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Web-literacy for Fact Checkers
Shouldn't this be Web Literacy for Student Fact-Checkers
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The sunscreen exercise is not the only one discussed on this page, it starts about half way down the page.
Suggest rephrasing: The sunscreen exercise begins about halfway down the page.
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remove comma
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t, (a significant percent of my reference interactions start with “there’s nothing on my topic.”)
I would actually remove the parentheses altogether, and put that content in its own sentence.
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talk more
learn more?
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move comma outside parenthesis
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,
no comma!
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the messages wasn’t landing.
either make this one message, or change it to say the messages weren't landing.
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should the word "often" be here?
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, (thanks to Mike Davidson for this suggestion.)
comma period, I think you know what to do here!
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on
add a comma after on :-)
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topic
plural?
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With the understanding that the projects produced by the students in this class will not necessarily (or even likely) be the standard academic papers,
This sentence doesn't appear to be finished.
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, (because it probably relates to that person’s other ideas and their whole body of work.)
I bet you know what to do here. Two things!
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remove comma
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move period outside of parenthesis
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remove comma
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move period outside of parenthesis
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move comma outside parenthesis
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remove comma
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News or opinion? Online it’s hard to tell,
LOL the real headline does have a comma in it. Put it back. (It goes after the word Online)
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remove this comma.
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source
Why yes! I am going to ask that you ADD a comma after the word source
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trusted
add a period
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, Types of Sources, journalism
remove commas, say instead "from the chapter Types of Sources that journalism..."
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Sanders
Add an apostrophe after his name: 'Sanders' involvement' to indicate possession
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add a period please!
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event
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that says koalas have just been declared extinct from the Save the Koalas Foundation
I think this might be better if it said "from the Save the Koalas Foundation that says koalas have just been declared extinct"
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move period outside the parentheses.
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remove comma
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, rather
Remove, start next sentence with Choose.
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In some cases, the research described in scholarly papers is funded by tax payer dollars. Should those papers be behind a paywall?
I'm a little concerned that students may come away from this thinking that tax-funded research can end up behind a paywall...
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many fewer
many fewer? Let's just say fewer.
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maybe add the word 'directly' just to be clear?
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, (you can see the full list here), for example:
suggest ending the sentence with 'one hundred databases' and hyperlinking that phrase to the database list. Then start a new sentence with 'For example:'
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either replace with semicolon or break into two sentences.
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Keep in mind,
I might replace the comma with the word "that" to clarify that the word "mind" isn't part of the list of things in this sentence.
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, (usually an article or book,
remove the commas
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it can be a process that anyone uses to kind, peer review is a process you consider using when crafting work on your wicked problem.
Not sure what happened with this sentence!
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change to semicolon or consider two sentences.
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delete comma
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remove comma
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remove comma
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it’s
remove the apostrophe
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professions, they
replace comma with semicolon, or break into two sentences.
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remove comma
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remove apostrophe
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Each time
To avoid a sentence fragment, suggest "Each time you repeat these steps, you're focusing...
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semicolon
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You may have been discouraged in the past
In the past you may have been discouraged
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thin air, rather
Suggest breaking into two sentences.
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short cuts
one word "shortcuts" for consistency
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short cuts
one word "shortcuts" for consistency
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Create a mindmap (INSERT LINK TO EXAMPLES HERE) of your wicked problem.
where's the link at?
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semicolon
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, i
Suggest starting a new sentence here to avoid a run-on sentence.
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our our
duplicate "our"
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, and if we do that,
I might suggest dropping the ',and' in favor of starting a new sentence.
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(blogs.)
Move the period outside the parenthesis
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There is no gatekeeping of the .org domain, a wide variety of groups can and do use the .org domain, including many hate groups.
Split into two sentences - a period instead of a comma.
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toward more accurate understanding of an issue.
I might suggest moving toward "a" more accurate understanding
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Within in all these
remove "in"
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accuracy of accuracy of anything.
two accuracies do not equal a positive.
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possible, (and quite common,) to choose information sources that closely align with one’s identity, preferences and existing beliefs. This also means that it is possible, (and also quite common,)
I would remove the commas
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between
"among" is more accurate.
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a
Remove this extraneous 'a'
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