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  1. Nov 2025
    1. For example, Morrell and Duncan-Andrade had students read, discuss, analyze, and critique hip-hop texts by Grandmaster Flash, Nas, and Public Enemy to make connections to canonical poetry texts by Whitman, Shakespeare, and Angelou. In a similar way, Kirkland (2007) incorporated hip-hop texts by artists such as Run DMC, Queen Latifah, and Lil' Kim for a unit called "The Classroom, the Community, and the World," which focused on human experience from a black urban perspective. Kirkland found that through the unit, students met the literacy standards outlined by IRA and NCTE.

      this text helps highlight the versatility of Hip-hop in the classroom, either analyzing the deep political statements that some rappers make in there lyrics to reading and connecting them with poetry. it also helps promote cultural knowledge and academic engagement, for example earlier in the text Sanchez mentions students being labeled as troubled or behind when it wasn't them that was failing the academic institutions it was the institutions that was failing them, even though the students may have been paying attention what ever they ay have been learning wasn't very academically stimulating

    2. he rich rhetorical devices unique to speakers of African American language (AAL) to oppose the view of AAL as inferior and assert its sociolinguistic importance to the identities and cultures of many African Americans.

      While AAVE has it's impact on the modern day American language and Hip-hop AAL has problem had the biggest impact, introducing things like the Cipha and semantic inversion, just showing it's value to identity in Hip-hop.

    3. Labov's (1972) groundbreaking work, Language in the Inner City: Studies in the Black English Vernacular, demonstrated empirically the structure, uses, and logic of African American Vernacular English (AAVE). The importance of work by Labor and others working within the field of sociolinguistics

      while it doesn't explicitly state the study of Hip-hop in terms of structure, uses, and logic it does start to focus on AAVE and how it relates to Hip-hop in some way or another, it's also important to mention that a lot of the slang that comes from rap and modern day slang comes from Hip-hop and AAVE

    4. I focus on the essay of only one student, Robert (pseudonym), because his analysis of a hip-hop text led me to the serious study of scholarship on hip-hop language and literacy

      I think this is a really powerful sentence, it's not just saying "oh I thought this student wrote a good paper" it's saying that it was more then just a paper is was a catalyst for the author to change paths, it wasn't just inspiring it was moving enough to research and make a career out of it.

    5. I discovered the validity of using hip-hop in the classroom and that students, including ones who are labeled underprepared or have been placed in developmental or remedial classes, are in a position to educate us if we are willing to listen.

      this goes to show how over looked the connection between English and Hip-hop is in the educational world. While there is many sources talking about it I think this source will be one of the most valuable in terms of how much information I'll be able to get out of it, because a large part of this text covers the connection of composition and Hip-hop it also give multiple examples of lyric analyses and shows the methods used.

    6. Despite research that argues that standardized tests like the ACT are biased against the linguistic backgrounds of African American students (Fleming & Garcia, 1998), these tests are still used to gain entry to university programs so as to protect the myth that there is one standard English that is superior to other variations. To address the above contradiction, at least at the pedagogical level, in this paper, I examine the writing of one African American student in a transitional college English class to identify hybrid language practices resulting from this student's linguistic background

      just another example for the analogy that the doors are open but the house rules haven't changed, and another example of linguistic discrimination, and up holding this standard for SAE and code-switching.

    7. The doors to higher education opened during the late 1960s and 1970s in large part because of demands made by African American and Latino students. Despite this cultural and demographic shift, a narrow view of Standard American English (SAE) still dominates in the academy (Fox, 1999; Kynard, 2008).

      right off the bat you know what this paper is going to talk about it, it also gets you interested, how and why does "SAE still dominate the academy" it also acknowledges the efforts put into activism to open up the academy doors and diversify the student body but they might be able to come into the house but the rules haven't changed and they made it as hard as they could for people with different dialects and non-standard American English.

