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  1. Oct 2020
    1. The ultimate logic of a market culture is the gangsterization of culture: I want power now. I want pleasure now. I want property now. Your property. Give it to me.

      I find this comparison to the "gangsterization" of a market culture really interesting. It is fairly accurate to the kind of culture we have right now and it is true that most of it revolves around who can gain the most power.

    2. Even though the pocketbook is important, many Americans are concerned more about the low quality of their lives, the constant fear of violent assault and cruel insult, the mean-spiritedness and coldheartedness of social life, and the inability to experience deep levels of intimacy. These are the signs of a culturally decadent civilization.

      This type of decay has been rising greatly and instead of focusing on fixing those issues, the "pocketbook" is taking precedence.

    3. There must be prescribed forms of public accountability for institutions that have a disproportionate amount of wealth, power, and influence.

      I believe that this is saying that we, the public, are a part of the problem for certain corporations having too much power. I agree that this is true since companies such as Walmart have gotten so large because of consumers which are us.

    1. Crucially, disinformation can turn into misinformation when people share disinformation without realizing it is false.

      By sharing misinformation we are contributing to the problems of disinformation without even realizing it, which is further harming the ways we perceive true and false information and who we trust.

    2. Purveyors of disinformation—content that is intentionally false and designed to cause harm—are motivated by three distinct goals: to make money; to have political influence, either foreign or domestic; and to cause trouble for the sake of it.

      The spread of disinformation is purely for the sake of the party to gain whatever they desire without getting reprimanded.

    3. And although much is being made about preparing the U.S. electorate for the 2020 election, misleading and conspiratorial content did not begin with the 2016 presidential race, and it will not end after this one.

      Misinformation has been a long standing aspect in society especially within elections. No matter how many become aware of it, it is not going to end any time soon.

  2. Sep 2020
    1. A 2017 report by the Substance Abuse and Mental Health Services Administration concluded that less wealthy, less educated survivors are more likely to suffer from depression or post-traumatic stress in the aftermath of disasters. In communities that already lack resources, the psychological fallout can be devastating.

      Not only insinuated but is actually stated now.

    2. The effect, Ellie said, was “mind-bending.” It can’t have helped that she was struggling with her own mental-health problems—the whole family was.

      The fires had affected the whole family and seemed to change the mentality of the children.

    3. Someday not long from now—maybe this summer, maybe next year, maybe the year after—a new fire will ignite near Allison or her family.

      Infers that another fire will happen in California since her family still resides there and it will cause more mental damage.

    4. Now it really does scar. The most fearsome modern wildfires don’t just burn overgrowth and excess; they incinerate entire ecosystems, and sometimes those ecosystems don’t regenerate on their own. Fire, once a natural mechanism of forgetting, has become an unnatural mechanism of remembering.

      Rather than being something that simply burns a piece of land, fires have become something that hurts people to the extent that it follows forever.

    5. California as a whole faces a shortage of mental-health professionals, which the governor’s office has predicted will worsen in the coming years—and that was before the pandemic. In rural areas, it is especially pronounced.

      Brings the fact of mental health back to specifically how bad it is in California.

    6. Some wealthy Californians have hired private firefighting brigades to defend their estates; many poorer families lack the financial resources to take even basic preventive measures, such as trimming trees and clearing brush. When their homes burn, their insurance is less likely to cover the costs—if they have insurance at all. In the words of Rubinoff, from Legal Aid: “Recovery is not equal.”

      This insinuates that the damage is really taking the biggest toll on the poorer population mentally since they are hit the most with fires.

    7. Fire, of course, does not discriminate on the basis of race or class or ability, but that does not mean survivors bear an equal burden.

      Again states that each person has a different reaction and bears a different burden based on severity.

    8. The panic of disaster resolves into the numbness of shock; the numbness of shock, into the pain of trauma.

      Reference to the ways that the trauma begins to take shape.

    9. She’d helped her children gather their things in case of an emergency evacuation, but she couldn’t bring herself to pack her own bags, because what are material possessions worth in a state that combusts on an annual schedule?

      Refers back to the claim of California being the worst with fires.

