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  1. Feb 2016
    1. It is interesting that Derrida uses a word such as "tissue" up front in the first paragraph. This suggests that he will indeed argue for the materiality and embodied of the written word, to disagree with the Greek notion of the superiority of oral rhetoric.

    1. nstances of Twitter shaming and commenting sections on stories written by or about women are often the most flagrant, with back and forth accusations of “slut”, “whore” and much worse.

      Complete disembodiment in text, even "anonymous" text, is impossible to truly attain, especially online where audience is also participant. However, despite the vitriolic and oppressive atmosphere that often results from this, embodiment in the face of such opposition is not always a bad thing. Pride in a target identity, in being a woman, in being Deaf, in being a Muslim, in being queer, is largely achieved (at least in the common protest tradition here in the United States) through this embodiment.

    2. social contract of the digital sphere,

      The social contract of the digital sphere has to have a place for the disembodied, not just those brave enough to marry the public and private sphere. It's important as well to mention how access to digital work is universal, and not limited to the first world. Although phones are pretty normal goods around the world--they don't always have internet and a woman in rural Africa won't have the same internet surfing needs as a woman in rural Canada. Can both women occupy physical and online spaces as feminists without anxiety?

    3. instances of Twitter shaming and commenting sections on stories written by or about women are often the most flagrant, with back and forth accusations of “slut”, “whore” and much worse

      As far as shaming on social media desecrating one's reputation, especially a woman's, there is now a market for companies that specialize in "cleaning up" your social media presence. I heard an advertisement the other day that offered a service to "destroy" bad reviews on google, yelp, facebook etc. This is an interesting option in light of our conversation regarding moral infringement.

    4. The power that digital bodies wields can far out weigh the power of embodied rhetoric. In the NPR story involving Lindy West, her troll created a Twitter profile for her dead father in order to troll her. This is something that would not be possible, or anywhere near as dangerously powerful in a physically embodied sphere.

    5. bodily appearance (white, female, and blonde)

      In Class

      Single mom, had abortions herself.

    6. In class:

      She was a single mom, has had two abortions in the past.

      "Why is it important?"

    7. Let her speak

      This quotation simplifies the centuries-long battle for the female voice in public settings, both online and offline.

    8. Senator Wendy Davis’s thirteen-hour filibuster

      Thirteen hours of standing and speaking without pausing, fighting for the silenced and the voiceless. My personal hero.

    9. women have been relegated to the background of public speech or silenced altogether by a patriarchal structure of discourse.

      Dating back to ancient Greek times, with the only exception of Aspasia.

    10. Ellen Pao (an American woman of Chinese descent), experienced a large volume of harassment after banning and censoring the forum’s most hate speech-focused subreddits, eventually stepping down from her position

      Further enabling the patriarchal ideal of rhetoric in public discourse.

    11. “for the past twenty-five hundred years in Western culture, the ideal woman has been disciplined by cultural codes that require a closed mouth (silence), a closed body (chastity), and an enclosed life (domestic confinement)”

      History of female rhetoric.

    12. The “closed mouth” and “closed body” dichotomies that Glenn brings to light are of great importance when women speak or write in public, because it is the body that is harassed or attacked when women resist the cultural expectations of silent or docile speakers.

      "Don't speak unless spoken to."

    13. The Sophists emphasized the development of “knowledge of fundamentals [that] becomes bodily rather than conscious,”

      Sophists- Greek rhetoricians who were skeptical

    14. what is certain is that the Internet has created a ‘call-out’ culture, in which sexism or misogyny can be ‘called out’ and challenged

      I think that "call-out culture" could be explored more, especially since it presents a specific response to "disruptive" rhetoric. Is it a call-out, which carries a negative connotation, or simply expressing a perspective truth?

    15. not limited to: barriers of access such as required usernames/registration to forums, using one’s actual identity on social media, the time required to participate in this discourse.

      Ok, she saves herself by saying "not limited to" but I think that this covers first world problems by presenting issues that would be experienced by women who have access to /possess the technology necessary to post online.

    16. A disruptive rhetoric must unify power and action from preexisting avenues and harness the rhetorical power of digital visibility.

      So you're saying that the text must be multimodal as well as aware of what others are saying within the movement to be disruptive. I find this statement troubling since it views disruptive digital rhetoric as a complement to activism in the material world and not as a separate conversation (which it could be).

    17. Yes, misogyny and patriarchal attacks against female speakers can more easily be brought to light and discussed online (take Davis and Beard for example), but a more visible and immediate space for writing and discussion itself does not yet merit a renaming of a social movement.

      Important recognition, but she fails to add what would give it legitimacy

    18. one traditional, competitive, agonistic, and linear mode of rhetorical 
 discourse but would rather incorporate other, often dangerous moves…” (Lunsford, 1995: 6).

      Like Plato saying that the symbolic language is lesser

    19. subversions are allowing feminist rhetors to reclaim a bit of their material experience that so often comes under attack in spaces where the body is not immediately present, raising their hand and their voices, in a sense.

      The idea that the voices are disruptive and under attack is a weird commentary--this is explained better later on, but I think pairing these ideas in this way is awkward, given her abrupt transition in the next paragraph.

    20. allegedly breaking the filibuster rules.

      Where are these people when Ted Cruz is talking?

    21. slinging the insult toward Davis’s filibuster topic and her bodily appearance (white, female, and blonde).

      Using appearances to create harmful rhetoric

    22. shape, race, origin, and more

      Intersectionality

    23. The tongue is a crucial organ in ancient rhetoric

      Are our handles a reinvention of the tongue?

