23 Matching Annotations
  1. May 2019
    1. Very interesting concept! Your ideation process and research greatly influenced the final outcome of your design! Overall great job!

    1. You have done a very thorough research and this is evident in your concept. I love your conceptual design, it's very interesting. Good job!

    1. I like the consistency of your layout, but some parts are a bit hard to read due to a light coloured text against the background pattern. Overall, interesting concept!

    1. Its interesting how you visited two different centres that both contradicts each other in terms of the sensorial aspect. It is obvious that you have done in depth research.

    1. Very detailed blog! It is evident that you have done an in depth research on the topic. Interesting concept of the design, I love how you made your columns as your sensorial feature. Good job@

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    1. I love the construction of your model, very detailed and the use of people in your model for scale. Also, great mood board!

  3. Apr 2019
    1. Layout is well organised and easy to follow. Great lecture notes and research. I like how you linked the purpose of each room to the appropriate meaning of the colour. Good job!

    1. Great summary of the lecture notes and personal reflections and also your in-depth research. Good job!

    1. Your blog is visually appealing and love the consistency of the layout throughout. Your notes and research reflects your in-depth understanding to the topic. Great work!

    1. Great lecture notes and personal reflections. It'll be good to add images to appeal more visually. Good job!

    1. It is obvious that you have conducted further and in-depth research outside class. It'll be really interesting on how you would apply this in your design. Great work!

    1. Great lecture notes and research! It is evident that you understand the topic. It will be interesting on how you will apply your research to your design.

    1. It is evident that you are updating your weekly blog, but it'll be beneficial if you organise it in a clear layout so it is easier to follow. Overall, good work!

    1. Great overall layout and summary of lecture notes and reading and also the in depth research.

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    1. week 4

      Adding notes and further research would be helpful in understanding what you are trying to convey, rather than just having images.

    1. Your blog is easy to follow and is visually appealing. It is evident that you have deeply researched the assignment and it'll be interesting on how you would apply these to your design.

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    1. I love the overall layout! It's neat and and well organised. Interesting reflections on the lecture notes and great depth of research.

    1. I like the overall layout, the notes are clear and easy to understand. Great summary of the book, however it would have been great if you also talked about your habitus.

  6. Mar 2019
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    1. The Seattle Public Library. 

      Providing images would be helpful in further understanding the critic of the space.

    1. IDE 3 - BLOG

      In-depth analysis of notes and reflection of habitus. Including more images would be great!