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  1. Feb 2023
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    1. More importantly, the two approaches to immigration might not be in such dramatic conflict as the authors would have us believe. A policy that expands legal immigration to families in desperate need, for instance, while still cracking down on illegal immigration could potentially satisfy both sides of the argument. This is the problem with many partisan issues today. While we spill ink proving the other wrong, we miss opportunities to find common ground on which to build

      There is always room for a common ground.

    1. More help and better immigration laws should be in place.

    2. While illegal immigrants crossing the border to the United States may come from desperate circumstances, it is unjust, impractical, and unrealistic for one nation to solve the problems of so many non-citizens.

      Not everyone problems can be solved but to those that we can we should.

    1. However, the Reverend Jesse Jackson also had some success in calling for a more neutral term, "African American," in the late eighties.  He thought it more appropriate to emphasize a shared ethnic heritage over color.

      Its more appropriate the term African American shows respect and curtesy.

    2. e outlines similar disagreements over word-choice and racial labels by scholars and activists like Fannie Barrier Williams and W.E.B. Du Bois surrounding now-antiquated terms like “Negro” and “colored.” These leaders debated whether labels with negative connotations should be replaced, or embraced and given a new, positive connotation.

      I consider these terms to be demeaning and degrading.

    3. Some people capitalize Black to call forth a lot of attention or commotion to this topic in a negative way.

    4. He suggests that the balance is now tipping in favor of "Black," but given past changes, usage will probably change again as the rich discussion about naming, identity, and power continues.

      You capitalize your the first letter. You should capitalize Black being as though it can at times be demeaning or less than someone or something.

    5. Are words like “black” or “white” mere adjectives, descriptors of skin color? Or are they proper nouns, indicative of group or ethnic identity?

      The first letter of your ethnicity should be capitalized it's a part of who we are as humans.

    1. Mentioning this proves that not only coronavirus but also other outbreaks can be a disaster for feminism. Pandemics, in other words, pile yet another problem on women who always face an uphill battle against patriarchal structures.

      Women faces these challenges from alpha males.

    2. ewis argues that the crisis affects women more than men because women are more likely to assume housework and childcare responsibilities while men are expected to work and “bring home the bacon.”

      I totally agree when the pandemic happen it showed the reality of people lives. Men feel they don't have to help with the kids because they make all the money or more money than women do.

    1. In the case of the border argument, the writer responds to the counterargument about security by clarifying that she does not advocate completely open borders. The sample summary already refers to this when it describes her desire to “regulate” those borders. In addition, when the summary paraphrases her claims and reasons, it uses the phrases “desperate” and “in a desperate position” to show how she limits the focus to migrants who are fleeing an awful situation.

      I agree showing both sides of the matter at hand, better arrangements should be made.

    1. In her 2019 article “Wouldn’t We All Cross the Border?”, Anna Mills urges us to seek a new border policy that helps desperate undocumented migrants rather than criminalizing them. She calls for a shift toward respect and empathy, questioning the very idea that crossing illegally is wrong. She argues that any parent in a desperate position would consider it right to cross for their child’s sake; therefore, no person should condemn that action in another. Since we cannot justify our current walls and detention centers, we must get rid of them.

      I agree if this was me in this position I would do the same. It doesn't prove to be reasonable to put them in detention center and walls. They are desperate and this is a way for them to cry out for help.

    1. In her 2019 article “Wouldn’t We All Cross the Border?”, Anna Mills urges us to seek a new border policy that helps desperate undocumented migrants rather than criminalizing them. She calls for a shift away from blame toward respect and empathy, questioning the very idea that crossing illegally is wrong.

      The author asks us how is criminalizing migrants making it better when they need help.

    2. The main point should be noticeable. A five star rating is outstanding. A 4 star rating is still really good but it something might need to be changed.

    3. If the argument’s main purpose is to describe reality in some way, we will want to let readers know if it is controversial or not. Is the writer defending their idea against obvious objections or counterarguments, or are they aiming to inform us about something we may not be aware of?

      The author is letting you decide whether their argument is debatable or not. What is the author telling you do you agree or disagree, you might even see both viewpoints.

    4. The author sets the tone and help us to visualize the bigger picture that they are trying to portray.

    5. In an article for _____________, writer _____________... The account of _____________ in the piece _____________ by _____________... Writing in the journal _____________, the scholar _____________ ...

      The author is stating their main claim.

    1. As we choose words to paraphrase a writer’s points, we will want to reread the text to see how strongly the writer suggests something or what attitude they take toward a counterargument.

      Which direction is the author going in. What point are they trying to make

    2. They will point to the role each claim plays in the overall argument. In the summary, instead of annotations, colors, arrows, and labels like “claim” and “reason,” we will use strategic phrases to show how the parts fit together.

      show great supporting evidence and how it got to the climax

    1. We can go through our annotations to look at the other claims and see how some may be used as reasons for the main claim or as reasons for one of the reasons.

      Supporting evidence and facts can help prove your case.

    1. The main claim of this article is to bring more situational awareness to the readers. We know what they are doing in most cases is so that their children & grandchildren can have a more prosperous life. They are desperate why hinder them from knowing where they can find help. Having empathy can go a long way just understanding the motive behind them crossing the boards. It's not easy what migrants have to do just by risking their lives to find freedom. If you were in their position, you what do what needs to be done for your family. Migrants shouldn't be just thrown to a detention center or behind a wall, that doesn't really solve anything just leads for more problems and chaos.

    2. The phrase "empathy, respect, and offers of help" sounds important, but we should note that the rest of the argument isn’t about how to help migrants. However, the idea that we should respond more positively to migrants has recurred throughout. The idea that migrants are not in the wrong--that they are not criminals--is clearly key, and so is the idea that we should change border policy accordingly.

      He never said just leave the borders open freely but it should be a better way to handle these types of situations even though it hasn't been figured out.

    3. We must recognize this crossing as an ethical, reasonable act.”

      If it was you in this position, you would do the same thing they did to help better your family.

    4. But is this the main claim? When we review the other sections, we find several other claims of policy. Introductions set expectations, and here, the first paragraph alludes to public debates on immigration policy. It suggests that it may not be right to stop people from coming into America, and it may not be wrong to cross the border, even illegally.

      I agree depending on the circumstances they should be offered help instead of being in a detention center.

    1. Practice Excercise 2.2 Claim of policy: U.S. leans toward providing Abrams tanks for Ukraine

      Claims of Fact: At least 39 mass shootings have unfolded across the U.S.

      Claims of Value: Social media Users decided that they prefer tiktok over twitter.

    2. proving why something is better or worse can help an argument

    3. showing your view on things good or bad.

    4. Claims of facts is lead to an explanation or supporting evidence.

    5. Advising reading on what they should do.

    1. hen we must recognize this crossing as an ethical, reasonable act. If it is ethical and reasonable, then how can either a wall or a detention center be on the side of justice?

      I feel as though this actually makes the problem worse..

    2. I feel profoundly uncomfortable with the idea of keeping people out who are desperate to come in. Is illegal immigration actually wrong? Is it unethical to cross a border without permission?

      I agree!! It has to be better ways to help them. They shouldn't be criminalized or penalized for being desperate for help.