36 Matching Annotations
  1. Mar 2026
    1. (What does the text say?): “On this island, if you walk too far, people speak a different language.”

      MEANING (What does it mean?): This language reveals the difference between Haitians and Dominicans, and who belongs to which side of the island.

      IMPORTANCE (Why does it matter?): It matters because it shows how language can cause division, discrimination, and conflict among people.

    2. Method #1: In Labranza de huesos, Ms. Valencia explains that on the island of Hispaniola, the difference between Haitians and Dominicans is perceptible even in their language, stating: “On this island, if you walk too far, people speak a different language. Their very words reveal who belongs to which side.”

      Method #2: Many poor immigrants dreamed of going to the United States because they believed there were more opportunities there; as Villaseñor describes, “they lacked the resources to go north... to the land of abundance, the United States of America.”

      Method #3: Katheryn K. Russell points out that discrimination and police brutality also carry a significant economic cost: “American taxpayers have paid tens of millions of dollars in lawsuits regarding police brutality.”

      Explanation (Say, Mean, Matter)

      Say: The quote explains that police brutality has cost millions of dollars in lawsuits.

      Mean: This demonstrates that police abuse affects not only the victims but also society as a whole. Matter: This is important because it shows that discrimination and police violence have social and economic consequences for the entire country.

      MODE OF DEVELOPMENT

    1. Quote 1: “Howard Zinn states: ‘In my teaching, I never hid my political views… my belief in democratic socialism and in a rational and fair distribution of the world’s wealth’” (Zinn, You Can’t Be Neutral on a Moving Train, p. 7).

      Paraphrase: Zinn explains that, as a professor, he always openly expressed his political views, rejecting war, racism, and any form of abuse of power, and advocating for a more just and democratic society.

      Partial paraphrase: Zinn notes that he never hid his political views and that he rejected “any kind of bullying” between countries, governments, workers, or individuals (Zinn, p. 7).

      Quote 2: Martin Luther King writes: “The philosophy of an eye for an eye… has always been considered the ultimate expression of American manhood” (King, Why We Can’t Wait, p. 24).

      Paraphrase: King explains that in the United States many people believe that responding violently to an attack demonstrates bravery, although in reality controlling the violent reaction and responding with moral strength requires more courage.

      Partial paraphrase: King argues that American culture admires violent retaliation, but also states that refraining from retaliation can require more courage than reacting automatically (King, p. 24)

  2. Feb 2026
    1. Yes, the author includes his own analysis, explaining the importance of the idea and offering his opinion, stating that it is "absolutely correct" and that Malcolm's dedication is impressive. He also mentions why the topic should be important to the reader, as it demonstrates how effort and willpower can change a person's life.

    2. La dedicación a su propia educación y cómo fortaleció su propia inteligencia y habilidades a través de pura fuerza de voluntad es impresionante

      I think my idea is absolutely right. Malcolm leads a difficult life and strives to achieve what he wants, which is why this phrase resonates so strongly. His dedication to his education and how he strengthened his intelligence and skills through sheer willpower is impressive. It's important because it explains what the story is about.

    3. I think it's going to talk a lot about hard work, as we see Malcolm working very hard to achieve things, and they want to convey how difficult it has been for him and his life, and how he has achieved each one.

    4. Secondly, immigration greatly benefits the country, as it contributes significantly to the economy and cultural diversity. Furthermore, immigrants bring a wide variety of foods and languages ​​that enrich society.

    1. 8)TOPIC: In Reading Lolita in Tehran, Nafisi uses The Great Gatsby and her experiences to show how living in the past can ruin the future.

      OPINION: Focusing only on the past traps society and makes it repeat mistakes.

      SO WHAT? This matters because it teaches us that we must face the present and build the future instead of staying stuck in what already happened.

    2. 7)TOPIC: In Reading Lolita in Tehran, Azar Nafisi shows that literature can be powerful enough to resist oppressive governments.

      OPINION: Studying Lolita helps students avoid being passive victims and inspires them to resist silently.

      SO WHAT? This matters because it shows that education and reading can emotionally free people and give them strength to fight injustice.

    3. 6)TOPIC: Khalidi uses a family division in Tennis in Nablus as a symbol of how colonization impacts Palestine.

      OPINION: The play shows how colonization divides society and weakens the fight for freedom.

      SO WHAT? This matters because it helps the audience feel and understand how political oppression destroys both communities and families.

    4. 5)TOPIC: In Ismail Khalidi’s play Tennis in Nablus, Anbara writes about how women’s empowerment is essential for any revolutionary movement.

      OPINION: The failure to empower women contributed to the Palestinian struggle against British oppression.

      SO WHAT? This matters because it shows that meaningful change only happens when the most oppressed members of society are lifted up.

    5. 4)TOPIC: Delia, the main character in Sweat, suffers mental and physical abuse from her husband for years.

      OPINION: Hurston makes readers feel empathy for Delia and understand the triple burden of being Black, female, and poor.

