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In general this note is not cohesive at all
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Very nice, but you keep forgetting authors
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STG #! what is Minimal VC??? remember MIN MOD MAX does not "exist" in psychosocial documentation
Change Title to Cognitive Adaptation training ... Other than that good job
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Change the title to Environmental Adaptations. Other than that, vey nice
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some stuff is bolded, not sure why, otherwise great job
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Move this chapter to the correct section.
QoL is not an approved abbreviation
(A) on soap needs more , specially after an assessment.
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Overall good job , missing LTgoal #2
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IPSRT is an intervention which is based on a Bio-psychological frame of reference. It is not a theory
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LTG #2 should be more specific re: which executive functions you are targeting. Otherwise god job
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what is Minimal verbal cues???? Remember Min Mod Max does not transfer to psychosocial documentation.
Otherwise good job!
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Change the title to cognitive adaptation training and homeless. Otherwise good job
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focused on compensatory
focused on ???? .... instruction, training, ??
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The Assessment part needs work, there's s O & P embedded in there.
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appropriate time.
which was ??? "appropriate" is not "objective"
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There's no indication of the agenda of what the OT will be doing???
in STG 1 does she require cues to make the list or to complete the things on the list because of her limitations????
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Authors???
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There should be at least an indication that the client has been referred to OT. Case study doesn't give me much info about why is OT involved.
STG #2 Isn't she living in a group home?? Shouldn't you be incorporating CO-OP in your STG
Setting: Community Based - Group Home
Overall what is being proposed is not CO-OP
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- Mar 2018
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In the O I'm missing how did she do with both activities she participated in? ( the mindfulness activity and the training)
otherwise nice job
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Leslie cried and had difficulties speaking while explaining what occurred at work.
objective The A on the SOAP needs re work , some of the info should be on the O
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... and how did it go?? that's important info, also what was the role of the OT???
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STG 3 I would make it a bit more general, what if she only wants to go 1 a month or chooses other activity that promotes social participation
The goals are very ambitious, to the point that they will be hard to measure. I appreciate you guys thinking outside of the box. join Choir??? that's a stretch since there's no mention of singing being an interest
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Very nice ladies, very nice
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Overall great job, LTG 2 is hard to measure
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Good job with most of the content, the SOAP needs work.
Authors Alpha by last name
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Watching a highlight of his football career incorporates his passion for football and works on mindfulness. This allows him to learn to be in the moment and be aware of the more positive factors in his life.
This doesn't tell me who he is doing, according to your clinical judgement
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At the end of the session, client expressed that the WRAP would be a good tool to identify stressful triggers that could be causing his self harming behavior.
Subjective
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Client reports he is aware of his self harming behavior and expresses that he wants to change.
Subjective
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LTG # 1 is it the goal that she does it exactly 5 times or that she is able to effectively used the technique when needed??? which one you think will be more beneficial?
Good job with the SOAP
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I'm a little confused about the setting. Also it is hard to ascertain the therapist's role in the SOAP note.
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Watch punctuation, otherwise very nice job
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STG # 3 visiting a quiet space is not going yo increase his participation, what's the purpose of visiting the quiet space? (I know what you are trying to say but it's not conveyed effectively to denote skilled therapy)
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STG #2 is not a goal , is a PLAN
LTG how do we know the goals are being met?
STG#3 what have we discussed re: the use of MIN MOD MAX in psycho-social documentation?
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Evidence to substantiate the theory section?
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Check setting is not worded properly.
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LTG what kind of activity?? LTG 2 I know what you want to say but it is not expressed properly.
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Great job with the soap
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STG again what kind of activities? is the goal to maintain physiological responses...?
Shouldn't he identify the triggers that evoke the physiological responses?
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Let's discuss the problem statement
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Evidence- poorly written . A study by whom???? it is nice that the link to the article is but one may decide not to read the whole article.
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In the introduction, go under the assupmtion that ppl maybe reading this chapter, without reading the previous chapters. Therefore there has to be a lead in to the content. Check for typos.
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Setting: The setting is community based. Do not specify bank name, you can say "client's current financial or banking institution Agenda: Shouldn't Gloria practice the skill ????
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Just minor tweaks, other than that good job.
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So if you are meeting Gloria at the bank that will be what kind of setting? (also I wouldn'y name any specific banks, it looks like endorsement)
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evidence to support Introduction
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Plan: ... so what is the OT going to do?????
