.-> Let's remove the 31st Oct date and just say shutdown of old customer identifiers for unregulated merchants will happen very soon (exact date will be notified to all affected merchants).
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.-> Let's remove the 31st Oct date and just say shutdown of old customer identifiers for unregulated merchants will happen very soon (exact date will be notified to all affected merchants).
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Remove
which merchants will be
merchants who will be
It's
Possessive pronoun. Replace with Its
modifications
what modifications? can that added?
Regex for Stakeholder PAN: /^[a-zA-z]{5}\d{4}[a-zA-Z]{1}$/
Is this optional? I don't see it in the code. Also, googled to find what this is. Apparently, code to validate PAN numbers. You can probably include a one-liner to state "Use this to validate the PAN"
Know about the various error responses for this API.
Can these errors not be included here along with the parameters as per the new template?
Handy Tip
Handy Tips, (even if it is just 1)
Regex for Stakeholder PAN: /^[a-zA-z]{5}\d{4}[a-zA-Z]{1}$/
No description here?
The amount, in paise, to be transferred from the business account to the contact's fund account.
The amount that was transferred from your business account to your contact's fund account.
Again, talk in past tense for all fetch cases - because we are trying to fetch a payout that was already created/passed.
Additional purposes for payouts links can be created via the Dashboard and then used in the API. However, it is not possible to create a new purpose via the API. Populating the parameter with a non-existing purpose not present on the Dashboard will return an error.
This note is not necessary as we are only fetching a payout and not creating anything here.
are
remove
Payout Life Cycle section
As per previous comment
is
Don't use present tense in a way to suggest a payout is being created. Use 'was' for all fetch cases.
.
Free radical.
payout that is being created.
payout is not being created here. We are only retrieving an existing payout that was already created.
The purpose of the payout that was created.
fetched
use 'retrieved' instead of 'fetched' at all places.
paramters
spell check
Keep your API Key id and Key Secret are readily available.
Keep your API Key id and Key Secret readily available.
Possible values
Incomplete sentence.
Suggestion: The possible values are
The amount must be atleast INR 1.00.Error Status: 400The amount specified is less than the minimum amount. Currency subunits, such as paise (in the case of INR), should always be greater than 100.
@vinita
Although the units we are talking about may be different, to the reader - what comes across is that in the error message we say at least INR 1 but in solution we say greater than 100...? Can we do something about this?
You can
Remove.
roles and permissions
Roles and Permissions tab
Bold face the UI label.
2FA
Link this to the 2FA page.
sample template that you can use for creating
Shorten the sentence.
sample template for creating
allowing you
that allows you to have
Information on RazorpayX Approval Workflow and assigning users roles to create and approve payouts.
Rephrase as per the latest norm.
Assign user roles to create and approve payouts using the RazorpayX Approval Workflow.
You can display information important to your business by adding and modifying fields on the Batch Page and then uploading the data against the same via file upload. You customers can view the data uploaded by you which would be specific to them and then proceed forward to make the paymen
Suggestion: You can also add an example here to bring in more clarity.
click
click the click to upload sounds off...
In such instances, say Use the Click to Upload option to select your file
The file has been processed by us.
Change to active voice.
No action has been performed on the file by us.
Change to active voice.
will be
are
click to upload
Match the UI label. If this is a button or a link (Click to Upload)?
dashboard.
Dashboard
e Id
Consistent. Id or ID.
Primary Reference ID and Secondary Reference ID
Handle Errors
Handle Errors.
In case you do not wish to send notifications and simply wish to embed the page URL on your website, same can also be done.
Active voice.
You can simply embed the page URL on your website if you do not wish to send notifications.
proceed forward
forward - redundant word. Please remove.
You
Your customers
payment page
I suggest we use the noun form here also. Payment Page Link would be better highlighted.
You can select the template based on the payment method using which you want to pay and the beneficiary to whom you want to credit the amount, based on the information available to you.
Split this into 2 or 3 sentences please.
or
and
After the file is processed, you can see the accepted rows and invalid rows.
