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  1. Aug 2022
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    1. Then she took off her working skirt and her house-boots and laid her best skirt out on the bed and her tiny dress-boots beside the foot of the bed

      Maria has a lot of the same qualities as Miss Clack from the Moonstone, I wonder how many words this story and Miss Clack's narrative have in common.

    2. porcelain vases and flowered tea-sets

      The bazaar isn't fully closed yet, but the boy doesn't buy anything. It's like he's scared to cross the line between the life that he knows, and the life he could know by giving the present to the girl.

    3. THE SISTERS

      After reading the story, it's interesting that it's named after the sisters, whom I feel like aren't the main part of the story, rather a vehicle to reveal Father Flynn's background.

    4. there was something gone wrong with him….

      What a strange way to end this story! It leaves a lot up to interpretation, and continues the theme of unfinished thoughts.

  3. Jul 2022
    1. “But, father, we’ve got Lucile coming, and Henry Davenport, and Mrs. Teddie Walker.”

      It would be tricky to find out computationally who says these next few lines of dialogue, since it's not back and forth between Mr. Neave and one person.

    2. sank into one of the immense drawing-room chairs

      In this scene, "sank" implies the chair is really big, but also puts Mr. Neave in a non-commanding, unassuming role that mirrors his relationship with his family.

    3. And when her next partner bumped her into the fat man and he said, “Pardon,”

      It's interesting that this last encounter with the older man isn't its own part of the story, instead its a small detail of the blur that the dance feels to her.

    4. e said not a word about the floor. “Your first dance, isn’t it?” he murmured.

      Unlike Leila's previous partners, the old man can tell she hasn't been to a dance before.

    5. countless imaginary meetings

      William imagines Isabel greeting him in many different ways, each one a lovely, picturesque meeting––each one not involving her friends!

    6. laughing, in the new way

      I thought Isabel had a change of heart, but she still chooses to be her "new self", laughing and joining her friends as soon as they call her.

    7. dropped from this radiant heaven

      There's a lot of angel imagery right off the bat; the girl is being described as an angel who fell from Heaven. Angels show purity and peace, which is what I'm guessing we're supposed to feel about the girl.

    8. The week after was one of the busiest weeks of their lives.

      Mansfield again starts the story with no context, like it's the middle of the story. As I'm reading, my way of picturing the story is a lot different: I know there's something someone is worried about, but I don't even know who they are.

    9. But still one must go everywhere; one must see everything.

      I really enjoy the personality that the narrator has, or I guess just their way of speaking. This paragraph stood out to me because the author chose to include it right after the plot of the man dying is introduced, instead of the beginning which would make more sense.

    1. His sufferings, up to the last six hours of his life, were terrible to see.

      Jennings' death continues the pattern of tragic, gruesome deaths that is associated with the Moonstone. His death is similar to Rosanna's in that he is dreadfully anticipating it.

    2. The Guardian; The Tatler; Richardson’s Pamela; Mackenzie’s Man of Feeling; Roscoe’s Lorenzo de Medici; and Robertson’s Charles the Fifth

      I wonder what we can notice by analyzing the presence of other books in the story; we know Robinson Crusoe shows up a lot. Are these titles standard classics, or do they maybe follow a theme that ties back to The Moonstone?

    3. Having found a passage of which he was apparently in search, he requested me to join him in the corner; still mysteriously confidential, and still speaking under his breath.

      We're seeing Betteredge's relationship with Robinson Crusoe from another character's point of view; he really treats the book like a Bible, going to a corner and reciting a passage from it. I feel like Jennings's narration is already more detailed and poignant as it is a journal entry.

    4. eyes dreamy and mournful, and deeply sunk in their orbits

      We've never gotten a description as vivid and detailed as this one. If Blake were in the other narrators' positions, would he give everyone a long, flowery description like this? Or is Ezra that important of a character?

    5. It informed me that my father was dead, and that I was heir to his great fortune.

      Franklin Blake's narration starts off with this intense moment, and it already shows how different his point of view will be from the others. As others have said, he's not caught up with the emotions of his father's death––but is he just not including it in his written account?

    6. The first instinct of girls in general

      Again we see a generalization of women; reminds me of Betteredge's comments before. This would be interesting to think about computational analysis-wise.

    7. Gentlefolks in general have a very awkward rock ahead in life

      This section of the story really stands out to me; it's as if he's narrating a nature documentary. The day-to-day lives of the upper class are condensed into a humorous list.

    8. the Moonstone

      It's referred to as 'the Moonstone' here, but the characters also use 'the Diamond' and other words. This would be something to look out for when we're analyzing how often the Moonstone is brought up, for example.

    9. The question of how I am to start the story properly I have tried to settle in two ways.

      The start of the story involves a character wondering how to start the story, which is really interesting! Betteredge's writing style is fun to read, but I wonder if there problems with his reliability, as he goes on tangents.

    10. Not perceiving his drift yet, and thinking it always desirable for the sake of peace and quietness to be on the lawyer’s side, I said I thought so too.

      Here we can see Betteredge's thought process of replying to Mr. Franklin. He doesn't really understand Mr. Franklin's intentions, but he is quick to agree with him. The whole time, Betteredge is more concerned with what the situation has to do with him––an attitude that reflects their employer-employee dynamic.