    24. cutting out her tongue

      Harder to silence a Twitter account

    25. disruptive technologies

      New bodies? Or enhanced?

    26. “for the past twenty-five hundred years in Western culture, the ideal woman has been disciplined by cultural codes that require a closed mouth (silence), a closed body (chastity), and an enclosed life (domestic confinement)”

      Aforementioned closed avenues

    27. Today’s feminist rhetoricians are in the midst of seeking alternative avenues of shaping their voices

      Because traditional avenues have always been close to women

    28. abortion Barbie

      Disgusting...

    29. Attack, dissent, and harassment arise online when women speak/write/act outside of the expected cultural codes

      Direct connection between body and rhetoric

    30. Her social media presence

      Extended body

    31. At what point must a female senator raise her hand for her voice to be recognized over the male colleagues in the room?

      Women treated as lesser rhetors

    32. Internet

      Internet as a body

    1. “I doubt there’s a computer simulation on the horizon capable of accurately representing all the activity in a single cubic centimeter of soil or the entire sensory experience of clipping one toenail, much less an entire social world of thousands of human users” (Rushkoff 2013, 64).

      I think there is something to be said about the human experience here: how are we different in the digital space than we are in face-to-face interactions? As Monica mentioned, attaching a face to a troll online kind of solidifies the actual human experience of bullying and other negative comments. In the digital sphere, users are protected by a screen; even if they are on social media with a profile picture and a bio, other users don't experience their physical body. There is something very potent about the human experience, arguably so potent that it cannot be replicated in a digital space. It begs the question of how embodied a digital space really is: is it more of an individual or personal embodiment? As Rushkoff writes, there may not be any kind of software or program that can truly represent the human experience. We may feel strongly about our online personas, but regardless of how accurately (or inaccurately) reflect our actual beings, other internet "bodies" can never experience us as feeling human beings.

    2. When we transform our pedagogical practices in the face-to-face classroom to value the deep learning that comes with human interaction and embodiment—particularly when those bodies vary in identity markers of class, gender, race, ethnicity, sexuality, and disability—our students gain ethical knowledge that values human difference.

      Yes. This is so valuable.

    3. We note, for example, that the content that students post on social media does not, as Manovich (2012) notes, constitute “transparent windows into their selves; instead, they are usually carefully curated and systematically managed” (465). Instead, we focus on the texture of human lives, from what we see, hear, and feel to what we imagine, remember, and predict.

      Universality of experience.

    4. and here is an opportunity to link the student’s visual understanding of a concept to its expression in written English. It’s an opportunity to build off of the student’s existing cognitive abilities to develop a love for written English, rather than focusing only on what is “correct” in written English, effectively reducing her ASL expression of a concept into an uninteresting statement.

      This is so important, not to let "normalization" diminish cognitive skills and abilities that Deaf students already have.

    5. The tutor says, “And this is where, this is where she has problems with writing. Because in signing, you can say so much more with fewer words. I guess when you have ideas and concepts and all that, you can sign it. But on a paper you’ve gotta write it out” (Babcock 2008, 34).
    6. By teaching students to access the multiple textures of human experience, they learn to see, hear, or feel more deeply than they could before.

      teaching the whole person

    7. she expressed through words the idea that thrift stores were probably a better consumer practice, but that she rarely acted on that belief. By the end of the semester, she reflected on her new practice of actively optimizing her consumer purchases through secondhand services and thrift stores. Over the course of the semester, she wasn’t just absorbing or observing knowledge, she was enacting it by having to create a physical record of her journey and convey the feeling of consumer excess through her body.

      Enhancing the traditional research paradigm to enact actual change in behavior.

    8. Language communicates emotion

      All communication is subjective. Pathos is everywhere

    9. By the end of the semester, and after a series of pedagogical activities which included the nonverbal skit, the student discovered the value of capturing his own facial expressions to communicate the critical and comedic aspects of his study. In the final revision, the student dramatized the physical impact of Tabasco sauce when it is consumed with the frequency the ad encourages

      Pedagogical approaches in teaching rhetoric and discourse that take advantage of one's physicality. Is this ableist? Could a student without this range of motion still achieve what Hunter is looking for? Is this pedagogy limiting in some ways?

    10. communicated not only with their words in formal written essays, but also with the power of visual and spatial metaphors expressed through nonverbal modes.

      multimodal composition

    11. In embodying the gestures we see in the media, we’re reading body language in a way that moves us to identify with others and critically read the power imbalance in the pose.

      Power imbalances displayed physically often resonate with audiences more than imbalances displayed verbally/linguistically.

    12. With nonverbal skits, students are playing together in a planned interface.
    13. If play is so valuable

      There is a lot of talk about how play is imperative to young children's education and social skills. Why wouldn't it be important for adults as well?

    14. We communicate relationships of power, aggression, insult, and fear via nonverbal gestures. When I replicated my dad’s performance of “The Teacher” in my own classroom, a glaring gender-power issue emerged. While my dad could humorously perform the act of being overpowered by a student in his classroom, topped off with the act of bending over and getting spanked with a paddle, my identity as a young female professor becomes compromised in the act of performing this sequence. Embodying a narrative becomes an act of critical reading

      Even in multimodal rhetoric assignments, one's gender identity is still relevant in how the discourse is received. By still holding on to what is deemed appropriate by each gender, this visual presentation opens up a dialogue about intersectionality.

    15. embodied classroom interface

      teacher now embodies knowledge rather than merely representing it

    16. The skit itself is a parody of the hearing classroom, in which the teacher delivers an oral/aural lecture, while the students express their dissatisfaction through physical mini-aggressions with their spitballs.