    10. “People have that experience of revictimization because there’s an adrenaline after the fire of, like, Okay, we’re going to get through this,” Ronit Rubinoff, the executive director of Legal Aid of Sonoma County, told me. “Then that adrenaline fades and people realize … Jesus, I am no closer to even just putting a stick in the ground.”

      My question is answered, it is the adrenaline that accounts for the period before the PTSD.

    11. These long-term challenges can even elicit PTSD symptoms in survivors who do not initially manifest them. A year after Hurricane Katrina, researchers found that more than 40 percent of survivors with PTSD had not developed symptoms until after the six-month anniversary.

      Symptoms can be delayed after a disaster. Maybe after a period of shock or processing of the events?

    12. After a wildfire, obstacles abound: the scramble for shelter, the competition for builders, the toil of the insurance process. Studies have shown that these ongoing personal, logistical, and financial difficulties often lead to depression. “Somebody goes through a trauma—if they’re going to then face a whole lot of continuing obstacles, then that maintains the stress,” says Joe Ruzek, a PTSD researcher at Stanford and Palo Alto Universities. “It becomes more difficult to put the trauma behind.”

      Just the loss of personal possessions takes a toll, but then having to deal with the rebuilding creates even more stress, depression, and pain.

    13. Even for fire survivors who have been spared the imminent danger and acute fear, the weight of the loss—of homes, of communities, of memories—can be enough to induce trauma.

      Another example of a group that was effected differently from the one above.

    14. After a wildfire, the particular nature of the resulting trauma depends on the particular experience of the affected survivor. For some, trauma derives from the panic of a narrow escape. Studies have repeatedly linked fear for one’s life with PTSD, which is part of the reason firefighting takes such a heavy psychological toll.

      Displays the difference in trauma from person to person with a supporting study.

    15. sychologists sometimes say that trauma gets burned into the mind, like the imprint of a branding iron, and in a way it does. In truth, though, trauma is not so much a scorch mark as a flame, flaring up and dying down, inconstant. It burns in the mind. And just as some materials burn more readily than others, so too do some minds.

      Uses the words, "burn", "flare", and "flame" to influence the relation of the usual traits of trauma to the fires.

    16. Ellie herself knows something of trauma: She has long suffered from PTSD and anxiety caused by physical and sexual abuse in her childhood, she told me; since the fire, her symptoms have worsened exponentially.

      Even with a history of mental health trauma, the fires have still caused worse symptomology that has begun hurting day to day life.

    17. Watson says, it will grow harder for survivors in vulnerable areas to maintain a sense of hope. And much of California is a vulnerable area.

      Again states that California is one of the worst fire areas and also relates the loss of hope of others to the disasters.

    18. layered atop an already many-layered mental-health crisis. And while the virus will subside with time, the fires will not. According to the most reliable predictions, they will only worsen in the coming years. A 2016 study published in the Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences concluded that as long as there remains fuel to burn, “anthropogenic climate change will continue to chronically enhance the potential for western U.S. forest fire activity.”

      Stating again that the fires are a mental-health crisis and they are something reoccurring that will not stop. A study is provided that exemplifies the never-ending disasters of fire and supports the claims.

    19. A number of the survivors I spoke with described feeling “haunted” and “disturbed” by subsequent fires. As irrational as they knew it was, they felt as though the fires were stalking them.

      A mental sign of paranoia. Relates to the feelings of PTSD and other mental effects from the fires.

    20. The trauma is sustained and amplified by a distinctive characteristic of California’s wildfires: They recur, often in quick succession.

      Another claim that relates to the opening statement.

    21. When a whole neighborhood or town feels these effects at the same time, the result is what one psychologist and fire survivor calls “community-wide trauma.”

      Article shows the effects the fires have mentally on the whole community as well as single people.

    22. Many survivors described feeling fragile and less capable of managing stress for years after a fire. Some recalled looking for incinerated possessions and breaking down when they realized they would never find them.

      Another piece of evidence that correlates specifically with the theme of the article that explains the effects and provides an example.

    23. According to Patricia Watson, a psychologist at the National Center for Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder, 10 to 30 percent of wildfire survivors develop diagnosable mental-health conditions, including PTSD and depression. Another 50 percent may suffer from serious subclinical effects that fade with time. Studies have found that substance abuse and domestic violence rise after natural disasters.

      Evidence that correlates with the theme of the article. States the usual responses and effects that happen mentally after fires.

