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  1. Nov 2023
    1. THE HABIT OF REACTING

      we can also pay attention to how we react to the world, we can sometimes focus too much on what other people think. it can be really easy to just think how we personally respond and just write what we would do.

    2. one of the ways that we can overcome writing anxiety is by always looking to the word around us. that way we dont have to come up with the information we can just recall what we have already seen.

  2. Oct 2023
    1. More specifically, this study analyzed the causal relationship among international students' team identification, sense of community, and social capital.

      this sentence is very similar to what a topic sentence which i think is a really good way to connect the whole paper together.

    1. For instance, athletes should become involved in programs that consist of 15 class periods (about 45 min each) during the competitive season. These interventions should continue for two additional years.

      somethinhg interesting in this conlusion is that they were still arguing their point until the very last sentence, which i think is a unique way to conclude but effective.

    1. Future research could help determine if these distinctions are important.

      this is another example of the authors saying that futures reaserch could help build even more information on this topic.

    1. Such empirical evidence provides a snapshot of how practice in youth team sports in Portugal is currently developing and allowed us to compare these practical approaches with contemporary scientific and theoretical insights.

      Same as some of the other conclusions that they restated their main ideas as well as they had some numbers and showed the samples that they used which just made their information that more credible.

    1. As a conclusion main study, it has been determined that the motivations for make money, socialization, and being in the game carry the risks that can lead to sports betting addiction, and that individuals may be adversely affected by this situation as a result of the fact that these motivation elements lead the behavior in a frequent and repeated manner.

      This si a more basic yet good conclusion just making sure to restate the main big point to help connect the readers minds back to all the information that they have already read.

    1. Before Brooklyn: The Unsung Heroes Who Helped Break Baseball's Color Barrier is a must read for baseball fans, historians, and anyone who cares about integration in the US. This meticulously researched book will open everyone's eyes to the "evolution" of what has become the MLB Association today. Robinson has certainly earned the recognition and respect he deserves. However, the story before Robinson-"before Brooklyn," if you will-is full of intrigue, politics, and race relations that still confront us today. Reinstein poetically combines all the elements of a historical narrative into a story that flows smoothly and is historically rich. Before Brooklyn provides a long-neglected preface to the story of baseball's color barrier fans only thought they knew.

      I love this paragraph! some cool things that i liked out of this paragraph is the fact that they used simialr prhases to earlier in the paper, which like i sadi really connect everything. I also love that they have a baby cliff hanger that they threw in at thr end it makes it gives a sense of imagination.

    1. Therefore, study can be performed along both the same lines as seen in this paper and the lines as done by others to see if this is plausible.

      i like this idea too that you could give a suggestion to continue study which i can see helping the reader thing more deeply on the topic.

    1. If we expect these gladiators to continue to play, structural shifts must occur so that their humanity is prioritized over their actions on the field.

      once again this is the main argument that the author is really trying to get across which i think is one of the big things that you should do in a conclusion.

    1. Therefore, particular attention should be given to kinesiophobia during running and barbell squat training, especially in young athletes.

      I think this is similar to other conclusions that i have seen, they say the main big point of their whole essay. I feel like that is one of the best ways to connect and wrap us your essay is to restate your biggest point that you just spent the whole paper trying to show.

    1. Based on our study, it may be necessary to increase flexibility of the brachialis and brachioradialis by stretching and massaging in addition to evaluating the mass distal to the elbow and the elbow flexor muscle size of the distal upper arm for the management of elbow injuries in youth baseball players.

      I like this as well because putting your main point back into your conclusion will really get your point across!

    2. It was found that youth baseball

      I feel like this a good phrase to use, because its used so often in the rest of the paper that it just continues to connect the conclusion back to the rest of the paper.