      Her father essentially told her that her teaching style (and traditional education in general) was lacking

    17. Instead, all of their eyes are on me. The stares make me slightly uncomfortable, because they make me aware that my nonverbal performance is different from theirs, informed as it is by Deaf culture. However, I have invited the stares and have made them a part of the pedagogical practice.[6] Through this practice, the attention of their eyes has been recalibrated and retrained to look at me rather than just listen to me. Their eyes respond to me as an embodied classroom interface, and I cannot be replaced by a screen.

      The attention of the students' eyes are no longer just blank and passive audience members, but rather engaged in the embodied classroom interface. What does this mean for courses without the physical body of an instructor present?

    18. nonverbal, gestural, and imagined

      other contexts of rhetoric?

    19. Most importantly, we wrap up the session with reflections on the visual and spatial affordances of expressing concepts with our bodies.

      How does expressing concepts with our bodies enhance the content?

    20. we are ignoring the embodied interface of the classroom and the multisensory affordances of shared space.
    21. In ASL storytelling, “non-manual signals, such as facial expression, provide important information . . . By changing [the] body position so that each character faces a different direction, [the performer] help[s] the audience understand which character is doing the action” (qtd in Peters 2000, 83). ASL is a visual language, and adept Deaf storytellers engage in art forms that build upon the everyday gestural communication of deaf persons.

      Deaf storytellers really are performers. With non-verbal communication, the realm of how to evoke the emotion of a story or character reaches new territory.

    22. The nonverbal is typically poised as an extension of hearing culture rather than a fundamental expression of an embodied human experience, capable of infinite articulation.

      This in a interesting perspective that I had never considered.

    23. It does not include signed English, it does not include captions on a screen, and it does not include visual aids. Rather, it is the story we tell with our bodies.

      Gestural rhetoric and engagement. What higher levels of thinking can emerge through this kind of discourse?

    24. no matter how expressive I would be with my face and my gestures, and no matter how brilliant my slide show presentation, my parents would be bored and disconnected from the content and activity of the course.

      How does rhetoric change the more interactive a classroom becomes?

    25. I am engaging the concept of “universal design in writing pedagogy,” which points to methods in introducing “a variety of visual, aural, spatial, and kinesthetic approaches to tap into the intellectual chaos that goes into writing in the physical, literal sense” to show the connection between the inner eye of the signer and the inner eye of the poet (Dunn and Dunn De Mers 2002). In the sections that follow, I explore how understanding the gestural and nonverbal technologies of Deaf culture and languages can influence the public education of hearing, neurodiverse, and differently abled students

      Exploring multimodal pedagogy in the classroom.

    26. create clear images

      The image is more clearly explained by the visual metaphor rather than a linguistic one.

    27. As a child who was more comfortable with the visual expression of ideas, poetry became an instant lifeline for me to communicate my thoughts, feelings, and ideas within hearing culture. Poetry, like American Sign Language, engages with visual and imagistic pulses of expression, with narrative and storytelling following cinematic gestures through time that can be cut and edited.

      Visual construction of poetry is important in its interpretation, but more importantly, the rhythm is something that can be felt.

    28. I propose that we engage the physical space of the classroom as well as the expressive space of an embodied pedagogical practice.

      The physicality that is embodied in this pedagogical practice is potentially paradigm shifting. How is literacy approached in this perspective.

    29. Rather, developments in Deaf Studies over the past five to ten years have shown that “the highly visual, spatial, and kinetic structures of thought and language” that comprise Deaf culture may transform “hearing ways of knowing” (Baumann and Murray 2013, 246).

      It seems to me that encouraging Deaf students to wear hearing aids/cochlear implant, and to use assistive devices only serves to make life more comfortable for hearing people, not Deaf people. Society expects assimilation, but will not entertain other cultures, even if benefits could arise from them.

    30. Along these lines, Lennard J. Davis (1995) argues that “disability is not a minor issue that relates to a relatively small number of unfortunate people; it is part of a historically constructed discourse, an ideology of thinking about the body under certain historical circumstances.

      "Disability" rhetoric and discourse are often problematic and harmful. Who is this "normalization" process really benefiting?

    31. dystopian narratives of immobilized bodies

      Interesting that immobilized bodies have become almost synonymous with a dystopian society.

    32. educators have increasingly turned to technology, such as Clickers and Twitter backchannels, to engage more deeply with their students’ learning.

      Turning to non-verbal modes.

    33. raised hands, arched eyebrows, slumped shoulders, and crossed arms

      Certain gestures in communication have their own implied rhetoric.

    34. become the expressive performers on the stage and the human technologies in motion

      Here it is interesting how students are referred to as human technologies in motion. Hearing students are often a passive audience as mentioned, but Deaf students are communicating primarily in a motion driven language. And ASL is a communicating technology that again breaks the oral tradition.

    35. When we transform our pedagogical practices in the face-to-face classroom to value the deep learning that comes with human interaction and embodiment—particularly when those bodies vary in identity markers of class, gender, race, ethnicity, sexuality, and disability—our students gain ethical knowledge that values human difference.

      Am I the only one desperately wanting to take one of Hunter's English courses?

    36. multiple textures of human experience,

      Multiple textures- interesting (or expected?) that a CODA uses something that relates to sense of touch to describe the human experience

    37. But we can choose to live in between the 1s and 0s—we can choose to live a life that is not programmed.

      Living beyond the digital world--we return to the idea of the hyper-real. Are we distorting the human experience?

