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  1. Oct 2020
    1. incorporate US Census data from 2010

      Eventually, it will behoove you to be much more specific about which parts of this massive data set you will be using. Also, I don't see an attached dataset here...have you identified for yourself which parts of the Census you can (a) gain access to and (b) know how to use?

    2. how we visualize segregation

      Are you interested in how "we" visualize segregation or are you interested in visualizing that segregation itself? You can do both, but I would like you to recognize that they are two different questions with two different, but related, methodologies.

    1. story map feature

      Wonderful! How will you be integrating the main tool with StoryMap to make a unified presentation? Or is that the plan? And if that isn't the plan, next iteration, I'd love to hear more about how the plan is shaping up!

    2. less representative genres of local opera

      Ah! How will you define representative? What is the relationship between "common" and "representative?" And, furthermore, what is the relationship between "less common" and in danger of lacking preservation?

    3. integrating qualitative information from the gazetteers into the database

      This is also great. Is it related to the first bullet point or is it another thing altogether? If so, why so...and if not, why not?

    4. Inspired by Scott’s book

      Excellent! I do not know this work, and in an interdisciplinary context, it is always worth considering that many of your readers will not know what your citations imply unless you are more verbose. Next go-around, could you say more about why this work attracts you?

    5. complexity and diversity of Chinese local opera performances on the village level

      ...but only insofar as these things are tracked by the gazetteers and then transposed into a database. Again, in the next iteration, do think about how you can make this more specific.

    6. confined

      If the expanses of China are vast, why would subcultures happen in confined spaces? Do say more about what you mean here. If it is the complexity of the topography, how does that relate to the vastness?

    7. grassroots-level

      What does this mean? From my point of view, this adjective could mean quite a few things from "unfunded," to "collective," to "incomplete."

    8. Contemporary Chinese Village Gazetteer Data (CCVG Data) project, which is initiated by the East Asian Library at the University of Pittsburgh.

      How exciting! For the next iteration, I would be interested to read more about the people who produced this data, their methodology, and your understanding about how the decisions they made necessarily shape your own work. Think of it is an extended citation.

  2. Sep 2020
    1. healthy skepticism of the usefulness of textual analysis

      Do you mean for "everyone?" Or just to you? Why would you be skeptical of something that has years and years of scholarly practice behind it? Truly...where does your skepticism come from? Thinking that through will help you engage better, more productively, and more honestly this term, I promise!

    2. But I’m finding that the potential of these tools is contingent on my own prior knowledge of the texts under scrutiny

      Ah! There's so much more to say here on this topic. Are digital tools different from any other method in this way? How do you work with this reality when you write about Dickens, and how do you believe it will be different this term? Getting to the bottom of these perceived differences is critical for digital text analysis, as well as traditional methodologies...and it might be that having digital methods presses on the traditional methodologies to be more transparent about the interconnectedness of previous knowledge and present scholarship!

    3. why I chose his London-centric novels as a subset: to yield better results

      It is not yet clear why this choice would yield that result. What are your thoughts on this...and what does "better" mean in this context? It will definitely be critical for you to define success for this project in your own terms.

    4. difficult

      How does this difficulty manifest itself? It seems to me that writing essays on Dickens' work deals manageably with the problem. Could you be more specific about the issues you mean?

    5. my scholarship attempts to reveal broad historical shifts and patterns

      This is very broad too! I'd be interested to hear more about this at a level of detail that reveals more about your interests in expertise.

    6. the weights given to certain words and terms is ultimately done by those who configure the tools in the first place

      Yes yes yes, but to be clear, this does not mean we reject the tool...it means that we use this knowledge as a part of the tool.

    7. grouped together some of the middle and later novels based on which have similar “dark” themes, and that are set in London

      These categories of analysis are great. Do you think you'll stick with them? On the basis of what sorts of choices did you create them?

    1. I am also on the fence regarding how important these holes and “repairing” them is to me; my project and captaset will always be incomplete, so, as long as I am transparent about those concessions and gaps, does it matter? To be determined.