      SO WHAT? This matters because it helps readers see how hard it is to survive under so many layers of oppression.

    6. 3)TOPIC: In Zora Neale Hurston’s short story Sweat, Sykes, a Black man in the Jim Crow South, tries to prove his masculinity.

      OPINION: He abuses Delia and cheats on her to hide his insecurities about failing as a provider and protector.

      SO WHAT? This matters because it shows how toxic masculinity hurts women and reflects social pressures of that time.

    7. 2)TOPIC: In the different stanzas of Bury Me in a Free Land, Harper shows the horrors of slavery: Black people sold like animals, hunted if they escape, beaten, and babies taken from their mothers.

      OPINION: Today, African-Americans still face similar injustices: labor exploitation, racial profiling, murder, and families torn apart by mass incarceration.

      SO WHAT? This matters because it shows that even though slavery ended, the fight for real freedom continues.

    8. 1)TOPIC: In the poem Bury Me in a Free Land, Frances Ellen Watkins Harper talks about slavery and the contradiction of Americans valuing freedom while keeping people enslaved.

      OPINION: Harper makes readers face the hypocrisy of Americans and realize how wrong it is to allow slavery.

      SO WHAT? This matters because it makes us question our morals and reminds us that injustice must end.

    9. 8)TOPIC: In Jarhead, Anthony Swofford talks about how soldiers lose their First Amendment rights.

      OPINION: This silencing makes soldiers follow orders without question, protecting the rich and powerful and allowing war for profit to continue.

      SO WHAT? This is important because it shows how soldiers’ rights are ignored and how the system uses control to keep wars going for money.

    10. 7)TOPIC: Anthony Swofford’s depiction of military culture in Jarhead.

      OPINION: The military’s systemic toxic masculinity—emphasizing transactional relationships, emotional repression, and violence—leads to sexual harassment, rape, and high suicide rates among service members.

      SO WHAT? This is important because it reveals how deeply ingrained cultural norms within the military harm individuals and highlights the need for systemic change to protect service members’ well-being.

    11. 6)TOPIC: According to Malala Yousafzai, education is capable of combating terrorism in Pakistan (as stated in I Am Malala).

      OPINION: This view is too simplistic as educational solutions will not provide an answer to the complicated geopolitical issues of Pakistan and they could potentially strengthen extremist behaviour instead of weakening it.

      SO WHAT? For this reason, readers should evaluate the proposed solutions to the terrorism dilemma taking into account broader political and historical factors, and not simply rely on education as a solution.

    12. 5)TOPIC: The assertion made by Malala Yousafzai in the book I Am Malala, written about how combating terrorism in Pakistan is possible through education.

      OPINION: Because educated persons have the ability to advocate for themselves and to resist all forms of propaganda, the way of Malala will greatly lessen the influence of the Taliban.

      SO WHAT? This is important in that it displays the vital nature of education to provide citizens the ability to make positive change both socially and politically.

    13. 4)TOPIC: T.V. Reed’s discussion of music as a tool for addressing racial oppression in The Art of Protest.

      OPINION: Hip-Hop today continues the work of Civil Rights-era music by highlighting ongoing inequalities and police brutality against Black men.

      SO WHAT? This is important because it shows how music remains a powerful medium for social awareness and activism, keeping conversations about racial injustice alive.

    14. T.V Reed in his book The Art of Protest, argues that environmentalism has been coded as a “white issue.” If those raising the awareness are perceived as largely white and well-off preaching to and within the same demographic, the probability of those most impacted, namely the poor communities of color who disproportionately suffer environmental hazards and toxic dumps, having a voice is dismal, so meaningful change will not occur. TOPIC: _________________________________________________________________________ OPINION: _______________________________________________________________________ SO WHAT? ___

      3)TOPIC: T.V. Reed’s argument that environmentalism is perceived as a “white issue” in The Art of Protest.

      OPINION: Because environmental activism is seen as dominated by white, affluent groups, marginalized communities most affected by environmental harm are left without a voice, preventing meaningful change.

      SO WHAT? This matters because recognizing this imbalance is necessary to make environmental movements more inclusive and effective.

    15. 2)TOPIC: Elizabeth Kolbert’s argument that people must reduce carbon emissions to prevent catastrophic climate change in Field Notes from a Catastrophe.

      OPINION: Catastrophic climate change is already inevitable, so efforts should shift from prevention to adapting and making future climates survivable.

      SO WHAT? This is important because it challenges Kolbert’s focus on prevention and encourages readers to reconsider where time, research, and resources should be directed.

    16. 1)TOPIC: Using Alternative Energy Sources to Combat Climate Change according to Elizabeth Kolbert in Fieldnotes from a Catastrophe

      OPINION: Kolbert does not acknowledge the major drawbacks of biofuels, solar energy, and wind energy, making widespread implementation of these technologies unwise until all pending issues about Cost, Waste, and Space have been resolved.

