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  1. Oct 2016
    1. Imanuel’s crew, insofar as he has one: his sister Eryka, who’s 23 and is herself a YouTube personality in Indonesia, and a portly 21-year-old guy named Ricky — he asks me not to use his last name — who produces the music Imanuel makes as Rich Chigga and appears in the “Dat $tick” video.

      Colon to present.

  2. May 2016
  3. Apr 2016
    1. I grant this food will be somewhat dear, and therefore very proper for landlords, who, as they have already devoured most of the parents,

      What is happening here?

    2. A Modest Proposal

      Students-

      Highlight and annotate the rhetorical appeals (ethos, pathos, and logos); unpack the effectiveness of their use. If someone highlights before you do try to reply and add to the digital conversation.

      Also define words/concepts that are foreign to you.

  4. Mar 2016
    1. The muscle hijackers came from a variety of educational and societal backgrounds," page 231 of the report reads. "All were between 20 and 28 years old; most were unemployed with no more than a high school education and were unmarried."The report, the

      rvc3

  5. Feb 2016
  6. Jan 2016
    1. interposition

      noun 1. the act or fact of interposing or the condition of being interposed. 2. something interposed. 3. the doctrine that an individual state of the U.S. may oppose any federal action it believes encroaches on its sovereignty.

    2. 16 April 1963

      Students:

      Take your time reading this article. Highlight and define words you do not know. Put Wikipedia links to any individuals mentioned in the text.

      Also, feel free to highlight and annotate things you can expand and give insight on.

      I will also be annotating, and you can reply to my comments if you would like.

      Have fun.

      I expect that you make 3 annotations for full credit (15 points).

      Please be conscious of correct spelling and grammar.

    1. Champion of the WorldMaya Angelou“Champion of the World” is the nineteenth chapter in I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings; the title is a phrase taken from the chapter. Remembering her own childhood, the writer tells us how she and her older brother, Bailey, grew up in a townin Arkansas. The center of their lives was Grandmother and Uncle Willie’s store, a gathering place for the black community. On the night when this story takes place, Joe Louis, the “Brown Bomber” and the hero of his people, defends his heavyweight boxing title against a white contender. Angelou’s telling of the event both entertains us and explains what it was like to be African American in a certain time and place

      Note context. For real.

  7. Nov 2015
    1. “Psychologically it’s a tragedy.”

      In places like Los Angeles, Chicago, New York City, and other major urban areas how deep does this psychological tragedy go?

    1. EVERY LIFE DESERVES

      Alright squad. Here is the deal: have fun with the rest of this article, but please show that you are engaged.

      • Define words that you don't know.
      • Ask questions (I will probably answer).
      • Answer questions.
      • Link to similar articles, or things that passages remind you of.
      • Highlight and explain literary devices used

      Act like you are scribbling in the margins of your favorite book, but this time your whole class and a weirdly energetic teacher gets to read your notes.

      See you Monday!

    1. Police take drug money off the streets. If you are driving with more than 10,000 dollars you will have the money seized if you say it's not urs. If you say it's urs, u will have to fill out a form and state why u have so much cash and where it came from. Most money seized is voluntarily given up. That's because it's cartel money and they don't want to admit they are running drug money. This "journalist" just wanted a good story without giving the facts

      Thoughts?

  8. Oct 2015
    1. George Bell — a simple name, two syllables, the minimum. There were no obvious answers as to who he was or what shape his life had taken. What worries weighed on him. Whom he loved and who loved him.

      What are your thoughts on this paragraph?

    2. The apartment belonged to a George Bell. He lived alone. Thus the presumption was that the corpse also belonged to George Bell.

      Are these sentences simple or complex? Are they effective?

    1. In West’s telling, he’s had to howl because fashion people weren’t listening, and he needed their ear. “I one hundred percent had to scream,” he said. “I tried it every other way.”

      This is cool.

