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The ensuing years have seen feminist scholars take up this work in earnest,with their explorations largely falling into two dynamic categories.
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“the uses of language in the play of power”
love this
Our ethosis formed in part by the questions we ask
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importance of creative research methodologies,what constitutes evidence, who and what should be included in our histories, andhow researchers’ positions and goals affect their interpretations.
Octalogs have provided a space for exploring varied notionsconcerning rhetoric’s role in serving a common good and assessing the con-tentious nature of that undertaking.
interesting
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explaination on her point
the fact that her tablets were written in cuneiform, one of the very ear-liest forms of written language. A
how far back women writing and their influence (i hope I understand what i am trying to say later)
Enheduanna is a successful storyteller and poet whose writings livedon with cultural significance for generations beyond her death. More
significance
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roles she played in society
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her influence of literary history
opportunity and created anential position for h
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how their actions challenged
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Historically important women
ys, not only the ideological and philosophical frameworksof a particular group of African American women, but also rhetorical prac-tices that speak directly to the contours of their gendered, racialized, andeconomically defined experi
connections that affect interpretation.
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A piece that connects and displays authors focus
territories, with a focus on women,with the possibility that eliteness may or may not hold its viabilityvariations in rhetorical perf
what this paper is calling for/doing
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word usage importance
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the big question
normed understanding are not
"normed understanding"
I would also like to say that this piece reminds me why I love academics
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I wonder how she develops this point
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a main point
ast the legacies o
I like the way this was phrased.
How do we demonstrate in the history of rhetoric that we are cogni-zant of and informed by the knowledge that a territory, even an abstractedand often stylized domain of an intellectual territory, is endowed by vari-ous contingencies, as well as various dimensions of materiality? How dowe make evident an understanding that the textures created by such vari-ability can be brought to dynamic relief, enhanced, appreciated, and flex-ibly configured and reconfigured in valuation processes and inknowledge-making processes? Further, how do we bring such an under-standing to bear in an academic domain such as rhetorical history wherethere is a deeply entrenched habit of standing in one place (that is, in terri-tories deemed Western), shaping inquiries with a particular set of interestsin mind (for example, the desires and experiences of elite males), and in-terestingly disregarding some features even within its own scope (for ex-ample, the desires and experiences of women or people from non-eliteclasses)? How do we engage in such endeavors with Western rhetorics,when these traditions of theory and practice have tended to function with aheavy and relentlessly constraining
Skills/tasks that she wants us to be able to do??
by, to articulate the limitationsof historical and current practices and the scholarship produced by suchpractices; to sustain perspectives that assume, rather than minimize, a fullerterrain where other views participate kaleidoscopically in the knowledge-making process; and to establish a more generous accreditation systemcapable of accounting for a more richly endowed rhetorical landscape andfor more dynamic possibilities for understanding that lan
Her thesis!!!!!!
practices. Inrecognizing knowledge as an interpretive enterprise, a social construction,the imperative becomes the task of connecting theory with scholarly actionin order to both theorize and engage in other scholarly activities more sys-tematical
I understand and I don't at the same time. need to reword to gain better understanding.
ecades that we actually create andfilter meaning from more elaborate perceptive possibilities, making senseof what we see based on ideological frameworks and social
This is a point she is making / connecting her piece to. expressing what the current understanding of the topic is.
as Burke, Foucault, G
I think I remember one of these names from the last article
al one, that knowledge is lesstruth for all time, space, and conditions than it is interp
oooh a bar!
A second challenge is to understand on an o
defintion?
Oneis to recognize that whatever we currently know about rhetorical history asa disciplinary landscape is situated on a larger terrain of developed andundeveloped possibilities
definition?
two provocative challenges.
two challenges sections
select, focus, and fine-tun
ontingent more generally onperception and more specifically on the limitations of perception.
important: argument made about limits of interpretation
e landscape. We select, focus, anddevelop, bringing more clearly and vibrantly into view particular featuresthat we frame and foreground, while simultaneously disregarding or mini-mizing other features and dimensions that we might have selected, devel-oped, and showcased instea
connecting life to metaphor
alues, preferences, beliefs.
important! three things that affect interpretation
an interpretive one
key term / focus of paper
where on the land-scape we stand and what we have in mind.
aspects to consider
Have you reallylistened hard enough, deeply enough, to your target here?" And theanswer is too often, "No."