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Good intro
Need Evidence for theory section
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Overall good job, tweak setting and plan
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Plan: if you say she will resume, It gives the impression that she has stooped or is going to stop tx for some reason
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Setting: Insurance is not going to pay for your services in an outpatient clinic. What other setting would be appropriate
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need more info about the evidence, maybe 1 more sentence.
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read and rewrite, highlighted sentence, it too wordy
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Good job everything else!
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Since your goals are mostly at the grocery store, shouldn't that community environment be part of your setting?
Other than that very nice work
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Very nice work!
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meet her for what.. coffee?
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what constitute minimal verbal cues ???
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8 point may be a lot to ask, depending on her initial score. also remember a 2 point increase is considered significant in the COPM.
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Where's the evidence to support the intro and the theory sections?
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Setting: AA is a peer lead , consumer led group, an OT will not be activaly participating in that setting
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Change Title don't use all CAPS
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STG #2 is not a goal , is a PLAN
LTG how do we know the goals are being met?
STG#3 what have we discussed 100 times re: the use of MIN MOD MAX in psychosocial documentation?????
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SOAP are we looking at her cooking skills? What did the OT do for her, was she just standing there watching her cook?
The SOAP does not tell me much about the intervention.
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Theory: I don't think the proposed intervention plan, follows the theory that was presented. The intervention is more psycho-educational.
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Setting: So Helen is going to the therapist's home?????
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LTG #2 is the objective meal preparation???
STGs what is the occupation behind the STGs?
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Same feedback as other chapters. Sam is not a boy. Elaborate more on the case study.
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My suggestions: Read the whole chapter before posting it, make sure it makes sense and it is free of typos. This chapter has several mistakes.
Tie the case study with the rest of the chapter.
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What is a dating videowi?
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"45 minute sessions , twice a week for four weeks"
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What is ASD? Minddisorders.com is not a reliable source of evidence
Theory: Evidence to support bolded statement. Re-read the paragraph, it doesn't make sense.
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Same feedback as in the other chapter.
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Please see me to discuss this chapter, as all the notes I wrote apparently are not available. Prof. M
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Move chapter to correct section
Needs evidence to support Introduction and theory sections.
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There's a lot of good stuff here, it needs to tie in with the case study.
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Very nice job with goals, Is the therapist conducting sessions on campus for everybody??? in the clinic just 2 sessions?
Check grammar on supplies.
My question is: after introducing herself and explaining OT, the next step is just work on sensory intervention??? If thos is the case, then there's a lot missing in the case study.
Plan: is very nice.
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is 18 y/o a "BOY"??? The Case study needs to be better defined.
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There's something with the sentence I bolded, that does not jive, please try to paraphrase it better.
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Is Sam just "visiting" the OT in the clinic??; let's use professional lingo.
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Is it realistic as a LTG that he goes from small group in library to college auditorium in 4 weeks ???
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You have to paint a picture with your case study , I need more.
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Please move chapter to the correct section in the book
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LTGs are good but how do we measure, how do we know she completed them.
STG:The goals are good but, In order to make these STG work you have to define the setting, otherwise how do you know she is meeting her goals
Setting: meet with the OT for what? Coffee? Where?? Professional lingo...
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Agenda: What is the OT doing??????
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The Dx. of Anorexia Nervosa in the middle sentence seems out of place in the context of the paragraph. It should be worked into your leading sentence. The last sentence needs to be reworded.
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Problem statement: inflexibility to attain???
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It seems to me that there's a citation missing in the theory section.
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Please move chapter to the right section
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P: the way your plan reads you will be training her in cognitive impairment .......
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In the O section of the SOAP , so you demonstrated... what did she do??? A: In reality is not evident, because according to your assessment, she needs to improve her memory performance? whatever that means, and the objective results tell me that she has poor attention span and short term memory deficits. I need to know more about how this affects her daily habits, roles and routines.
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Agenda: Which screening? Shouldn't bullet #4 be the first step?
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The client is not just "meeting with the occupatinal therapist" in an outpatient clinic. Let's use professional language. For example: Maggie will be seeing in OccupationalTherapy as an Outpatient, 3x weeks for 1 hour sessions for 1 month.
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STG # 1 is she attending to ghe child or attending to the task? two different things. STG # 2 are we focusing on child rearing or her self care tasks? STG # How do measure that this is doing this? LTG # 2 Needs to be reworded, the 'Independently" is misplaced
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Where's the evidence to support the statements in the Introduction section and theory sections?
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Please move chapter to the correct section.
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