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  1. Feb 2020
    1. The author tell what Zhou Xuan's job is and what he did to interpret. It would be better to add the time period and relationship of Zhou Xuan.

    1. The structure of this generation is good. First paragraph introduced who GuoYu is and his greatest achievements. The second paragraph gives some examples to show his abilities and experience. The example about Yin and Yang was not specific.

    1. it is a good survivor guide in general because it provides three key points. However, it does't satisfy the topic, the author should focus more on how to survive from ghost.

    1. It is a good idea to relate corona virus and five phases. However, i would be better if the author can explain the virus in the "five phase" way instead of modern way. The citation of yin and yang in human body is great.

      1. Good summary that cover most part about the Classic of Mountains and Seas. End with a question that let readers think about. Specific enough to help a student who missed the class.
      2. A good summary about what the classic of Mountains and Seas are. Also combined with an example. Could that people have a basic idea about what is going on and be curious about it.
      1. As a student who missed the class. I could get a general idea if what oracle bones are. The author gave a good summary about what Oracle bone is. However, it is too general to understand what was going on during the class. It need more details about what was going on during the class time. 2 . As a schoolmate who don't take this class. This is a good instruction of what oracle bones are.