    38. One of the ways we explore this complexity of human experience is through short readings in modernist literature, including an excerpt from the beginning of Virginia Woolf’s Mrs. Dalloway (1925).

      How would Plato feel about this use of literature?

    39. Such practices can be extended beyond deaf students to ESL students, as Babcock suggests, but also to neurodiverse, differently abled, and first generation students.

      Standard written English: should it be the standard?

    40. Instead of focusing on what is “right,” or what makes sense in English, I suggest focusing on the physical concept she is expressing in ASL and offer a variety of ways to communicate that highly visual concept in written English.

      Is the structure of language restrictive? How do we learn to accurately portray something so physical by simply writing it out?

    41. but she contorts her body to show the burden of weight, while also twisting her mouth to indicate her doubt about whether or not possessing two coffee mugs is a good idea.

      Rhetoric and its connection to body language

    42. distorts the lived experience

      Is this similar to how the digital realm distorts our sense of reality?

    43. prewriting on their consumer identity

      Self-awareness and its importance to the use of rhetoric: being aware of their consumer identity would allow students to better engage with the persuasive techniques of advertisements.

    44. eading body language

      How do we read body language differently than written language?

    45. her face squished, her arm limp—not in a passion, but in de-attachment. And then we become the sailor: the man, with his left arm locking the woman into his embrace, locking her head into a forceful kiss. The romance dissipates

      I never considered this relationship

    46. Likewise, the classroom is no longer a single place, but rather an interface that is shaped by the bodies of the students in that classroom.

      How do you think this changes in larger classes? Would this be possible in a lecture hall?

    47. I cannot be replaced by a screen.

      Value of face-to-face over online courses?

    48. However, I have invited the stares and have made them a part of the pedagogical practice.

      This "stare" she talks about: earlier, she mentioned a blank stare that modern students had learned to project. By transforming her classroom and using the physical space, she changes the nature of the student stare

    49. Instead, all of their eyes are on me.

      Simply by using the classroom space, she changes the dynamic between teacher and student.

    50. we are ignoring the embodied interface of the classroom and the multisensory affordances of shared space.

      Spatial and visual modes of communication?

    51. his hearing loss was rendered less visible when he narrated a story with everyday facial expressions, gestures, and body movements. At the same time, his performance made visible the storytelling capabilities of the human body, and it demanded that the children decode his stories through careful watching.

      These methods could be used in the classroom: force students to "decode" instructor stories instead of staring blankly at a powerpoint

    52. Nonverbal communication is the story we tell with our bodies.

      I like that she calls it a story

    53. according to hearing standards,

      Do we think of hearing standards as the norm?

    54. viewing sign language as an extension or expression of poetry

      Sign language is often viewed as an extension of language in general, rather than being viewed as a language in itself

    55. a gulf between the words on the page and the ideas they symbolize.

      Words are arbitrary symbols for human experiences

    56. performance of hearing culture

      "performance of hearing culture:" affirms that there are other cultures that are perceived as "normal" within their own respective groups

    57. Yet, my formal education in English studies had de-emphasized the body as a vehicle for communication, locating knowledge primarily in oral and aural articulations.

      This is prevalent in high school classrooms

    58. being

      Interesting that it's "being" and not "communicating"

    59. normalize deaf persons as hearing persons

      Our society is good at trying to normalize people

    60. exchange their existing human capabilities for assistive devices and de-contextualized simulations.

      We discussed this in class: the hyper-real?

    61. able-bodied students have learned throughout their formal education to project a perfect blank stare.

      This is an interesting (but true, I think) obvservation

    62. Access to student feedback, however, is not the same as actual student feedback.

      Student feedback is available, but students are distracted and not actually providing the feedback

    63. expressive space of an embodied pedagogical practice.

      Going beyond the lecture and power points

    1. Let us note that in every one of us there are two guiding and ruling principles which lead us whither they will; one is the natural desire of pleasure, the other is an acquired opinion which aspires after the best; and these two are sometimes in harmony and then again at war, and sometimes the one, sometimes the other conquers. When opinion by the help of reason leads us to the best, the conquering principle is called temperance; but when desire, which is devoid of reason, rules in us and drags us to pleasure, that power of misrule is called excess.

      Socrates makes a number of assumptions here, among them that a dichotomy best represents any complicated subject, especially one as so passionately revered (outside of this conversation) as love. Also, he assumes that Phadrus will accept this dichotomy and immediately moves into what he clearly considers a more significant point. Was the mutual exclusion of desire and reason, if not in action then in nature, something that was commonly accepted by this school of philosophers? Because it seems to me a boring and oversimplified way of looking at life.

    2. let us first of all agree in defining the nature and power of love, and then, keeping our eyes upon the definition and to this appealing, let us further enquire whether love brings advantage or disadvantage.

      With this definition, Socrates has already added an element to his speech which Lysias has overlooked in his own.

    3. for here are we all alone, and I am stronger, remember, and younger than you-Wherefore perpend, and do not compel me to use violence.

      !!!!!!!!

    4. You are a dear golden ass

      Not a dear golden ass though.

    5. I thought, though I speak under correction, that he repeated himself two or three times, either from want of words or from want of pains; and also, he appeared to me ostentatiously to exult in showing how well he could say the same thing in two or three ways.

      The pot calling the kettle redundant.

    6. Such are the feats which love exhibits; he makes things painful to the disappointed which give no pain to others; he compels the successful lover to praise what ought not to give him pleasure, and therefore the beloved is to be pitied rather than envied.

