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  1. Feb 2016
    1. if you think the Best Buy is too public a place to commit a murder, you should see the library after school, swarming with kids.

      Here I think that Koenig is appealing to logos. She explains that if the murder didn’t happen at best buy, then couldn't have happened at the school library. She explains this is because the library is always swarming with kids; the audience can easily understand this. Ultimately the way Koenig explains it makes sense in a more logical way giving her more support on her other observations and that ups her credibility to the audience.

    1. Every year, humans discharge roughly 8 million metric tons into the oceans, where fish and mammals and birds mistake it for food. By the year 2050, Slat's anecdotal observation that there were more plastic bags than fish in the ocean will actually be true

      Its pretty sad to think about this. It makes human seem very inconsiderate and almost selfish, assuming that the whole world is just their, not even considering that there are thousands of organisms who live in the ocean, and because humans pollute and liter, many of them are dying off every day. Here the author may be applying to pathos.

    2.  "It may be the first ocean cleanup in history,"

      It's crazy to believe someone who's just 21 came up with something that could eventually save the worl

    3. the leading proposal to clean up the ocean's trash was dispatching big ships to troll for bits of plastic

      I find this article really interesting because this young man came up with such a simple yet effective idea and its almost mind blowing that someone hasn't already thought of this or acted upon it. I think the intended audience for this article is the general uninformed public. Not only is this a great story to put out there, it also raises awareness that we as an international society need to work together to keep our ocean clean and help the wildlife that call the ocean their home.

    1. He said he did have doubts about Adnan’s claim of innocence but that he definitely thought there was something “off” about this case. That we still don’t know what happened in this murder. We still don’t have the true story.

      It is clear that Jim Trainum does not believe Jays story. He thinks they shut down the case before it got too complicated. The fact that he is a real detective and knows how the system works, makes the audience believe him when he tells that this is not an uncommon thing and that taking "the easy way out" si not a rare thing to see in the business.

    2. But, see-- I don’t get that. I mean that’s like what my father always used to always say, “all facts are friendly.”

      Koenigs belief that "all facts are friendly" goes against what Trainum is saying about building your case. It makes her seem very neutral and like she truly want to know the truth even if she doesnt like it.

    3. The pre-interview was when the cops and the witness kind of iron out the statement so it can be taped as a coherent thing.

      This explanation is very helpful in understanding what she is talking about for those of us who are not familiar with the process. It also proves that she knows what she is talking about, which gives her credibility.

    4.   He puts it on who they consider to be the logical suspect.

      The way Jim says this makes it seem like he think convicting Adnan was just the simplest way to solve the case and maybe not the right decision.

    5. A jurisdiction not too different from Baltimore.

      Koenig proves that Trainum is fit for the job and has experience with similar cases.

    6.   Jim Trainum, and we’ve-- we hired you, because unlike me, you’re a real detective.

      Here Koenig is giving credibility to Jim Trainum, making sure it is clear that he is the expert and he will be able to investigate the case on a higher level than Sarah.

    1. But maybe the opposite is true: that because your chances are so low, you have to look on the bright side in order to do this work at all. Otherwise, you couldn’t function.

      I think here Koenig is using logos to appeal to her audience. She explains how its logical that Enright is so optimistic and positive because of how hard it is for a case to actually be overturned and for someone to become innocent.

    2.  I wouldn’t be able to find him guilty with this.

      This may be an example of ethos, or credibility. This shows that now there are more people who don't think that Adnan is guilty or that his should not have been decided the way it was based on the evidence that was provided. This is just another reason that Adnan should push for a retrial.

    3. Maybe Koenig is trying to throw some humor into this episode (pathos)

    4. “I can’t give you some clinching piece of information or evidence that’s going to solve this, I wish I could but I can’t. I just don’t have it. like I don’t know how to prove this.

      Maybe here pathos is being used because Adnan is saying that he insists that he is innocent however he has no way to prove it and that people should feel some sort of sympathy toward him or something. Or maybe pathos is being used here because since Adnan has no case to support that he's innocent, there is a lack of sympathy towards him as a victim.

    5. On the part of Adnan. In other words that he’s a Pakistani muslim and--

      Maybe Koenig is suggesting that part of the verdict of the Hae Lee case was because of the race of Adnan Syed

    6. but then Justin Wolfe’s conviction was overturned, in part because of the cell records.

      Two very similar cases with two different verdicts... this case of Justin Wolfs shows that there is hope for Adnan if he really is innocent and gives him a reason to really try to push for a retrial.

    1. He said Cruz has alienated too many lawmakers to be able to strike bargains on Capitol Hill if he's in the Oval Office

      The race for president can get very aggressive, and candidates may target others

    2. - but he downplayed it, saying his Scottish mother would have said

      changes in his story and credibility

    3. the president of the Family Research Council, had given him notes on what to say when he visited the evangelical university in Lynchburg, Virginia

      Brings up ethos, or credibility, because Trump also said that thats how his mother would pronounce it, showing the changes in his excuses to the media

    1. a lot less can bring a lot more to your life.

