79 Matching Annotations
  1. Dec 2018
    1. The Mets have no money to waste. This is new. The market for baseball players, like the market for stocks and bonds

      Lewis intentionally compares the players to inanimate objects to dehumanize the players into mere commodities.

    2. 'Watching Billy do a deal,'' said his best friend, the Toronto Blue Jays' G.M., J.P. Ricciardi, ''is like watching the wolf talk to Little Red Riding Hood.''

      The simile gives the sense that Billy is not only more physically imposing than the other GMS, but cunning and crafty; furthermore, the other GMs are characterized as feminine and easily dominated by the lupine Beane.

    3. He has ceased to be the fire drill instructor and become the personal trainer. You can do it, Steve! You can win!

      Lewis connects all of his metaphors together to show the different angles that Beane uses during his conversation with Phillips.

    4. Beane says, generously, as if acquiring Venafro had been Phillips's idea.

      This interaction shows the confidence that Beane exudes as general manager.

    5. That he had developed neither discipline nor composure. That he had never learned to lay off a bad pitch. That he was easily fooled. That, fooled so often, he came to expect that he would be fooled. That he hit with fear. That his fear masqueraded as aggression. That the aggression enabled him to exit the batter's box as quickly as possible.

      Lewis uses both anaphora and anadiplosis in the same passage to imply the fact that all the events were connected and they all led to his demise. Furthermore, the use of "enabled" with his exiting the batter's box is oxymoron.

    6. His second full season, in the Double A Texas League, he played alongside Darryl Strawberry and hit .220; Strawberry was named the league's most valuable player.

      By putting the two statements right beside each other, he creates an immediate dichotomy that further emphasizes Billy's failure.

    7. ''the Good Face.'' Beane had the Good Face.

      The epanalepsis of "Good Face" places it in prominent locations in both of the sentences so as to make the point stick in the audience's conscious.

    8. Otherwise, his approach to the market for baseball players was by its nature unsystematic. Unsystematic -- and yet incredibly effective.

      Lewis uses the anadiplosis to create the dichotomy between the "appearance and reality."

    9. Not everyone believes that he knows everything about the personal computer. But everyone who ever picked up a bat thinks he knows baseball.

      The antithesis used by Lewis exemplifies how proud the baseball community by contrasting them with the IT community.

    10. The bad teams lost hope. With the loss of hope came a desire to cut costs. With the desire to cut costs came the dumping of players. As the supply of players rose, their prices fell.

      Lewis uses anadiplosis to explain his reasoning as to why the A's play so well after the All-Star break with the continuation seeming like a flowing thought.

    11. abstruse statistical arguments

      Along with the following use of "abstruse statistical arguments" two lines down, Lewis uses anaphora to create the explicit comparison between these new statisticians in Morris and the seasoned saber-metricians such as DePodesta.

    12. Harvard statistics professors, research scientists, Wall Street analysts turned amateur baseball analysts

      Lewis uses asyndeton to give the effect of the list's smaller size.

    13. he is finding other teams reluctant to do business with him. The Cleveland Indians are not yet one of those teams.

      Lewis shows that the savvy of the A's has alienated them from the other front offices as the "obscene amount of talent" they've gotten has come at the expense of the player's former team.

    14. an article about a Harvard professor of statistics named Carl Morris. The article explains how Morris had used statistical theory to determine the number of runs a team could expect to score in the different states of a baseball game.

      Lewis uses this example to show how advanced the Oakland A's were in their consistent use of saber-metrics, thus creating separation in the ideology of the organization and the rest of the MLB that in some regard alienated them.

    15. Jermaine Dye, Johnny Damon, Ray Durham, Mark Ellis, Cory Lidle, Chad Bradford

      Lewis uses asyndeton to emphasize the talent that he has received through his inventive methods.

    16. he knows every player on other teams that he wants, and every player in his own system that he doesn't want.

      Lewis uses the antithesis to further his theme of alienation throughout the novel.

    17. The A's had the weakest left-handed relief pitching in the league, and the Indians had some of the strongest.

      Lewis creates the dichotomy between the two relief pitchers to exemplify how poor Magnante was at 37 years old.

  2. Oct 2018
    1. After each dunk in the cold water

      Solomon uses dunk instead of splash or something of the like to take the inherent triviality of jumping into the water out. Dunk sounds more athletic, and Spitfire is, as Solomon puts it, "One of the World's Great Athletes."

    2. patrician snout

      By referring to the dog's snout as aristocratic, Solomon paints the picture that Spitfire is among dock-diving royalty, not just a normal, everyday competitor.

    3. The athlete wandered up and gave a perfunctory sniff of hello to a stranger

      Solomon begins to call Spitfire the athlete to change the perspective of the reader to the dog as more of a competitor than a domesticated pet.

    4. booming emcees often lured from monster-truck shows.

      Solomon uses lured to draw back to the idea of the lure that the dogs are made to jump towards.

