The increase in diet quality was resulting from the decrease in sugar intake and an increase in fruits and vegetables.

Those who had a 5% or greater weight loss were the ones who took in less fat.

Nutrition is a major concern with diet plans. Many of them look at completely cutting a food group, less calories, or no fat.

The total of fruit, milk, meat and beans increased, while grains and carbs decreased in the program.

The 16 week program resulted in a drastic change in healthy eating.

Weight loss is good, but the diet quality and the factors within the diet are what is the most important.

2/3 of adult Americans are overweight or obese.

Women are put in a 16 week diet program and the results are that all of them had a significant weight loss, but lacked some major nutrients.

Important for athletes and other things related to fitness. However there is a certain amount you are only supposed to have throughout the day.

The most popular supplement, protein powder, is useful for many other reason besides building muscles. People who don't eat meat use these powders to get the proteins they need throughout the day.

This article discussed the difference between plant foods and a meal replacement diet. I will use this in attempts to show all the various diets my narrator has tried, but not succeeded with.

Although weight loss was significant, the energy level did not change.

All subjects showed a decrease in all those blocking their blood flow and causing them to be intolerable to insulin.

The results of the study showed significant weight loss for all the subjects, but only a few hit the mark that they predicted.

Taking on a very low caloric diet can result in weight loss, but also a lot of unfavorable additives , as well.

Obesity is reaching new high numbers, which is taking a toll on the quality of life and health.

This article ends by saying that the best way to stay positive is to keep up with activities. Get out a visit people instead of waiting for them. Sitting and waiting for people will leave a person alone more. Keeping connections as strong as possible and never losing the positive attitude.

I understand this idea and can cause serious issues because of it. When older people don;t want to ask for help they are left alone to deal with issues. With no one around for social interactions loneliness can easily become depression. Depression can bring down a persons physical and mental well being.

This is a good quote and explains almost all the points that i bring up in my paper. I would like to use this just to show the affects of being alone for older adults.

This quote is a god example of how many older adults live by themselves with out much social interactions.

Odd how people are making up excuses (allergy wise) so they do not have to eat certain foods. Or, the food makes them feel so anxious that they think they have allergy like symptoms

Great way to sum it up for athletes too. They are eating a so called 'balanced diet', but they are taking it so seriously that it potentially could make them mentally ill

Great-easy to understand- explanation as to what orthorexia is. Shows how it can be considered 'controversial' when labeling it as an eating disorder

When an obese person loses a large amount of weight, they will experience binge eating due to the fact that they cut their usually large portions.

The majority of people who lose a large amount of weight regain it.

This article was an experiment on how different variety of meal sizes and amounts throughout the day. Results showed that to burn more fat, it is recommended to eat more meals than if you are just trying to lose mass. I will use this to show the type of diet my narrator will be on.

Eating more frequent meals has also been a factor in helping build and tone muscles.

Since 1-2 meals a day changes your body mass tremendously, it is also resulted that 1-2 meals a day will change your body fat percentage. This is because you are dropping the mass, so the percentage will automatically go down, even in the slightest.

For those looking to lose body mass, not containing fat, it is proven that 1-2 meals a day will help guide that.

As another graph showed, the most substantial difference in fat mass is when 5 or more meals were eaten in a day, compared to 1-2 meal or 3-4 meals.

A graph shows that have 5 or more meals a day is the key to weight loss.

Studies showed that smaller portions were not a substantial key to change in body mass, but a very large factor in fat mass.

High protein foods frequent throughout the day are very beneficial to fat burning and energy preserving.

Eating smaller portions more frequently is the key to successful weight loss and weight maintenance.

but more than 60% of students choose their majors just on the amount of money that they will earn in a job and refuse to try to explore other classes like college was originally made for.

to get to a place where its just about academics you now need to go to certain colleges instead of every college being this way, most colleges have turned to profit instead.

good quote supporting the fact that going to college was very different for our parents, teachers, etc.

good quote for impact on reader

could use in transition from premise to argument.