      Phaedrus (or rather Lysias) speaks in the previous paragraph about the dangers of power dynamics in romantic relationships. The power dynamic appears again here, though not as clearly identified, in the portrayal of lover as arbiter of worth. The lover's opinion becomes an end point instead of a beginning. Instead of acting as a friend who seeks only to improve the quality of their friend's work, the lover is forced by the nature of their relationship to patronize their beloved.

    7. when you have given up what is most precious to you, you will be the greater loser, and therefore, you will have more reason in being afraid of the lover, for his vexations are many, and he is always fancying that every one is leagued against him.

      The problem with trying to "win" an argument, as opposed to trying to discover the truth and arrive at a resolution. This is behavior that does exist among friends and can be corrected among lovers.

    8. but when non-lovers meet, no one asks the reason why

      Oh people ask why. And they very much enjoy the process of investigating why. It is interesting to see this argument made so long ago, as the general public now does not seem to trust "when non-lovers meet."

    9. for they confer their benefits according to the measure of their ability, in the way which is most conducive to their own interest.

      It sounds like he is saying non-romantic partners do not make sacrifices for one another.

    10. he will prefer any future love to his present, and will injure his old love at the pleasure of the new.

      Actually had an ex point out to me how this behavior is problematic.

    11. lovers repent of the kindnesses which they have shown when their passion ceases

      Interesting observation, to call into question the source (and therefore the authenticity) of these "kindnesses."

    12. But the non-lover has no such tormenting recollections; he has never neglected his affairs or quarrelled with his relations; he has no troubles to add up or excuse to invent; and being well rid of all these evils, why should he not freely do what will gratify the beloved?

      The argument here is that non-romantic love is honest and exists within boundaries which leave both participants free of both obligation and entitlement. This may sound correct in theory, but in practice, Platonic love is not without these "evils."

    13. Now I have no leisure for such enquiries; shall I tell you why? I must first know myself, as the Delphian inscription says; to be curious about that which is not my concern, while I am still in ignorance of my own self, would be ridiculous. And therefore I bid farewell to all this; the common opinion is enough for me.

      Plato interrupted his day at a moment's notice to sit outside with no shoes on and metaphilosophize under a tree. I'm sure he has a bit more leisure than he lets on.

      Perhaps this is simply a roundabout way of saying he has no interest in the subject.

    14. Yes, my sweet one; but you must first of all show what you have in your left hand under your cloak, for that roll, as I suspect, is the actual discourse. Now, much as I love you, I would not have you suppose that I am going to have your memory exercised at my expense, if you have Lysias himself here.

      "Stop flexing (part deux)."

    15. I believe that I know Phaedrus about as well as I know myself, and I am very sure that the speech of Lysias was repeated to him, not once only, but again and again;-he insisted on hearing it many times over and Lysias was very willing to gratify him; at last, when nothing else would do, he got hold of the book, and looked at what he most wanted to see,-this occupied him during the whole morning; -and then when he was tired with sitting, he went out to take a walk, not until, by the dog, as I believe, he had simply learned by heart the entire discourse, unless it was unusually long, and he went to a place outside the wall that he might practise his lesson. There he saw a certain lover of discourse who had a similar weakness;-he saw and rejoiced; now thought he, "I shall have a partner in my revels." And he invited him to come and walk with him. But when the lover of discourse begged that he would repeat the tale, he gave himself airs and said, "No I cannot," as if he were indisposed; although, if the hearer had refused, he would sooner or later have been compelled by him to listen whether he would or no. Therefore, Phaedrus, bid him do at once what he will soon do whether bidden or not.

      "Stop flexing."

    1. We need better policy, changing norms and real conversations about key issues.

      The article does not say how to do these things. However, it suggests that we need to steer our focus away from the helper and onto the recipient instead. I think an issue of this article is that it does not take into consideration that better policy, changing norms, and conducting real convos about key issues requires baby steps. Stuart's story is a baby step and should not be immediately labeled as "fat shaming".

    2. But according the social model, while many people may have all kinds of medical conditions, people are disabled by the lack of accessibility in our society.

      We are discriminating people who are disabled by not allowing them to have equal accessibility in our society; this also means that their voices and stories are unheard unless reporters do so otherwise, but even then, reporters are not great accessibility for the disability community.

    3. her before and after photographs are being used in the worst possible way to promote fat shaming of her peers, to impose the myth of indistinguishability and objectifying stereotypes that could actually harm her peers.

      Yes, but part of her goals was to lose weight. It is, in fact, what she wanted. Her intentions were not to make her peers feel bad. Her before and after photos are being used as equally as anyone's before and after photos as a result of hard work and discipline, not being used to fat shame anyone but to better themselves to be physically healthier.

      I find this part of the article a little problematic.

    4. There’s nothing necessarily wrong with the content of these stories, of course, but the way they’re told conceals the real issues faced by the disability community.

      How does the way these stories are told affect the author in the rhetorical sphere? Is it advantageous or disadvantageous?

    5. Stella died December quite unexpectedly, but alas, inspiration porn still dominates depictions of disability in the news, so her work continues.

      Since Stella has passed, her work continues. Does this mean that her thoughts and words become disembodied? Or are they still embodied because they are shared on social media?

  2. Jan 2016
    1. that deafness is something that is gained

      A gain through a loss? But then was something lost to begin with? Are those who can hear then ones at a disadvantage in some way?

    2. The human body communicates far beyond words, yet its expressive art and multisensory experiences are being abandoned for the seemingly better technologies of language-driven social media and online learning.