    1. Global Linguistic Flows has the potential to be a critical piece in our repertoire ofknowledge on youth cultural expression and identity formation

      the core concepts that Global Linguistic Flow presents in terms of composition and Hip-hop as the Cipha and "The dusty-foot philosopher" both have major connections in terms of hip-hop, The Cipha is more important being able to tie in the end with the beginning is a key compositional technique that allows writers and rappers to make unique and interesting songs and text, for example an artist like MFDOOM (a hip hop artist) who is known to make connections from the beginning and end, he also has multiple alter egos that he references and has call back conversations with in his songs.

    2. keepin' itreal,to navigate through hip-hop waters. Eyedea is described as indexing his whiteness viathe maintenance of "local" speech patterns,

      this echo's Ashanti Young's "code-meshing" from his 2010 article, “Should Writers Use They Own English?” the main connection it has is preserving authenticity and personality in your lyrics or texts.

    3. he "roots" of this musical and cultural form is not a project of finite space andtime, but one of a circular nature that flows in and around Africa, the Americas, andworldwide. Whether representin the Bronx, Somalia, or aboriginal Australia, hip-hopmusic, culture, and language cross the globe.

      I think this sentence is really strong and it connect the topic of hip-hop to the world and the people in it, but also shows how hip-hop is an amalgamation of different cultures and meanings.

    4. They offer the cipha, a circular call and response space, as one of the mainspeech events of the genre

      using the cipha really connects hip-hop to composition by having that call and response formatting. The book also uses the cipha by referring to each paragraphs and topics as tracks, which even further connects how hip-hop tracks aren't just sound and words they have meaning and information in them and reading into those meaning can help the listener better understand what the artist might be trying to communicate..

    5. "Dusty footphilosopher means the one that's poor, lives in poverty but lives in a dignified mannerand philosophizes about the universe and talks about things that well-read people talkabout, but they've never read or traveled on a plane"

      the term "Dusty feet" philosophers might be an odd phrase but it's meant to represent the discovery of knowledge and insight from places that you might not expect. and in a way you can almost look at it the same way Ashanti Young explains code meshing, the "Dusty feet" philosopher is code meshing in a way, for example, African American Standard (AASE) English might look odd to someone who was taught American standard English (ASE) for years might looks at AASE and think there doing it wrong but grammatically and structurally they both follow the same rules and are both just as good, much like a "Dusty foot philosopher" who might look rough on the outside but is well educated and just as good as any other person.

    1. It goes without saying, then, that language is also a political instrument, means, and proof of power. It is the most vivid and crucial key to identity: It reveals the private identity, and connects one with, or divorces one from, the larger, public, or communal identity.

      this states the political power language holds in the world and how much it means.

    2. The argument has nothing to do with language itself but with the role of language. Language, incontestably, reveals the speaker. Language, also, far more dubiously, is meant to define the other

      This one sentence makes the argument of language less about culture and more about politics.

    1. I say we teach languagedescriptively. This mean we should, for instance, teach how language functionswithin and from various cultural perspectives. And we should teach what it taketo understand, listen, and write in multiple dialects simultaneously

      I think this is a great idea and judging by how much I enjoyed reading this I think being able to research about more dialects and study them, but then write in them I don't think it would be just hard but also fun and interesting to learn more about.

    2. translatin one dialect into another one. It’s blendin two or mo dialects, languages,or rhetorical forms into one sentence, one utterance, one paper. And not all thetime is this blendin intentional, sometime it unintentional. And that’s the point.The two dialects sometime naturally, sometime intentionally, co-exist! This is codeswitching from a linguistic perspective: two languages and dialects co-existing inone speech act (Auer

      this sentence directly confronts the misconception in about what code switching is and specifically in the academic world.

    3. Code meshing is the new code switching; it’s mulitdialectalism and pluralingual-ism in one speech act, in one paper.

      it gives a clear definition of what code meshing is and what it is NOT.

    4. Code meshing what we all do whenever we communicate—writin, speakin, whateva.Code meshing blend dialects, international languages, local idioms, chat-roomlingo, and the rhetorical styles of various ethnic and cultural groups in both formaland informal speech acts

      this helps define what code meshing is and what it can be used for, but also explains that it's not just some small academic concept and that many people all over the world do it.