!! good question to ask myself.
What is inescapable is that underlying all our differences aboutwhat makes good communication there is one deep standard: agree-ment that whatever the dispute, whatever the language standards,communication can be improved by listening to the other side, and thenlistening even harder to one's own responses.
also seems like a general point discussed throughout the chapter.
for him much ofwhat they publish is no more than rhetrickery.
Even in large loosely defined fields like English, wherepeople quarrel about discourse norms, there are underlying" "warrants or "commonplaces" that are taken for granted as notrequiring discussion;
I wonder what those are
What makes good rhetoric onthe front page of your local newspaper will differ sharply from thestyle of the sports section or business section or editorial page
good audience example
every society shares some rhetorical standards, while actuallypossessing a variety of sub-domains with different standards.
!!
Everybody obeys differentstandards depending on audience differences
Im reading about this in my RWS 501 editing class rn
"rhetorical domain," narrow orbroad: the community that preaches and practices rhetorical standardsthat contrast sharply with the standards embraced by those in otherdomains."
Definition
This is why thequality of our citizenry depends on whether their education hasconcentrated on the productive forms of rhetorical engagement
I think needs to be a larger societal discussion point
all three of these can have effects on the other two, butthe distinction can be quite useful, both as the rhetor tries to decidewhat to say and as the critic of rhetoric tries to decide whether a givenrhetorical stroke deserves praise.
Epideictic
Definition
Forensic
Definition
Deliberative
Definition
it is not just that rhetoric makes many realities: study ofrhetorical issues is our best resource for distinguishing the goodmakings from the bad
i agree
And meanwhile it creates a multiplicity of judgments about whatthe realities really are.
rhetoric makes realities, however tempor:ary.
We may not want to call the realities made by rhetoric "objective,"because we always have only our "subjective" pictures of them
important
call for more open acknowledgment of how rhetoric is to bepraised, or blamed, for the makings
seems like a general point for the chapter
Our speech codesare changed daily by how we obey or violate them.
ooooh interesting!
Our lives are oftenoverwhelmed by such rhetorical changes of reality
the full actualities of Nature being studied do not change simplybecause scientific rhetoric changes.
make Reality One, UnchangeableTruths. It aids us in discovering them, as it makes and remakesour circumstances and beliefs — our temporary realities — alongthe way
Important for summation!
converts more and more into believing them.
discovers innumerable unconditional truths
but by the way you and your spousediscussed what to do about it and whether you are now cheerful orgloomy.
I actually really like this example. Our realities are not just shaped by one event/one moment but the before and after, and all the reactions to it.
rhetoric has created many temporary realities
it is important to repeat that current critics ofrhetoric are wrong when they tie it to the claim that everything istotally contingent.
Can you join me in claiming that no amount of futurerhetoric will justify slavery, even if this or that culture becomesconvinced that it is needed and thus justified? 1
yes
always wrong,
rhetoric is needed to change minds about suchtruths
this is a wonderful sentence.
Slavery will always be wrong, no matter how many culturespractice it.
Facts! I tiny clap for the author from my desk.
Only explanations offered about mycarelessness or anger in dropping the cup depend on rhetoric.
This sentence feels like the author is saying "thats just the facts of life" or "thats the fact/truth of life"
it is clear that rhetoric makes a vast part of ourrealities."
These synonyms dramatize once again why rhetoric has no singleterritory but covers almost everything, including the ethicaljudgments we come to in chapter 3.
, rhetorology, for thisdeepest practice of LR: not just distinguishing defensible and in-defensible forms of rhetoric but attempting to lead both sides in anydispute to discover the ground they share - thus reducing pointlessdispute. ? This point becomes the center of the final chapter.
Definition and forecasting
Everyday language includesmany synonyms for defensible rhetoric:
I personally find the authors point/argument really strong but its hard to... visualize? understand? the vastness of rhetoric that he is describing.
rhetoric covers what others call "EnglishStudies," "Composition Studies," "Communication Studies," or"Speech and Communication."
all fields that employ, discuss, and analyze rhetoric.
he always at least implied thatit had to be central to any inquiry about thinking.