This article was very helpful in the aspect of giving a variety of concepts for healthy weight, maintaining it, and how it could be betrayed. I will use this for many resources throughout my creative writing research paper.

Certain conditions call for taking supplements because there may be a shortage of a certain nutrient.

This goes a long with the idea of the motivation people have to take supplements in the first place.

so one out of four students believe their college education was not useful in helping them grow intellectually. If those students were told that there are ways other than college to get knowledge they could of saved thousands of dollars.

COULD USE FOR INTRODUCTION the public is basically split in half on whether college is for learning or preparing you for a job

this shows the importance that is put on students to go to college and no other way to get their knowledge.

reword as **almost one every five college students has stated that the amount of student loan they will have has "had an impact on their career choices".

against my argument. The important of this information depends on what a person wants to get out of a job; just a higher paying money or something more than a thoughtless job

Even though the majority of individuals believe that the higher education system fails to provide students with good value for the money they spend and that college i to expensive to begin with, a higher majority believe that college was a good investment for their moeny

still the same answer also

still had the same answers

discuss the results of the tests (basically explain these charts in words)

other options given to rank 1-5

people agreed that everyone gets something different out of college but the most important ting you COULD get out of it is the actual academics.

This question was asked to 1,500 professionals with hiring experience.

Sums up what bulimia is, and how binge eating falls into it as well. Discusses what the reasons of eating like such are, and what age group volunteers in this style of eating.

Quickly sums up what an eating disorder really has. Straight to the point without bias opinions

"Little thought is given to these consumers’ potential biases in using information. For example, an early cost-benefit framework by Mazis et al. (1981) views consumers in an 204 THE JOURNAL OF CONSUMER AFFAIRS aggregate sense and highlights the positive effects of enhanced information flow for consumers at large. The framework does not incorporate how consumers use information or the unintended effects that may result due to their motivations" The information given on the labels of the products does not really process through consumers minds when they all have different motivations of using the product. they tend to look at only the positives or the ONE thing they want it for.

" The regulation created an incentive for marketers to make relatively nonspecific structure–function1 claims rather than more explicit health claims because structure–function claims did not require documentation of safety or proof of efficacy." More on the regulation of supplements. The wrong classification is giving marketers more room for error in their products pretty much.

the students see no difference as to their dream schools unfortunately everyone else wants to limit them.

as underage the students had to follow their parents when they migrated.

people cannot be humanist about the subject, they see nothing beyond immigrant.

Preschool was created basically as a daycare. Required school is daycare for students that do not care about their classes because they have to be there "learning" even though no learning is actually taking place for such students.

All kids in the US are required by law to be in school no matter what their life situation is.

Once again, everyone is different, yet get treated the same

When students are missing someone or something, it is much harder to focus. School is analogous to jail in the sense that there is a lack of freedom and will. If school were an option, students could CHOOSE their education, it would be valued much more by them.

Another point that teachers should not be teaching from a pedestal

Everyone is different and therefore experiences things differently, so the cookie cutter methods schools use in teaching is not effective for all students.

School is filled with constant demand for homework, presence, and time

Awesome example showing how Olympian Michael Phelps eats so much for training, yet also loses 5-10 pounds a week!

Students should be mindful of whats expected of them rather than forcing themselves to take classes they expect would look exceptional. I can use this quote as an example that students taking the course without having the heart behind taking it will not benefit from the course.

AP courses are geared towards the AP exam, basically, teachers are teaching the content of what would be on the exam. Therefore AP courses are more test preparation than an actual learning environment. I can use this quote to demonstrate how AP courses are more geared towards earning college credit rather than preparing students for college courses.

Students are pressure to take AP courses because of the desirability it brings from colleges and from peers also taking part in AP. Every college is selective in the standards of the amount of courses to take. I can use this quote to demonstrate that the variety of colleges and their selectivity should urge students to take the course they believe they can handle. ultimately the students decision on whether they want to take certain classes.

An increase in the amount of students taking AP courses with an increase in passing scores. I can use this quote to demonstrate that increasing participation is also increasing passing scores. This is essential for furthering education since more students are taking rigorous course work and earning college credit.