    5. wouldnt everybody belearnin everybody’s dialect? Wouldnt we all become multidialectal and pluralin-gual? And that’s my exact argument, that we all should know everybody’s dialect,at least as many as we can, and be open to the mix of them in oral and writtencommunication (Young)

      this sentence really pushes for the concept of dialect diversity

    6. Standard language ideologyis the belief that there is one set of dominant language rules that stem from a singledominant discourse (like standard English) that all writers and speakers of Englishmust conform to in order to communicate effectively. Dominant language ideologyalso say peeps can speak whateva the heck way they want to—BUT AT HOME

      this sentence directly states when ideology the author is fighting against and clears any confusion in the text.

    7. when folks dont get no jobs or get fired or whatever cuz they talk andwrite Asian or black or with an Applachian accent or sound like whatever aint thestatus quo. And Fish himself acquiesce to this linguistic prejudice when he comesaying that people make theyselves targets for racism if and when they dont writeand speak like he do.But dont nobody’s language, dialect, or style make them “vulnerable to preju-dice.” It’s ATTITUDES. It be the way folks with some power perceive other people’slanguage. Like the way some view, say, black English when used in school or atwork.

      I think this paragraph help really define Young's opinion on linguistic racism and also pushes how people present themselves rather then changing who they are about how they write.

    1. A frequently encountered struggle we face as writers is when the “right”words don’t come to us easily. For instance, as a college senior and a highschool English Language Arts (ELA) student-teacher, Sara recalls the expe-rience with a writing assignment for her Secondary Education course andfacing a blank MS Word screen for what felt like a number of hours. Sararemembers thinking, “¿Como empezar? The right words aren’t coming tome. I don’t know what is more frustrating, that I know I have a paperdue and I can’t get it started, or that I’m actually dedicating this time tomy frustration?”The struggle with finding the “right” words has a lot to do with how wehave been taught to censor our voices, how we extend monolingual ideologyon ourselves. But one way to counter this struggle is by proceeding to write(sketch, outline, list, draw) whatever words and ideas come to us as wethink about the task at hand.

      This whole section provides a direct solution to writers block but also provides a relatable experience about writers block making the text more entertaining to read and make the author seem more human. It also stands out compared to the rest of the text, while most of the text is spent identifying problems this section gives you a solution while also identifying the problems.

    2. as people who dolanguage on a daily basis in different and plural ways, we/you, writers mustwork to gain confidence and a sense of pride in our own diverse multilin-gual practices

      this sentence for me gives off a sense of strength and pride, saying " sense of pride in our own diverse multilingual practices" makes me feel that anyone can write in there own special and way and it can still be well written as long as the author uses the right tools and resources.

    3. ny time you are about to start a “new” writing assignment, you arealready equipped with ample ways of voicing and translating, with toolsand ways of knowing. Tuning into the abundance of your voice, identi-fying its many variations and how these plural ways of voicing work withand for different types of audiences, is a way to continue building on yourexperiences, your linguistic resources, as language architects. The more youpractice your different ways of communicating, the stronger and broaderthese resources become.

      I this sentence hold a lot of power because the text brings the reader into it by saying that you hold the tools to align with the modern day standards but also have your own individuality when writing.

    4. Our strong belief that who we are and how we critically use languagematters in our writing is sustained by an understanding of language iden-tified as translingualism

      this shows a solution and that they have the strength to surpass this linguistic racism.

    5. what is considered “good” and “clear” writing great-ly depends on this dominant system of values.Our workin’ of language(s) then reckons with the damage brought onby monolingual ideology. As Dr. April Baker-Bell, Associate Professor ofLanguage, Literacy, and English Education, rightly argues in her book onLinguistic Justice, the judgment of Black Englishes in all their rich variantforms as “lesser than” so-called standard English constitutes linguistic rac-ism

      this sentence directly confronts the main theme of the text, discrimination of the way people speak and, or write and that there's one single form of language that is correct.