      Wonderful! The myth of completeness=closer to the "truth" rears its ugly head 2000-fold in the digital environment. Consider also, perhaps, the difference between "known unknowns" and "unknown unknowns," to use those benighted expressions...

    2. find issue of the periodical in question depends on how those sources are filtered in ANNO and the thematic filters I chose

      It will also bear fruit, I believe, for you to also consider the fact that someone chose those filters, and with those decisions have changed your life!

    3. © 2020

      I would also love to hear more about your relationship to copyright. How do you want your work to be shared? In what ways does the "copyright" interact with your vision of this future?

    4. less prescriptive

      Fascinating. What is your relationship to prescriptiveness? What are its pros (if any), and what are the particular cons that you are currently pushing back on?

    5. creating a digital data visualization will not only be more accessible than its analog or peer-reviewed counterparts but also be more “true” to my own engagement with the capta from start to finish as digitally-mediated

      I'm interested that you are focused on accessibility. I am 100% sure that thinking through the components of that broad term that are of specific interest to you will help bound and shape your project in ways that are rewarding to you!

  3. artspeaktome.blogspot.com artspeaktome.blogspot.com
    1. helped me to focus in that single task

      Fascinating! Why do you think this is the case? I will be very interested to hear more about how things change (or stay the same).

    2. Measuring productivity, or what is hard/good work is difficult, and not knowing if I was working enough was a big source of anxiety.

      Super important realization!! I will be fascinated to learn how this works for you over the course of this academic year.

    3. The first is the usage of my time as a human, but especially as a grad student, and how time management can impact my life.

      You and Jane are sharing this interest this term, I would highly recommend that you two touch base about it, if you feel you both have the time (irony intended)!!

    4. ook into my Mindful Practice Journal of this project

      Here's a note about content and structure for you. First of all, since hyperlinks are not underlined or otherwise visibly different from the rest of the text in this post, I find it very difficult to know what I can click on and what I cannot. I would imagine others would share in this--is this a confusion you would like for us to have? I say this knowing that it is possible that you do!!!

      Second, does your MPJ also have a private, narrativization of this quantified data? Or are you taking that practice to a quantitative extreme? Please do tell!

    5. my old blog from 2011

      That's the best type of blog, is it not!!! :) So glad that you've made this decision...I've hunted around a bit, and it has been a delight.

    1. will not, yet, be able to draw any conclusions about Eigner's entire life work

      May I please be that person, and ask for your advance forgiveness? Is this even a goal that is possible???

    2. number-adverse brain,

      STOP IT! If your brain were number-averse, you could not live. Let's talk at some point about what you mean here. Do you mean that you are not interested in abstract mathematical concepts that have little to do with your own life and seem to ask for a divorce from the affective reality of your existence?? Or what?

    3. Additionally, Eigner was, after his passing, an important figure in 1990's conceptions of "e-poetry" or born-digital poetry publications, like his dedicated issue in SUNY Buffalo's late-90’s "e-zine," PASSAGES: A Technopoetics Journal.

      !!!! Did you say this before and I did not hear you??? I hear you now.

    4. very slowness is part of the point

      I believe that this is existentially true, Jane. I need to ask, though, how do you plan to show value in slowness in this time where that is so hard to see, much less do?

    5. "Slow" scholarship means different things to different people, but to me it refers again back to this attention to & revealing of labor practices within academia that demand we work quickly, without error, and with little regard for our physical & emotional wellbeing

      So excited to see where you go with this!!

    6. how much labor

      In what way is the labor of doing a digital project different from a traditional one? Do they feel different? Are they objectively different? I am excited that you seem to want delve into this more in the next iteration.

    1. present questions and sources

      Good question to consider: WHY do you think this is the case? What other pressures come to bear on courses besides the content that the instructors wish to/have been asked to present?

    2. lack of technical knowledge here

      Nope. This is the way you will gain the technical knowledge you need. Don't shy away because you don't know...run towards it so you can learn.

    3. narrativizing a string of discoveries/decisions in the history of computers as though the reader were figuring them out, starting as a kid trying to use code to talk to a neighbor

      This is an amazing insight!

