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  1. Sep 2024
    1. I also liked it that I had my own room, since in the trailer I shared one with my brother and my sister

      This reminds me of my friends place, he used to share a room with his brothers but now he doesnt and now has a room to himself.

    2. As they left, I heard him telling her that it was very serious

      I think this could be a little more detailed. We know its serious, but why.

    3. blaze of heat on my right side. I turned to see where it was coming from and realized my dress was on fire.

      what caused the fire if the hot-dogs were boiling.

    4. uju, our black mutt, was watching me. I stabbed one of the hot dogs with a fork and bent over and offered it to him.

      I can envision this in my head. A dog under a table waiting for food and a little girl giving it to the dog.

    5. explained what had happened and asked if we could please have a ride to the hospital

      The story seems to also be rushed like the situation so I think thats why we dont fully know what caused the fire.

    6. wearing a pink dress my grandmother had bought for me. Pink was my favorite color. The dress's skirt stuck out like a tutu, and I liked to spin around in front of the mirror, thinking I looked like a ballerina

      So I´m predicting that she does ballerina.