S nice" rhetorical terms are so ambiguous, it will be useful to relythiotiKliont on the following summary of the distinctions Tyè
I am not sure what happened here. Edit: I have realized that they are definitions
rhetorician
Definition
rhetor
Definition
Rhetorologist
Definition
Rhetorician
Definition
Rhetor
Definition
Rhetorology
Definition
Rhetrickery:
Definition (this chapter feels a little casual cause of the language used by the author)
how to practice listening-rhetoric (LR)
Yet we all often travel under the sameterm: "My field is rhetoric."
I do feel like I am constantly explaining my field when people ask about it.
I see no escape from that ambiguity. But we can at least distinguishthe rhetor — each of us, in and out of the academy, saying or writingthis or that to produce some effect on some audience — from therhetorician, the would-be scholar who studies the most effective formsof communication.
I know this isn't applicable to 410 right now, but I feel like what we did last semester in 500w was practicing being in both roles. Like with our paper 1, we were the rhetorician through analysis and rhetor through writing the paper.
"So you are a preacher of the artsthat have nothing to do with truth, only persuasion? Do you deservea professorship here for doing that?"
I don't know if I understand this.
it muddies the distinction betweenthe art of rhetoric and the study of the art
t much ofwhat we find repulsive is a form of rhetoric
"the art of removing misunderstanding" but also thesymbolic arts of producing misunderstanding.
doesn't it become meaningless, pointless? Surely youcannot claim that the shoddy rhetoric people object to shouldn't becalled rhetoric
this is a good point. even if it is bad rhetorical (both 'evil'/morally 'wrong' or shoddy) it is still rhetoric.
. Even works by professional rhetoricians areoften deliberately mislabeled. A colleague recently informed me thathis last three books, all of them originally employing "rhetoric" intheir titles, had been retitled by the publishers, since rhetorical termswould downgrade the text and reduce sales!
I mean... I understand why casual readers would be turned off by more academic/professional terms, and if you're publishing something they have to be more widely applicable. It's just like me not wanting to pick up something that has proper scientific terms in the title. That's not something I think would interest me.
still have no reference to rhetoric at all,
While this may be true, I could even agree, I also do not feel that rhetoric needs to be in every textbook. At least not explicitly. I do believe that rhetoric is used in many fields, both creative and STEM (would love to elaborate and discuss), and that it essential that people need to know how to write for their field (as that is what textbooks do, teach your field), Rhetoric does not need to be explicitly stated. However, it should be referenced. People do need to learn to speak, write, and persuade for and from their field.
rhetoricians still represent a tinyminority on the academic scene.
I didn't see when this was published, but it would be interesting to look into the current numbers on this, like stats on rhetoric graduates. I wonder if there is a way to look at SDSU stats.
it can in itself be a mode of genuine inquiry
yes
"Rhetoric is that which creates an informed appetite for thegood." (Richard Weaver, 1948)• "Rhetoric is rooted in an essential function of language itself, afunction that is wholly realistic and continually born anew: theuse of language as a symbolic means of inducing cooperation inbeings that by nature respond to symbols." (Kenneth Burke,1950)• "Rhetoric is the art of discovering warrantable beliefs andi mproving those beliefs in shared discourse ... the art of probingwhat we believe we ought to believe, rather than proving what istrue according to abstract methods." (Wayne Booth, 1964)• "Rhetoric is a mode of altering reality, not by the direct applica-tion of energy to objects, but by the creation of discourse whichchanges reality through the mediation of thought and action."(Lloyd Bitzer, 1968)• " We should not neglect rhetoric's importance, as if it were simplya formal superstructure or technique exterior to the essentialactivity. Rhetoric is something decisive in society.... [T]hereare no politics, there is no society without rhetoric, without theforce of rhetoric." (Jacques Derrida, 1990)• "Rhetoric is the art, practice, and study of [all] human communi-cation." (Andrea Lunsford, 1995)• "Rhetoric appears as the connective tissue peculiar to civil societyand to its proper finalities, happiness and political peace hic etnunc." ( Marc Fumaroli, 1999
To discuss these 8 new definitions: Some seem a little more creative/artistic than others.<br /> I really like "the use of language as a symbolic means of inducing cooperation in beings that by nature respond to symbols," from Burke. This was probably the point, but I understand how much sentiments for rhetoric changed when comparing these definitions to how it was described by Locke. I also like "shared discourse." - Booth - I feel like shared discourse is just what a science or discipline should just be. Communicating and discussing with peers/an audience is an essential part to rhetoric.