  4. Oct 2017
    1. A 1913 Map of 2011 Bolungarvík was a piece in four parts – the construction/installation of the site/lab, a performance of the archaeological process of excavation, and the interpretation and production of archaeological artefacts and bodies of knowledge after the excavation had been completed

      The text makes the chalk-prison-trenches process clearer, and yet, as before, I am brought back from my own ambiguous musings to the process of creating these artifacts. This phrase here, though…How are archaeological artifacts produced? Are they actually produced as archaeological artifacts in their interpretation? Is a landscape interpreted and produced only in the creation of a map?

      In retrospect, I realize that the artists were being literal in their production of archaeological artifacts. Not ambiguous in the least. I find myself, again, caught up in my own story.

    2. impression of objects are not limited to the surface but is also much deeper, below the skin of the object, in its history and personal connections or threads

      I cannot speak to how I may have interpreted these happenings at Æringur 2011.

      But from my point of view in this space and at this time, these objects, actions, and transformations are clearly in conversation with time and space themselves, both in their original forms as well as in their representations here.

      In their original forms, the impressions and marks exist above and below ground, in memories and in forgetfulness, and in the past, present, and future.

      In their web-based forms, they are in photographs, they are encoded. They are in our lived experience both in 2011 and 2017, and they have marked the planet as well as the mind and memory of this reader.

      My workspace. Right now.

    3. We were delighted that we could display all of our pieces outside the gallery

      The scale of space. We have a tradition for representing this, of course. It has been up for debate since the beginning of this webpage. And yet...how big are those holes? How big are the objects? Where are we?

      The excavation is made clear by the slashes in the ground. The incavation is less obviously represented.

    4. Two months later

      The scale of time. It proceeds relentlessly. It has no clear cartographic (temporographic?) tradition. Timelines might be considered a map of time, but I don't buy it. Timelines are a map of the human experience of time. Demarcated by what we do or do not wish to remember about the past.

      Cartographic maps are like that too, though. I suppose I might be wrong.

      Everyone's ur-visualization comes to mind.

      Charles Minard's map of Napoleon's Russian campaign of 1812

      Showing both space and time together as abstractions, Minard also conflates these two properties, compromising perfect data clarity on either.

    5. simply a process of doing something

      ...delightfully, and possibly even presciently, by "a set of bored archaeologists, or artists, or both."

      The artists' plan for a future excavation is presaged by past actions. The scale of time inherent in this piece--and perhaps by extension, archaeology--arises.

    6. perhaps one day be excavated by a group of bored archaeologists

      One day. One day at some time. What do maps have to tell us about the future? Can they disambiguate time as well as give scale to space? To archaeologists, is the action of burying--of incavating--objects predictive of future actions? Is excavation a likely foregone conclusion?

      The image below shows the "mess" of the work involved in the original happening. The threads, the piles, the maps. I now also see this as progress, as moving towards a conclusion.

      The map now posted on the shady side of the white structure, ambiguously part of the 1913 Map of 2011 Bolungarvík work, shows a region shattered by lines of red thread, each drawing attention to particular details of the landscape, a bit like drawing out blood. Pins, details, threads. Somewhere between an old-fashioned collection of butterflies, each impaled with a pin and a "crazy wall" of a contemporary (here comes the crime again) CSI drama, lies this diagram of exploding details.

      Oxford Museum of Natural History

      Esquire. Also, please feel free to visit the Crazy Walls Tumblr.

      The crispness of the shadow on the side wall caused by the paper hanging in the air is notable. I find myself assuming this is late in the day. The power of the low sun in Iceland must be intense.

    7. background

      Crimes and criminality. Is it just me? Here, a bright spotlight as if, yet again, we are at a crime scene marked by harsh tones, chalk lines, and the inevitable surveillance of a prison guard.

      And yet, in the corner of my eye, red. Red and the shape of Iceland. Iceland with a red dot. This is where we are.

      All of these reflections could be "just me." It could all also be a question of scale.

