alignment with post-structuralist critique -- can think about hours of lesson prep

friendlier tone: "No need to worry" or "No need to fear."

suggest combining, such as: "Teamwork made easy: creative templates, campaigns and content can be prepared and freely shared across different teams."

can combine: "We automatically evaluate email opens, click-throughs and unsubscribes so you can easily gauge both active recipients and non-responders."

suggestion for flow: "Work with data from orders and customer behavior to send personlized offers, abandoned cart (reminders?) or retention campaigns -- no need for manual setup."

Can condense: "Take advantage of Web Tracking and react automatically to visitor behavior -- don't let abandoned carts, products viewed or orders completed go unnoticed."

"right from"

suggestion (more friendly/playful/colloquial): "Let AI do the heavy lifting -- subject lines, personalized salutations, image generation, send time analysis, and more. All you need to do is tweak the details and press send."

To me, "greetings" would feel more natural than "salutations" here (more common/informal) but I'm not sure what's conventional use in the field

better: "The tool will highlight potential deliverability obstacles and ensure that..." (if this is accurate)

better: "We use smart delivery to maximize the impact of your campaigns."

better: "You have all the visuals you need in one place."

suggestion: "... looks great on all devices -- no need for coding."

suggestion: "Don't let audience limits hold you back -- work with multiple contact groups, markets or brands at once."

suggestion: "You get to select the setup that fits your actual spending needs -- meaning you'll never pay for more than you really use."

"will remain active" (consistency)

just a suggestion for tone: "Already an eWay-CRM® user? After the billing transition to Emailcampaigns.eu, we can keep your existing pricing structure in place."

suggest "--" here: ie. "...module -- including PLUS features, automation..."

suggestion: "The good news is that all plans now include...."

suggestion: "Everything you need to know -- available options, next steps, and more -- is laid out in the information document below."

"document below"

I think you could remove this -- it's already clear from the previous section that billing changes are taking place

An option (for friendly tone) could be: "Heads up: monthly eWay...." But you could also just begin the sentence directly with "Monthly eWay..."

an option for friendliness/tone: "No hidden fees or surprises -- current customer prices will apply at least until the end of 2027."

"will still be included" -- but this depends on whether these benefits were available before of whether they're a new addition. If it's a new addition, I would try to emphasize that

"will remain available" (for consistency, I think future simple makes the most sense here)

"will be supported" (just for consistency)

more colloquial tone option: "in the loop"

warmer tone option: "Here's what's happening: eWay-CRM® has decided to discontinue USD billing for this service. So to keep things running seamlessly, we're moving all clients who currently pay in USD over to direct Emailcampaigns.eu billing."

better: "change to the billing process"

This is totally fine but here's a suggestion for tone: "Get in touch and we'll guide you through the transition. If you need to set up a wire transfer in the meantime, you can find the USD payment instructions right here."

a general tip: if you want to aim for a friendlier tone, instead of just "yes" in these sections, you can alternate between phrases like "For sure", "You bet", "Absolutely", "You can count on it", etc.

suggestion: "You can look forward to..."

suggestion: "Your campaign history is safe with us. Nothing gets lost in the move."

Better: "Your annual plans will remain active...."

suggestion: "switch over to"

suggestion: "All you need to do is request the transition..."

for tone/flow: "We're just making some changes to the billing setup, but monthly eWay-CRM® will remain supported until..."

for tone: "Professional Email isn't going anywhere."

I'm not fully sure I understand this sentence, but if I do interpret it correctly, I'd suggest: "Working with an agency? Give them a separate account so your client data stays safe."

for parallelism: "automatically saved and immediately available."

suggestion for variety: "Leave the complicated setup and coding knowledge behind and start collecting new contacts from the web right away."

suggestion: "casual" (to contrast with "loyal")

suggestion: "loyal"

Suggestion for variety: "Link your e-shop with an XML feed and let the hard work take care of itself -- up-to-date product information, prices, and images will flow into your campaigns automatically."

maybe something like: "Take your order confirmations to the next level: encourage further sales by offering a discount on a future purchase or recommending related products."

for variety: "share new ideas that cater to their interests."

suggestion to condense: "Don't let those precious orders slip away. Simply enter the tracking code, set the shipping terms, and let the email remind the customers what they've left in their cart."

suggestion for smoothness and clarity: "From abandoned cart to thank you for purchase to product recommendation messages -- customize them in just a few clicks and send them on their way."

suggestion: "No need to start from scratch. Our pre-made design templates make it easy to launch automated campaigns for abandoned carts, welcome emails, discount reminders and more."

suggestion to change up structure: "Whether order confirmations, invoices, or service status changes -- deliver all the key information to customers in a reliable and timely manner."

clarity: "Send automatic holiday or birthday greetings with exclusive offers or discount codes."