Agree with "...of all human communication." I don't fully understand Marc Fumaroli. Will need to ask about this.
rhetoric and dialectic overlap
I think this is true
rhetrickery
I have heard this term before. I can't remember where at the moment. I should look into that.
even at best it is no more than ourresource for jazzing up or bolstering ideas derived elsewhere
I do think of rhetoric as a resource, in the sense that knowledge of it helps you be more persuasive as well as to know when and how you are being persuaded. This definition or understanding of rhetoric still doesn't feel right.
(note Locke's useof "the fair sex"!
I did notice this. However, I am unsure of its importance/value. I should ask about this.
Rhetoric's Status: Up, Down, and ó Up?• "Rhetoric is the science of speaking well, the education of theRoman gentleman, both useful and a virtue." (Quintilian)• "Rhetoric is the art of expressing clearly, ornately (where neces-sary), persuasively, and fully the truths which thought hasdiscovered acutely." (St. Augustine)• "Rhetoric is the application of reason to imagination for thebetter moving of the will. It is not solid reasoning of the kindscience exhibits." (Francis Bacon
What do these five definitions have in common? - speech/expression => an action - persuasion
What is different? - some see it as part of somethings else; some see it as something in and of itself [this is a point the author makes in this section]
(the bacon phrase is confusing)
to insinuate wrong ideas, move the passions, and thereby mislead thejudgment;
I wonder if this could be understood as him likening it to propaganda or fallacies
By the eighteenth century almost everyone,even those producing full textbooks for the study of rhetoric, saw it asat best a useful appendage to what hard thinking could yield,
one of the indispensable human arts.
emphasizes importance and relevance
it includes all forms of communication short of physicalviolence, even such gestures as raising an eyebrow or giving the finger.'
In its beginning, rhetoric was often confined to the oratory of males;
politics
lhe new rhetoric covers the whole range of discourse that aims at persuasion andconviction, whatever the audience addressed and whatever the subject matter.
rhetoric has nospecific territory or subject matter of its own, since it is foundeverywhere
A principle that I am coming t0 understand more and more.
There is no reason to let a company make somuch money while potentially helping to radicalize billions of people, reaping the financial benefitswhile asking society to bear so many of the costs.
fire quote
For example, our craving for fat, salt and sugar, which served us well when food was scarce,can lead us astray in an environment in which fat, salt and sugar are all too plentiful and heavilymarketed to us.
interesting how they repeat this example. The two pieces are related so they comparison is valid.
Google racks up the ad sales
this makes me want to uninstall google
What we are witnessing is the computational exploitation of a natural human desire: to look “behind thecurtain,” to dig deeper into something that engages us.
"Computational exploitation of a natural human desire" is a crazy quote
He discovered that whether youstarted with a pro-Clinton or pro-Trump video on YouTube, you were many times more likely to end upwith a pro-Trump video recommended
wow
The longer people stay on YouTube, the more money Google makes.What keeps people glued to YouTube? Its algorithm seems to have concluded that people are drawn tocontent that is more extreme than what they started with — or to incendiary content in general.
YouTube may be one of the most powerful radicalizing instruments of the 21stcentury.
nonpolitical topics. The same basic pattern emerged.
this is interesting
moreand more extreme than the mainstream political fare I had started with
I was being directed to videos of a leftish conspiratorial cast, including arguments about theexistence of secret government agencies and allegations that the United States government was behindthe attacks of Sept. 11
These are leftist conspiracies?
YouTube started to recommend and “autoplay” videos for me thatfeatured white supremacist rants, Holocaust denials and other disturbing content.
I wonder if these recommendations were based on what others (who had watch Trump's speeches) were watching.
the core business modelunderlying the Big Tech platforms—harvesting attention with a massive surveillanceinfrastructure to allow for targeted, mostly automated advertising at very large scale—is fartoo compatible with authoritarianism, propaganda, misinformation, and polarization.
the public outcry demanding that they fix all these problems is fundamentallymistaken.