      This appeals to pathos, or emotion, by presenting information that makes you more thankful for what you have and even by ending it with a quotes that makes you realize that you don't need a lot to be happy.

    2. More than 1,400 have visited the container, which also travels to science and art exhibits across the state to share its sustainability message

      This is a very good way to spread awareness of the issue they are presenting

    3. the bin had to be connecting to the grid so air-conditioning could be installed. There’s now a TV and an overhead light. But it’s still tight quarters.

      very innovative and still modern which is very impressive for a dumpster

    4. “a radical experiment in what it would mean to live on, and in, less

      this is very radical.... who would even think to live in a dumpster?

    1. “If there was a perception that the court didn’t at least give these facts a clear hearing, it would undermine many people’s trust in the Maryland court system.”

      This article mainly focuses on ethos, or credibility. It brings up the questions of credibility of the judaical system that are presented throughout the serial series by Sarah Koenig and why Adnan has pushed for a retrial

    2. illuminating flaws in the criminal justice system

      Sarah Koenig does a good job of presenting this while attempting to remain unbiased

    3. Mr. Brown filed a motion to reopen his client’s posttrial proceedings in June based on the fact that Mr. Syed’s trial lawyer never called Ms. McClain as an alibi witness and did not seek a plea agreement

      this shows that the judicial system may not always be fair because they miss important pieces of cases intentionally or unintentionally sometime

    4. Asia McClain to the record should lead to a retrial

      Asia plays a really important part in Adnans case and is one of the only people that can give him an alabi

    5. Mr. Syed, 34, is serving a life sentence in prison after his conviction in 2000 for the murder of Hae Min Lee

      this may be because of a mistrial, the court may not of looked into the case as well as they should've and should've used more witnesses and evidence to determine the verdict of the case

    6. the popular “Serial” podcast

      Recorded by Sarah Koenig, we listen to it for Comp 150, its cool to see what we are listening to is actually something that is happening in the real world

    1. Best of social media

      This fun add on helps catch the attention of people who does not have a big interest in the sport, but enjoys the social aspect.

    2. Key points

      All the background information given helps paint the whole picture, and makes it more interesting and understandable for readers that don't usually follow sports.

    3. It's a third Super Bowl title for the Broncos, while for the Panthers, the wait for their first goes on.

      A nice way of summing up an informative article about this weekends big football game.

    4. But Newton was smothered by the Broncos defence and gave up three turnovers - including one that led to a touchdown. if (window.bbcdotcom && bbcdotcom.slot) { bbcdotcom.slot("mpu", [1,2,3]); } if (window.bbcdotcom && bbcdotcom.show) { bbcdotcom.show(); }

      The way this is written makes the article more directed towards fans of the Denver Broncos. I say this based on the authors use of the word "smothered". Another more neutral word could have been used, but because more Broncos fans will read this article than Panthers fans it is a nice way of "hyping up" the winning team.

    5. By James Gheerbrant BBC Sport

      BBC is a well known news outlet, and would not be able to get away with printing false information. This makes me believe this is a credible author.

    6. Super Bowl 50: Denver Broncos beat Carolina Panthers

      The very simple, yet explaining title gives the impression that this article will give me the facts I need to know about this event.

    1. I’ve got this thing in my head that I’ll catch him in a lie. Maybe just a tiny, meaningless lie, and that’s going to be his tell, and he’ll be caught.

      Here Koenig shows her own personal wish in this case. She wants to catch Adnan in a lie. Nad if she thinks she can catch him lying, that must mean she believes he isn't innocent.

    2. What doesn’t make sense, if Nisha is saying this call happened at the video store, is that Jay didn’t have that job yet on January 13.

      Here Koenig is using straight facts to prove her point. In a case like this; opinion and interpretation plays a big part, but you can't deny hard facts.

    3. Then, you know how Adnan says he can’t remember much at all about the day Hae went missing?

      By using a friendly tone like this, like it is an ongoing conversation between Koenig and the audience, Sarah is able wheel us back into the story by bringing up points from the first episode. It helps the listener feel engaged in Adnans story.

    4. Over the past few weeks, I’ve been holding up bits of evidence here and there that look bad for Adnan. Today, I’m just going to lay out the rest.

      In this sentence Koenig proves both that she might have been bias in the past, and that even though she favors Adnan she is not going to withhold facts. This proves that even though it is hard to stay neutral in a case like this it is important to let the facts speak for themselves and to not leave out anything.

    5. This is a Global-Tel link prepaid call from Adnan Syed an inmate at a Maryland Correctional facility…

      Including this automatic message instantly puts us in the middle of the situation. It makes a point of Adnan actually being in prison for what happened, and it points out the importance of actually figuring out what happened.

    1. pornography is a healthy outlet for many people, and provides a safe way for them to explore new ideas in the context of a couple or a solo experience.

      I think that there are many other ways to explore new ideas. I also think that because of todays technology, pornography is way to accessible and that many underage children may be accessing it as well.

