is there is a two week
"is that there is is a two week reporting lag"
is there is a two week
"is that there is is a two week reporting lag"
The U.S. Centers
"Centers... have" or "Center... has"
does not need to understanding
"does not need to understand"
Anna
How about we switch the names with the policies here: Anna is the one who uses umbrella and Bob is the one who uses shamans. Or perhaps we can make both decision makers of identical gender so we can forgo the problem of stereotyping women as irrational beings resorting to unscientific methods.
need
needed?
crawling
The expression "crawling the website" sounds like it misses a preposition or maybe I am not in sync with the latest lingo.
to
"with" instead of "to" will make the sentence easier to read.
Roberts’
Is it correct to only place the possessive to the last author? Perhaps rephrasing will eliminate the need for this.
social network evolutions
or "social networks evolution"?
were robust to these choices
Consider rephrasing.
(e.g., Camerer et al. (1997)).
double bracket at the end
best-case
best-case-scenario?
it is in indicator
it is an indicator
there’s a hole over there, and I’m going to work very hard to fill it up. But, not every hole needs to be filled.
Any chance another metaphor could be found for this idea?
Motivation by absence does not usually lead to good research.
Brings in mind: "The absence of evidence is not the evidence of absence."
nowcasting
What is this exactly?
come from the fact in the digital age
"come from the fact that in the digital age companies.."
(described above)
Where is "above"? In the previous chapter?
to perform
"by performing"?
these
Perhaps "the" instead of "these"?
.
Again, from the perspective of the present moment, it would be great if the current US presidential election cycle could in some shape be mentioned here if studies are available on the popularity of the headlines from fake newspapers like "The Denver Guardian" and so on.
.
This is absolutely fascinating, thank you for including this in your book.
when big data sources appears
"when big data sources appear" or "when big data source appears"
cases
Perhaps singular? Case?
data
Consider "that data sources are" instead of "found data are"?
2013 protesters
It looks a bit like there were "2013 protesters" so perhaps "during the 2013 Occupy Gezi Park protests" or "2013 protests"?
.
I wish that your book could come out after some studies of the current presidential election cycle in the US were complete - it would be a fascinating addition, I think.
analysis
This sentence has some singular/plural use issue to resolve - to me it seems like "some analyses" sounds better, since there are multiple analyses.
This need
This needs not?
`pocket litter’”
Is this accent in front of pocket intentional?
is not always possible
Is it worth here to mention briefly why? Cost prohibitive? Etc.
data to operationalize theoretical constructs
I am missing a sentence here about how exactly data operationalize theoretical constructs, or what this phrase actually means.
the theoretical constructs in many existing theories.
It seems like there is an important point being made here but the way it is attached at the end of this sentence makes me miss it - are the relationships those theoretical constructs? Perhaps saying "logs do not directly include information about the theoretical constructs in many existing theories, namely human relationships" might be helpful but it still does not sound ideal.
more reactive over time
I got the impression that reactivity is the property of the participant who is supplying big data to the platforms for collection but now it sounds like this is also property of the big data systems - is reactivity meant to mean the same thing here?
told Newman et al. (2011),
It sounds a bit like the respondent talked to a journal. I wonder if this could be turned into a story of Newman as a human researcher.
change in response to researcher measurement
I suggest just going straight to the term: "Social scientists generally call this behavior reactivity." And then making use of the word "reactivity" to reinforce the concept in the following senteces.
a process
Perhaps: "by means of a process called drift" or "in a process called drift"
limited granularity and questionable accuracy
That's a great point.
bad
I know this is an informal book and all but it's so hard to be cool with this explicit value judgment in scholarly writing! It's taking me a while to get used to it. Do people in the industry use "bad" and "good" or do they use "correct" or "incorrect" or "useful" and "futile" or something along those lines?
ten
We just heard about "three" and now it's "ten" - so that's hard to keep track of, and then I see below another division in "two" is coming up. What happened to the three?
three research approaches
Every time I see a promise made in such a form I sort of wish I had more information about what these "three research approaches" will be so I can make better choice about what to read. Listing them would be helpful and will not detract from the way the book reads, which is already great, but for someone who is trying to learn and organize this information in her head, it helps to get it right away.
surveys
Are those surveys always written surveys without the help or presence of a researcher? I am wondering about the agent of data collection here if that has any implications for your typology.
future
Any reason not to even briefly mention those three themes here?
researchers
Those must not be academic researchers, they are researchers employed at technology companies, right? I somehow feel like there is a distinction to be made between public and private access to data.
fancy algorithms
Weapons of Math Destruction by Cathy O'Neill has great insights about the complexity of algorithms and bias. Can we really eliminate bias by keeping the algorithm or research simple?
Readymades
Two strong arguments for it: sustainability (using what you already have or someone else has) and that up to now launching new data collection/creation is sometimes cost prohibitive. That is, as you are showing, changing.
world
world, then repurposes it as art.
Data scientists, however, have less training and experience studying social behavior.
At this point it has occurred to me finally that data scientists in this book are mostly quantitative data scientists - is that fair to say? Because it seems like qualitative data scientists, of which there are many, for example employed at Facebook in a role of Ethnographer, or otherwise engaging in Computer Human Interaction or User Experience/Inferface/Interaction research, are also data scientists, except their data is qualitative. Is this going to be discussed anywhere? I guess I'll find out.
photos and movies
"movies and a photo" - somehow this set up eases my mind a little, because, well, they are the same.
everywhere
think "about everywhere" or italicize online and everywhere
measured
measured or measurable?
thermostats
Kitchen appliances but also probably medical implants.
computers everywhere
I like how this leads to ubiquitous computing later on.
harm
affect in possibly harmful ways instead of harm -- for a glass half full perspective this is a rather fatalistic suggestion!
world
Is it too far out to suggest that it allowes to tackle poverty more effectively?
Rorschach inkblot test
It's interesting to read that the inkblot tests are a derivative of one's background as I always thought it was a psychological analytical tool which depended on someone's internal emotional state.
create
I almost want to read here something like "because of how easy it is to scale them, create new possibilities.. etc"
, the
Perhaps change "," to "–" or add "known/recognized as the gold standard of"
these two estimates
"all of this together" -- in the spirit of informal tone of this book and because the word "estimate" repeats a lot.
asked
Are surveys of this type usually uncompensated?
The researchers
It would be interesting to know their institutional affiliation.
beautiful
I would be more comfortable with "valuable" or "meaningful" or "useful" or even the terrible "impactful" and leave the notions of beauty out of this. That's just me.
some in government
"some time" perhaps?