Can this be indented to appear under 11?
to
so as to avoid errors
from here
from where? from the Bulk Payouts screen?
Specify...
following
Apart from processing payouts, you can perform the following tasks too:
Process payouts in bulk using the Bulk Upload feature on the RazorpayX Dashboard.
You can process payouts....
Don't use incomplete sentences (as a general rule)
and
and and repeated twice. Remove
Shopify
Remove the example
stronger
Replace with meaningful or accurate or strategic
streamline the process.
to meet demands. Streamline the process doesn't convey the context you established.
em to act on cost-saving opportunities by themselves.
them to act independently on cost-saving opportunities.
Remove 'by themselves'
Know more
Link missing. Please check across doc.
Know mor
Link missing
lengthy
time consuming
line of credit to:
Line of Credit.
I see 'line of credit' and 'Line of Credit' both are used. Maintain consistency.
cover
training and licence renewal isn't one-time?
can help businesses build customers’ trust by providing 24/7
Rather than trust, it is about meeting demands.
can help businesses meet demands by providing 24/7 funding options
grew
replace with a synonym such as 'swell' or 'increase'.
We have used the word 'grow' in the paragraph that follows. Avoid repetitive terms.
acquisition
change to customer acquisition or business acquisition.
Explore dynamic tenure for repayment when you use Razorpay Line of Credit.
Will this be linked to some page? Where or how do I explore?
business opportunities
The bullet point listed do not qualify as opportunities but rather as investments.
Know more about the withdrawal process on the RazorpayX Dashboard.
Know more link?
Enforce spending controls
sentence does not go well with the lead-in. See if you can rephrase
working capital
Change to some other term. This naming has been used previously by Capital for a product. Chances are users will mix the two up.
will be
replace all 'will be' with 'is'
will be
is
settled in your bank
settled to
Captured payments are automatically settled to the bank account submitted to us as part of your KYC verification as per your settlement cycle
Passive voice. Change to active.
Your KYC must be approved
Your account must be KYC approved.
After Razorpay receives the amount, it is settled to your bank account, after fees deduction
'After' repeated twice in sentence. Avoid the after xxx, after yyy format in general.
Can be rephrased to - Once Razorpay receives the amount, it is settled to your bank account after fees deduction.
schedule the payouts.
You can hyperlink this to the 'Schedule Payouts' page.
which
whom
left
right pane?
on
in
d
Dashboard
d
Dashboard
Process payouts in bulk using the Bulk Upload feature on the RazorpayX Dashboard.
This can go to the meta description.
Right now meta description and intro seem to be similar. We can change the intro to go a little more in detail.
<Example> - rephrase as required.
As a business owner, you may come across situations wherein you have to make payouts to multiple vendors or multiple payouts to vendor(s). You can use the Bulk Payouts feature to create multiple payouts in such cases.
The
the
Authorization transaction + auto-charge first payment:Yo
The gap between these two lines look a little odd. You can remove it?
Download and Upload the Pre-filled NACH Form
Handy Tips
t is yet to pay
yet to be paid
and
or
The
the
UPI Payments
Change to Watch Out!
UPI Payments
Change to Handy Tips
This error occurs when you enter a currency other than INRMake sure the currency is INR.
Should we not mention that it is for UPI?
we only support INR.
we support INR only.
hat is yet to pay.
yet to be paid
tha
spell check
authorization
change to UK spelling. At all places.
withdrawals for your bank account are locked
withdrawal..... is locked
withdrawals for your bank account are locked.
withdrawal for your bank account is locked.
The
the
The
the
Authorization
Change to s at all places. UK spelling standards.
.
This looks odd. Remove the period, should be ok.
The amount that is yet to pay
The amount that is yet to be paid.
authorization
authorisation
authorization
authorisation
Throw
throws
Example: 5th June
for example, 5th June
will be
are
Let us say you only want to auto-capture payments that are authorized within 3 days from creation.
the link between the lead-in sentence and the table is missing. Maybe you can add a then clause here.