    24. Americans have come to know these well.

      Ties in the first claim seeing as California has been burning, so that makes Americans very aware of what will come from fire aftermath.

    25. Even by California’s standards, though, recent years have been extraordinary. Nine of the 10 most destructive fires in the state’s recorded history have occurred in the 21st century—six of them in the past four years alone. In October 2017, the Tubbs Fire destroyed more than 5,600 buildings in Napa and Sonoma Counties, making it the state’s most destructive fire on record. About a year later, the Camp Fire supplanted it, razing the town of Paradise and killing 86 people. Just last fall, the Kincade Fire torched nearly 80,000 acres.

      Supporting evidence for the claim and another potential premise.

    26. Its record of fire begins underwater, at the bottom of forest-fringed lakes, where ancient blazes left their stories in charcoal deposits.

      A potential first premise that supports above claim.

    1. notably fundamental attribution error, whereby, when assessing someone’s behavior, we put too much weight on his or her personal attributes and too little on external factors, many of which can be measured with statistics.

      Most behaviors are a mix of both that I believe may be fairly even in weight. A specific external factor invokes a reaction and that reaction is usually personal. There are also social factors that play a role on how one reacts.

    2. Instead, it has been devoted to changing behavior, in the form of incentives or “nudges.”

      This reminds me of the psychological strategy of operant conditioning which changes behaviors. After the display of a certain behavior, there is a positive or negative consequence that enforces whether the behavior is good or bad.

    3. One of the most important ingredients is what Tetlock calls “the outside view.” The inside view is a product of fundamental attribution error, base-rate neglect, and other biases that are constantly cajoling us into resting our judgments and predictions on good or vivid stories instead of on data and statistics.

      Most of the ideas we are developing now can be a persuaded form of an inside view, rather than the development of an outside view based on evidence.

    1. The interface creates a feeling of simultaneity, and also of having to make choices in real time, that no book could reproduce.

      Making decisions is such a fun way to become even more involved in the story. It also gives a story a re-playable quality with endless possibilities which is something that a book doesn't have.

    2. It’s no coincidence that many of the best early digital narratives took the form of games, in which the reader traverses an imaginary world while solving puzzles, sometimes fiendishly difficult ones.

      I am a game lover and writing is an important integral part of creating the best games. From dialogue to characters with specific personality traits, writing in games creates a much more enjoyable experience.

    3. In Proust and the Squid, Wolf, director of the Center for Reading and Language Research at Tufts University, observes that the brain’s limbic system, the seat of our emotions, comes into play as we learn to read fluently; our feelings of pleasure, disgust, horror and excitement guide our attention to the stories we can’t put down.

      I find the correlation between our emotions and reading really interesting. I think it's fascinating that our emotions are what guide us to finding the reading materials we enjoy and that for every person it is a different preference and experience.

  3. Aug 2020
    1. It’s a compelling analogy: in both cases, the conscientiousness of the enlightened few is no match for the negligence of the many, and the cost of shirking duty is spread too widely to keep any one malefactor in line. Your commute by bicycle probably isn’t going to make the city’s air any cleaner, and even if you read up on candidates for civil-court judge on Patch.com, it may still be the crook who gets elected.

      I find this really interesting. The number of people who lack education on politics is very high. This is something not easily changeable, just as the author states that the attempt to minutely educate oneself may still result in the crook getting elected. My curiosity leads me to wonder how much knowledge is required for one to make the right decision. Elections are based around candidate marketing so who is to say that the person elected isn't just presenting us with a false appealing advertisement.

    2. Knowledge about politics, Brennan reports, is higher in people who have more education and higher income, live in the West, belong to the Republican Party, and are middle-aged; it’s lower among blacks and women.

      It doesn't seem coincidental that the statistics show results that favor such a defined group of people. What knowledge has failed to reach the people in lower income households, younger generations, and blacks and women?

    3. It could be that voters take a cognitive shortcut, letting broad-brush markers like party affiliation stand in for a close study of candidates’ qualifications and policy stances.

      I believe that this is something that happens a lot in politics especially between Republican and Democratic parties. People fight over the stance of a candidate purely based on the fact that they are affiliated with a specific party. Instead of weighing the options based on the candidates' purpose and credentials.