After having seen the deterioration of communication abilities, I believe that this is something that will prove to be relevant. I will use different facts and statistics from this section to address this issue.

This point will be helpful in the essay because this describes the stress that informal caregivers face when trying to take care of a patient with dementia or Alzheimer's disease.

I believe that using quotes from this interview would greatly boost my credibility in this essay. These quotes surmise my point because in-home care can be potentially dangerous.

This might be a point of contention in my essay because I am trying to champion nursing home care.

Using testimonials and information on the types of safety concerns related to at-home caregivers and their family will give me a viable argument against in home care.

I believe that mentioning these statistics will help to provide me with viable reasons as to why dementia patients need nursing home care.

This fact will help to solidify my argument because the safety problems of in home care can be taken away in a nursing home setting.

I believe that mentioning some of these stastics will help to give credibility to my argument.

I believe that mentioning these facts in my essay will help to establish my credibility and to bolster my argument.

This is something that I have seen time and time again with nursing home placement. It is important that I mention this fact in my article

This fact will be incredibly helpful in my essay because this shows how much nursing care is needed with dementia patients.

This could be helpful in formatting my essay because I will have to use quite a bit of information and data to get my point across.

I think that this would be helpful for my essay because I will need to make claims, or assertations about my argument. I think that formatting my paper this way would help with organization.

This could be helpful for my essay because I will need to provide enough background information for my readers to understand my topic.

The internet was and is still a big resource in connectedness in the world. This specific resource was invaluable in understanding both of my grandparent's conditions and making sure that they were comfortable.

This will be something I might encounter with my mom because as my grandpa further declined, he eventually went to a nursing home and later on my grandma went to a nursing home. During this time, primary cargiver roles switched between my mom and her siblings becuase they made sure my grandparents had what they needed and that everything was kept in order. Sometimes caregiving isn't only in the hands of professionals in the nursing home because the family mostly regulates things and makes sure that everyting stays in order behind the scenes.

My grandma has a form of dementia known as "vascular dementia" while my grandpa had alzheimer's disease. Both are serious forms of dementia that can cause serious symptoms. These diseases are uncurable and place incredible amounts stress, sadness, and a whole host of other emotions on family members and the person with the disease. This will be helpful to understand in the interview becaue my mom will have experienced all of these events differently than I did becuase my grandparents are her parents. I was too young to fully comprehend what was going on when the diseases first started to develop,but I slowly started to realize their true enormity as I got older. My mom, on the other hand, didn't have the option to not understand. She slowly saw her parents transform before her eyes.

Wow, that is an incredibly high statistic considering the other diseases that are common throughout the elderly population. I had no idea that the rates were that high.

This is something I saw in the later stages of alzheimer's disease because I was old enough to mostly understand what was going on. This is something my mom and I will be able to relate to and understand together because we were both there to see it. My grandpa eventually passed away after having the disease for a number of years and this is something we might have viewed differently.

I have no doubt that this will come up in the interview because this fact will have effected my mom's life and how she percieves alzheimer's disease.

This will be helpful in the interview because she will have noticed more signs of the progression of alzhiemer's disease than I would have becaue of my young age and my not understanding what the disease truly did. If the interview ever goes in this direction, I will be able to ask questions about the signs of progression of the disease.

This will be important in considering the early signs of alzheimer's disease. These will be the symptoms that my mom first noticed when my grandpa started to develop alzheimer's disease.

I like that one of the people involved in the conversation added a clarification for the story of what he thought of the previous statement. He made sure to keep it light though and to not get off topic. He made sure that the other person was entirely finished talking as well.

In these specific sentences, one of the brothers is taking the conversation back to where he wants it to be. MW had gotten off topic in his last statement and BW took the conversation back to the previous topic. This is a great example of what to do if you, or someone else, gets off topic in a conversation. This will be important for me to remember in the interview in case my informant gets off topic from one of my questions.

I'm going to highlight this again because it is a great example of clarifying a word, or statement. This shows that the MW was paying attention to the speaker, BW, entirely rather than thinking about other things.

When she closes off her story, she makes sure to wrap it up entirely. She adds in a closer with enough punch to it to make the reader reflect and laugh. I need to focus on doing this with my interview because I tend to talk quite a bit and I don't always have an easy time wrapping up stories.

