- Augustine Okolo, SP '75 Set
NO CTA, no action
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- May 2017
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Anywhere you are in the globe, you are welcome to connect with us.
No CTA or action. Vague description.
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rebranding PBGS Ewohimi.
CRO: Link each section to a CTA so user can take action. Heuristic: 'Consistency & Standards' - Headline to match same hierarchy and logical order.
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Connect with your peers
Recommend expanding upon the 'benefits' of the features provided.
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Good Afternoon! We are Alumni of Pilgrim Baptist Grammar School, Ewohimi
'Match between system and the real world' - Description should contain more information that should appear in natural and logical order.
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Join Today
Prioritize goals & call-to-actions. CTAs competing against each other.
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We connect, inspire and Impact Alumni members of Pilgrim Baptist Grammar School, Ewohimi.
'Match between system and the real world' - Recommend including main headline followed by a description that introduces USP / mission statement.
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