    1. In the same way that one might start an argumentative essay byreviewing the literature, staking out an intervention, making that interven-tion, defending it from counterarguments, and summarizing and suggestingnew avenues for research in the conclusion, a DJ might engage in stylisticpractices that referenced a song’s sampling pedigree, challenged one songwith another, sped up the beats per minute of one song so that it came intobetter rhythm with another, and leave the crowd with a body-jarring headbanger of an outro. The compositional elements are not dissimilar.

      connects directly to what I was saying about how DJ's and writers use the same methods and techniques.

    2. In this way DJs might be understood asperforming a literature review, paying tribute to the Marvin Gayes, the Slyand the Family Stones, and other artists who came before the newer sound.Such acts of mixing demonstrated a DJ’s bona fides.

      Again showing the compositional innovation of hip hop but also how DJ's and writers aren't that different.

    3. Hip-hop’s willingness to sample and appropriatewords, lyrics, and beats has allowed hip-hop artists to do much more withmusic than was previously done. Far from the way white artists would stealblack artists’ songs in the early days of rock and roll, hip-hop artists oftenwillingly acknowledge what they take as a demonstration of their musicalknowledge. For example, DJs used to comb through record stores looking forthe most obscure beat to sample

      I think this sentence really highlights the difference hip-hop made to the musical field it also shows the diversity, but it also relates to the compositional innovation of hip hop and how DJ's use samples and make an important note to acknowledge the work that their sampling, just like writers try there best to find the best sources possible and make sure not to steal work and if they need to reference something from someone else's work they make sure to give credit to the original work.

    4. “Real Gs move in silence like lasagna” is a prime exampleof how seriously hip-hop artists take language and wordplay. Upon hearingthe line, it doesn’t make much sense to most people. What do lasagna andsilence have in common? Yet, when one has the line printed, the messagebecomes clear. The silent “g” in “lasagna” makes the point about a “G” mov-ing in silence, “G” being the slang for a gangsta

      I love this sentence it shows the complexity of word play when it comes to lyrics and how meanings are hidden anywhere when it comes to hip-hop, but largely go unrecognized, again highlighting why studying hip-hop to gain a different perspective on composition and English is important.

    5. These sorts of connections and complexrhyming make rap so interesting because words that do not seem to rhymeare actually quite connected together.

      this line connects to one used earlier when the author mentions Lil Wayne's lyric “Real Gs move in silence like lasagna” and how it rhymes but also has a deeper meanings.

    6. One does not need to understand the complexities of language tohear the ways in which these sounds connect in complex ways to producenot simply the rhyme at the end of the line but also the internal rhymes thatdraw on consonance and assonance to make some of the most complex raplyrics

      This sentences argues that its not just the end of line rhyming techniques its the ones in the middle as well which highlights the complexities and poetic devices that certain rappers use in there lyrics.

    7. Hip-hop has reshaped language. Hip-hop culture has added words nowprominent across music disciplines and the world. Terms such as “trap,”“ratchet,” “gully,” “twisted,” “gold digger,” “wanksta,” “bling,” “crib,” and “lit”all have a hip-hop provenance or have been popularized through hip-hop.To be sure, not all hip-hop linguistic innovations make their way into themainstream, but those that do often have a lasting influence

      again really interesting to see where certain slang originated, also when he says "a lasting influence" is a very true statement much of the slang he mentions is still used today.

    8. simplistic notion of the ways in which brain cellstransmit electrical charges, but that is what makes it powerful. From braincell transmissions to fires, the idea of it being lit expresses a kinetic form ofenergy that is both passionate creativity and a rocking good time.

      The fact that the author was able to derive that meaning from that lyric shows that hip-hop can be studied to show deeper meanings.