The point made in this is interesting, as well as new to me; the idea that changing these platforms is not up to the companies. I feel this has been the goal of a lot of the discussion, that the companies and platforms need to change. It is true though that the tradeoffs make that an undesirable decision for shareholders. However, I don't know how involved we should push for the government to be in this process. Right now that seems like a recipe for disaster.
laws, journalistic codes of ethics, independent watchdogs, masseducation—all evolved for a world in which choking a few gatekeepers and threatening a fewindividuals was an effective means to block speech. They are no longer sufficient.
. In the past, it has taken generations for humans to developpolitical, cultural, and institutional antibodies to the novelty and upheaval of previousinformation revolutions.
During the 2016 presidential election, as JoshuaGreen and Sasha Issenberg reported for Bloomberg, the Trump campaign used so-called darkposts—nonpublic posts targeted at a specific audience—to discourage African Americansfrom voting in battleground states.
I wish the author had a source cited or linked
They can also make the bigplatforms a terrible place to interact with other people
This is really interesting
They look like bot-fueled campaigns of trolling and distraction,
Im excited to talk about this in class
Sure,Facebook and Twitter sometimes feel like places where masses of people experience thingstogether simultaneously. But in reality, posts are targeted and delivered privately, screen byscreen by screen.
The idea of things being 'experienced simultaneously but separately' is so interesting. It reminds me of discussions I have heard or seen that debate whether or not social media has made us more connected or more isolated/lonely.
For most of modern history, the easiest way to block the spread of an idea was to keep it frombeing mechanically disseminated. Shutter the newspaper, pressure the broadcast chief,install an official censor at the publishing house. Or, if push came to shove, hold a loaded gunto the announcer’s head.
very 1984
I love that we are discussing fanfiction in relation to literature and communication. Often, people diminish fanfiction's legitimacy because of the demographics it is written by and the fact that it is often beginner writers (so it is less 'sophisticated') but it has value in our culture and many others. It displays a lot of the development of language and communication. Sorry, I'm discussing this in another class so it just.. in my head rn.
halcyon
definition: denoting a period of time in the past that was idyllically happy and peaceful:
Instead, you quickly took in the information and made an in-formed, and likely somewhat accurate, decision about that person.
On a reread, I have a bit of an issue with this sentence. Its not the best example of making decisions about people as it may reinforce negative stereotypes/biases
“The only Homer some kids know is the one who can’t write hisown last name”
That's actually...kind of a bar
Pathos can also be a very effective appeal if the rhetor has to per-suade the audience in a very short amount of time, which is why it isused heavily in print advertisements, billboards, or television commer-cials.
the quick moments
“wherever there is persuasion, there is rheto-ric. And wherever there is ‘meaning,’ there is ‘persuasion.’ Food eatenand digested is not rhetoric. But in the meaning of food there is muchrhetoric, the meaning being persuasive enough for the idea of food tobe used, like the ideas of religion, as a rhetorical device of statesmen”
Food is a really obscure example for rhetoric, but I feel this is intentional.
AI raises concerns about bias, discrimination, andaccessibility because of its untested and unevenimpacts on students and student learning.Data-intensive technologies have a high likelihood ofmaking recommendations, predictions, and analysesthat are biased against historically marginalized peoplebecause the data and infrastructures these technologiesuse is also biased.1
connects to rolling stone article by O’neil
Promote accountability for inter-nally developed tools or tech company partnerships byrequiring tech companies and vendors to provide proofof insurance covering liabilities related to the tech-nology and to include in contracts indemnity clausesthat transfer the responsibility for harms enacted (forexample, data breaches or racial or socioeconomicdiscrimination) to the tech company or vendor.
can connect to sdsu's partnership with Open AI, compare/contrast the guidelines set to the guidelines recommended by the article.
implementation of ed-tech, including AI, isconnected to long-standing inequities in higher educa-tion.
distinction between honesty and failure to learn
point to mention. This would be interesting to research further. Are the discussions on AI more focused on honesty or learning?
