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  1. May 2017
    1. obstinate

      I had to look this word up and it means "stubbornly refusing to change one's opinion or chosen course of action, despite attempts to persuade one to do so"

    2. feet

      I am assuming that she is blind since she relied on her feet. However, a person feet are the items that get a person from place to place, so maybe she has been there so many times that her feet just taker her.

    3. curtains

      Even though this story has some great detail about the place and what's going on, I feel like this is all a dream. Somethings in the story, just seem a little odd to me.

    1. it.

      I really enjoyed this story because it made m think of my great-grandparents. Even though I did not know what everything was, I looked it up and it helped me understand the story more.

    2. Sixty-five

      this story makes it seem like Mrs. Whitaker collects more stuff than she truly needs. I wonder what she does with it all? and if it all has meaning to her.

    3. That’s nice

      This must be Mrs. Whitaker's favorite thing to say. She said it in the store, talking to her friend and now she is saying it to this boy that rang the door.

    4. cheese

      I am assuming that this is grilled cheese, but I have never heard it this way before. I also think that this story so far is very detailed which puts good images in my head such as the colors of the pills.

    5. longer

      I feel like as people age, they all have a routine that they stick to each week. My great- grandma never knows what day of the week it is but she knows when its Sunday because the activities that she does she week.

  2. Apr 2017
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    1. first attempts at flight

      I think even though they were not the nicest to this angel, he needed someone to help him become strong enough to take off on his flight. I really enjoyed reading this piece because it had a lot of things in it that I did not seeing coming and him flying was one of them.

    2. drive him out

      I do not understand why they are so mean to the angel when he helped the boy get better. Are they scared of him? Or is it truly just because they want him still there to get money off of him?

    3. changed into a spider

      This reminds me of Beauty and the Beast because he is getting changed into something. I wonder how long they got changed into a spider or if it was something that lasted the rest of their life. Because most people do not like spiders and therefore kill them.

    4. familiar

      I wonder if this husband and wife are going to take this old man under their wing. Maybe the wife will take care of the young man the way that she is taking care of the sick boy.

    5. good

      It sounds like the child is in time out. I wonder what the child would have done to be treated like this. Is this why the town is "perfect?" Because if you do not behave you get punishment like that?

    6. drooz.

      It sounds like the town just has something to replace something with. Such as the cars or the washing machine. or maybe they travel to get things done or perhaps do things by hand such as washing clothes. Maybe they want the world to be a better place so they take the train and not a car

    7. Omelas,

      I looked up where this city was and it is a waterfront with the Eastern and Southern sides facing the water. It is said to be the place where everything is perfect.

    8. clinging

      This makes me think that he did not want to go to bed. Most little kids when they do not want to do something when by someone they know really well, will cling to shirts.

    9. die

      Does this mean that he wants the Kraken to die when he awakes? Or is this part of a dream because it seems to me that the Kraken is dreaming about something.

    10. thro’

      I think that this piece so far is hard for me to read because of how the words are wrote. I have always been one to struggle with words if they are not how I am use to seeing them, which I know is how they use to write, but why do you think that is?

    11. head

      I am picturing this as one of those things that has a blade in the middle and a person stuck their head in between and someone pulled the rope. I can not think of the name.

    12. clattered

      I like how the author put in words to help with the sound efforts. This really helps me visualize the picture that I think he is trying to get across to us as readers.

    13. outcast

      It is interesting to me that almost all stories have a bad guy to them. But this reminds me of the song outcast just because I can really relate to it when I moved out of Sterling.

    14. This reminds of a really bad storm especially being out in the sea and being a cruise during a bad storm so no fun so I can not even imagine what it would be like for nine days. Also, it reminds me of those two days that Sterling had that really bad wind.

  4. Mar 2017
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    1. mother

      Depending on age, I think that boys have a harder time listening to mothers because they like the father figure and therefore they pay more attention to what they want to be like. But then again I think it can go both ways because in my family I always listened to my dad over my mom because he had a deeper voice and when I was little that was scary to me.