. That completes thesteps and then repeat the process three times
"this was repeated 3 times..."
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and then filled with 10.00 mL of 4% sample using a 10.00 mL
separate filling of beaker from this sentence. Introduce the pipette before filling
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4% sugar was given as thecalibration standard
state that is used, not given
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To measure the sugar content density
directing reader
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There was a measurement of the initial volume and finalvolume. With that information it is used to gather the density of the rod
not needed. could avoid set up sentence
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Insert the rod into thecylinder to get the final volume
change in tense. giving orders versus stating process
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A rod was measured using an electronic balance to find the mass
"the mass of the rod was measured using an electronic balance"
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Metal Rod Density: PreparaƟon and Materials
overall format is weird. there is no need to separate into different sub sections within subsection
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parƟally filled with water, approximately halfway
more concise wording - feels wordy
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Questions 6-7 were then completed using thecreated scatter plot and its given equation
delete this. it is not needed
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was assigned from a total of six standards: 0, 2, 4, 8and 16 percent sugar.
naw man - not needed.
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and the mass wasrecorded
might not be needed
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place weigh paper
considered "weigh paper was placed"
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Using that measure a metalrod and record measurement.
Missing comma; might also considered saying "using the scale"
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hen take a 25 mL graduated cylinder a
feels like instruction, vs what was next
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