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constant
Unnecessary information, and inaccurate. The 10mL of liquid were measured out each time and would have varied slightly.
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graph
Missing a label and descriptive caption.
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online.clackamas.edu online.clackamas.edu
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Total:
4
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Using
Not passive voice
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doing
Not passive
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completes
Not written in passive voice.
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e 1
This appears to be a graph for a different lab entirely, as it's showing fluorescence per concentration.
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each beverage including cranberryjuice, Dr. Pepper, and the 4% sugar.
If materials are going to be listed out like this, they should have been mentioned at the start of the sugar density section as part of a 'materials required'.
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percent sugar.
Percent sugar of what? Sucrose concentration would be more accurate.
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% Suga
Units not properly labeled
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recording
Not in passive voice
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Questions 6-7 were then completed using thecreated scatter plot and its given equation.
Reader does not have access to the same materials. The content of the questions in the packet should be written out if relevant to the report, or completely omitted if not.
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The mass of a 50 mL beaker was measured using an electronic balance.
Perhaps listing out the materials required first would make this easier to follow.
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sugar
sucrose solution
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Questions 1-5 in the lab packet were then completed using analyticalthinking.
Reports should be written under the assumption that the reader does not have access to the same materials, and so that anyone could replicate the procedure.
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