    5. The champ was looking around for any competitors

      Solomon uses champ instead of dog to convey a sense of competitiveness, a feeling that dog would not express.

    6. If Cochiti leaped from the 10-yard line of the Superdome, the dog could score a touchdown.

      Instead of leaving the reader with a vague description of 31 feet, Solomon uses clear context to make the distance less abstract.

    7. It is a truth universally acknowledged that no pleasure is so cheaply bought, and so unmarred by complexity, as the simple joy of seeing a dog hurl itself into a pond in pursuit of a slobbery stick.

      Solomon uses a complex sentence filled with different modifiers to contrast with his simple statement of the joy derived from seeing dogs jump into the water.

    8. LeBron James teases above his head

      By using someone the general public would know is tall, Solomon gives a more concrete reference than a mere use of "7 feet" would.

    9. Spitty will run down a dock and jump the length of a 1979 Lincoln Continental Mark V

      If one does not know of the sheer length of this car, the concrete description will not stick, but for his audience who either already know or who are more curious to check will be amused by the reference.

    10. not one of those uppity dogs that stands stock-still on a block at Kennel Club competitions as judges eye the line of his stiffle. Nor does he bound into the snow to unearth victims from the rubble of avalanches

      Instead of saying exactly what Spitfire does, Solomon builds up to what Spitfire does by creating a spectrum and purposefully placing Spitfire in it.

    11. who answers to the name of Spitfire

      The dog has been trained to even respond to his name, opposed to untrained dogs who need incessant calls from their owner to even sit. Solomon uses this phrase to further distinguish this dog from other, normal dogs.

  3. Sep 2018
    1. his crazy Taliban beard crawling up his face to meet his low-tugged camo hat

      The language of this sentence is all that of martial type starting with the comparison of his scraggly, long, black-and-white beard with that of the Taliban and the personification of the beard as "crawling" up to refer back to his mountainous roots, a place which forces one to be able to survive anywhere as military forces must be able to.

    2. A-ha! So the foot came from Canada! I mean, it had to. Right?

      The rhetorical question plays with the audience's desire for a breakthrough in the case by posing the certainty that there was a connection but suddenly retracting it.

    3. You find out that young men are vanishing like cigarette smoke.

      Using cigarette smoke instead of mist refers back to how these people are addicts, and one of the common addictions is to smoking (i.e., cigarettes).

    4. Context. Perspective. A frame, to show how the puzzle pieces fit together.

      The puzzle pieces is a metaphor that refers back to Solomon's description of people as needing order, just as completing a puzzle does.

    5. another righty! Another runner! Another size 12!

      The anaphora that Solomon uses is a reference of how humans crave order, and the anaphora creates an explicit sense of order that is very pleasing to the reader.

    6. And so, as I head for the water-licked fringes of Greater Vancouver, the mystery is still as open-ended as a drinking straw.

      Starting with the personification of the sea that "licks" Great Vancouver, Solomon continues with the water-related descriptions with his "drinking straw" simile to refer back to where these macabre pieces of evidence were first found.

    7. pictures of empty shoes set against rulers, like grim flash cards

      Solomon likens the pictures to flash cards as they are both studied intensively, flashcards for a test, and the pictures to recreate a crime scene. He uses grim to not accidentally bring levity to the mysterious deaths.

    8. out plops the Start of Everything

      The metonymy of replacing case with start of everything gives a better sense of how unresolved and peculiar the case is. If he had used case, the audience might jump to the conclusion that the story had been open-and-shut.

    9. the day is moody with drizzle, the cedars dark and foreboding above the pretty curl of cove

      By saying the day is moody, Solomon personifies the day to show a clearer contrast between the normal weather of Jedediah Island and this peculiar day. Also, the personification foreshadows the macabre findings of the girl later that day.

    1. Wielgus’s comments to the newspaper were a grenade tossed into a tomato patch

      Solomon's metaphor shows not only the immediate impact of what Wielgus's comments portrayed, but also the shower of backlash that would come to anyone near to or connected with the comments, therefore prompting any of his powerful supporters to stop supporting him.

    2. the finding was explosive

      Again, Solomon refers to the charged world of politics and how this finding shook the already primed field up, foreshadowing Wielgus's exile from this field.

    3. Mist snagged on the peaks.

      The mist looks like it is caught on the jagged edges of the mountain as they all crowd around the peaks, as if the mist were moving and were forcefully stuck in place haphazardly.

    4. land dressed for autumn

      The personification of the land as dressed refers to the falling leaves of reddish color that make it look like the land put on a shirt of the aforementioned color.

    5. charged world of wolf politics

      Solomon goes back to the metaphor of the the lit match in a powder keg with charged, referring to how dangerous it is to challenge so outspokenly the world of wolves.

    6. Tracking both predator and prey would help provide answers. Fewer dead cows would mean fewer wolves hunted down. And that could mean peace among the humans

      Solomon uses the word humans instead of people to make them sound more like animals than people, an animation that the author employs masterfully.