I love the humor in this story. The speaker, because there is no questioner in this story, makes sure to be exact and to the point with her story. She makes sure to condense what she can and she still keeps the emotion in it.

It is interesting that the human mind is so incredibly complex and detailed. There are many factors as to why conspiracy theorists believe conspiracy theories, but it seems like education can play a role in the belief of conspiracy theories. It is also important to point out why conspiracy theorists are eager to take jabs at authority such as the government. In the instance of politics, it is always easy to come up with conspiracy theories because in politics there are always secrets and information kept hidden, such as Watergate.

This is interesting. This shows that conspiracy theorists are more likely to attribute actions to things that can't or wouldn't do those aforementioned actions. I guess that this explains why it is hard to convince conspiracy theorists of real facts once they believe in something.

This is a form of advertising. This can be an incredibly effective way of making something look good or bad in regards to another thing.

The 1990s was famous for its small government policies and the people's opposition to authority. I'm guessing that Alex Jones is still stuck in that mindset.

The first part of this quote, which is about investigating claims and evidence, makes sense. The second part, on the other hand, does not. This seems like a quote to gain attention from the public by claiming something that is incredibly outlandish.

This seems to be a publicity stunt on his part. When the next sentence, which is about conspiracy theories, is taken into account, this seems downright impossible.

It's honorable that he is trying to make sure that he stays on the right path in life.

How did he think of the woman's son before her visit?

This must have been one of the hardest conversations for this mother and daughter to have together. They are both trying to be entirely honest with each other and that is what makes this conversation meaningful.

This must have been one of the hardest experiences in this mother's life. Not only did she just have a kid, she was still in jail for drug use.

I like this particular part of the interview because it shows just how long the father and his son had been apart and how it had affected them. This is a raw, emotional statement because it doesn't just state their reactions, it shows them.

The efforts the woman made to stand with her husband were truly brave, but it shows how desperate she really was. She didn't know how long she would live in that way and she didn't care, what really mattered to her is that she was standing by her husband.

That's the unfortunate truth. My grandpa had alzheimer's disease as well. I'm glad that she was able to reconnect with her grandpa.

I love this particular part of the interview, I can tell it is incredibly honest. I love that the grandpa was being as truthful as possible to his granddaughter.

I may be guilty of this in some of my writing. It's not a good habit, but I try to monitor it.

I love this particular sentence! It is eye-catching and strong.

I've found this particular technique helpful before when writing essays. It helps for reader cognition, as well because they are able to connect ideas easier than if the idea wasn't restated.

Good old brain power! Our brain is amazing, especially our ability to recognize and process information.

I believe that this is one of the most important parts of revising a paper. The thesis has to ring true to you. Your paper should also be able to support your thesis with evidence.

I find that I have this problem in my writing more often than any other problem mentioned. I believe this step will be the most critical for me in my revision process.

I absolutely love this phrase! This is by far the truth to some of my papers. I will do my best to not ignore the small errors, but I will also focus on making sure that the larger errors and weak points of the paper are focused on just as much.

I didn't know that this was considered revising. I, before this had always considered it editing a paper. I will try to apply this more to my writing by taking a step back and looking at my paper.

I had no idea that revision meant to "see again." I always believed that it meant to change. I guess I will be doing a few things differently from now on.

The mouse in the poem is not meant to be just a mouse, but a representation of the author and his hopes for the future. The author of this article did a fantastic job of capturing that.

The way he wrote his poems sounded light and melodic, but it was also the meaning behind the words that really packed a punch. You could tell he didn't necessarily like farming when he talked about it in such a way that made it sound bleak and heartless. You could also tell that he was a master of song and rhyme.

This is actually really interesting, it explains why his writing almost sounds melodic. He knew how to sing, and so he knew how to write poetry in a way that sounded like song.

I find that this might be a good way to gain attention to other interests that you might have if you don't want a lengthy bio.

Being someone who doesn't read comics, I already know that this is not going to be a smooth read.

This girl is an expert on gaining her audience's attention by putting in small tidbits of information on her life that can be related to another person's experiences.

A link to a sponsor.

This sentence could be more organized or, even, split into two sentences. For example, "Have a look around. I hope you enjoy my no theme blog."