    8. The painting is naturally placed by the side of a road

      This sentence is amazing. Naturally, a painting of roads is placed by the road. No ambiguity, and yet, why would this symbiosis be meaningful? In mapping, do things sit next to the things they represent? Or do they, instead, suggest a rupture with the lived experience?

    9. This is the experience of a town as a ’path of least involvement’, where the only definable elements are its escape routes

      The path of least involvement. Escape routes. I am lost. Cars? What cars? Escape how? The painting itself invokes an old architectural blueprint with its chemical odors and inherent preservation vice.

      Saxman No. 2 Mine map, CONSOL Energy, Inc. Mine Maps and Records Collection, AIS.1991.16, Archives Service Center, University of Pittsburgh

      The door to our dear white structure also appears in a state of decay. Why are we suddenly stopped at the side of the road? In this piece about maps, I feel decidedly unmoored.

    10. through several different media

      Just here, already in the first sentence, a relentless ambiguity collides with the presentation of evidence. The authors allow their chosen media of response lie (as yet) unexplored and unrevealed, while the image below provokes guesses and anticipation of the context.

      Not being an archaeologist myself --I am an art historian by training--I choose to combine the (for me) uncomfortable, insistent not-knowing of the piece as it unfolds with the authors' assertion that their artistic interventions are about the nature of archaeology--together, this suggests an archaeology that does not, or cannot, ever see the "whole picture." While a map might constitute seeing this putative "whole," a counter-map would be the inverse.

      This makes a satisfying sort of empathetic sense. I could imagine finding something in an excavation that is clearly true and present, but whose crucial context is engulfed by the expanses of unexcavated land nearby.

    11. During a recent visit we discovered that many of the objects we had used during the excavation had become mobile, exploring the territories outside the excavation area

      Perhaps the archaeology of objects, meaning an archaeology produced by objects, is at hand. What ambiguities might they experience? What is their experience of scale?

    12. spatial and temporal transformations

      This image appears again. This time transformed. I know exactly where I am. I wonder if the white square is still on the ground (the blueprint image is not). I even know the future. I know the trenches will be filled in and they will leave traces of what has happened.

      I am oriented, as if using a map. I know my scale. I am comfortable with my ambiguity.

    13. Threads mediates the underlying tensions in our collective pieces

      I know this white structure. I know those frames. I know them from the past of this piece, and I know that they are to come. Now that they are represented at this scale, I remember them from the time-lapse. Networks of string, framed as a representation, seen only in part and obliquely. Again, is this archaeology? Seems plausible from where I sit.

      I suddenly wish these annotations were a real conversation.

      My experience with this formal construction is different. Dreamcatcher Wallpaper

    14. The red painting is at the scale ∞:1, the white painting is at the scale 1:∞

      The map has scale. The colors too are given scale. The scales are all relative to what you want to represent. Compared to digging a trench, the act of representation here seems somehow impotent.

    15. archaeological trowels to sculpt the blue background

      Upon finding myself here, oh, how I wish I could see the surface of this painting. It is on display in the image as if on a wall in a museum, out of touch, out of reach...and yet here are clues to its material expression.

      Later, I return, having been able to see the surface better, re-struck by its formal similarities to old-fashioned architectural blueprints at a distance. It is, among other things, a question of scale and expectations.

    16. the road system

      Roads? There are roads? Where are the roads? Hvar erum við?

      I am lost in the images. The text moves me to another interpretive paradigm. I do not like it. I was content, lost in my own self-centered reflections. Ambiguity is uncomfortable to me, it would appear, only until I start my own sense-making.

    17. Inferstructures, Maps of places called Bolungarvík, Threads, and A 1913 Map of 2011 Bolungarvík

      In the first image of this second sequence, we move back in time yet again. Archaeological layers move from top to bottom, from the present to the past, as we are doing here.

      The chalk lines are now just in a state of becoming. A human appears. The technology used to create the patterns we now expect become visible. The human appears almost as an interlper, as the objects have as yet taken center stage in this system.

      In the second image of this sequence, the human becomes a mere shadow. A shadow whose originating object, for a while, eluded me. The shadow of the photographer that is made on the roof melds with the shadow of the white structure on the ground to create the impression a panoptic prison tower has been inserted into our narrative. Angles are seen, all jutting out, allowing for a sweeping view of the terrain.