    7. deeply red

      The metonymy that Solomon uses not only refers to the Republicans who want to remove the wolves but to the red of blood presumably coming from the dead wolves.

    8. powder keg, the last thing you want to be is a struck match.

      Solomon uses this extended metaphor to show explosive the debate that Wielgus was having with, as the author puts it, "powerful forces." By using this metaphor, Solomon shows how quickly Wielgus's life was changed by his study of wolves, akin to Solomon's figurative device.

    9. a winter that would slump down from Canada any day

      Slumping down is an action that one does when they are gloomy, so the personification of the winter as slumping down not only refers to America's being due south of Canada, but also that the day is downcast.

    10. A Camel smolders in his face like a fuse

      Not only does Solomon use the sibilance in smolder to remind one of the crackling sound of something burning, but he also uses the simile of a fuse because they both burn out quickly as opposed to a campfire or something of the like.

    11. the stringy hairs of a goatee dangling like lichen from his lower lip.

      Solomon uses lichen because they look out of order and unkempt, a picture that he wants the audience to envision when they think about Wielglus's goatee.

    1. Every few casts, I swivel around to make sure my fly hasn’t foul-hooked the ten-footer. Some people prefer meditation to make them feel present; for me, nothing focuses the mind quite like knowing I’m a potential crudité.

      The f-sounds remind one of the sound air makes when one makes a sudden movement, such as turning around. Therefore, the abundance helps to create an acoustic as well as a visual picture. The last sentence goes into the mind of the author as he doesn't need to push things out the become focused, he does exactly the opposite and internalizes everything around him, becoming hyper-aware.

    2. We hoof across otherworldly plains of dust staged with small rocks, where I’m pretty sure NASA faked the Mars rover landing.

      This is the same extended metaphor of the ethereality of the place.

    3. After the 1931 eruption, the Glacier Priest had damned Aniakchak as the pit of Hades.

      The author continues the extended metaphor about the supernatural nature of the crater, looking back to cite further examples.

    4. A “bewitched stadium” is how Hubbard described the crater the first time he stepped inside.

      The author uses the quotation from Hubbard to continue his description of the area leading up to and encompassed by the crater as ethereal.

    5. There is no wind, no birdsong, as if even sound itself has abandoned us

      Again, the author gives a sense of how disconnected the group is from civilization with the simile making it seem as if the group was so far away from anything that sound did not even venture that far away from life.

    6. After our group left Jimmy yesterday afternoon, we squished southward for seven miles across tundra and through low grasses that felt like someone’s overwatered lawn.

      The visual imagery coupled with the onomatopoeia paints a clearer picture for the audience.

    7. Father Bernard Hubbard was a Jack London character sprung to life—

      The allusion to the naturalistic writer Jack London makes the reader think of a hard-working, unassuming person.

    8. one thousand pounds of charging meat

      The metonymy that Solomon employs is just used to give a better sense of how huge and intimidating a bear is as the word itself would not convey.

    9. Feeding Pepe ammo

      Solomon continues the extended metaphor of personifying the gun to show how important it is to the survival of the group just as another person would have been.

    10. .44 Magnum. Dirty Harry’s gun

      Solomon uses a simple allusion to give a flailing reader a picture of what the fourth member is as it is a gun and not a person as Solomon had personified the "fourth member of our group" as.

    11. “What kind of gun you got?” Jimmy asks.

      Instead of continuing the description of how rough the area they are going is, Jimmy's quotation exemplifies how much one is really left to fend for themselves out there.

    12. man-eating vegetables, alder jungles that swallow bushwhackers

      The hyperboles help to show the seeming enormity of the plants and the obstacles they propose.

    13. learned to follow my cell phone like a reverse Geiger counter: the poorer the coverage, the more enticing the destination.

      Solomon uses an interesting simile by using a reversed-out image instead of using a direct simile to emphasize his desires to go where people are not seen, to take the road not traveled.

    14. whom live in just a few villages that sit uneasily on the map, as if nature might evict them at any time.

      The simile gives a better sense as to the scattered and sparse nature of the villages as one who is in danger of being evicted doesn't stay in an obvious place, but tries to avoid being noticed by said landlord (in this case, nature).

    15. gentle Tony Soprano of Port Heiden

      Tony Soprano is an obvious allusion to the revered Sopranos movies. However, as Tony Soprano is a mobster, the need for "gentle" is needed to give the correct sense to which Jimmy runs the town: not as a corrupt gangster, but a compassionate leader.

    16. ample gray acreage of his sweatshirt

      The description of Jimmy's sweatshirt with "ample gray acreage" is used to intensify the visual imagery of a small agrarian town such as Port Heiden.

    17. “You’re goin’ up there today?” Jimmy asks from behind the counter, in what passes for a formal greeting.

      Solomon uses diction to give the reader in the story a sense of how connected the community is owing to its small population; conversely, Solomon could have just put the fact that the two greeted each other, but the same effect would not be achieved.