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  1. Aug 2024
    1. ts Service.” (“Manifest.permission,” n.d.). In other words, thispermission let an app see if the user has logged into different accounts such as Googleor Facebook. Although its dec

      weird jargon

    2. In addition to the holistic graph, a few insightful graphs of certain permissionrequests will be presented below.Supporting the overall trend, 23 individual permissions also showed a noticeabledecrease in usage during this time

      awkward spacing in paper

    3. Figure 1. Changes of average numbers of permission requests of top 100 applications in theUS from Jan 2016 to Dec 2018.

      graph is done well done but citation is lack luster.

    4. The finishedprogram would digest JSON files generated during the data collection phase to produceall the necessary graphs and calculate the corresponding slopes and r-values. Inaddition, graphs with an absolute r-value greater than 0.5 and a sufficient amount ofdata points are filtered out separately to signal the researcher about potential significantresults.14AP Research Sample C 14 of 36© 2019 The College Board.Visit the College Board on the web: collegeboard.org.

      doesn't sufficiently explain what the statistic means.

    5. his creates potential vulnerabilities for applications to accesssensitive user data and may lead to compromised user privacy and security.

      lack of specificity of what exactly the vulnerability found in study is.

    6. In their study, Felt’s team used a computeralgorithm to look through the underlying code of each application line by line anddeduce a list of permissions that were necessary for the program to function.

      doesn't clearly state the mechanism of how the study is done, confusing how methodology of study.

    7. ndroid, a mobile phone operating system developed by Google, was firstreleased on September 23, 2008 (Morrill, 2008).

      Paper is in the wrong format it is not in MLA format missing times new Roman rn...

    1. t is important to understand what an athleticscholarship is because the purpose of this research project was to analyze the correlation betweendifferent factors and a high school basketball player’s likeness of receiving these athleticscholarships

      run on sentence here which makes it hard to read and awkward to understand.

    2. These teams give high school athletes more recruiting opportunities and more chancesto get better at the sport of basketball which will help them to increase their chances of getting anathletic scholarship and playing basketball at the collegiate level

      run on sentence with lack luster diction and Grammer. makes the sentence feel awkward and disjointed.

    3. First is high school participation. This section looked at and aimed to compare thedifferences between going to a private school and going to a public school.

      explains graph and what the information means adeptly/

    4. This hypothesis was made based primarily due to real life personal experiences more so ratherthan previous studies and research as there is a significa

      lack of specificity in what these prior personal experiences were, additionally personal experiences is unscientific

    5. The goal of this research is to determine if there is some sort of relationship betweenspending the extra money to play on an EYBL team or a Private School team and the amount ofathletic scholarships a high school athlete receives.

      Thesis of the research goal is not the most clearly stated on what EYBL exactly is .

    6. There are barelyany papers on the focus of basketball itself, so research on the effects of High Schoolparticipation and out of school participation on the receival of Division I scholarships wasabsolutely nowhere to be found

      Stating gap in the research but uses poor metrics of explaining this gap of info.

    1. The pre-existing research links the MedDi to positive outcomes concerning cognitivefunction

      connects preexisting research to inquiry then mentions gap within that research.

    2. (Rusek, Pluta, Ułamek-Kozioł, & Czuczwar, 2019; Omar, 2019; Shi, El-Obeid, Li, Xu,& Liu, 2019; Woodside, Gallagher, Neville & McKinley, 2014).

      Essay uses specific and time relevant citations citing first person sources along with their names and what study they were involved in.

    3. a pre-validated quantitative questionnaire, qualitative interviews,and both qualitative and quantitative content analyses were conducted on dining menus

      methodology tools used in concise and specific. Essay clearly states what method are going to be used to expand upon the thesis to further explore the mediteranian diets prevalence.