The competitive market to get into college advocates students to take more rigorous classes such as AP classes. I can use this quote to demonstrate that AP courses show colleges that students are well prepared and more desirable the more AP courses they take.

This article gives ways for older adults to stay motivated. All these examples giving could be good to include in my paper.

Overall staying in contact with others keeps people motivated to keep moving and looking forward to more in their lives. This keeps them from staying isolated and feeling lonely in their life. I can use this to say that older people in nursing homes need more ways to interact with others and make more relationships with people.

This is a good quote to add to my paper just as a basic sentence to explain in short what social relationships can bring to people.

I plan to use this source in order to showcase the need for further resources to allow men to express themselves and let go of their need for dominance.

Men are given many more resources and made to feel much more comfortable than men are. This needs to change if women want equal rights and men want their voices heard.

Men should not be left out of the gender equality conversation. Both sexes must combat pressures from society, and while women face more severe discrimination, men are also treated unjustly. Men must be invited to join the feminist movement, as women will be able to prevail once men surrender their constant dominance.

Attractive men are portrayed as strong, dominant, macho figures with the ability to take control. They are constantly pressured by those around them to suppress their feelings and emulate a tough exterior.

If men are given the resources to express themselves rather than being forced to conform to society's unrealistic expectations, they would not continue to exert dominance over the female population.

I plan to use this source in order to address the opposition's opinion that men and women are inherently different by nature, with men being predisposed to aggressive behavior.

While some may argue that men are genetically wired to be more aggressive, it can be more accurately argued that men are pressured into controlling behaviors by the media, their family, their peers, and society overall.

Just because the bodies of men and women may be built differently does not mean that one sex is naturally more aggressive than the other. Muscle mass and brain function have no correlation; rather, men have been made to develop anger issues due to society's unrealistic ideals.

This argument fails on many levels, however. Although women have been given more opportunities in the workforce, that does not correlate to aggressiveness. Women are already taught to be effective communicators and emotionally vulnerable, while men are taught to hide their feelings. The lack of emotional outlets for men is what causes them to acquire aggressive tendencies, not their ability to attain a job. Just because women have gained a more prominent role in society does not mean their anger levels will increase. Men are frustrated due to their inability to express themselves, and it is time that we combat this injustice.

The opposition often states that boys and girls are born with genetically-based preferences. However, it does not seem likely for the brain to be developed and already acquire toy preferences without any prior influences. Children see television ads, other children, and observe their parents' behaviors as well. This is what causes boys to reach for guns and girls to reach for dolls; it is not some biological inclination.

Men are bred to be more aggressive due to family, media, and societal influences. The lack of emotional support they received, paired with the unrealistic pressures placed on them, causes men to develop an inner frustration that commonly translates into anger.

Men and women are influenced in different ways and this causes them to develop separate characteristics over time. For example, men are conventionally more violent than women due, in many cases, to their harsher upbringing. Men are told to hold in their emotions rather than expressing them.

I plan to use this source in order to contend that women and men share similar fundamental characteristics and the two should not be placed into separate categories.

While men and women do seem to be very similar, there are some instances where the two seem to differ substantially. However, these differences could very well be due to the pressures and influences placed on the two sexes.

There is a diverse array of factors that must be looked at before feeding into gender stereotypes. Men tend to be seen as more aggressive simply due to the proportion of men in jail compared to women. Even though men do tend to hold more anger than women, one must look at all angles before grouping people together.

Contrary to popular belief, men and women share a lot of characteristics and feelings in common. The difference comes regarding communication; while women are able to express their emotions, men are extremely hesitant to do so.

The gender-based stereotypes presented by the media have made people feel as though men and women have irreconcilable differences. In reality, men and women are more alike than society makes them out to be.

I plan to use this source in order to show that although men often fail to communicate, they still have plenty of emotions and thoughts that they must be made able to share.

Men and women really aren't that different. Society and the media make the two sexes seem more separate than they actually are. Both men and women feel similar emotions, men just feel less comfortable expressing those emotions.

