Theodora struggles with on her first day of work.
maybe add a sentence or two tying it to autism specifically?
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The gross grey backgro
i would recommend adding one more sentence before this about how this impacts the reader's emotions
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video included meets media requirement
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The user begins to understand Theodora’s helplessness, how she can’t fight and save herself, how she can’t speak up and save herself.
good analysis
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tries to push her molester, Janice, away
i would explain the situation a bit more before this, this kind of came out of nowhere
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this stage
what stage of the game is this? beginning? middle? end?
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https://2188.play.ifcomp.org/content/index.html
make this link clickable
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Contents 1 2020-11-11T13:12:21-08:00 Deepti Naruka 7432c71d59b4231adeb03662add4fb1127a91561 A Lack of User Control 2 plain 2020-11-11T13:15:51-08:00 Deepti Naruka 7432c71d59b4231adeb03662add4fb1127a91561 1 2020-11-11T13:14:35-08:00 Deepti Naruka 7432c71d59b4231adeb03662add4fb1127a91561 The Changing Colors 4 plain 2020-11-12T09:51:33-08:00 Deepti Naruka 7432c71d59b4231adeb03662add4fb1127a91561 1 2020-11-11T13:17:40-08:00 Deepti Naruka 7432c71d59b4231adeb03662add4fb1127a91561 The Syntax
Path is clearly laid out and easy to follow
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However, once Theodora’s experiences start to become more uncomfortable and unpleasant, the user’s ability to make choices decreases.
I like this explanation, it very concisely conveys so much of the work in one sentence
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who suffer from autism may feel in many social situations
this is an important thing to empathize with
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The player eventually loses the majority of control in the game
It's interesting how both our works have this same theme of a loss of control
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