      Folson Prison Museum

      It is a prison guard's point of view, but it is also a cartographer's. The question of scale both in the form of a silhouette and in the form of an inquirer's standpoint arises.

      By the end of this sequence, distant crowds gather and time speeds on (backwards or forwards, we do not know) in a time-lapse photograph taken--we assume--within the white structure?

      Later, I return to this time-lapse image, thinking..."The white structure is condemned."

    18. In total we devised 4 pieces

      In the second image of this introductory sequence--the flow of the text has defined the images' sequentiality--we have clearly moved back in time. The trenches are gone, the walls of the white structure are emptier, the working clutter at right is neater. Entropy (?) has been reversed. I find myself wondering if clutter is always a sign of the ravages of time. In archaeology, does mess suggest progress?

      It becomes clear to me through this step back that the canvas of the white structure's walls are in a state of becoming.

      Instead of the brown gashes of the trenches, chalk scores the earth the way that old police dramas demarcated dead bodies. Ferdy on Films

    19. processes of making and doing art and archaeology

      A neatly-dug trench enters like a sharp brown cut up through the grass from the bottom of the frame, its line moving the eye directly towards a white house-like structure that asks a question in a language foreign to me. The tilt of the hill and the framing of the photograph gives the structure a sense of being a sloping funhouse, an environment in which your senses are made to trick themselves, to expect level ground where there is an incline, to see solid walls dissolve unexpectedly. An experience of disorientation. Where am I?

      Hvar erum við? Where are we, indeed? By these words, ambiguity slides from the text into the very makeup of the landscape represented by this photograph. A quick trip to Google Translate helps me find a bit of purchase on what I am seeing, and situates this piece textually in Iceland--something suggested, but not strictly disambiguated, by the header image.

      Returning here, having finished the piece, I find that this image encapsulates for me the entirety of the story that is to come--the inverse of ambiguity.

  5. Jul 2017
    1. impression of objects are not limited to the surface but is also much deeper, below the skin of the object, in its history and personal connections or threads.

      I cannot speak to how I may have interpreted these happenings at Æringur 2011.

      But from my point of view in this space and at this time, these objects, actions, and transformations are clearly in conversation with time and space themselves, both in their original forms as well as in their representations here.

      In their original forms, the impressions and marks exist above and below ground, in memories and in forgetfulness, and in the past, present, and future.

      In their web-based forms, they are in photographs, they are encoded. They are in our lived experience both in 2011 and 2017, and they have marked the planet as well as the mind and memory of this reader.

      My workspace. Right now.

    2. We

      The scale of space. We have a tradition for representing this, of course. It has been up for debate since the beginning of this webpage. And yet...how big are those holes? How big are the objects? Where are we?

      The excavation is made clear by the slashes in the ground. The incavation is less obviously represented.

    3. later

      The scale of time. It proceeds relentlessly. It has no clear cartographic (temporographic?) tradition. Timelines might be considered a map of time, but I don't buy it. Timelines are a map of the human experience of time. Demarcated by what we do or do not wish to remember about the past.

      Cartographic maps are like that too, though. I suppose I might be wrong.

      Everyone's ur-visualization comes to mind.

      Charles Minard's map of Napoleon's Russian campaign of 1812

      Showing both space and time together as abstractions, Minard also conflates these two properties, compromising perfect data clarity on either.

    4. simply a process of doing something

      ...delightfully, and possibly even presciently, by "a set of bored archaeologists, or artists, or both."

      The artists' plan for a future excavation is presaged by past actions. The scale of time inherent in this piece--and perhaps by extension, archaeology--arises.

    5. perhaps one day be excavated by a group of bored archaeologists

      One day. One day at some time. What do maps have to tell us about the future? Can they disambiguate time as well as give scale to space? To archaeologists, is the action of burying--of incavating--objects predictive of future actions? Is excavation a likely foregone conclusion?

      The image below shows the "mess" of the work involved in the original happening. The threads, the piles, the maps. I now also see this as progress, as moving towards a conclusion.