    9. Now this workseems to occur largely in the iPhone’s notes app, but it still happens regularly,and I catch myself doing it as if I had a record deal and was going to be fea-tured on the next remix of a popular song. Big Daddy Kane rapped about hislyric creation process that

      I really enjoy this segment the way he illustrates the lyric writing but also studying the process rather then the product is really interesting, I think If I was the read a draft of a book it would be a lot more interesting because you get to study the words the author did and didn't use and you get to ask your self the question "Why did he change it" I think I would find a lot more texts more engaging if all I read were hand written drafts.

    10. offers a new way to think aboutcomposition by asking writers to consider how the audience or the readermight respond and what role that response should have in composition.

      I think that studying hip-hop doesn't necessarily introduce new concepts into composition I highlights the concepts already there, for example he says that studying hip-hop "offers a new way to think about composition by asking writers to consider how the audience or the reader might respond and what role that response should have in composition." these are things you already do in composition thinking about what the reader would think and how to improve the clarity of your text based on the audience. However hip-hop makes it easier to think about these concepts because a lot of the time your studying abstract ideas or songs related more heavily to culture and your able to relate more with you audience and as a writer relate more to the text you yourself are writing.

    11. English would arguethat Tupac is Shakespeare, that kind of comparison is not necessary to justifyhip-hop’s study. Shakespeare and Tupac are different, and both are worthy ofstudy in the same classroom

      I really like the way Sciullo worded this I think it adds a lot to his perspective and opinion but I think it adds a nice twist on the concept of "Code-Meshing" but also encourages dialect diversity a educational environment.

    12. push “practical” knowledge and application in English andvirtually every other discipline. The turn toward studying hip-hop helps thisby breaking down the high-culture/low-culture divide that has caused someto be suspicious about the utility of English in college

      When I read this I thought of Young's argument of ASE, and how while important to learn "Practical knowledge and the application of it in English" it important to preserve your way of speaking and writing this include hip-hop and graffiti.

    13. This change hasled English studies to bridge the gap between the academy and popular cul-ture, allowing English as a discipline to push back against criticisms that allit does is read Shakespeare

      even though it doesn't directly touch linguistic discrimination this is a clear example of it.

    14. Blackauthors of the city have long represented some of the most interesting writ-ing of the last century or so. Richard Wright, Ralph Ellison, and ChesterHimes are virtuosos worthy of more study than they currently receive. Inmany ways, today’s hip-hop artists carry on the legacy of these authors

      this stood out to me when reading I think it has a really close connection to a lot of the things we've been learning in class, especially since one of most recent topics we covered is American standard English (ASE) and black standard English (BSE).

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  2. Oct 2025
    1. “tool of thepatriarchy.” It is a tool for anyone who wishes to use it, and who is willing to put the timeand effort into mastering it,

      this ties into the continuous theme of using language as a tool no matter what language that may be it's always used in the same way, to get around and communicate.

    2. substitute “their own language” — or worse, teaching them that our common language issomehow evil — merely sets them up for failure.What’s more, we further erode public confidence in our ability to produce job-readygraduates. (In many surveys over the past 10 years, employers consistently identify poorcommunication skills as one of their chief complaints about new hires.)The responsibility for helping students learn to use standard American English effectively,and insisting that they do so, cannot fall solely on the English department. The purpose offirst-year composition courses should be to introduce students to the basics of goodprofessional communication — grammar, sentence structure, organization, paragraphdevelopment. If subsequent courses do not build upon and reinforce those fundamentals,then students will conclude that such skills must be not all that important. That appears tobe the case, if those employer surveys are any indication.As academics, we rose to positions of privilege and authority based in large part on ourability to “speak the language.” It seems to me the height of arrogance and hypocrisy, if notoutright discrimination, to deny students access to those same opportunities, whether wedo so intentionally or simply through neglect. Our objective as educators ought to be tohelp them attain what we have attained, if not more — and language proficiency is anecessary prerequisite.In short, standard American English is not inherently racist. It is not merely a “tool of thepatriarchy.” It is a tool for anyone who wishes to use it, and who is willing to put the timeand effort into mastering it, regardless of race, gender, ethnicity, cultural background, orsocioeconomic status.Nor will students — once they leave our cushy campuses and enter the professional world— be able to talk and write any way they choose, any more than they will be able to dress orbehave any way they want. Preparing them adequately for life beyond college is arguablyour greatest responsibility — and up to this point, perhaps our biggest failure.

