To emphasize how students will need to present data in their formal papers, I think we might want to use consistent formatting here. For example, if we revise to something like "...analysis of media coverage 6 months prior and 12 months after the employer closed," this may (subtly) encourage students to embrace the need for clear and consistent formatting in written research article sections.

Perhaps we can find a way to incorporate more formal research terminology in the context of this Student Example. For instance, we might revise this sentence to something like "She arrived at her research question after listening to many of the residents..." In this way, we could include a particular element of the MSW student research project (generating a formal research question) into this Student Example, thereby potentially helping students form concrete ideas about the decisions required for their own projects.