect their pups.
    2. Further observation of males revealed thick skin bristling with active follicles, elevated testosterone levels and oversize testicles, which the animals liked showing off.

      Probiotic Bacteria Induce a ‘Glow of Health’ Levkovich et al., 2013. http://journals.plos.org/plosone/article?id=10.1371/journal.pone.0053867

    3. after feeding mice a probiotic microbe

      Lactobacillus reuteri

    1. Their proposal would tax carbon emissions at $40 a ton to start and would be paid by oil refineries and other fossil fuel companies that would pass costs on to consumers with higher gas and electricity prices. The money raised would be returned to Americans through dividend checks; a family of four would get about $2,000 a year to start. This would help people adjust to higher energy prices and give them an incentive to reduce consumption or switch to renewable sources of energy.

      Interesting idea.

    1. The idea that requests for White House tours and the planning of the Easter Egg Roll depend on the president’s spouse should be shocking to our 21st-century sensibilities.

      Good point!

    1. The Russian dissident and chess grandmaster Garry Kasparov drew upon long familiarity with that process when he tweeted: “The point of modern propaganda isn’t only to misinform or push an agenda. It is to exhaust your critical thinking, to annihilate truth.”

      Very well said.

    1. Annotate

      As another example of the trend in annotated news, there are many things to like about this example, and some notable drawbacks as well. Pros: More interactive than NYTimes' previous annotation efforts, nudges reader use of layered commentary, content of annotation layer encourages perspective-taking and reminds reader that political is personal (and vice versa). I also think it's interesting that interview processes and outcomes become the content of the annotation layer. Cons: Confusing how annotations (i.e. refugee contributions via interview) are related to specific anchor text, the "Notes" are static (no ability for reader response, no links out to related information), and annotation "Notes" don't have tags (limiting association with other documents and annotated content). That's my rough assessment of an important step forward.

    2. Produced

      The NYTimes' in-house annotation efforts are iterating rather quickly - this approach is more interactive than what was publishing a week ago, yet still isn't participatory or open. I'm eager to see how their efforts continue to grow, whether or not they'll jump to a third party platform, and if they'll discuss their process publicly.

    3. asked refugees in Jordan

      To learn about these refugees - who they are, where they have come from, etc. - the reader must click on highlighted anchor text and read the annotation. The UX makes interaction with the annotation layer an essential quality of the reader's experience.

    4. vigilant2

      The numbering convention is similar to footnotes, and reminds me of commentary about similarities among annotation, hyperlinks, and footnotes.

    5. Trump

      Test annotating the new NYTimes dynamic "note."

    6. for their responses to the president’s decision

      I'm curious about the relationship between interviewing and annotating. Su "asked refugees... for their responses," with answers then anchored to specific parts of the EO. What's the process linking new content (refugee responses) to the anchor text?

  5. Jan 2017
    1. Our audience inhabits a complex, polluted information environment; our role is to help them navigate it — not to pretend it doesn’t exist. The need to show our work and earn trust has never been more important, since once reliable official sources are peddling “alternative facts” — as the White House press secretary did Saturday.

      The first half of this statement could be reworked as a pedagogical call for digital literacy.

    2. we trust you to reckon with a messy, sometimes uncertain reality.

      Ideally, yes, but can that be done in practice today?

    1. The first wave of feminists fought for more than 70 years to win their biggest demand; S

      really great examples

    2. They have forgotten — again — that this great nation will endure and will prosper only if we all prosper together.

      this is so important

    3. Or — worse — Mr. Trump’s vow to end “political correctness” and make this, at least rhetorically, the same white man’s America it was in Jackson’s time?

      I don't think that will happen, too many people, civilians, will stand in his way; standing up for what they believe in

    4. I don’t buy it. Hillary Clinton’s campaign wasn’t that bad, and Mr. Trump was exposed enough for any thinking adult to see exactly what he is.

      I agree, people tend to get stuck on useless little issues rather than working on change

    5. a man who says he has never asked God for forgiveness, who refers to the Eucharist with characteristic humility (“I drink my little wine, which is about the only wine I drink, and have my little cracker"), who mocks our military heroes, who lumbers about a stage proclaiming, “I alone can fix it!,” who dismissed a working man after the election with a tweet that read in part, “Spend more time working — less talking”

      definitely not in favor of donald trump - these are some new ones I haven't heard of

    6. I mean a greater, almost spiritual faith that I had in my fellow citizens and their better instincts,

      sounds like a disappointed facebook post

    7. It’s inescapable, considering what we are: the first republic of the modern age, a nation of immigrants, haven to so many peoples from around the world. We have, like no other country, for better and for ill, dominated the modern world through both our hard power and our soft, our weapons but also our ideas.

      This is a really a good sentence and idea/explanation

    8. “let America be America again/The land that never yet has been, and yet must be”

      That really is a statement I think most americans can relate to

    9. NO, I’m not over it.

      Powerful beginning

    1. “There is a real problem with the elite privates and flagship publics in not serving as many low-income students as they should,

      agree

    2. On several dozen of campuses, remarkably, fewer students hail from the entire bottom half of the income distribution than from the top 1 percent.

      That's so so crazy oh my goodness

    3. Lower-income students who attend elite colleges fare even better on average than low-income students elsewhere

      wow thats really interesting

    4. Pavia’s story is the classic story of the American dream.

      cool connection

    5. But the success stories are real, too, and they’re fairly common.

      I like how they show both sides

    6. Improving higher education should be a national priority.

      aggreed

    7. Dropout rates are high, saddling students with debt but no degree.

      DEBT

    8. These students entered college poor. They left on their way to the middle class and often the upper middle class.

      That's really cool wow

    9. encouraging

      good word choice

    10. The most comprehensive study of college graduates yet conducted, based on millions of anonymous tax filings and financial-aid records.

      credible

    11. Lots of data for who is attending HE.

    1. This discourages

      Then what do you propose?