      SO WHAT? This is significant because readers need to thoughtfully evaluate Kolbert’s argument regarding the use of alternative energy sources, along with understanding alternative energy's limitations before endorsing and supporting widespread implementation of alternative energy technologies.

    1. La fuente es demasiado grande en tamaño 16. La fuente es poco convencional. En la información del ensayo en la parte superior izquierda, se omite el título de la clase. La numeración de páginas en la parte superior derecha tiene el apellido del profesor, no el del estudiante. El título “Revisión del ensayo n.º 1” es genérico, no creativo y no despierta el interés del lector. Cuando se presenta la novela, también es necesario mencionar el autor. El título de la novela está entre comillas cuando debería estar en cursiva. El personaje principal se conoce con diferentes apodos informales que no se usan en el texto, y uno está mal escrito. Siempre sea preciso y coherente con los nombres de los personajes y del autor, y asegúrese de que estén bien escritos. Hay un espacio extra después del primer párrafo y el segundo párrafo necesita sangría. Los márgenes del lado izquierdo no miden una pulgada.

      In the first page of the essay, there are several MLA formatting errors. The header “Lachmayr 1” is incorrectly placed on the left instead of being right-aligned and ½ inch from the top margin, and it uses the professor’s last name instead of the student’s, which should read “Bell 1.” The date is written in the wrong format, as MLA requires “21 May 2013.” The title is not properly centered, is incorrectly capitalized, and uses improper styling, since MLA titles should be in plain text without bold, italics, or underlining. The abbreviation “n.°” in the title is not MLA style and should be written as “No. 1” or avoided. Additionally, the book title within the paragraph is incorrectly placed in quotation marks instead of italics, and there is an unnecessary space before the closing quotation mark and comma.

  3. Jan 2026
    1. During my adolescence, I was able to observe the genetics of my father's family, and as I grew older, I had to go to the dermatologist because I had acne on my skin, and I also had to go to the gynecologist, which terrified me. But that's what a teenager has to go through because those are the stages, and that's how it is habitual ** And I feel that my father's paternal nature protected me throughout that time. And it's incredible how you see it in retrospect, from your father's perspective, because despite everything, he takes care of you, and even when the situation is very pathetic, he's always there for you. That's why my father's love is perennial and omnipotent **because he dont leave me alone

    2. 1)How did he learn to read if it was forbidden? So brave! I feel bad for his suffering, it’s so unfair. Wow! His mistress changed because of slavery, that’s sad but interesting. I like how he used kids to learn, so smart. “Columbian Orator”? I need to look this up, sounds important. It’s so intense that learning to read made him suffer more… cruel that freedom was only a dream.

      2) Chattel -someone’s property (like an object) Stratagems -strategies, tricks Emancipation - freedom from slavery Vindication - defense or justification Writhed -twisted, squirmed Unabated - without decreasing

      3) Frederick Douglass was born a slave in Maryland around 1817. - Origin He went to Baltimore and learned to read with his master’s wife’s help. - Learning He escaped in 1838, got married, and changed his name. -Freedom

      Became a speaker, wrote his autobiography, fought for Black rights. - Activism In Master Hugh’s house, he had to use strategies to keep learning, because his mistress stopped teaching him. -Obstacles His mistress was kind at first, but slavery made her harsh and cruel. - Change of people Douglass befriended white kids to teach him how to read more. -Cleverness The book Columbian Orator taught him about freedom and arguing against slavery. - Education Learning to read caused pain because he saw his situation but couldn’t change it. -Pain

      4) “Slavery proved as injurious to her as it did to me.” “Education and slavery were incompatible with each other.” “The more I read, the more I was led to abhor and detest my enslavers.” “The silver trump of freedom had roused my soul to eternal wakefulness.” Freedom was always on his mind, motivating and torturing him at the same time. - Desire for freedom

      5) My thesis: Learning to read was a double-edged sword for Frederick Douglass: it freed him intellectually and gave him power to fight for freedom, but it also caused him pain by revealing the cruelty of slavery and his own oppression.

    3. Paternal: fatherly Agoraphobia: fear Polyphonic: multiple Contorted: twisted Soliloquy: speech Transcribe: copy Tactilely: touch Pyrotechnics: fireworks Unorthodox: unconventional Pathetic: pitiful

    4. Gynecologist: doctor Biopsy: sample Genetics: heredity Habitual: routine Dermatology: skin Autonomy: independence Ethnographer: researcher Aquatic: water

      Deduced: inferred

      Gradual: slow

    5. Práctica

      Perennial: lasting Malformed: deformed Omnipotent: all-powerful Preconceptions: biases Trimester: third Quadruplets: foursome Polyembryony: multiple Subversive: rebellious Postpartum: afterbirth Retrospect: review

    6. Práctica

      abdicate: not taking responsibility. interced: praying for the person. beneficent: benefit and help. illogical: something unsafe. anarchy: lack of rules. congregated: to unite. expel: to expel or banish someone. ambiguose:loose. dichoyomous: right or wrong. synthesis:idea.