Improvising Race: Clinical Trials and Racial Classification
Q: HOW IS INFORMATION STRUCTURED AND PRESENTED? A: Valdez starts her article with an abstract giving a brief description of what she will be discussing in the rest of the article, in the abstract she highlights two figures that are referenced throughout the article. Since the topic has to do with race she gives the subject its own paragraph going into detail about how it emerged and why it is used in science. She writes a paragraph telling the origins of how the issue of improvising race came to her attention. - The subjects of her article are explained in detail before she goes into the main topic of her article. I surmise she did this so the reader will have a better understanding of her position on the topic. - The main topic of her article is improvising race and the issues this presents in clinical studies. So before she delves into the topic she gives prerequisite information.
Once she gives the necessary background information she goes into detail about the UK census and how it contributes to improvisation of race. - In other words after giving the necessary background information she goes into the main topic of her article.
In the conclusion she gives a summary of her findings
Q: CONVENTIONS, ANALYTICAL APPROACHES, AND DISCOURSE A: Valdez approaches this topic with the goal of solving a problem that is not apparent. She uses a scenario in which the issue occurs and highlights the fact that those involved in the study did not notice the issue until she pointed showing that there is a clear disconnect between the research subjects and the scientists who came up with the classification system they are being asked to use.
Q: HOW IS EVIDENCE IDENTIFIED AND KNOWLEDGE CREATED? A: The evidence to support Valdez's hypothesis came from the people involved in the clinical trials
Q: WHAT INFORMATION IS PRIORITIZED? A: Any information that is important to the main topic there is no "fluff" and the author never goes on a tangent that is not relevant to the topic.
Q: HOW IS EXPERTISE/VALIDITY ESTABLISHED? A: Valdez's credentials are mentioned in the notes section of the article.
Q: WHY DO YOU WISH TO EXPLORE THIS TOPIC FURTHER? A: This topic is something I have noticed myself especially when it comes to "mixed" people or people whose origins deviate from the norm.