    2. affidavits

      A written statement confirmed by an oath in court

    3. But it will take more than that to fix a police culture where there is almost no accountability.

      So how can this be changed?

    4. wanton

      Deliberate, spiteful, purposeful

    5. the city fails to even investigate a majority of the misconduct cases that it is required by law to examine.

      Thats not really surprising

    1. “It’s scary to say it, but maybe companies will have to be the standard-bearers for morals right now,”

      Call to action?

    2. Nicholas Reville, a board member of the Participatory Culture Foundation who has worked with the Sleeping Giants

      I like how he brings the Sleeping Giants back in, it ties the story together

    3. it’s about using corporations as shields to protect vulnerable people from bullying and hate crimes.

      I've read many articles about cyberbullying between individuals or a group. It's new to read about such large scale cyber hate.

    4. I expected that other companies would want to trumpet their own Breitbart departures. It seemed an easy win for corporate P.R. to distance itself from Klan-rally-like riffs like this one — “every tree, every rooftop, every picket fence, every telegraph pole in the South should be festooned with the Confederate battle flag.” (Telegraph poles!?)

      This article is interesting but difficult to follow.

    5. Programmatic ads can also follow individuals around the internet, based on their browsing history, as happened with Mr. Philips. A single targeted ad could cost just a fraction of a penny, but the pennies add up to a billion-dollar industry.

      It's very interesting to know how this all works.

    6. “We are trying to stop racist websites by stopping their ad dollars,”

      Outline of exactly what they're doing, clear and concise.

    7. Within hours, they received their first response, and they realized that they had stumbled across a potentially powerful tactic.

      It's interesting to think how anyone can make a change in the world. Just by creating a twitter account these people have started something powerful.

    8. gobsmacked

      interesting vocab that matches the authors tone

    9. “This has been the longest month of my life.”

      Because it was a difficult month or?

    10. ad dollars.

      Using "ad dollars" rather than marketing money or advertisement budget creates a youthful mood.

    11. earth and environmental science professor

      Adding credibility

    1. Mr. President-elect, are you listening?

      calling out President-elect

    2. In the short and medium term, we must step up assistance to climate refugees and sufferers, both to provide relief and to assist with new livelihoods that adjust to new climate realities

      call to action

    3. She broke off cactus pads, scraped off the thorns and boiled them briefly, and the boys ate them — even though they provide little nutrition. “My heart is breaking because I have nothing to give them,” Fideline said. “I have no choice.”

      He doesn't mention himself much, although it was his own story of when he was there he focuses on what will apply to readers emotions.

    4. The World Food Program

      outlining programs that help, how other people can help too

    5. Those of us in the rich world who have emitted most of the carbon bear a special responsibility to help people like these Madagascar villagers who are simultaneously least responsible for climate change and most vulnerable to it.

      I like this statement. It's clear and to the point. Not too wordy

    6. certainly not fretting about American politics — for she has never heard of either President Obama or Donald Trump.

      This shows how self-centered America truly is

    7. the United Nations says.

      credible sources

    8. Trump has repeatedly mocked climate change, once even calling it a hoax fabricated by China.

      This makes Trump look like the bad guy, making it seem like he's working against dying children

    9. overseas governments that don’t want to curb carbon emissions.

      He states "curb carbon emissions" like it's a very simple thing to solve. Is it? I'm not sure but usually a problem of such a large scale cannot be "curbed" with ease

    10. For the next half century or so, we will see students learning less in school and economies held back, because in 2017 we allowed more than a million kids to be malnourished just here in southern Africa, collateral damage from our carbon-intensive way of life.

      More new information

    11. Now they understand there is a far broader toll: When children in utero and in the first few years of life are malnourished, their brains don’t develop properly. As a result, they may suffer permanently impaired brain function

      He presents something new, we know children are starving in Africa. But this is different information readers haven't heard before

    12. Sonjona realizes that it is wrong to marry off a 10-year-old, but he also knows it is wrong to see his daughter starve.

      Such a sad struggle, a decision that a man should not have to make about his daughter.

    13. because no one can afford the bride price of about $32.

      Many people have $32 in their wallets at any given time. Again, we will never know what it's like to live in those conditions.

    14. Not one of the children in the village has ever had a bath.

      This shows the audience that even though they're reading about these impoverished people they will never know what it is actually like to experience these conditions.

    15. In America, climate change costs families beach homes; in poor countries, parents lose their children.

      If I had a beach house I'd feel guilty

    16. The immediate cause of the droughts

      Backstory makes it more credible

    17. a related drought has devastated East Africa and the Horn of Africa and is expected to continue this year. The U.N. World Food Program has urgently appealed for assistance, but only half the money needed has been donated.

      Translation: It's not going away and Americans are selfish, will you be like the rest of them and let these kids die on your watch?

      Reminds me of the "Arms of the Angel" dog commercials. I can't watch them without crying

    18. “I feel so powerless as a mother, because I know how much I love my child,” she said. “But whatever I do just doesn’t work.”

      I am not a mother and this still hits me hard, it must hurt mothers very deeply

    19. Trump should come and feel these children’s ribs and watch them struggle for life.

      Follows up Trump being a bad guy with emotional appeal to readers.

    1. Students need two skills to succeed as lawyers and as professionals: listening and communicating. We must listen with care, which requires patience, focus, eye contact and managing moments of ennui productively — perhaps by double-checking one’s notes instead of a friend’s latest Instagram. Multitasking and the mediation of screens kill empathy.