      The map now posted on the shady side of the white structure, ambiguously part of the 1913 Map of 2011 Bolungarvík work, shows a region shattered by lines of red thread, each drawing attention to particular details of the landscape, a bit like drawing out blood. Pins, details, threads. Somewhere between an old-fashioned collection of butterflies, each impaled with a pin and a "crazy wall" of a contemporary (here comes the crime again) CSI drama, lies this diagram of exploding details.

      Oxford Museum of Natural History

      Esquire. Also, please feel free to visit the Crazy Walls Tumblr.

      The crispness of the shadow on the side wall caused by the paper hanging in the air is notable. I find myself assuming this is late in the day. The power of the low sun in Iceland must be intense.

    6. A 1913 Map of 2011 Bolungarvík was a piece in four parts – the construction/installation of the site/lab, a performance of the archaeological process of excavation, and the interpretation and production of archaeological artefacts and bodies of knowledge after the excavation had been completed.

      The text makes the chalk-prison-trenches process clearer, and yet, as before, I am brought back from my own ambiguous musings to the process of creating these artifacts. This phrase here, though...How are archaeological artifacts produced? Are they actually produced as archaeological artifacts in their interpretation? Is a landscape interpreted and produced only in the creation of a map?

      In retrospect, I realize that the artists were being literal in their production of archaeological artifacts. Not ambiguous in the least. I find myself, again, caught up in my own story.

    7. background

      Crimes and criminality. Is it just me? Here, a bright spotlight as if, yet again, we are at a crime scene marked by harsh tones, chalk lines, and the inevitable surveillance of a prison guard.

      And yet, in the corner of my eye, red. Red and the shape of Iceland. Iceland with a red dot. This is where we are.

      All of these reflections could be "just me." It could all also be a question of scale.

    8. The painting is naturally placed by the side of a road

      This sentence is amazing. Naturally, a painting of roads is placed by the road. No ambiguity, and yet, why would this symbiosis be meaningful? In mapping, do things sit next to the things they represent? Or do they, instead, suggest a rupture with the lived experience?

    9. This is the experience of a town as a ’path of least involvement’, where the only definable elements are its escape routes.

      The path of least involvement. Escape routes. I am lost. Cars? What cars? Escape how? The painting itself invokes an old architectural blueprint with its chemical odors and inherent preservation vice.

      Saxman No. 2 Mine map, CONSOL Energy, Inc. Mine Maps and Records Collection, AIS.1991.16, Archives Service Center, University of Pittsburgh

      The door to our dear white structure also appears in a state of decay. Why are we suddenly stopped at the side of the road? In this piece about maps, I feel decidedly unmoored.

    10. through several different media

      Just here, already in the first sentence, a relentless ambiguity collides with the presentation of evidence. The authors allow their chosen media of response lie (as yet) unexplored and unrevealed, while the image below provokes guesses and anticipation of the context.

      Not being an archaeologist myself --I am an art historian by training--I choose to combine the (for me) uncomfortable, insistent not-knowing of the piece as it unfolds with the authors' assertion that their artistic interventions are about the nature of archaeology--together, this suggests an archaeology that does not, or cannot, ever see the "whole picture." While a map might constitute seeing this putative "whole," a counter-map would be the inverse.

      This makes a satisfying sort of empathetic sense. I could imagine finding something in an excavation that is clearly true and present, but whose crucial context is engulfed by the expanses of unexcavated land nearby.

    11. During a recent visit we discovered that many of the objects we had used during the excavation had become mobile, exploring the territories outside the excavation area.

      Perhaps the archaeology of objects, meaning an archaeology produced by objects, is at hand. What ambiguities might they experience? What is their experience of scale?

    12. transformations

      This image appears again. This time transformed. I know exactly where I am. I wonder if the white square is still on the ground (the blueprint image is not). I even know the future. I know the trenches will be filled in and they will leave traces of what has happened.

      I am oriented, as if using a map. I know my scale. I am comfortable with my ambiguity.