    2. Like in the 1950s, people said tobacco wasn’t addictive and now we know it is. I think that porn is similar to tobacco back in the 50s,” he said. “Porn is being found to be addictive and damaging.”

      I agree with this statement. Nowadays it seems to be more socially acceptable for people to objectify women, and pornography definitely isn't helping this. Pornography is typically associated with a negative connotation but is also just kind of set aside as not a big deal.

    3. Utah has one of the nation’s highest rates of porn use, according to a 2009 Harvard Business School study.

      I find this really interesting considering Utah is known to have a very high population of mormons

    1. the shooter or shooters struck three others

      a little different than serial, the shooting could be seen as less personal than something like a strangulation. but a murder is a murder and there is always a reason

    2. Motive is also one big question mark, at least publicly.

      similar to serial... what is the motive for the murder? who actually did it and why would they want to do it?

    3. Two people in a Seattle homeless encampment were shot dead.

      It's nice to see that the homeless population is getting more recognition. It seems that they often times go unseen and unheard simply because they are "homeless".

    1. Aquariums have for decades tried to keep great white sharks in captivity, but tank life has proven to be a challenging environment.

      then maybe this is a hint that sharks shouldnt be held in cpativity?

    2. The world’s only captive great white shark has died just three days after joining an exhibit at a Japanese aquarium.

      First of all, a shark of this nature does not belong in captivity. A great white is a strong predator on the top of the food chain, and by putting them into captivity, you are basically setting them up to die. It is nearly impossible for anyone to build a tank large enough so that the shark can swim and hunt comfortably.

    1. I am one-hundred percent sure that if someone tried to do it, it would be impossible.”

      Koenig really earns my trust by keeping a fairly unbiased approach throughout the several serial podcast episodes. Although she tells adnan he seems like a great guy and feels that she may even know him on a more personal level, she still manages to question the facts and information presented from both sides pretty equally. She also gains my trust more specifically here in episode five. In adnans letter he says he is one-hundred percent sure that if someone tried to commit a murder according to Jays story in twenty one minutes, that it would be impossible. Koenig decides to go out and attempt to follow the path of the murder and see how possible the alleged story really is, earning a deeper trust with the reader by showing how she is not completely closing herself to one side and is open to hearing both stories and looking for support for both.

    1. They ditch Hae's car at the I-70 Park and Ride. And then, to hear Jay tell it, they just kind of tool around Baltimore County

      A map or a visualization of where they went, with the corresponding times, would be nice, it would give the audience a sense of setting and direction. This would just lead to a more immersive reading for the audience.

    2. After track practice, Jay picks Adnan up again

      The constant "Narrative" voice of Koenig helps keep a timeline for the reader. When finishing each passage, it is nice to have a clear progression in the story line. It allows the reader to stay more engaged in the reading, because they are able to see the clear progression to the next scene of the podcast.

    3. Just a warning that the tape is a little upsetting to hear in parts.

      The vocabulary gives you a sense of how the interrogation went but, I wish there was more imagery. For example, to give details about the way Jay and the detective reacted to each other; such as describing tone, setting, mood, etc.

    4. They weren't super close, but they had mutual friends. Jay sold weed, and he and Adnan smoked together

      The author is able to connect / appeal to a younger audience with the use of a more "laid back" vocabulary. This helps hold the attention of the audience, because the diction is more relatable.

    5. for 21 minutes after school one day in 1999

      Koenig immediately gives you the details to the murder, which grabs the audience's attention. The use of flashback sets up the scene nicely and gives the proper introduction into the story.

  2. Jan 2016
    1. So who knows what would have happened if Asia had shown up?

      With the letters that Asia had written to to Adan and the affidavit, his case could have turned out very differently. Also, its interesting that Asia in one of the only people that could backup an alibi for Adan, yet she wasn't even questioned in court. This provides some proof that maybe Adan's case was handled the way it should have been, or that there was maybe even bias or prejudice present. However, as stated in the beginning of the podcast, all of the information that Koenig provides seems to be very meaningful and precise.

    2. he has giant brown eyes like a dairy cow.

      In this section, Koenig creates a sense of innocence and sympathy for Adnan by describing him as having "giant brown eyes". also, she compares him to a "dairy cow", a pretty simple creature, not known for aggression or violence. maybe she is trying to connect with the readers again some more, or even possibly showing that she is really holding on to her hope that Adan is actually innocent despite all the accusations against him throughout the past years

    3. I'm not a detective or a private investigator. I've not even a crime reporter.

      here Sarah Koenig states this to show her audience that she too is just simply curious about the case and is making herself more relatable to the audience

    4. the case was like a Shakespearean mashup-- young lovers from different worlds thwarting their families,

      some kind of foreshadowing. refers to William Shakespeare's many stories of young, often forbidden, love ending in almost inevitable tragic events

    5. I've had to ask about teenagers' sex lives, where, how often

      here Koenig is showing how in depth she has to go and how deep she has to dig in order to find the details she really needs

    6. if you want to get technical about it

      Sarah Koenig shows that she has a need to get very "technical" about everything she encounters, and will be very precise throughout the rest of the podcast