Women are more likely to communicate their emotions and admit to their sensitivity, while men are traditionally taught to shield their emotions from others and toughen up in emotional situations.

While the men physiologically felt more emotional than women, women were more open about their feelings. Men feel the need to hide their emotions in order to fit society's expectations. It's time that men start feeling comfortable to express themselves rather than channeling their emotions through anger and aggression.

Interestingly enough, men showed higher sensitivity in comparison to women. Although men may have more intense feelings, they continue to lack an effective outlet to express those feelings.

Students that are taking on the coursework and passing the exam show exemplary work ethic and motivation. I can use this quote to demonstrate the dedication it takes excel in an AP course.

Students must learn and apply the material they learn in both multiple choice and free response type questions. I can use this quote to demonstrate that in AP courses students must be able to accurately display the knowledge they learn to pass the exam.

AP courses are obviously a different and more advanced course. As a result, teachers need to be trained and certified. Students should also be trained to take AP courses such as taking regular chemistry before AP chemistry or english 1 and 2 then AP english. I can use this quote to demonstrate that no only do students need to be well prepared for AP courses teachers as well must be prepared and taught how to teach the format.

I plan to use this source in order to prove the importance of co-parenting and to provide practical solutions to men's controlling behaviors.

Men's participation in the parenting process could allow women to enter the workforce and men to adopt more caring characteristics.

Although men have been seen as the more capable sex in the past, individuals are moving away from these stereotypes and women have begun to take a stand.

Men often stray from helping women with domestic work because they are embarrassed or feel ashamed to do so. If this stigma was removed, women would not feel so overwhelmed with housework and unable to pursue their other life goals.

Through parenting, men are able to become more kind-hearted and sensitive. In turn, this allows for husbands and wives to communicate and relate better. On top of this, men helping to parent allows women to explore their interests outside of the home.

Although men are traditionally more aggressive, child care can be an outlet for them to channel their emotions in a positive way. On top of this, men can become more nurturing and less controlling through parent-child interactions.

Even though women have proven themselves through taking on jobs over the past few decades, men continue to be seen as the more dominant, independent, and responsible sex.

By men sharing the responsibility of raising children, women are given more freedom to explore their similar aspirations. On top of this, men are able to develop more nurturing characteristics through interactions with children. This has the ability to hinder aggressive behavior and better the relationship between men and women. Since women have begun to enter the economy in large numbers, men should begin helping in the home.

Women are constantly forced into roles as mothers and wives since men are pressured to be bread-winners. Women and men should share parenting responsibilities, and both sexes should be given the ability to work if they aspire to do so.

Since the nineteenth century, women have been driven into domestic positions with little opportunity to break from the traditional mold. Nowadays, women are given more of a chance to pursue their interests; however, women continue to be rarely seen in positions of leadership or dominance. This has largely to do with the controlling tendencies of men and society's long-standing portrayal of men as stronger and more capable.

The positions that men and women have acquired throughout history can be primarily blamed on the prejudice fostered by society. Men have gained dominant roles over women through the social, political, and economic status of the country. The various influences upon men and women throughout childhood and adulthood make women feel less able to assert themselves.

Since the nineteenth century, women have been driven into domestic positions with little opportunity to break from the traditional mold. Nowadays, women are given more of a chance to pursue their interests; however, women continue to be rarely seen in positions of leadership or dominance. This has largely to do with the controlling tendencies of men and society's long-standing portrayal of men as stronger and more capable.

The positions that men and women have acquired throughout history can be primarily blamed on the prejudice fostered by society. Men have gained dominant roles over women through the social, political, and economic status of the country. The various influences upon men and women throughout childhood and adulthood make women feel less able to assert themselves.

Many different food groups need to be consumed throughout the day. This is why people always try to have a BALANCED diet meaning they are getting all the nutrients they need from different foods.

Cancer is one of the leading causes of death in the U.S. Healthy eating can lead to a reduction in the risk of getting cancer. Important for families that have the disease running in their family.