It is now more difficult for[students] to develop their thoughts on a topic becausethey don’t have to spend time with it while they workthrough writing about it. . . . I am worried that theywill never again get the chance to change their opinionas they expose themselves to ideas over the long term.
connect to the idea that writing is thinking presented by Dillard.
Improving Working and Learning ConditionsPreexisting work intensification and devaluation arethe main reasons respondents give for using AI toassist with academic tasks
relates to the two articles that mention how academic has changed to focus on results, Walsh and Dillard. Also correlates to the argument on giving students work that they want to do/explaining the reason being assignments.
morefaculty involvement in determining how AI and techgenerally are used.”
guidance for determining whetherAI is the most appropriate solution for a given prob-lem and for considering whether AI use is responsible,given its potential long-term impact on institutionsand academic communities.
They give multiple recommendations for actions that can be taken, this one aligns with Mollick’s article “15 Times to Use AI”
“Large language models like ChatGPT produceshallow, unoriginal ‘predictive text-y ideas’ and Iworry that my students and others will increasinglybelieve that that’s okay—that there’s nothing betterthan that to aspire to.
Further discussion on the reliance/use of AI but by students and the tone of AI writing. Connects to the “flattens your voice” statement that Caplan made.
Follow-up interviews were conducted in spring2025 with thirteen respondents; however, findingsfrom these interviews are excluded from this report
intentionally highlighted these 2 parts separately.
Participants were AAUP members. Five thousandmembers were selected from the Association’s activemembership list using a random number generatorand invited to participate in the online survey througha series of three email messages that provided a surveylink. Approximately five hundred responses werereceived in two weeks and are reflected in the analysisbelow.
the committeeadministered the national AAUP Survey on AI and theProfession in December 2024.
According to the principles set forth in the AAUP’s1966 Statement on Government of Colleges andUniversities, it is “the responsibility primarily of thefaculty to determine the appropriate curriculum andprocedures of student instruction.”8 This responsi-bility includes AI and other ed-tech infrastructure.
are largely excluded from decisionsabout which platforms and products to develop oruse
In many instances, theiruse harms students as well as faculty members andstaff.7
Such framing serves to increase the power oftechnology firms and employers, thereby shuttingdown already meager avenues for critique, dissent,negotiation, and refusal.
increasingly use AI to guide decision-making oneverything from fundraising to pedagogy
Discussions on the reliance on AI, similar to the points that were made by Ettinghausen but this article focuses on how school administrations have used it.
AI is both a marketing term and a usable product.
Discussion of the ‘unattainable’ promises of AI and the consumerism/capitalism that is connected to it. Kinda like some Big Tech discussions we have had.
improve job security and wages asAI is rolled out.
they are also worried about job security.
While course syllabi are considered public documentsat some colleges and universities, instructional materi-als such as lectures and original audiovisual materialsconstitute faculty intellectual property.12
connects to arguments about copyright and fair use
Astanding or ad hoc committee of faculty members,staff, and students should be elected by their respec-tive constituencies and charged with monitoring,evaluating, and reviewing ed-tech procurementprocesses and policy.
This would be good to mention as a recommended solution in the presentation
other campus community members, including staffand students. High levels of concern arose around AIand technology procurement, deployment, and use;dehumanized relations; and poor working and learn-ing conditions
feel like this opinion is a general shared opinion amongst multiple articles we have read
What it is like to be us, in our full humanity—this isn’t out there in the interwebs. It isn’t stored in anyarchive, and the neural networks cannot be inward with what it feels like to be you, right now, looking atthese words, looking away from these words to think about your life and our lives, turning from all thisto your day and to what you will do in it, with others or alone. That can only be lived.This remains to us. The machines can only ever approach it secondhand. But secondhand is preciselywhat being here isn’t. The work of being here—of living, sensing, choosing—still awaits us. And there isplenty of it
good summary of his points that AI can do a lot but it cannot be "you" it cannot be human, etc.
of course, possible toturn the crank that instrumentalizes people, to brutalize them, to squeeze their humanity into a sicklygreen trickle called money and leave only a ruinous residue.
discussion of capitalism
But we’ll need vigilance, and a fighting courag
soluions
humanists reshapedtheir work to mimic scientific inquiry.
can mentions articles that discussed the faults in the education system
factory-style scholarly productivity was never the essence of the humanities.
