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  1. Mar 2020
    1. -white,green,andred--justlikerealwar

      with this line it almost has a childish tone to it, like when kids get a toy barbie jeep or something and they're like "just like the REAL monster trucks" or something

    2. Alightjob

      i would not consider this a light job. fist of all you are carrying poop around, and also its heavy! i clean horse stalls and one pile of poo can weigh like 10 pounds.

    3. Hehadfeltstrangetheeveningbefore,feverish,withpainsalloverhisbody.Hehadn'tbeenabletogetwarmallthroughthenight

      flu, cold. i'm sure they don't have any doctors for that sort of thing in the gulag.

    4. frostlaytwofingersthick

      the fact that he uses fingers to describe the thickness of the frost makes it feel more real and personal than if he had said 1.5 inches or something

    5. belongedtohim

      generally when people try to make small and insignificant thinks "theirs" it means that they have very little control over their life and what goes on in it

    6. ifyoufoundabowlwithsomethingleftinityoucouldhardlyresistlickingitout.

      ewewewewewewewewewew nnooooooo this is beyond gross. you couldnt resist licking it out???? barf additionally, this shows how gross the conditions are and how despirate they are for anything to fill their stomachs it almost seems animalistic. "You could hardly resist licking it out" like a dog with its extra food in a bowl