Suggestion: Let us say you want to only auto-capture.... then, select the following settings.
period
period.
will be
are
authorization.
authorisation. Use UK spellings.
authorization
authorisation
will have to
must
have been
are
is changed
payment status changes to
will not be
but is not settled to your account
Razorpay Dashboard and using APIs.
either from the Razorpay Dashboard or using APIs.
payment methods, international payments
payment methods or international payments.
customer's bank, UPI Apps, external gateways
customer's bank, UPI apps, and external gateways.
months
For the image below... have a lead-in sentence.
You can select the date range upto the last 90 days.
You can select the date range from upto the last 90 days.
Know how to view the
We are not using the 'Know how' terminology anymore.
Rephrase to "View the transaction success rate on the Razorpay Dashboard"
rupay
Is rupay not specific to India? Please verify and delete if not applicable for MY.
web view
WebView
Ask for the OTP to be Resent
Resend OTP should be the heading?
Webview
WebView
Handy TipsThis framework only supports iOS version 10.0 and above.
This can be a part of the Watch out text itself. Need not have two separate ones
The opinionated alerting is displayed only when it is running on simulators.
What does this mean? Feels too tech jargon suddenly.
Live Mode API Keys
hyperlink this?
Razorpay
Curlec?
untick
uncheck
dont
don't or do not
dont
don't or do not upgrade
Curlec built a new app
Curlec has built a new app
Razorpay
Curlec
Razorpay
Curlec
n the checkout screen, enter your phone number, click PROCEED, and complete the payment.
This screenshot has words like UPI/rupee symbol appearing in it. I know we aren't touching screenshots for now but this looks too jarring. Can it be taken off?
On your Shopify store add an item to your cart
On your Shopify store, add an item
30th June 2022
Can remove this date since it is anyway long past this date.
Failing to upgrade.... payment failures.
different states
Spacing issue. Add space between different and states
a FFMC
an FFMC certificate is issued.
would be
RBI will review the director of the applicant entity under the fit and proper criteria.
in
Intermediary
official website
Suggestion: Hyperlink it if possible.
current account
Current Account number registered with your business.
whose personal PAN has been shared.
This sentence is passive. Also, since we are talking about list of personal documents for an individual, is it necessary to mention this?
Card
card
Card
card
identity
I think PAN is to establish that you are an income tax assessee. It is not accepted as an identity proof. Please verify.
personal details information
personal documents you might need
List and details of commonly used terms and certificates related to Razorpay Account Activation.
List of commonly used terms and details about certificates related to Razorpay Account activation.
od is card
Add period
Sample Code
Orphan heading... no sample code here too. Can remove heading if it is not applicable.
copy{ "error_code": "BAD_REQUEST_ERROR", "error_description": "Payment failed", "error_source": "gateway", "error_step": "payment_authorization", "error_reason": "payment_failed"}
This code block should have a heading
d is card
Add period
Sample Code
Sample code is not there...?
Refer to the list of supported currencies.
Where is the list of supported currencies? Can it be linked here?
scenarios
Call it flows for the sake of consistency.
Create a Payment API
Can be hyperlinked to the create payment api page
If you integrated with our APIs before October 15, 2022, you should make the following changes to your integration to accept card payments with the 3DS2 protocol.If you integrated with our S2S APIs before October 15, 2022, you must make the following changes to your integration to accept card payments with 3DS2 authentication protocol.
Repeated content.. Consider rewording in the meta description
Webhook
W need not be capitalised here IMO
captured
text should be in similar to how it is used in the first bullet point.
Do Not Parse or Cast the Webhook Request Body
Shouldn't this be called 'Handy Tips'?
pay EMIs from your Dashboard, it
Do not link this text.
Only One Due Date
Fixed Due Date
tenure
You can also bring in a use case to explain this better. Instead of the generic 'any purpose' ...
"Businesses often come across the need for quick capital to meet their expenses. It could be festival bonus, or the need to replace old equipment" etc etc
Withdraw any amount for any purpose from the credit limit available to you and pay back the principal and interest in equated monthly instalments (EMI). Pay interest only on the amount you have withdrawn, at your own pace and in control. Cover all of your planned and unexpected financial outflows with Line of Credit and withdraw funds from your assigned credit limit conveniently.
