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Cultural Insight Website. (n.d.). Guinean culture and traditions. Retrieved fromwww.culturalinsight.com.
The "Guinean culture and traditions" must be italicized for proper APA format referencing.
To correct: Cultural Insight Website. (n.d). Guinean culture and traditions. Retrieved from www.culturalinsight.com.
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Manyvillagers believed that abandoning these rituals would anger their ancestors and cause harm totheir families (WHO, 2015)
This is an incorrect information since under the "Factors that contributed to undetected spread", it did not state this information given. Additionally, the given information was unrelated from the reference/citation given.
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Despite international health campaignsdiscouraging the practice, most rural communities refused to give up this dietary habit (Jones,2015)
Citation lacks page and paragraph number/numbers and should put a "space" after comma of the word "Jones".
To correct: Put comma after the word "Jones", page and paragraph number/numbers to specify citations well.
Example: (Jones, 2015, p. 22) or (Jones, 2015, para. 4)
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Another factor was the Guinean reliance on spiritual healers, who use unscientific methodssuch as herbs, chants, and incantations
This is a bias statement since the word "unscientific" signifies that spiritual healers are incompetent in treating diseases. It is a discouraging term that would define an inefficient role in healing.
To correct: We could state it as "One significant component to the spread of disease was the dependability on spiritual practitioners wherein methodologies rely on utilizing medicinal plants and mantras which resulted to an opposition to modern medical procedures."
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