This is a good reason for people to eat healthy rather than relying on supplements to get them the nutrients they aren't getting from meals.

I don't agree with the author calling teen pregnancy a negative behavior, not that it should be encouraged, but the comparison to alcoholics is unnecessary as well. Alcoholics are putting their health at risk, and while teen pregnancy is not a wise choice, it certainly is not owed the comparison to being an alcoholic.

Shame is used repetitively in the article, possibly to emphasize how the author views the topic of teen pregnancy?

I agree with this opinion as well. If a teen does become pregnant, they should not be denied aid, the announcements should be more towards trying to prevent it not making the situation worse

This reference to how times have changed, show just how drastic our views in society are differing from decades ago.

They were acquitted on all charges and were allowed to reopen. Causing public outrage.

Describes how the owners were notorious for having their employees in check,

Explains the death toll

Has a witness describing his feeling as he watched young women and girls jump from the 80ft building

Shows how quickly the fire spread and swallowed the building whole

Explains the terrible condition of the work place

education is a right that should not be denied to any one.

The main purpose for DACA is to rescue these children from their violent past and as a promise of a bright future.

The doors were locked as punishment for strike and to prevent theft.

This fire single handly changed the face of the American work force.

History on what happened, gives the basic information.

This author uses several examples of how teens are likely to become pregnant, which gives insight to how influential one's environment, and even the generation they are in, can be.

Cameron's opinion is one I share, that a major issue with teen pregnancy is the sole fact that the young mothers-to-be are not prepared mentally or financially to provide for the child

it gives example how our country loves college sports,

this can be used to show out of most countries in the world we value colleges sports the most arguably, if we can love colleges sports the players need to get paid.

After being told she'd die and never walk again, she was able to recover from her broken back and regain her ability to walk

A new doctor decided to use her as atest dummy to practice his new treatment for a broken back.

Explains how she was basically given up on

Already had an incident where they went on strike

Explains how they tried to set up the evidence

Explains how the blame shifted within the first couple hurs

Gives the info revolving around the fire escape incident.

Women in France have asked that the image of women be portrayed as something more positive, but they want this in the form of reverse sexism, making men appear to be the lesser being. Because of this, they are looking for a balance which will hopefully make all forms of discrimination not allowed in ads. This can be used to support the fact that advertisements don’t need to be demeaning in any sense in order to be effective.

This quote explains that advertising has been widely influenced by feminist groups in the country because they do not approve of the way they get portrayed in the media. Later in the paragraph it is explained that these groups are losing their credibility because they are no longer seen to be as influential as other groups. This can be used to support the opposition, stating that there are bigger problems.

This basically says that despite France having so many rules that control their ads, many of them are not being followed but ads are being published anyway. This can be used to explain the fact that society is starting to care about moral standards much less, making the exploitation okay.

Normal anxiety plus added anxiety of immigrant status.

it is a pity that some students are not using DACA for fear of prejudiced.

More statistics

DACA students are not slums statistics state they are taking advantage of the situation.

It is a relief not thinking about deportation but also uncertain

Future political minds.

As time goes on and the longer we wait to fix this program the more money we will go into debt because of the amount of older adults needing money from the government. This eventually will cause a crash and the younger generations will have the burden of this problem.

The program is not working anymore. with so many people needing money and not enough to go around the program is bound to fail. every way to fix the problems "increases taxes while cutting benefits".

With more older people growing in our country the more money is going to be needed for the people. Which there is already not enough so adding more to that will for sure not work.

The money put into Social security and Medicare isn't even enough to pay for the benefits people need and put their money into it in the first place.

Knowing that Social Security is a government benefit for people with Disabilities could be important background information to include in my paper.

This quote explains that they obtained the results that were initially expected. Despite previous research that says sex doesn’t usually make something more memorable, each trial conducted by this experiment produced results that said the sexual advertisements were the most memorable. This can be used to support the belief that men are more likely to be influenced by sexual ads.

Although differences between male and female were not intended to be examined, the difference was large so it was explained. This simply states that after the study was complete, men were more likely to remember the brands that advertised a certain product. This can be used to support comments about men having a larger influence by these ads.

