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  1. Jan 2022
    1. strata

      strata representative

    2. with

      delete

    3. you’ll need to get in

      delete

    4. Service

      customer service team

    5. or a letter and sticker.

      How exactly does this work?

    6. Alternatively, when you book your Bulky Waste Clean-Up you can choose to receive a confirmation e-mail (with a printable poster attached) or a letter and sticker.

      If you request a confirmation email for your booking, you will receive a a printable label along with your booking reference number.

    7. paper

      a pieces of paper and stick them to your items. You may need to attach more than one label for large collections. Alternatively, you can write your booking number directly on the items to be collected.

    8. correctly

      If you do not display your booking reference number.... (consequences?)

    9. You will be given the number over the phone or can find it in your confirmation email and/or SMS or by logging into My Account.

      If you make your booking over the phone, make sure to write down your reference number. If you make your booking online, you can find your number in the confirmation email, or by logging in to [your account]

    10. let's

      lets

    11. My Account.

      Can this be formatted more cleanly?

    12. Welcome To Booked Clean Up

      perhaps some copy about the service? People are likely to find this page directly through google and skip the rundown on the other site.

    13. A result of providing a single service to all residents we can: replace the existing 10 collection zones with 5 x zones; increase the number of collection trucks; increase daily capacity; reduce waiting times; improve customer service; and improve environmental outcomes.

      This one needs checking before making present-tense claims (e.g. have waiting times decreased?)

      Because we now provide a single service to all residents, we have the opportunity to improve the Booked Clean Up service in a number of ways....

    14. Requiring bookings from apartment blocks with six (6) or more units to be made by a building caretaker, manager or strata on behalf of the whole building. Individual residents will need to contact their building manager to make a booking.  

      For apartment blocks of six or more units, bookings must now be made by building caretaker, manager, or strata representative on behalf of the whole building. Individual residents will need to contact their building manager to arrange a collection.

    15. All households will be able to put out three cubic metres (3m3) of waste for each collection. That’s a pile three metres wide by one metre high and one metre deep. An increase of one cubic metre for most households.

      All households are now able to put out three cubic metres of waste for each collection....

      For most households, that is an increase of one cubic metre per collection.

    16. From 1 March 2021 t

      Change tense (The bulky waste cleanup service is now aligned across the whole city)

    17. 3m3

      superscript 3

    18. buildings

      buildings, (comma)

    19. units

      units, (comma)

    20. five (5)

      must we duplicate?

    21. Furniture Couches, Chairs, Rugs, Beds, Cabinets, Drawers, Tables, Desks etc.

      Comma before etc

    1. These images look like they relate to donation/recycling copy

    2. On-line by clicking here or

      weird link formating. Maybe just "here"

    3. Clean Up

      hyphenate?

    4. Advance bookings are essentia

      booking in advance

    5. will need to

      must

    6. An increase of one cubic metre for many households

      copypaste from change copy. Delete.

    7. households

      household

    8. Unacceptable materials including spikey or sharp vegetation, mirrors or glass panes, chemicals or hazardous waste will not be collected and could lead to further dumped rubbish that you will be required to remove.

      Some items cannot be accepted. These include....

    9. have the opportunity

      can