    1. In an article I wrote more than three decades ago, at the time of a humanitarian emergency in what is now Bangladesh, I used the example of walking by a shallow pond and seeing a small child who has fallen in and appears to be in danger of drowning. Even though we did nothing to cause the child to fall into the pond, almost everyone agrees that if we can save the child at minimal inconvenience or trouble to ourselves, we ought to do so. Anything else would be callous, indecent and, in a word, wrong. The fact that in rescuing the child we may, for example, ruin a new pair of shoes is not a good reason for allowing the child to drown.

      Is this effective or ineffective in its purpose? Why or why not?

    2. Nor are philanthropists beholden to lobbyists. As The New York Times reported recently, billions of dollars of U.S. aid is tied to domestic goods. Wheat for Africa must be grown in America, although aid experts say this often depresses local African markets, reducing the incentive for farmers there to produce more. In a decision that surely costs lives, hundreds of millions of condoms intended to stop the spread of AIDS in Africa and around the world must be manufactured in the U.S., although they cost twice as much as similar products made in Asia.

      Ask one question prompted by the knowledge of this paragraph.

    3. In a country in which 96 percent of the population say they believe in a supreme being, that’s a striking fact.

      Find a source to confirm or refute this. Link it.

    4. In the past, diseases that affect only the poor have been of no commercial interest to pharmaceutical manufacturers, because the poor cannot afford to buy their products.

      How does this tie back to things we have discussed in class?

    5. As Gates told a meeting of the World Health Assembly in Geneva last year, he and his wife, Melinda, “couldn’t escape the brutal conclusion that — in our world today — some lives are seen as worth saving and others are not.” They said to themselves, “This can’t be true.” But they knew it was.

      Note how this ties back to the larger question posed.

    1. Nor are philanthropists beholden to lobbyists. As The New York Times reported recently, billions of dollars of U.S. aid is tied to domestic goods. Wheat for Africa must be grown in America, although aid experts say this often depresses local African markets, reducing the incentive for farmers there to produce more. In a decision that surely costs lives, hundreds of millions of condoms intended to stop the spread of AIDS in Africa and around the world must be manufactured in the U.S., although they cost twice as much as similar products made in Asia.

      Ask one question prompted by this paragraph.

    2. In an article I wrote more than three decades ago, at the time of a humanitarian emergency in what is now Bangladesh, I used the example of walking by a shallow pond and seeing a small child who has fallen in and appears to be in danger of drowning. Even though we did nothing to cause the child to fall into the pond, almost everyone agrees that if we can save the child at minimal inconvenience or trouble to ourselves, we ought to do so. Anything else would be callous, indecent and, in a word, wrong.

      Is this effective?

    3. diseases that affect only the poor have been of no commercial interest to pharmaceutical manufacturers,

      How does this relate to things we have talked about in class?

    4. As Gates told a meeting of the World Health Assembly in Geneva last year, he and his wife, Melinda, “couldn’t escape the brutal conclusion that — in our world today — some lives are seen as worth saving and others are not.” They said to themselves, “This can’t be true.” But they knew it was.

      Note how this ties back to the original question.

  9. Sep 2015
    1. In fact, he had:

      This speaks to the ethos of his dream. He is willing to light and create obstacles that simply don't exist. This history could show the fallacy aspect of the argument.

      wote

    2. “It’s literally like . . . I know this is really harsh, but it’s like Before Yeezy and After Yeezy,

      This direct quote speaks to the ego and mirage that is the American dream. Kanye has changed almost nothing in the fashion industry but believes his importance to be substantial.

      wote

    3. Not all the feedback was positive, but West seemed unfazed. “We destroyed the first village, the fashion village,” he told the group of 10 or so, graphic designers and members of his creative team obliged to attend a Sunday lunchtime meeting.

      This goes directly to the pathos of my argument: West is clueless that previous power is the reason he holds any sway in a new community. He woke up on third and thinks he hit a triple.

