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  1. Feb 2021
    1. Top Ten Coral - Easier to More Challenging 

      Similar to my Equipment comment, maybe you can add another page to your website to break these topics or items up?

    2. EquipmentA complex aquarium can require quite a bit of equipment. For a basic setup, you will need an aquarium tank. Common tank sizes are between 20 to 200 gallons. You will need proper lights, depending on the type of coral you are housing, pumps and filters, a heater, and various testing equipment. 

      Is there a way you can break this out and make a separate page for it so you can focus your homepage on your topic/title and show a couple pictures?

  2. esoccercommunity.weebly.com esoccercommunity.weebly.com
    1. Well, I belong to a community of soccer. Soccer values friendship, having a positive attitude and sportsmanship. These values are important because you have to learn how to win and loose and you have to be a good friend to your teammates. You also have to have a positive attitude even if you don’t play that much you have to support your team.  As you go through this website you will find more information about the soccer community. Learning about the soccer community is important because soccer will teach you very important things that you can use as motivation such as to never give up and that age is just a number and many other things. In this website you will learn more about the soccer discourse community. 

      I enjoyed this piece you mentioned here and it gives the reader good information but see if there is away you can shorten it here or if you don't want to shorten it, maybe you can break it up a bit?

    2. THE BEUTIFUL GAME                                                                                                          Emmanuel

      I would suggest to take out your name on the home page, make sure you use spellcheck on all pages and maybe make your headline or title of your topic lower on the darker screen when it is easier to read. Maybe try to find a better picture with a better resolution and if there is a way to make it softer?

  3. Jan 2021
    1. Your goal is to articulate the ways of speaking and knowing that goes on in these discourse communities to a general public who may be unfamiliar with this discourse community,

      As intimidating as this project sounds to me, I am interested in learning more about this project as well as others likes and interests within this project. Its always a plus when it involves something within our community that we didn't know about! Will we be able to do a "test" session with a classmate if needed?

    2. Revision and Reflection Assignment

      Will this be a group or partner assignment or is this an individual assignment? It sounds like an individual assignment but wanted to confirm.

    3. College Writing prepares you for the scholarly work that will be expected of you in your college career

      Writing is such an important foundation to have in school but having been out of school for 10+ years now, I have come to learn how important it is in my career as well. I'm curious to know what will help me in starting my college education, as well as what I will learn that will help me in my job?