      I think this line ties everything together and shows the authors true feelings towards the topic, and how much it means to him that students are taught ASE, but not because he thinks everyone should know English, because he knows the potential that someone who knows ASE has in the world.

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  3. Sep 2025
    1. Before attempting to speak this language, a learner must acknowledge these spirits with gifts of tobacco and food. Anyone who attempts Ojibwemowin is engaged in something more than learning tongue twisters. However awkward my nouns, unstable my verbs, however stumbling my delivery, to engage in the language is to engage the spirit. Perhaps that is what my teachers know, and what my English will forgive.

      this connects to the first paragraph saying "my English will forgive" - Paragraph 22, when she first says "My English is jealous" Paragraph 1, I think it's a fantastic way end the text and it wraps up the entire idea of the text. It also shows that Ojibwemowin is more then just a language its a culture, the same way that now most speakers use English and Ojibwemowin when speaking it's evolved over time the same as the people and the traditions with it.

    2. Ojibwemowin is also a language of emotions; shades of feeling can be mixed like paints. There is a word for what occurs when your heart is silently shedding tears. Ojibwe is especially good at describing intellectual states and the fine points of moral responsibility.

      I think this paragraph really shows how much the Ojibwe language means to people and how different the language is to English,

    3. For years I saw only the surface of Ojibwemowin. With any study at all one looks deep into a stunning complex of verbs. Ojibwemowin is a language of verbs. All action. Two-thirds of the words are verbs, and for each verb there are as many as 6,000 forms. The storm of verb forms makes it a wildly adaptive and powerfully precise language. Changite-ige describes the way a duck tips itself up in the water butt first.

      This text helps expand just how complex the Ojibwe language is and how hard it could be for anyone to learn it not just Erdrich.

    4. Fluent speakers have had to fight for the language with their own flesh, have endured ridicule, have resisted shame and stubbornly pledged themselves to keep on talking the talk.

      This shows the struggle that native people faced to keep their culture and language, it wasn't just the Ojibwe people that nearly lost their language, so many people had to suffer to keep their language.

    5. I want to get the jokes. I also want to understand the prayers and the adisookaanug, the sacred stories, but the irresistible part of language for me is the explosion of hilarity that attends every other minute of an Ojibwe visit. As most speakers are now bilingual, the language is spiked with puns on both English and Ojibwe,

      This sentence shows how the she almost felt left out from these jokes and that in order to be accepted into the group and immerse her self she wanted to be able to learn more and more to get along with the people around her. It also shows that even though Ojibwe is a ancient language it's evolved in so many different ways, like most modern speakers mix in English because most people struggle to either find someone to teach them or struggle to find the resources to help them learn.

    6. The language bit deep into my heart, but it was an unfulfilled longing. I had nobody to speak it with, nobody who remembered my grandfather's standing with his sacred pipe in the woods next to a box elder tree, talking to the spirits. Not until I moved back to the Midwest and settled in Minneapolis did I find a fellow Ojibweg to learn with, and a teacher.

      I think this illustrates hat even in a big city like Minneapolis it was a struggle to find someone who speaks Ojibwe and to learn more of it, I think it jus goes to show how little people speak it and how Erdrich wanted to bring life to the language and learn as much as possible to be able to connect with her native roots and the people around her.

    7. or years now I have been in love with a language other than the English in which I write, and it is a rough affair. Every day I try to learn a little more Ojibwe. I have taken to carrying verb conjugation charts in my purse, along with the tiny notebook I've always kept for jotting down book ideas, overheard conversations, language detritus, phrases that pop into my head. Now that little notebook includes an increasing volume of Ojibwe words.

      I think this is a great introduction on how Erdrich studied in her past time, just day to day she would pick up new words.

