“a natural killer”—absolutely sane, but conscienceless,and capable of dealing, with or without motive, the coldest-blooded deathblows
Character: Perry
“a natural killer”—absolutely sane, but conscienceless,and capable of dealing, with or without motive, the coldest-blooded deathblows
Character: Perry
Perry described amurder, telling how, simply for “the hell of it,” he had killed a colored man inLas Vegas—beaten him to death with a bicycle chain.
Character: Perry
But that’s all I saw. Only now when Ithink back, I think somebody must have been hiding there. Maybe down amongthe trees. Somebody just waiting for me to leave.”
Interesting
They always quibbled, but actually they were very close—closer than mostbrothers and sisters.
Characters: Kenyon and Nancy - their relationship
he following Monday, while giving evidence prior to taking a lie-detector test,
Style: More foreshadowing. Capote likes to jump around the timeline.
“Remember, Dick? All that talk about getting a boat? I was thinking—we could
Character/Style: Perry - not necessarily this paragraph but it seems like Capote is trying to make the reader like Perry, or at least feel sympathy towards him. He seems like a soft, nice guy with some normal interests
Seaports were hisheart’s delight—crowded, clanging, ship-clogged, sewage-scented cities, likeYokohama, where as an American Army private he’d spent a summer during theKorean War
Character: Perry
It was the first payment on aforty-thousand-dollar policy that in the event of death by accidental means, paiddouble indemnity
Style: More foreshadowing
carrying cash. “That’s the way I do business. When those tax fellows comepoking around, canceled checks are your best friend.”
Character: IMPORTANT Herb - Foreshadowing. We know he doesn't carry cash, which will be the reason why he gets killed in the first place.
hat he would not now be loitering outside a hospital waiting forDick to emerge with a pair of black stockings
Style - Capote again stops talking about the present in order to give the reader information about something else (usually character development)
himself. And only Willie-Jay had ever recognized his worth, his potentialities,
Character: Perry and WJ relationship
Explosive emotional reaction out of all proportion to the occasion.
Character: Perry - his big flaw
As usual, Willie-Jay understood; disheartened but not disenchanted, he hadpersisted in courting Perry’s soul until the day of its possessor’s parole anddeparture, on the eve of which he wrote Perry a farewell letter, whose lastparagraph ran
Character: Willie Jay - WJ is liked and respected by Perry because he understands Perry, and takes the time to connect with Perry
How was it possible that so gifted a man had wound up inLansing?
Kansas' largest prison
The reason was thatseveral weeks earlier he had learned that on Thursday, November 12, another ofhis former cellmates was being released from Kansas State Penitentiary atLansing, and “more than anything in the world,” he desired a reunion with thisman, his “real and only friend,” the “brilliant” Willie-Jay.
Character: Perry and Willie-Jay - Introduces WJ, also tells us why Perry is actually here (not just to help DIck with his mission)
Someothers were the number 15, red hair, white flowers, priests crossing a road,snakes appearing in a dream
Character: Perry
Leaving the varnish to dry, he went on to another chore—one that took him out-
Style: Capote likes to describe something that is currently happening, then change and talk about something completely different, then come back and talk about the current event again.
Kenyon doubted it; hecould not conceive of ever wanting to waste an hour on any girl that might bespent with guns, horses, tools, machinery, even a book.
Character: Kenyon
Kenyon resembled neither of his parents physically; his crewcut hair was hemp-
Character: Physical image of Kenyon
It was a hundred yards long—quite enough for twelve.
Style: Cold
No. Because the plan was Dick’s, andfrom first footfall to final silence, flawlessly devised.
Character: Dick is clearly the mastermind behind the operation, and perry knows it.
By midafternoon the black Chevrolet had reached Emporia, Kansas
Style: I like how he keeps switching back and forth. Once we start to get invested in one side of the story, Capote reminds us, "oh yeah, they're about to get murdered."
His eyes singled out a chubbyJapanese woman surrounded by four chubby Japanese children. “
Style: More attention to detail.
or, indeed, for any pastime thathe felt did not “accomplish something
Character: Herb
but who wants NewYork? Good neighbors, people who care about each other, that’s what counts.
Setting: Another example of who the people of this area are
Scrubbed, combed, as tidy as two dudes setting off on a doubledate, they went out to the car
Fig Lang: Again making it seem like they're just regular dudes
Perry, too, had been maimed
Character: Visual image of Perry
Dick stripped to his briefs was not quite the same as Dickfully clothed
Character: Visual image of Dick
on this final day of her life,
Style: Foreshadowing - reminding the reader of what is to come. Also style the next sentence - he repeats the nightgown and fresh white socks to explain how it was just a normal day before they got murdered.
