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The mass of the liquid was calculated by subtracƟng the iniƟal mass of the beaker fromthe final mass of the beaker and liquid. The volume of the liquid was 10.00 mL, as it is aconstant. The density was determined using equaƟon 1.
This should be passive voice.
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To measure
This makes it sound like a list of specific steps.
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approximately 11 mL with wate
You shouldn't be less specific. You should say something like, "The graduated cylinder was filled half way."
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online.clackamas.edu online.clackamas.edu
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Then using the density equation d=m/v where d= density, v=volume and m=mass
these equations should be formatted rather than just written in regular text.
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Using a balance, place weigh paper on it and zero the scale. Using that measure a metalrod and record measurement. Then take a 25 mL graduated cylinder and fill about half withwater then record the exact volume
These sentences are not all complete sentences and not in passive tense.
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