Idea: "Let automation take a load off -- save yourself time while keeping your customer relationships stronger than ever."

suggestion: "that catches the eye of your audience"

better: "to your liking"

merge these sentences with a --: "We'll create an editor tailored to your brand -- from the design right down to bespoke features that make creating emails faster and easier than ever."

better: "Got something specific in mind?"

a little friendlier: "Need to go beyond the ordinary editor?"

suggestion for friendly/colloquial tone: "a piece of cake"

Since contractions are being used elsewhere, I would suggest "what's" for consistency

suggestion: "If things don't go as planned, we're right there with you -- we'll help you sort it out and keep your campaigns rolling."

Suggestion: "No extra hassle -- all the features we consider essential for quality email marketing are part of the standard setup."

suggestion: "With 10 user seats included, your whole team can collaborate on campagins, reporting, and setup"

suggestion for flow (since it's a long list): "All the tools you need -- transactional emails, automation flows, dynamic content, merge fields, email scheduling, templates and API access -- are built in and ready to go."

suggestion: "built in"

suggestions: "Keep your eWay-CRM® workflow, campagin history, and current setup, all while getting more value from day one." OR: "Keep everything from eWay-CRM® -- your workflow, your campagin history, your step -- and start enjoying more value from day one."

suggestion for tone: "Professional Email isn't going anywhere -- your campagin history is safe with us, and your service will keep running without interruption."

suggestion for friendly tone: "We'll gather your billing details and direct you toward the option that works best for you."

suggestion (more friendly/personable): "Your annual plan will stay active until the end of your prepaid period. When it's time to renew, you'll just need to switch over to Emailcampaigns.eu billing and provide your details. All your campaign history will be right there waiting for you."

suggestion (for friendly/personable tone): "To keep things running smoothly and avoid any service interruption, please request a transition and provide your billing details before this date."

"will remain active"

again: "will apply"

better: "will apply"

better: "declines"

given the below comments I made, I think this section could be better desribed as "What is changing" or "What's changing?"

I'm just re-reading the document after reading the next sections, and this also feels like a repetition of the information below. I think these two sections "What is changing" and "What you get by switching to Emailcampaigns.eu" could be condensed to one section under the heading "What should you do next?" The graphic/table could be placed either above or below this section

function

functions

the "what should you do next" section is basicallly a repetition of this info -- I think this whole section could be removed. It makes more sense under the heading "what should you do next"

maybe this could be clarified: should they request the transfer before their service expires, or can they transfer when renewing the service?

"function" is probably better here too, but "functionality" could work (but it suggests the smoothness/suitability/applicability of a process, whereas "function" is just about the operation itself)

for structural clarity, I would suggest: "and will offer" (otherwise it's a bit awkward having a future structure in the first clause and present in the second)

again, think "function" is more appropriate here

switch order: "available in the desktop version of the eWay-CRM® Marketing module."

function?

sure - but what is a behaviour? what does "prescribed" mean? Who is prescribing?

man is too weak to even maintain the spirit of mutiny, needs to be whipped into submission

Christ thinks too highly of men whose nature condemns them to slavery

man will create other mysteries -find soothsayers, sorcery, heresy, atheism -- atheism here a miracle? miracle of rationality's triumph over mystery?

man doesn't want God but wants signs, wants miracles, wants proof

blessed are those who have not seen, and yet have believed

man are weak 'rebels'; can only be conquered by Miracle, Mystery and Authority

man needs more than bread but will to live

man only desires to renounce his freedom

men chiefly desire to submit to collective will, not follow their own desires

authority conquers the meek and gains their admiration

order of might makes right, despair of the meek forced to serve the mighty

first temptation: miracle -- turn stones into bread to seduce men to follow

Christ rejected the means that could make man happy (ie by limiting their freedom)

authority, submission