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  1. May 2021
    1. And feel and its clean smell have satisfied Both her and me. We have culled its cost and quality Down to the buttons of simulated bone,

      still talking about his shirt from the beginning of the poem

    2. Gossiping over tea and noodles on their break Or talking money or politics while one fitted This armpiece with its overseam to the band

      They are at work, maybe on a lunch break.

    1. She burns like oil on water.She burns like a cattail torchdipped in gasoline.She glows like the fat tipof a banker's cigar,      silent as quicksilver.A tiger under a rainbow   at nightfall.She burns like a shot glass of vodka.She burns like a field of poppiesat the edge of a rain forest.She rises like dragonsmoke    to my nostrils.She burns like a burning bushdriven by a godawful wind.

      Why does the author basically stop the poem and begin to give examples to end the poem.

    2. The cry I bring down from the hillsbelongs to a girl still burninginside my head. At daybreak

      Right away he is talking about a girl. So the rest of the poem should tell me who and what this girl means to him.

    1. The city never sleeps, full of villains and creepsThat's where I learned to do my hustle had to scuffle with freaks

      He is saying that there is always something happening and that he had to grind and be around weird people to be able to make it out the streets.

    2. Life is parallel to Hell but I must maintainAnd be prosperous, though we live dangerous, cops could justArrest me, blaming us, we're held like hostages

      He says that he is destined for hell but he wants to maintain a stable life. He then says that when copps arrest them they are being held hostage.

    3. Young girls are grazed, each block is like a mazeFull of black rats trapped, plus the Island is packed

      He says every block is like a maze, he means that he is always trying to find someone, and then he says that they are rats which means they snitch on people.

    4. I ain't the type of brother made for you to start testin'Give me a Smith & Wesson, I have negroes undressin'

      He says that he isnt the one to be tested and if he is he will kill if u hand him the gun.

    5. Be having dreams that I'm a gangsta; drinking Moets, holding TecsMaking sure the cash came correct, then I steppedInvestments in stocks, sewing up the blocks to sell drugsWinning gunfights with mega-cops

      He talks about how he dreams about killing major cops and selling drugs.

    6. And claim some corners, crews without guns are gonersIn broad daylight, stickup kids: they run up on us4-5's and gauges, Macs, in fact

      he says they post up in corners waiting, and that people without guns are dead.

    7. Lead was hitting negroes, one ran, I made him backflipHeard a few chicks scream, my arm shook, couldn't lookGave another squeeze, heard it click, "yo, my stuff is stuck"Try to cock it, it wouldn't shoot, now I'm in dangerFinally pulled it back and saw 3 bullets caught up in the chamberSo now I'm jetting to the building lobby

      He talks about shooting someone and seeing some girls scream, he talks about him trying to finish them off but his gun gets stuck and he cant cock it. Then he goes on to say that now he is in danger so he goes for a lobby.

    8. G-packs get off quick, forever negroes talk stuffReminiscing about the last time the Task Force flippedNegroes be running through the block shootin'

      He talks about his weed running out fast and that the opps came to the house and did a search but they ran down the street shooting.

    9. 'm like Scarface smelling amphetaminesHolding an M-16, see with the pen I'm extreme,

      He says M16 which is a gun so i think he is saying that he is very extreme with hi gun at all time.

    1. while the power-forward explodes past them    in a fury, taking the ball into the air by himself now and laying it gently    against the glass for a lay-up, but losing his balance in the process,    inexplicably falling, hitting the floor with a wild, headlong motion for the game he loved like a country and swiveling back to see an orange blur    floating perfectly through the net.

      They finally got the ball all the way down the court and their power-forward goes in for the layup but he looses his balance and hits the floor, but the author explains that he looked up to only see the ball fall through the net.

    2. both forwards racing down the court the way that forwards should, fanning out and filling the lanes in tandem, moving    together as brothers passing the ball

      It seems they are about to score on the fast break.

    3. an underhand pass toward the other guard    scissoring past a flat-footed defender who looks stunned and nailed to the floor    in the wrong direction, trying to catch sight

      What the author is describing is a fast break, and the author also says that the defender is flat-footed, "Who looks stunned and nailed to the floor".

    4. and for once our gangly starting center    boxes out his man and times his jump

      When the author says "and for once" it makes me think that the center doesn't normally get the rebounds for his team.

    5. A hook shot kisses the rim and hangs there, helplessly, but doesn’t drop,

      Being a sports guy, in the first stanza i can already infer that this author is talking about basketball.

    1. or any know I know the ArtI mention ‑ easy ‑ Here ‑Nor any Placard boast me ‑Itʹs full as Opera ‑

      For these last couple of lines it almost seems as if she wants us to know that what she does on a day day to basis is not easy nor peacful.

    2. o Ringlet, to my Hair,Nor hopped for Audiences ‑ like Birds ‑One Claw opon the air

      To me these lines seem to start a chain or almost a list that explains what she hasn't done or of what she doesn't do.

    3. I cannot dance opon my Toes ‑No Man instructed me ‑But oftentimes, among my mind,A Glee possesseth me

      When i read this it seems to me that she is an independent women and can do things on her own. I think this because it says, "No Man instructed me". To me this is saying that yea i did this on my own without any man teaching me.