Sexual ads are more memorable than those who are not, so they are easier to remember. Because they are easier to remember, consumers often feel a greater impulse to purchase the product. This can be used to support remarks to acknowledge the opposition.

"first step toward a better-embraced aging sector, one that is not diminished by prejudice born from misunderstanding."

This is a good quote to explain that experts know the problems that are occurring involved with older adults but other Americans use their prejudice to judge these people. Judging people just by the way the look is not helping anything because now nothing is being done because no one cares.

"Finally, the public asserted a belief in “mind over matter.” That you are as old as you feel and that people’s experience of aging is determined by their attitude, willpower, and choices."

This quote explaining how the public believes that older adults aging is based on will power and attitude i can use in my paper to use as a counterargument saying that older adults make their own life by their actions. I can rebuttal this talking about Alzhiemers and how this diseases affects older adults taking memory away. This makes it difficult for adults to complete daily tasks for their life. Not only is their life influenced on their age but money isn't always the easiest for all Seniors.

" The public believes the well-being of older adults is exclusively the result of individual lifestyle choices and financial planning"

This quote has a good meaning that i would like to bring up in my paper. Someone who believes this most likely has not had anything go wrong in their life to the point that they need to make financial adjustments. When older adults grow into the age that they need help and don't have that much money to pay for all their expensives, I don't believe that they should be 100% put to blame. No one is perfect and with the high cost of medical bills that older Americans pay its hard to save and have money for everything when about 15% of older adults already live in poverty. That not including the people in our country who have other problems to worry about in their lives.

"The belief that older adults are “other” contributes to a zero-sum thinking wherein policy discussions about aging are characterized as more resources for “them” means less for “us.”"

When Americans talk about Social Security and think about older adults, the resources of money for them is going to be eventually us. Everyone grows old and when Americans see older adults as Slow and fixed, that is going to be the younger generation one day.

"With the right contextual and social supports, older adults remain healthy and maintain high lives of independence and functioning"

This quote is a good rebuttal to the argument that older adults become "fixed" in their personalities and skills. I can even find another source to talk about someones story of aging and success

"The public characterizes the aging process as one in which identity, knowledge, skills, success, and other aspects of life become increasingly “fixed.”"

Thinking about this, older adults do not change and cannot do anything more than what they have accomplished so far. So learning new information might be hard to do So there is not much need for them.

" The most common language about aging was of “loss,” “slowing down,” and “breaking down.” "

This quote is a good example of what Americans this of older adults. This information can be used as a counterargument from some people saying that older adults aren't as important as the new generation.

High school is meant for students to build foundations and progress. AP courses jump the gun by introducing tremendous stress and ruining the foundation of students since they begin studying the material over learning the material. I can use this quote to demonstrate college level work should be sparse in high school and only allowed to a select few that are eligible and motivated to take.

College introductory classes are better equipped for preparing students for a second year course than AP courses. I can use this quote to prove how ineffective AP courses on prepping students for college.

Stacking on the AP courses throughout high school isn't beneficial since colleges limit how much credit they can take from AP courses. I can use this quote to demonstrate the stacking AP courses is harmful since students go through the trouble of taking the class for the exam but then the college doesn't accept it because the student may have too many AP course credits rather than the colleges approved courses.

The emphasis on the basics allows for students to build of of what they learn and further their education, but AP courses don't allow for the basics resulting in learning equations or processes. I can use this quote to expose the lack of education students receive when in AP courses.

AP courses don't apply applications to life and students lack the understanding of the basics since they study equations and steps. I can use this quote to demonstrate that AP courses lack many fundamental concepts that allow students to build off of what they learn.

The cramming of information doesn't allow for students to truly learn the material and that's what AP courses are doing in high school. I can use this quote to demonstrate that the set up and preparation of AP courses is inadequate for the exam.