“Wilma,” she said, “I’ve beenlistening to you, Wilma. All of you. Laughing. Having a good time. I’m missingout on everything. The best years, the children—everything. A little while, andeven Kenyon will be grown up—a man. And how will he remember me? As akind of ghost, Wilma.”
Character: Mrs. Clutter - It seems like she's not totally insane, and she understands that she needs to be better. Why doesn't she? You would think she could try to be better for her kids' sake.
when her husband was off on one of his business journeys she wascontinually expected, in his absence, to supply snap judgments concerning theaffairs of the farm, and it was unendurable, a torment. What if she made amistake? What if Herb should be displeased? Better to lock the bedroom doorand pretend not to hear
Character: Mrs. Clutter - Is this why she has such bad issues? Because she doesn't want to let anyone else down? The stress of making decisions and getting it wrong is taking a major toll on her, so she just hides from those decisions instead.
Some years earlier Mrs. Clutter had traveled to Wichita for two weeks of
Character: Bonnie - Introducing her mental issues (also a few paragraphs earlier).
he only daughter of a prosperous wheat grower named Fox
Character: Mrs. Clutter: Basic background info.
“Forgiveme, dear. I’m sure you’ll never know what it is to be tired. I’m sure you’llalways be happy . . .”
Character: Mrs. Clutter - Now it seems like she is angry. Like she is blaming other people for what's wrong with her, and thinks it's unfair that she is suffering while others are so happy and alive.
“No, they don’t need me,” she repeated
Character: Mrs. Clutter - Seems like she is sad because she knows that her mental issues are hindering her ability to be a good mom for her kids. She wants to, but she doesn't know how.
ancy and her protégée, Jolene Katz, were also satisfied with their morning’s
Style: Capote again transitions seamlessly between the two sides of the story. Helps the reader follow the timeline of events, and it hints at how they will cross paths eventually.
“ ‘Known.’ But what did you say? Finally?”
Style: His willingness to learn the smallest details about the killers makes his reading much more enjoyable. Makes the story seem like a novel, which keeps the reader engaged, rather than just a documentary.
instrument
Style/Fig Lang: Interesting transition. Compares the shotgun to an instrument. Also could be character development for the two killers, especially Perry. Sees the gun as a toy almost, rather than a killing machine. Killing is normalized.
upposedly superiorone in Garden City
Setting: Garden City is a few miles away from Holcomb, and has a decent sized population (about 20K). Obviously has more to offer than Holcomb.
shining chestnut hair (brushed a hundredstrokes each morning, the same number at night) and her soap-polishedcomplexion,
Character: Nancy - More like her father - sticks to a routine, doesn't like when things aren't organized or planned out.
practically run that big house” and be a straight-A student, the president of herclass, a leader in the 4-H program and the Young Methodists League, a skilledrider, an excellent musician (piano, clarinet), an annual winner at the county fair(pastry, preserves, needlework, flower arrangement)—how a girl not yetseventeen could haul such a wagonload, and do so without “brag,
Character: Nancy - very impressive, especially how she doesn't brag about anything. Sounds like she was raised well. Credit to Mr. Clutter.
As usual, the devil was in Kenyon. His shouts kept coming up the stairs:“Nancy! Telephone!
Character: Kenyon - Seems like a typical annoying little sibling.
totallymasculine.
Character: Dick
Dick was veryliteral-minded
Character: Dick - no time for funny business. Every minute counts, and he doesn't like how Perry is interested in fine arts and collecting things.
Three aspirin, cold root beer, and achain of Pall Mall cigarettes—that was his notion of a proper “chow-down.”Sipping and smoking
Character: Perry. All you need to know about him.
And Mr. Clutter, expressing sympath
Fair, kind, and understanding, even to people who were his "inferiors."
Autumns reward western Kansas for the evils that theremaining seasons impos
Fig Lang: Describing how harsh Kansas winters are. Attention to detail.
a circumstance that did notshrink his social circle as much as might be supposed
Character/Setting: The entire town of Holcomb is very set in their religious ways, as is Mr Clutter. Nobody drinks.
As for the interior, there were spongy displays of liver-colored carpetintermittently abolishing the glare of varnished,
Style: Can see a type of foreshadowing here. He could have described the house with a variety of different words, but he chose liver-colored, abolishing, etc. Gives a creepy, eerie setting for the house.