      Relate to Socrates disdain of the written word

    3. these technologies are limited by linguistic expression, digital access, and data collection

      discrimination within education

    4. human technologies

      Often technology is thought to be disconnected from humanity- usurping of human work and argued at times as a means of separation. Here people are the technology. Interesting.

    1. Why, because medicine has to define the nature of the body and rhetoric of the soul-if we would proceed, not empirically but scientifically, in the one case to impart health and strength by giving medicine and food in the other to implant the conviction or virtue which you desire, by the right application of words and training.

      Rhetoric is a scientific need to explain and argue points, rather than on an emotionally level.

    2. A very great power in public meetings.

      Lawyers, lawmakers, politicians, speechmakers.

    3. discourse ought to be a living creature, having a body of its own and a head and feet; there should be a middle, beginning, and end, adapted to one another and to the whole?

      Basic argument structure; a living being with moving parts.

    4. Is not rhetoric, taken generally, a universal art of enchanting the mind by arguments

      Rhetoric is an art that has the power to open the mind.

    5. The charioteer- the divine madness.

    6. arrangement of them, for there can be none in the invention

      Socrates argues that style is more important than content.

    7. repetition was the especial merit of the speech; for he omitted no topic of which the subject rightly allowed, and I do not think that any one could have spoken better or more exhaustively.

      Is repetition the best way to get a point across? Or can it be considered too repetitive and too much?

    8. whose success in love is the reward of their merit

      Love conquers all?

    9. The wise are doubtful

      Question everything and be cautious. Ask questions and challenge ideals.

    10. he ingeniously proved that the non-lover should be accepted rather than the lover.

      Does this indicate the idea of "platonic love"?

    11. I think, some sort of an altar of Boreas at the place.

      Socrates seems disinterested in the affairs of the gods.

    12. Boreas is said to have carried off Orithyia from the banks of the Ilissus

      A graphic explanation. Boreas was the North Wind. In the myth, Boreas raped Orythiya when he picked her up off the riverside.

    13. The reverse of good.

      K

    14. Mortals call him fluttering love, But the immortals call him winged one, Because the growing of wings is a necessity to him. You may believe this, but not unless you like. At any rate the loves of lovers and their causes are such as I have described.

      What is the purpose of having wings? are they a symbol of lightheartedness, or a symbol of freedom? Could they be something far more sinister or fleeting?

    15. Well, but are you and I expected to praise the sentiments of the author, or only the clearness, and roundness, and finish, and tournure of the language?

      Literally what I say when people bring up their feelings in a "rhetorical analysis." It's not a journal entry, back it up with evidence.

    16. was ravishing

      I hate when people use this word outside of culinary (or carnal) settings.

    17. he is willing to say and do what is hateful to other men, in order to please his beloved

      It seems here like there is an argument being made against morality.

    18. when a northern gust carried her over the neighbouring rocks; and this being the manner of her death,

      The story is that Boreas carried Orithyia away and raped her, so beautiful was she.

    19. Ilissus

      Googled the river--it no longer exists above ground, but here is a place that borrows it's name.

    20. I would not have you suppose that I am going to have your memory exercised at my expense, if you have Lysias himself here.

      This is probably much more playful than it is critical.

    21. Acumenus

      I wonder if his name has anything to do with the word Acumen?

    22. I mean an intelligent word graven in the soul of the learner, which can defend itself, and knows when to speak and when to be silent.

      This is Plato's definition of embodiment

    23. I cannot help feeling, Phaedrus, that writing is unfortunately like painting; for the creations of the painter have the attitude of life, and yet if you ask them a question they preserve a solemn silence. And the same may be said of speeches. You would imagine that they had intelligence, but if you want to know anything and put a question to one of them, the speaker always gives one unvarying answer. And when they have been once written down they are tumbled about anywhere among those who may or may not understand them, and know not to whom they should reply, to whom not: and, if they are maltreated or abused, they have no parent to protect them; and they cannot protect or defend themselves.

      For Plato, writing, whether on paper or spoken, is disembodied, as they are severed from their creator. They cannot speak beyond what they have said.

    24. you give your disciples not truth, but only the semblance of truth; they will be hearers of many things and will have learned nothing

      Truth must be learned to be had, not simply read or heard.

    25. But there is something yet to be said of propriety and impropriety of writing

      distinction between writing and speaking. For Plato, there is a difference between the rhetoric of speaking and of writing.

    26. But nobler far is the serious pursuit of the dialectician, who, finding a congenial soul, by the help of science sows and plants therein words which are able to help themselves and him who planted them, and are not unfruitful, but have in them a seed which others brought up in different soils render immortal, making the possessors of it happy to the utmost extent of human happiness.

      Plato!

    27. this discovery of yours will create forgetfulness in the learners' souls, because they will not use their memories; they will trust to the external written characters and not remember of themselves

      resemblance to our reliance on phones and computers

    28. rhetorician has; no need of truth

      perception of Sophists

    29. he who would be an orator has to learn the differences of human souls-they are so many and of such a nature, and from them come the differences between man and man

      know your audience

    30. What power has this art of rhetoric, and when?

      link to feminism reading

    31. All of them agree in asserting that a speech should end in a recapitulation, though they do not all agree to use the same word. Phaedr. You mean that there should be a summing up of the arguments in order to remind the hearers of them.

      conclusion

    32. rules of correct diction and many other fine precepts

      delivery

    33. There is the exordium, showing how the speech should begin, if I remember rightly; that is what you mean-the niceties of the art? Phaedr. Yes. Soc. Then follows the statement of facts, and upon that witnesses; thirdly, proofs; fourthly, probabilities are to come; the great Byzantian word-maker also speaks, if I am not mistaken, of confirmation and further confirmation.

      arrangement

    34. our definition of love, which whether true or false certainly gave clearness and consistency to the discourse, the speaker should define his several notions and so make his meaning clear.