    13. Threads

      I know this white structure. I know those frames. I know them from the past of this piece, and I know that they are to come. Now that they are represented at this scale, I remember them from the time-lapse. Networks of string, framed as a representation, seen only in part and obliquely. Again, is this archaeology? Seems plausible from where I sit.

      I suddenly wish these annotations were a real conversation.

      My experience with this formal construction is different. Dreamcatcher Wallpaper

    14. The red painting is at the scale ∞:1, the white painting is at the scale 1:∞

      The map has scale. The colors too are given scale. The scales are all relative to what you want to represent. Compared to digging a trench, the act of representation here seems somehow impotent.

    15. archaeological trowels to sculpt the blue background

      Upon finding myself here, oh, how I wish I could see the surface of this painting. It is on display in the image as if on a wall in a museum, out of touch, out of reach...and yet here are clues to its material expression.

      Later, I return, having been able to see the surface better, re-struck by its formal similarities to old-fashioned architectural blueprints at a distance. It is, among other things, a question of scale and expectations.

    16. the road system

      Roads? There are roads? Where are the roads? Hvar erum við?

      I am lost in the images. The text moves me to another interpretive paradigm. I do not like it. I was content, lost in my own self-centered reflections. Ambiguity is uncomfortable to me, it would appear, only until I start my own sense-making.

    17. Inferstructures, Maps of places called Bolungarvík, Threads, and A 1913 Map of 2011 Bolungarvík

      In the first image of this second sequence, we move back in time yet again. Archaeological layers move from top to bottom, from the present to the past, as we are doing here.

      The chalk lines are now just in a state of becoming. A human appears. The technology used to create the patterns we now expect become visible. The human appears almost as an interlper, as the objects have as yet taken center stage in this system.

      In the second image of this sequence, the human becomes a mere shadow. A shadow whose originating object, for a while, eluded me. The shadow of the photographer that is made on the roof melds with the shadow of the white structure on the ground to create the impression a panoptic prison tower has been inserted into our narrative. Angles are seen, all jutting out, allowing for a sweeping view of the terrain.

      Folson Prison Museum

      It is a prison guard's point of view, but it is also a cartographer's. The question of scale both in the form of a silhouette and in the form of an inquirer's standpoint arises.

      By the end of this sequence, distant crowds gather and time speeds on (backwards or forwards, we do not know) in a time-lapse photograph taken--we assume--within the white structure?

      Later, I return to this time-lapse image, thinking..."The white structure is condemned."

    18. In total we devised 4 pieces.

      In the second image of this introductory sequence--the flow of the text has defined the images' sequentiality--we have clearly moved back in time. The trenches are gone, the walls of the white structure are emptier, the working clutter at right is neater. Entropy (?) has been reversed. I find myself wondering if clutter is always a sign of the ravages of time. In archaeology, does mess suggest progress?

      It becomes clear to me through this step back that the canvas of the white structure's walls are in a state of becoming.

      Instead of the brown gashes of the trenches, chalk scores the earth the way that old police dramas demarcated dead bodies. Ferdy on Films

    19. processes of making and doing art and archaeology.

      A neatly-dug trench enters like a sharp brown cut up through the grass from the bottom of the frame, its line moving the eye directly towards a white house-like structure that asks a question in a language foreign to me. The tilt of the hill and the framing of the photograph gives the structure a sense of being a sloping funhouse, an environment in which your senses are made to trick themselves, to expect level ground where there is an incline, to see solid walls dissolve unexpectedly. An experience of disorientation. Where am I?

      Hvar erum við? Where are we, indeed? By these words, ambiguity slides from the text into the very makeup of the landscape represented by this photograph. A quick trip to Google Translate helps me find a bit of purchase on what I am seeing, and situates this piece textually in Iceland--something suggested, but not strictly disambiguated, by the header image.

      Returning here, having finished the piece, I find that this image encapsulates for me the entirety of the story that is to come--the inverse of ambiguity.

  6. Aug 2015
    1. "Efficiency" was a catchphrase for all that was good and right at that time...and I'm not sure that it has the same weight now. Perhaps it has morphed into the positive-value-statement "something for ALL."