Bobb
Character: Bobby is a nice boy and Mr Clutter would probably approve of him if it weren't for the religious conflict.
Ordinarily, Mr. Clutter’s mornings began at six-thirty
Character: Mr Clutter is a man of routine, habit, and tradition. He is gentle, but strict
Herbert William Clutter,
Character: Mr Clutter introduction for the next few paragraphs
consider themselves “born ga
Fig Lang: Not actually born gamblers. Seem to be sinless people, which contrasts with the killers
grain elevators
Style: Talks about the grain elevators again, even though it's just a grain elevator.
four shotgun blasts that
Style: He foreshadows the entire book... why?
hiswife
Character: Bonnie introduction
The more you practice the process of articulat-ing problems, posing questions, and identifying the stakes, and themore you cultivate your awareness of problems, the more successfulyou will be at writing academic papers and handling life’s complexi-ties.
Importance of practice.
While it’s unlikely that you’ll ever have to write for your life as PaulSheldon did in the movie Misery,
Another article/essay that circles back to the example covered in the intro.
Note: Do this in my essay?
Once you’ve identified an author’s problem and question,you’ll have a better handle on the rest of the text.
Important strategy I should use when reading these texts.
Much of what you read as a college student is unfamiliar incontent and form and requires a more attentive, deeper read
What we're working on now.
Each of these texts offers a useful model for how to present richproblems, pose fruitful questions, and articulate what is at stake in aninquiry.
Note
Organ Trading:Supply and Demand Meets Morality
Like this. We know the general topic of the essay, but we don't know what direction the essay will go, or what side the author is taking.
You may have noticed that the title of the article simplifiesthis question into a snappy title by posing it as a yes/no question, butthe essay pursues a fruitful “why” question
Should our essay have a title? If so, how can I make it clear and preview what the essay will be about, while also leaving the important pieces of argument to be discovered later in the essay?
smaller problems and questions are worth pursuing,and pursuit of these smaller questions in our everyday life can help uschip away at larger problems
Note.
Why is this problem important? Because it is part of a larger problem.
add a bit of in-formation in a specific corner of knowledge, or they provide us with anew way of seeing or thinking about something.
Find a way to apply my own opinions to the essay.
Considering what is at stake not only helps testthe question’s potential, it also leads in the direction of an argument.
Note.
Apply to essay
It issimply that they do not work in the context of a one-semester course.
There is a time and a place for deep, thoughtful questions.
I genuinelybecame troubled by it and worried I that I should take it down.
Our writing should make people reflect on their own choices.
Note: Try to make the essay powerful.
Practice, Practice, Practice
Try to find the issue being discussed in all articles or texts you read, not just the ones assigned for class.
in order to motivate yourselfand interest your reader, it is essential to identify why the question youor your teacher has posed is worth pursuing
Note
Try to convince the reader that tech is a real problem, and that it actually is affecting our reading habits/skills.
Finally, know that some questions will lead you down dead endsand others will bear fruit.
Why we should write down all ideas.
make a list of questionseach problem raises for you
Again, just write stuff down even if it isn't structured. Allows you to keep track of your ideas and revisit them.
tensions
Key. What is the argument and how do the two sides differ?
1. Noticing;2. Articulating a problem and its details;3. Posing fruitful questions;4. Identifying what is at stake
How to find problem to write about.
While there is no direct or indirect mention of problems in this par-ticular assignment, your process and your product will benefit from afocus on a specific problem.
Note: You should always focus your essay around a problem, even if the prompt doesn't give you one.
Prompt for this essay gives a problem (tech and reading).
While it is possible that your high school teacher did notexpect you to develop an argument in a compare and contrast essay,your college professor expects you to do so, whether or not the assign-ment explicitly says so.
Note
You can cultivate and take advantage of this mode of thinking anytime you have a paper to write
Use the ideas you come up with to form new ideas.
Note: Jot everything down, even if there is no rhyme or reason to it.
Problems are an expected part of life, and our ability to deal withthem can help determine our personal and professional success
Writer's block is just another problem in life that I am more than capable of overcoming.
Misery suggests that even a prolific writer like King, whohas written screenplays, novels, short stories, and essays for the pastthirty-five years, finds writing difficult, even painful.
Savini acknowledges that writing is painful to connect to her audience, which is students.
Note: Try to make the introduction agreeable and easy to follow.