- Aug 2021
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halal-gate.com halal-gate.comHalal Gate18
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We are working hard in halal environment to give all necessary services to all who are looking for halal
Replace this with something like: "We work hard to provide the best products for those looking for halal and Middle-Eastern services."
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a
capitalize
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n
capitalize
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,
no space
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h M
you need consistency, are you going to write it with the space, or without? everywhere else is without. It's okay either way because this is your own product and you can call it anything
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Halal Gate:Shop
When you describe things in english, they like to see professional wording, not artistic flowery language. يعني لا تكتب "different meanings of beauty"
also START SHOPPING should have two Ps
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.
only one period
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S
lowercase s
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diffrent
different
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s
capitalize the beginning of sentences
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:S
missing space in the middle again
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conatainer
container.* add one period
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old fashion
old fashioned, and missing a noun after
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Halal Food, Organic
no need for the random capitalization
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:T
add space in between: "Gate: Tasty" I also don't understand what you mean by Tasty and More. I think it's better to just write Food Services
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s
add period
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,
same as before. might be best to do CTRL-F " ,"
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,
remove spaces before commas
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- Feb 2021
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www.royalroad.com www.royalroad.com
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Zethuron
"DAE Timelord?!?!?!?!"
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- Jan 2021
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www.royalroad.com www.royalroad.com
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Belle began
kind of a weird transition from the previous sentence
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