      This direct quote can show that lunacy.

      wote

    1. Braggart, trickster, and fibber along with everything else, Lucas was nonetheless a living, breathing historical figure, a highly specialized font of secret knowledge, more exotic, and certainly less picked over, than any Don Corleone. He was a whole season of the black Sopranos -- old-school division. The idea that a backwoods boy could maneuver himself into position to tell at least a plausible lie about stashing 125 kilos of zum dope on Henry Kissinger's plane -- much less actually do it -- mitigated a multitude of sins. In the end, even Lucas's resounding lack of repentance didn't seem to matter. About the only flicker of remorse I'd seen from him occurred following a couple of beers we had with one of his brothers, Vernon Lee, who is known as Shorty.

      Note the mechanics of this paragraph.

    1. I looked at the boy,who was silently watching his fly, and it was my hands that held his rod, my eyeswatching. I felt dizzy and didn’t know which rod I was at the end of.

      The mental becomes physical.

    1. But a detailed comparison of the vocabulary and other stylistic features of his own text messages and those of his niece showed that he had written the messages himself

      Get out your phones.

    2. People think that the written language seen on mobile phone screens is new and alien, but all the popular beliefs about texting are wrong. Its graphic distinctiveness is not a new phenomenon, nor is its use restricted to the young.

      Be patient for the evidence.

    3. English has had abbreviated words ever since it began to be written down. Words such as exam, vet, fridge, cox and bus are so familiar that they have effectively become new words. When some of these abbreviated forms first came into use, they also attracted criticism. In 1711, for example, Joseph Addison complained about the way words were being "miserably curtailed" - he mentioned pos (itive) and incog (nito). And Jonathan Swift thought that abbreviating words was a "barbarous custom".

      This is showing the connection between previous statements and actual evidence.

    4. "bleak, bald, sad shorthand. Drab shrinktalk ... Linguistically it's all pig's ear ... it masks dyslexia, poor spelling and mental laziness. Texting is penmanship for illiterates."

      Do you agree?

  10. Aug 2015
    1. What makes people capable of this kind of activism? The Stanford sociologist Doug McAdam compared the Freedom Summer dropouts with the participants who stayed, and discovered that the key difference wasn’t, as might be expected, ideological fervor. “All of the applicants—participants and withdrawals alike—emerge as highly committed, articulate supporters of the goals and values of the summer program,” he concluded. What mattered more was an applicant’s degree of personal connection to the civil-rights movement. All the volunteers were required to provide a list of personal contacts—the people they wanted kept apprised of their activities—and participants were far more likely than dropouts to have close friends who were also going to Mississippi. High-risk activism, McAdam concluded, is a “strong-tie” phenomenon.

      This is a "They Say." Gladwell is able to step aside and use others' information to frame his own argument against the efficacy of internet activism.

    2. “Western journalists who couldn’t reach—or didn’t bother reaching?—people on the ground in Iran simply scrolled through the English-language tweets post with tag #iranelection,” she wrote. “Through it all, no one seemed to wonder why people trying to coordinate protests in Iran would be writing in any language other than Farsi.”

      What is Gladwell proposing here?

    3. These events in the early sixties became a civil-rights war that engulfed the South for the rest of the decade—and it happened without e-mail, texting, Facebook, or Twitter.

      What is the author trying to accomplish with this line?

    1. But skeptics point out that the crowds in Cairo’s Tahrir Square continued to grow during the five days that the Mubarak government shut down the internet;

      What rhetorical appeal is this appealing to?

    1. "Yup," said George. He tried to think a little about the ballerinas. They weren't really very good-no better than anybody else would have been, anyway. They were burdened with sashweights and bags of birdshot, and their faces were masked, so that no one, seeing a free and graceful gesture or a pretty face, would feel like something the cat drug in. George was toying with the vague notion that maybe dancers shouldn't be handicapped. But he didn't get very far with it before another noise in his ear radio scattered his thoughts.

      What happens here?

  11. Jul 2015
    1. “God’s little practical joke on me—as an intellect who doesn’t like to read a lot—is like, I’ll say some superphilosophical shit, but I’ll say it the wrong way,”

      Check one two.