      Socrates discussing the merits of defining terms in the beginning before moving forward

    35. Is not rhetoric, taken generally, a universal art of enchanting the mind by arguments; which is practised not only in courts and public assemblies, but in private houses also, having to do with all matters, great as well as small, good and bad alike, and is in all equally right, and equally to be esteemed-that is what you have heard?

      Socrates defining rhetoric

    36. perhaps rhetoric has been getting too roughly handled by us, and she might answer:

      rhetoric in female form

    37. And yet, Socrates, I have heard that he who would be an orator has nothing to do with true justice, but only with that which is likely to be approved by the many who sit in judgment; nor with the truly good or honourable, but only with opinion about them, and that from opinion comes persuasion, and not from the truth.

      manipulation rather than rhetoric?

    38. Why, do you not know that when a politician writes, he begins with the names of his approvers?

      Politics seems not to have changed much...

    39. you are aware that the greatest and most influential statesmen are ashamed of writing speeches and leaving them in a written form, lest they should be called Sophists by posterity

      "Sophists" used as an insult

    40. I divided each soul into three-two horses and a charioteer; and one of the horses was good and the other bad:

      The internal struggle of good and bad

    41. Every one chooses his love from the ranks of beauty according to his character, and this he makes his god, and fashions and adorns as a sort of image which he is to fall down and worship.

      Love is different to each, defined by whom we are.

    42. And as he warms, the parts out of which the wing grew, and which had been hitherto closed and rigid, and had prevented the wing from shooting forth, are melted, and as nourishment streams upon him, the lower end of the wings begins to swell and grow from the root upwards; and the growth extends under the whole soul-for once the whole was winged.

      True love can help one regrow his/her wings which help them see and learn from the gods.

      True love essentially - uplifts.

    43. And therefore the mind of the philosopher alone has wings; and this is just, for he is always, according to the measure of his abilities, clinging in recollection to those things in which God abides, and in beholding which He is what He is. And he who employs aright these memories is ever being initiated into perfect mysteries and alone becomes truly perfect. But, as he forgets earthly interests and is rapt in the divine, the vulgar deem him mad, and rebuke him; they do not see that he is inspired.

      The mixing of madness and sanity; the madman sees clearly.

      This seems a very high opinion of the philosopher.

    44. The divine is beauty, wisdom, goodness, and the like; and by these the wing of the soul is nourished, and grows apace; but when fed upon evil and foulness and the opposite of good, wastes and falls away.

      Isn't this love?

    45. There will be more reason in appealing to the ancient inventors of names, who would never have connected prophecy (mantike) which foretells the future and is the noblest of arts, with madness (manike), or called them both by the same name, if they had deemed madness to be a disgrace or dishonour;-they must have thought that there was an inspired madness which was a noble thing; for the two words, mantike and manike, are really the same, and the letter t is only a modern and tasteless insertion.

      Comparing the difference between madness and prophecy with non-lover and lover, understanding how the terms are alike and also different. Again defining before moving forward

    46. what an utter want of delicacy was shown in the two discourses

      female traits attributed to rhetoric (see feminist reading)

    47. first of all agree in defining the nature and power of love

      clearly define the terms so that all involved are in understanding before continuing with the argument

    48. arrangement of them, for there can be none in the invention

      2 of 5 rhetorical canons- Arrangment and invention

    1. The truth of writing, that is, as we shall see, (the) nontruth, cannot be discovered in ourselves by ourselves. And it is not the object of a science, only of a qistory that is recited, a fable that is repeated. The link between writing and myth becomes clearer, as does its opposition to knowledge, notably the knowledge one seeks in oneself, by oneself. And at the same time, through writing or through myth, the genealogical break and the estrangement from the origin are sounded
    2. His name is Lysias. Phaedrus is keeping the text or, if you will, the pharmakon, hidden under his cloak. He needs it because he has not 'learned the speech by heart. This point is important for what follows, the problem of writing being closely linked to the problem of "knowing by heart." Before Socrates had stretched out on the ground and invited Phaedrus to take the most comfortable position, the latter had offered to reconstitute, without the help of the text, the reasoning, argument, and design ofLysias' speech, its dianoia. Socrates StOPS him short: "Very well, my dear fellow, but you must first show me what it is that you have in your left hand under you cloak, for I surmise that it is the actual discourse (ton logon auton)" (228d). Between the invitation and the start of the reading, while the pharmakon is wandering about under Phaedrus' cloak, there occurs the evocation of Pharmacia and the send-off of myths.
    3. If a speech could be purely present, unveiled, naked, offered up in person in its truth, without the detours of a signifier foreign to it, if at the limit an undeferred logos were possible, it would not seduce anyone. It would not draw Socrates, as if under the effects of a pharmakon, out of his way. Let us get ahead of ourselves. Already: writing, the pharmakon, the going or leading astray.
    4. It is at this point, when Socrates has finally stretched out on the ground and Phaedrus has taken the most comfortable position for handling the text or, if you will, the pharmakon, that the discussion actually gets off the ground.

      Personal comfort for the individual's body plays a crucial role in the ability to start a philosophical conversation.

