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  1. Mar 2020
    1. Now there are many other roles that i left out so basically a steel band can be really really big.

      why leave them left out? are they not that important for the readers to know about?

    1. My father recently went blind after an accident in his job caused him his blindness. We tried fighting for workers compensation for my father but never got it. Now my father is left blind because of his job and the company he worked for isn’t helping at all for him. After the many years he worked for that construction company, they still wouldn’t help him financially. My    the father is relieved to hear that his son won’t have to deal with the same problems as he did because my brother is a part of the union.

      very emotional and touching conclusions. As a reader I understand why a labor union was your choice to write about

    2.   There are many different forms of writing genres used in labor unions. These writings include letters, paychecks, and applications. When somebody decides to join the union they are most likely required to join an apprenticeship program and have to fill out an application first. Applications are commonly known everywhere. You fill out your information and the information gets processed to the employer. Unions use these applications to see which candidate is the right one to be a part of their community. After filling out applications, acceptance letters are to come next. These letters usually address whether or not the candidate was accepted or rejected from the employer. These letters can hinder the application process. The application process can take from months to even a year to be processed. This process then delays the acceptance letters.  After working with the union for some time, the employees receive their checks. These checks hold the payment from the employer for the employee after working the amount of hours they did. These checks don’t usually hinder any problem within the union. 

      good example and details explaining the different genres of a labor union

    3. . A discourse community is a group of people who work towards a similar goal in life. In the wikipedia entry of discourse communities, it shows the “Fitness Discourse Community Map”(Wiki).

      Using the wikipedia article to connect labor unions as a DC nice!

    4. The history of Labor Unions was chaotic. From mafia gangs to unjust working conditions leading to riots. Labor Unions went through a rigorous time to get to where it is at today. Labor Unions is an organized group of workers who fight for justice not only economically but socially.

      Great opening! good definition of what your DC is.

    1. They most of the time listen to their viewers and help them with many advices and tutorials to improve.

      good essay, full of information. what's missing is the conclusion/ending

    2. Video games have been a huge part of my life. They have taken me through hard times in many occasions. Since I have played many video games for a long time it is easier for me to adapt to new games so I enjoy them a lot and one of the things that I learned is that being smart and knowing what to say at the right time can get you many wins. If you are able to make your opponent angry that can force them to make mistakes. Mistakes that you can take advantage from. However, some player play better under pressure so you have to be wise and know that it won’t always work. Also I have come across pretty toxic players in my time. Players that no matter how hard you try to contribute to the team, they will blame you for every team mistake and even for their mistakes. That makes you play worst and just think of giving up.

      good paragraph

    3. matchmaking is a method used by developers to peer up or find opponents for any player when they are playing online

      great job explaining because some reader would have been confused if you didn't

    4. The gaming community do have public goals in which we could find having fun with friends or unknown players or test your skill against other players.

      Maybe provide some examples to further explain to the readers

    5. As many people may know gaming offer players the opportunity to communicate with each other to improve their gaming experience. The forms of communication gaming has could come from text messages, party chats or game chat.

      good description and explanation