Personalise this.
'You can withdraw any amount' 'You can cover all of your planned and unplanned...'
The order amount:
The minimum order amount is:
Recurring Payments vs Subscriptions
As commented earlier
The order amount:
The minimum order amount is:
Recurring Payments vs Subscriptions
Is this heading really required...? Since we are anyway redirecting the user to another page. Headings can be avoided for one-liners.
Offers . Payment Methods . Themes and Colours .
Remove period at the end of listing. No need to add period for bullet points that are not sentences.
example: if y
For example, if you
Integrate Affordability Widget With ShopifyIntegrate the Razorpay Affordability Widget on your Shopify store to influence your customer's purchase decision by displaying various affordable payment options and offers.Integrate the Razorpay Affordability Widget with your Shopify store to influence your customer's purchase decisions before they reach checkout by displaying various affordable payment options and offers.
Please check the comment I gave on WooCommerce page.
Integrate Affordability Widget With WooCommerce WebsiteIntegrate your WooCommerce website with Affordability Widget to influence your customer's purchase decision by displaying various affordable payment options and offers.You can integrate Affordability Widget with your WooCommerce website to spread awareness about the affordability-based payment options and offers available to your customers before they reach checkout.
There's a lot of redundancy here. Integrate Affordability Widget with WooCommerce is repeated in title, meta desc, and the introductory steps - all of which are right below each other.
Recommended: Title can be 'Integration'. Meta description can remain as is. First paragraph can be truncated to remove repetition.
API key
API keys
You can now preview the widget on your product description page in test mode. Here is a glimpse of the default widget.
This need not be a step.
Steps are only those tasks which calls for the user to do something.
string API Key ID generated from the Razorpay Dashboard.
Why is this text inside a warning callout?
Follow the integration steps given below to embed the widget on your website.
Actual integration steps are way below. Have this attached to actual steps.
with
Integrate widget on your website in title and with your website in meta description. Change one of them.
Mail not Found
Remove this heading. Not looking good.
ps: a. Follow these steps to enable international payments for your account. b. While creating the Payment Page, click the currency drop-down list in the Price field and select the required curre
numbering is breaking here too
option
get hyperlink button.
Remove option
If there is one Price field is optional and there are other mandatory Price fields which still have stock available, the Payment Page will remain in the active state.
Reword. Meaning not clear.
If there is one Price field is optional
If the Price field is optional,
to
with
increae
spell check
This
Check the formatting in Q18... the actual error msg seems to be smaller in size than rest of the text.
Total Revenue
Total Revenue in the question appears to be smaller in size than rest of the text. If this is because of formatting issue, then I'd suggest remove bold text from it.
Also, Razorpay Dashboard
One Currency per Payment Page
Use Handy Tips only
a. In the Razorpay Dashboard, navigate to Settings. b. Under Account Settings, in the Theme Color section, enter the HEX code for your brand. For example, #6822CC. c. Click Save Changes.
Numbering breaking
c. Upload the logo file. Ensure that the logo is a square image of minimum dimensions 256x256 px. Maximum file size allowed is 1MB. Formats supported are JPG, JPEG and PNG.
Numbering seems to be breaking. Please check.
Non-animated GIF
Shouldn't this be standardised to Handy Tips? No other heading allowed for a callout...
customize
customise.
Use UK English.
your colour,
with a colour or logo of your choice
Navig
Lead-in sentence.
any email address
Reports generation can take upto 10 minutes.
Generating reports can take upto 10 minutes.
G
Lead-in sentence
Use Case
Actions
It
This
RazorpayX Registered Users Log in
Why do we have 'Registered Users' in the heading?
Can keep it to just 'RazorpayX' in the heading. Bring in the registered users bit as a lead-in sentence before the numbered list.
If you are a registered RazorpayX user,
and Capital products and offerings.
avoid using 2 ands in a sentence.
Can be reworded as: Contact the Support Team for all your queries related to RazorpayX, XPayroll or Capital products and offerings.
and Submit
and click Submit
you
your