    5. Only a little further on, Socrates compares the written texts Phaedrus has brought along to a drug (pharmakon). This pharmakon, this "medicine," this philter, which acts as both remedy and poison, already introduces itself into the body of the discourse with all its ambivalence.
    6. the author of the written speech is already entrenched in the posture of the sophist: the man of non-presence and of non-truth. Writing is thus already on the scene. The incompatibility between the written and the true is clearly announced at the moment Socrates starts to recount the way in which men are carried out of themselves by pleasure, become absent from themselves, forget themselves and die in the thrill of song (259().
    7. Phaedrus reminds Socrates that the citizens of greatest influence and dignity, the men who are the most free, feel ashamed (aiskhunonta/) at "speechwriting" and at leaving sungrammata behind them. They fear the judgment of posterity, which might consider them "sophists" (257d).

      I find it interesting that Derrida purposefully fills his criticism with particular diction that suggests physical action, whereas Plato suggests that the physical action of speech-writing should be shamed.

    8. "The Phaedrus is badly composed. This defect is all the more surprising since it is precisely there that Socrates defines the work of art as a living being. But the inability to accomplish what has been well conceived is precisely a proof of old age. "6

      Two interesting concepts arise from this quote. The first being how Socrates defines the "Phaedrus" as a living being. It is implied that this is not simply just a metaphor, but once again the philosophy of essence. Derrida argues that the inability to define this living being is due to Socrates age; that his body is betraying him so-to-speak. The second is that age and physicality of the author's body somehow determines the strength of their rhetoric.

    9. on Plato, who already said in the Phaetinn that writing can only repeat (itself), that it "always signifies (semainei) the same" and that it is a "game" (paidia).

      Writing as a technology was deemed vastly inferior by ancient Greeks. The ability to record a piece of information for later study was not truly understanding the academic intricacies of the information. Memorization was prized; for it indicated a true and thorough understanding. Plato might disagree with Derrida here that a piece of writing is not the embodiment of rhetoric, but rather the act of memorizing and orating. Something tangible vs. something intangible. Or rather, the essence of something that cannot be described accurately with words.

    1. These disruptions need to be powerful, bolstered by a digital presence and crafted with a rhetoric of awareness, activism, and engagement. A disruptive rhetoric must unify power and action from preexisting avenues and harness the rhetorical power of digital visibility.

      Adapting the canons of rhetoric to the internet. How do audience and arrangement come in to play? How are they different? How are they the same?

    2. the waves in which we frame feminist history should follow the model of radio waves

      spreading through the air rather than subject to ebb and flow

    3. Hashtags as rhetorical interventions are visually powerful, working to categorize language for readers and immediately position this language within a larger visual body of work when searched for or curated in online spaces

      Modern rhetorical invention. What would Plato or Aristotle have thought about hashtags?

    4. After all, the online abuse that Beard herself experienced threatened to “rip out her tongue,” to remove the organ that allows her to verbally enact rhetoric as a woman.

      Have we not progressed at all?

    5. She sought an alternative avenue to invention; her available means included an intervention of stereotypical “women’s work” that served to speak for her.

      Finding a means of speech even when it has been denied.

    6. we must build from these scholars’ work and consider how contemporary feminist rhetoric might be bolstered, enhanced, and girded against erasure—specifically in the realm of digital writing and social media.

      Take the lessons of the past and connect them to today so that we can move forward

    7. A system “socially agreed upon” by the existing power structures is problematic in who is “agreeing” upon these terms—largely male politicians.

      Still an issue with a majority male government

    8. Greek society was male-centric, as reflected in some of the most famous dialogues from the era.

      Even when Socrates speaks of lovers, they are male. Phaedrus

    9. The Sophistic movement, for example, was rooted in teaching commoners and those outside of the realm of traditional education how to speak and defend themselves in courts of law

      But in Athens the Sophists were looked down upon, labeled manipulators and liars.

    10. The Greco-Roman tradition valued masculinity and class over all else, resulting in a centuries-long structure of authorial and oratorical expectations. To write or speak publicly, one must meet these criteria.

      The context of Phaedrus.

    11. “how might contemporary feminist scholars, historians, and digital citizens use the complicated history behind us to propel a sustainable feminist rhetoric into the future?”

      Is she presenting her argument in the form of a question?

    12. feminist rhetoric of intervention (her calm, impactful question caught on digital live stream) to subvert a traditionally regimented forum, enabling her to reach a wide audience that would have normally been relegated to just those within a congressional chamber.

      Invention, one of the canons of rhetoric

    13. When only words remain

      think about Socrates argument on the written word from Phaedrus

    14. Intersectional issues that we carry into digital spheres color each interaction, for better or worse. The cultural structure of online worlds are reflected and recycled from our in-person interfaces,

      true

    15. Feminist rhetoric is advancing feminisms online— a distinction that is important to make from “women’s rhetoric,” which is restricted to only women and does not capture the experience of feminist activists that might identify differently.

      Clearly defining the terms

    16. the Greek roots of rhetoric, asserting, “‘the word rhetoric can be traced back ultimately to the simple assertion I say (eiro in Greek)

      Connecting past to present in rhetoric

    17. Firstly, I define feminist rhetoric as any written or spoken act about feminisms

      Define your terms first for clarity, then proceed into argument.

    18. women have been relegated to the background of public speech or silenced altogether by a patriarchal structure of discourse.

      Aspasia

    19. thirteen-hour filibuster

      speech, rhetorics origin

    20. At what point must a woman speak online in order for her voice to be recognized? More specifically, women of different backgrounds and contexts often experience different harassment when speaking outside these codes

      Lane's core question.

    21. #StandWithWendy

      People as rhetorical symbols via digital rhetoric