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  1. Sep 2020
    1. Because of his design, I believe his “disabling” power should come from keeping the hero within his inflexible range, unable to act, in a way that’s similar to Jorm or Warlord but without being too unbalanced with harassing power. So, I suggest we give him undodgeable, chainable lights, at least two successive lights from any direction, to better deal with opponents who would evade from his short-range attacks. Mind you, to avoid being too effective against assassins, only the first light in a chain should be undodgeable, so the second canbe countered. While shoves should remain unchainable with neutral lights, they should remain chainable with heavy attacks, or an unblockable finisher, as an effective base mixup. To keep Law’s defensive power high, shoves should be made faster to act as better openers, seeing how the shove is an integral part of his moveset. Because Law has somewhat higher stamina usage in combat, the shoves can’t be “spammed” or overused. Add some extra hyperarmor frames, coupled with a stun ability, and Law could use these quicker shoves to better disable his opponents.My idea is that the stun effect could last a few seconds and drain some of an opponent’s stamina to keep enemies on the defensive. Like before, the shove should allow him to execute a short chain of lights, heavies, or a guardbreak to effectively mix his moves together.

      Previous posts on Lawbringer in this subreddit have been a mix of rants, or detailed lists of possible changes for the mechanics or statistics of the hero. I’m opting for something a little different with base changes in the character’s playstyle instead, in a post that wouldn’t take longer than ten minutes to read.

    2. Shugo

      Slang words, such as “Ubi” (short for Ubisoft) helps with the tone of the post. Words like “Jorm” and “Shugo” are short nicknames for certain heroes, and helps to identify myself as someone who knows and plays the game. Gaming lingo like “opener”, “finisher”, and “disabler” persuade readers to believe I have at least some good knowledge about the game and its mechanics.

    3. If you’ve come this far, you’ve at least shown some interest in my sort-of-rant, so just settle in.

      The post is written in essay-like form, a common sort of post on Reddit, but uncommon on the r/forhonor subreddit. The format alone should catch the attention of at least a few readers, while the topic of Lawbringer itself is a common one in the various multimodal communities of the game.

    4. So, what does Lawbringer offer? What makes him shine? Reduced damage? Reduced health? No openers except a slow shove with reduced hyperarmor? Recent reworks haven’t done much, especially compared to the other heroes who can still outclass him in trades, feints, chains, and, well, you all know the rest already.

      I try my best to obey the rules of the subreddit by avoiding the use of swears or other harsh language. The subreddit has a strict “no rants allowed” rule, so I try to use a blend of logical reasoning and gaming experience to make my proposition rather than anger or disappointment at the game or its developers.

    5. Yes, yes, I know this whole post is one big cliché, but just bear with me here.

      The title is written to act as a short suggestion, rather than any sort of official-sounding, heavily worded list of changes and concepts for the hero. The words “two cents” is a pun for a playable hero in the game, Centurion. This helps to keep an informal tone for the post, to make sure I don’t come off as a self-professed expert on the game.

    1. One of the ways digital writing expands our means of communication is through its ability to allow one to annotate, or leave marginal notes, on different forms of writing on the web. This activity, then, lets you get some practice using an online annotation tool for these purposes.  ​The video to the right walks through how to sign up for an account and begin using the online annotation tool Hypothesis. 

      After getting this set up, this annotating tool feels really accessible. I hope I can use it for other courses in the future.

    2. Once you've completed your annotations, send me the link via Slack. If you have any problems getting things set up or aren't sure how to use the tool, please let me know and we can set up a Zoom meeting for a walk through.  x

      Now a paragraph. This looks interesting. Formatting annotations have usually been a problem for me in the past.