    1. history had been "whitened" - when white menhad written history books, the black man simply had been left out. Mr. Muhammad couldn't havesaid anything that would have struck me much harder.

      this sentence till translates to today, in how teachings how minority groups and certain topics are banned or looked past, it can also be washed out with lies or false perceptions of things. I think everyone can benefit from this quote in some way.

    2. I jumped into bed and feigned sleep. And as soon as the guard passed, I got back out ofbed onto the floor area of that light-glow, where I would read for another fifty-eight minutes untilthe guard approached again

      saying the specific amount of time he would wait for a guard to walk by shows how much he liked reading, give up his sleep and also risking punishment for being up past lights out just to read is really admirable.

    3. When I had progressed to really serious reading, every night at about ten P.M. I would beoutraged with the "lights out." It always seemed to catch me right in the middle of somethingengrossing.

      This is a really good sentence, it one show how much he really liked reading, it also has a some pretty good vocabulary which I think makes this entire text even better, words that you don't really hear or read about any more like (outraged) and (engrossing) shows how much Malcom studied and how all the reading paid off when is came to his writing.

    4. months passed without myeven thinking about being imprisoned. In fact, up to then, I never had been so truly free in my life

      feeling free from the world while trapped in a prison, again just shows how much learning and exploring the English language through his studies meant to him, and how just reading a book or learning new words made him felt.

    5. my word-base broadened, I could for the first time pick up abook and read and now begin to understand what the book was saying. Anyone who has read agreat deal can imagine the new world that opened.

      going from struggling to read to being able to immerse yourself in a book really does open up a whole new world, and it just shows how much reading and learning meant to him.

    6. I woke up the next morning, thinking about those words - immensely proud to realize thatnot only had I written so much at one time, but I'd written words that I never knew were in theworld. Moreover, with a little effort, I also could remember what many of these words meant. Ireviewed the words whose meanings I didn't remember. Funny thing, from the dictionary firstpage right now, that "aardvark" springs to my mind. The dictionary had a picture of it, a long-tailed, long-eared, burrowing African mammal, which lives off termites caught by sticking out itstongue as an anteater does for ants.

      I love the feeling of this text, it's a great example of how you can bring your emotions through a page, its also a good example of how Malcom is enjoying learning despite his struggles in the beginning.

    7. In my slow, painstaking, ragged handwriting, I copied into my tablet everything printed on thatfirst page, down to the punctuation marks

      This is a good example of how it's hard to start and new thing that you don't exactly understand especially a language, but shows that he was dedicated to it.

    8. Finally, just to start some kindof action, I began copying.

      This shows that Malcom didn't have a lot of motivation and was confused on where to start, but it shows he wanted to learn and to better himself.

    9. I saw that the best thing I could do was get hold of a dictionary - to study, to learn some words.I was lucky enough to reason also that I should try to improve my penmanship.

      This marks the start of his journey to educate himself and further his grammar, annunciation, penmanship, and knowledge, of the English language.

    10. It was because of my letters that I happened to stumble upon starting to acquire some kind of ahomemade education.I became increasingly frustrated. at not being able to express what I wanted to convey in lettersthat I wrote, especially those to Mr. Elijah Muhammad. In the street, I had been the most articulatehustler out there - I had commanded attention when I said something. But now, trying to writesimple English,

      The Shows Malcom's struggles with writing and gives a good introduction on what the rest of the text is about. It also gives a short insight on the struggle of translating slang into written language.

    1. Apart from what any critic had to say about my writing, I knew I had succeeded where it counted when mymother finished reading my book and gave me her verdict: "So easy to read."

      This highlight how if you know who you're writing to it can make you text more fun and interesting to read.

    2. I later decided I should envision a reader for the stories Iwould write. And the reader I decided upon was my mother, because these were stories about mothers.

      Again shows how the way you, read, write, and speak, changes based on how you envision the audience and can change person to person based on how they grew up.