I can use this quote to point out the flaw in what high schools are attempting to achieve. *pale imitation

AP courses are centered around passing the exam, thus creates the dilemma that teachers teach the test and students don't really learn from the experience. I can use this quote to demonstrate that AP courses hinder the learning process since it leaves students without a basic understanding of the foundations and forces to strictly study the material.

key ideas/ stats: the areas where they believe immigrants are impacting the united states.

key ideas: examples of what immigrants are doing in america

Stats: based on only Latin immigrants because they are the largest group of immigrants in America.

stats/key idea/ quote: these stats demonstrate the growth individuals in america feel about immigrants. it also says why they seem to believe in what they believe in.

key ideas: is it weird that those with a higher education believe in immigrants being better for america while individuals with a high school diploma agree with the same although with half the percentage?

Key ideas: I noticed that the stats between a democrat and a republican are fairly close when deciding if immigrants are making america better or worse.

quote: this could be used to describe what americans think about immigrants in the united states.

Stats: prove that family and friends may be helping each other come to America for a better life just like everyone wants.

Stats: demonstrates that is more likely to say that immigrants are entering the united states more.

Key ideas: why do most assume immigrants are all illegal?

Stats: can demonstrate the percentage of people who think immigrants are making america better or worse.

This statement explains that sexist humor is most successful among audiences with very one sided views; meaning that those who thrive on female/sexual exploitation in marketing are those individuals stuck on these extremely sexist and demeaning views towards women in a general sense. I can use this to further support any statements said towards hateful and demeaning men.

This statement is an explanation for the success of demeaning women in advertising. It is successful because it degrades women in an overall sense and it seen as a way to remind women that they are meant for nothing but housekeeping, caretaking, and providing children to a man. This will be used to support the unacceptable background of sexism that advertising thrives on.

The quote states that despite how far women have come in what seems to be all areas of life, women are still seen as though their primary responsibilities should be involving domestic matters and as though nothing else should matter: their responsibilities should be centered around housekeeping and caretaking despite any and everything a woman has set up for herself to be successful. I will use this to support an introductory remark on overall sexism, which will feed into sexism in marketing, and eventually, sex appeal and its gender specific-ness.

This sentence explains that sexual ads are seen as unacceptable forms of marketing by many because of the fact that ‘casual sex’ is always what is being promoted. Because the appeal is outside the context of a relationship, it is generally frowned upon. This can be used to support reasons for negativity towards sex in marketing.

The quote summarizes the preceding paragraph; gender has an overall effect on the way sexual activity in a general sense is perceived, so it also affects their views on the use of sex appeal to advertise. I can use this to support any final words I may have in regard to the moral aspect of sex appeal to advertise.

This sentence sets up the study, but also provides insight to bias from the author. The language allows us to see and understand the author’s perspective, since he believes the use of sexual images is unnecessary and completely overdone. I will use this to support my beliefs in that sex appeal can be completely unnecessary and overused.

This statement summarizes the paragraph it is found in, which basically explains the female perspective of sex in marketing. It basically found that since women seem to be empowered by embracing femininity and intimacy, they find some sex appeal to be appropriate, but only effective in moderation.

This statement provides the basis of the study. It provides insight to the argument, stating that sexual appeals are only effective if used with ease rather than overdone in an offensive manner. This can be used to support statements on the use of sex to be demeaning and exploitative.

This is a statement explaining that sex is used so frequently because marketers are reliant on the phrase ‘sex sells.’ Also gives multiple examples of brands who take advantage of the saying. This can be used to support comments on the increase of reliance to sex appeal in marketing techniques.

This sentence summarizes the following paragraph and explains different methods in which producers choose to advertise a product. All five of these common methods, are sex based. This can be used to support statements saying that sex is used too much to sell.

This paragraph explains the validity of the phrase 'sex sells.' This quote sums it up by simply saying that the popular phrase is correct. I can use this quote to support introductory statements about the use of sexual exploitation for profit.

This quote defines sex appeal as something used to create a fantasy in the mind of a consumer to persuade them to buy a product. I can use this to support introductory statements about the use and overuse of the technique.

We are young and the future!

We work with what we have, we did not have a choice but we pay the consequences