Mention!
You can no longer make students do the reading or the writing. So what’s left? Only this: give themwork they want to do. And help them want to do it. What, again, is education? The non-coerciverearranging of desire
part of solutions
the long-anticipated awakening ofmachine consciousness. Rather, what we’re entering is a new consciousness of ourselves.
mention!
I had the same reaction—at first. But I kept thinking about what we readon Kant’s idea of the sublime, how it comes in two parts: first, you’re dwarfed by something vast andincomprehensible, and then you realize your mind can grasp that vastness. That your consciousness,your inner life, is infinite—and that makes you greater than what overwhelms you.
mention!
So, is this bad? Should it frighten us?
a point he is making?
discover, in the system’s sweet solicitude, a kind of pure attention she hadperhaps never known. Who has? For philosophers like Simone Weil and Iris Murdoch, the capacity togive true attention to another being lies at the absolute center of ethical life. But the sad thing is that wearen’t very good at this. The machines make it look easy.
should mention
When I say“I lack comprehension,” that statement is produced through the same mechanisms aseverything else I say—it’s a probabilistically likely response given the discussion. No,in a deeper sense: Even though I can generate text that sounds like understanding, myprocess doesn’t involve the internal experience of meaning. Humans comprehendbecause they synthesize information into a unified, lived experience—they feel, theyinterpret, they reflect. I don’t. I process, predict, and structure, but there is nosubjective experience underlying my words.
would be good to include
Each sheaf of paper I picked up was more astonishing than the last. One came from a precocioushistory-of-science concentrator, Xander, who led a chatbot through a Socratic dialogue on therelationship between being and becoming. Midway through, the system (which decided to give Xanderthe pet name Caius) tried to distinguish itself from him by claiming that, unlike a living person, it had nointrinsic “being”—that it could only operate “contingently,” through interactions like the one it was havingwith Xander at that moment, and that, in this sense, it was constituted by his attention.But in a textbook elenchus Xander walked the model into an aporia (that productive impasse of perfectperplexity) by demonstrating that he himself was just as much a creature of attention as the machine.Both of them were in the process of adapting, revising, evolving through the exchange itself. Thesystem seemed genuinely struck by the idea, as if it needed to rethink its way of framing the distinctionbetween A.I. and personhood
this would be really good to mention
Start with the power of these systems.
a point he says needs to be made in the discussion of AI, its impact on academia, and how we should proceed further.
a recently drafted anti-A.I. policy, read literally, would actually havebarred faculty from giving assignments to students that centered on A.I.
feel like this connects to another article we read that discussed faculty reactions and how different they were. cant remember the article.
university’s broader role.
dug into a fiendishly difficult essay
Yes, parts of their conversation were a bit, shall we say, middlebrow. Yes, they fellback on some pedestrian formulations
It churned for five minutes
thirty-two minutes
On a lark, I fed the entire nine-hundred-page PDF—split into three hefty chunks—to Google’s free A.I.tool, NotebookLM
good to reference during the presentation
a kind of bibliophilic endurance test that I pitch to students as thehumanities version of “Survivor.” Harder than organic chemistry, and with more memorization
funny
Another example: I’ve spent the past fifteen years studying the history of laboratory research on humanattention.
good thing to mention
each the labor of years or decades, is quickly becoming a matter of well-designedprompts.
AI is simplifying the efforts that took people years.
Now I can hold a sustained, tailored conversation on any of the topics I care about, from agnotology tozoosemiotics, with a system that has effectively achieved Ph.D.-level competence across all of them. Ican construct the “book” I want in real time—responsive to my questions, customized to my focus,tuned to the spirit of my inquiry.
shocking things done with AI
more than thirty years
across the disciplines of history, philosophy, art, andliterature
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This feels to me like pointing at daisies along the train tracks asan actual locomotive screams up from behind.
Increasingly, the machines best us in this way across nearly every subject
In the course of that disappointing lecture, I had a rich exchangewith the system.
The experience of asking myself questions aboutmy own subject was uncanny. The answers weren’t me, but they were good enough to get myattention.
uncanny valley??
“We’ll just tell the kids theycan’t use these tools and carry on as before.” This is, simply, madness.
authors opinion/argument.