    3. Why are there few Asian Americans enrolled in creative writing programs? Why do so manyChinese students go into engineering! Well, these are broad sociological questions I can't begin to answer.But I have noticed in surveys -- in fact, just last week -- that Asian students, as a whole, always dosignificantly better on math achievement tests than in English. And this makes me think that there are otherAsian-American students whose English spoken in the home might also be described as "broken" or"limited." And perhaps they also have teachers who are steering them away from writing and into math andscience, which is what happened to me

      She talks about how in general, not just her, struggle with exceling in English because of the way people are raised and, brings up a larger social issue of Asian students being pushed into STEM and Math fields.

    4. Math is precise; there is only one correct answer. Whereas, for me at least, theanswers on English tests were always a judgment call, a matter of opinion and personal experience.

      In this it shows how she processed language and despite her not understanding specific things in English, and her clear strength in math, she overcomes this and speaks and write to people all the time without and trouble. I just enjoy how she not afraid to admit what she's not good at, it brings you back to how she started the paper and how she writes in general, it she how she's not afraid to be honest.

    5. hey had lost the CAT scan and she had come for nothing. Shesaid they did not seem to have any sympathy when she told them she was anxious to know the exactdiagnosis, since her husband and son had both died of brain tumors. She said they would not give her anymore information until the next time and she would have to make another appointment for that. So she saidshe would not leave until the doctor called her daughter. She wouldn't budge. And when the doctor finallycalled her daughter, me, who spoke in perfect English -- lo and behold -- we had assurances the CAT scanwould be found, promises that a conference call on Monday would be held, and apologies for any sufferingmy mother had gone through for a most regrettable mistake

      When Tan talks about this you can almost feel how serious she is, and it just goes to show how much the way you speak really impacts your day to day life.

    6. Like others, I havedescribed it to people as 'broken" or "fractured" English. But I wince when I say that. It has alwaysbothered me that I can think of no way to describe it other than "broken," as if it were damaged and neededto be fixed, as if it lacked a certain wholeness and soundness.

      This is another example of just how much language means to Tan and how even though certain ways to speak English may seem "broken" to some, it might be perfect English to others.

    7. Yet some ofmy friends tell me they understand 50 percent of what my mother says. Some say they understand 80 to 90percent. Some say they understand none of it, as if she were speaking pure Chinese. But to me, my mother'sEnglish is perfectly clear, perfectly natural. It's my mother tongue. Her language, as I hear it, is vivid,direct, full of observation and imagery. That was the language that helped shape the way I saw things,expressed things, made sense of the world.

      This shows how the use of language and what it means to other people can change person to person based how how you were raised.

    8. I had learned in school and through books, the forms ofEnglish I did not use at home with my mother.Just last week, I was walking down the street with my mother, and I again found myself conscious of theEnglish I was using, the English I do use with her. We were talking about the price of new and usedfurniture and I heard myself saying this: "Not waste money that way." My husband was with us as well, andhe didn't notice any switch in my English. And then I realized why. It's because over the twenty years we'vebeen together I've often used that same kind of English with him, and sometimes he even uses it with me. Ithas become our language of intimacy, a different sort of English that relates to family talk, the language Igrew up with.

      I think this quote give the deepest insight on the entire paper, it also really shows her thoughts on the sue of language in different situations and how she changes based on the audience around her. Either with her mother, husband, a crowd of people, or hospital staff, she changes the way she speaks based on what type of meaning she wants to show with her words.

    9. I am a writer. And by that definition, I am someone who has always loved language. I am fascinated bylanguage in daily life. I spend a great deal of my time thinking about the power of language -- the way itcan evoke an emotion, a visual image, a complex idea, or a simple truth. Language is the tool of my trade.And I use them all -- all the Englishes I grew up with.

      This text is really nice, it's a nice intro to the author and give a further explanation of what the paper is about, and shows why she is so fascinated and enjoys studying language so much.

    10. I am not a scholar of English or literature.

      I really like how she starts this off, it shows that she analogies what she is not to introduce the readers to who she is as a person and, give you some insight on what the text might be like.