- Dec 2022
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www.biorxiv.org www.biorxiv.org
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confocal microscope,
may want to specify the type of confocal here in addition to the methods.
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brand-
can eliminate to reduce redundancy
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clean data
more precise to say "data with high SNR"?
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the contamination inevitable
specify the type of contamination
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to be
should be "from being"
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and bio-friendly breaking the shot-noise limit, facilitating automated analysis of massive data about cell migrations and organelle interactions.
simplify and make more direct
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all faithfully
awkward phrasing
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The computationally 15-fold multiplied photon budget in a standard confocal microscope by DeepSeMi allows for recording organelle interactions in four colors and high-frame-rate across tens of thousands of frames, monitoring migrasomes and retractosomes over a half day, and imaging ultra-phototoxicity-sensitive Dictyostelium cells over thousands of frames, all faithfully and sample-friendly.
consider making this a simpler, declarative statement(s)
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requiring no clean data as references and no compromise of spatiotemporal resolution on diverse imaging systems
without the need for baseline data or loss of spatiotemporal resolution
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efficacious
perhaps "effective" is more direct
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bonds
should this be "bounds"?
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A very interesting computer-learning technique to improve signal to noise and enhance resolution of sub-cellular structures. The impact of this work will be more directly transmitted with clearer writing. Some specific suggestions are annotated throughout the paper.
One tool that might facilitate this is: https://hemingwayapp.com/
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