replace with: a knower

insert glossary entry: tshe dpag med/ amitāyus/ AD/ Amitāyus/ 'Infinite Life,' the name of the buddha in the realm of Sukhāvatī. Also known as Amitābha ('Infinite Light').

replace with: world

please make this link to the glossary entry for chos smra ba/ dharmabhāṇaka with these alternative entries:

chos smra ba'i dge slong/ dharmabhāṇakabhikṣu/ AD/ Dharma-teaching monk

replace with: a teacher

replace with: a guide

replace with: Reflect

replace with: gzungs

here, and again below, it is "ethical disciple" not "discipline" that translates tshul khrims/ śīla. So please make the glossary entry tag the whole term "ethical discipline"

delete note 13.

delete "of the fact"

add glossary entry: མྱ་ངན་ཐམས་ཅད་ཀྱི་མུན་པ་ངེས་པར་འཇོམས་པ་ mya ngan thams cad kyi mun pa nges par 'joms pa/ [no Sanskrit]/Vanquishing the Darkness of All Sorrow/ A bodhisattva present in the audience for this discourse.

please move this note (note 6) back so that it comes immediately after Kūṭāgāraśālā.

untag 'Eon' and please add a glossary entry for the whole term: bskal pa bzang po/ bhadrakalpa/AD/Fortunate Eon/ The name of the current eon, so-called because one thousand buddhas are prophesied to appear during this time.

replace with: "had said"

replace with: "spoke thus"

replace with "stores"

replace with: "Even I"

add glossary entry for mtshams med pa lnga - Standard Definition

it also occurs later in the text (1.69) as "five deeds of immediate retribution" and at 1.75 as "deeds of immediate retribution" (without "five") -- these should also be caught by the glossary entry.

replace with: "noble"

(as rendered above)

replace with: "speak this dhāraṇī"

replace with: "countless billions of"

replace with: "prophesies"

all lower case

all lower case ( as name of a samādhi)

replace with: "showered"

As far as I can see, the Toh number of the Tantra section version is not given anywhere- neither on the title page nor here. It should be given somewhere - depending on what our convention is - either on the title page or here in brackets ie: Action Tantra (Skt. kriyātantra) section (Toh 721).

delete "will"

change to "pleasing forms"

change to "wishes came true"

change to "pleasing forms"

the glossary should pick both parts of the name together as a single glossary entry for 'jam dpal gzhon nur gyur pa (which could also link to just Mañjuśrī, but the point is that both parts of the name should highlight, not just the first part). The same issue is found for other instances of the name that occur later in the sūtra.

change to: the divine knowledge of the thus-gone ones

change "supplicate" to "were supplicating him"

make all lower case (samādhi name).

also make the corresponding glossary entry all lower case.

change "obtainment of" to "obtaining"

this samādhi name should all be lower case (like the other samādhi names)

this glossary entry should not tag "the" and should come under "u"

add: , p. 233.

This glossary entry should tag: true nature of things

this glossary entry should not tag "the" and should come under "h": holy life

after "preceding sentence" add in brackets: (see note 24)

[DF has been consulted} - delete "While" - after "noted" add period [.] and start new sentence - delete "also" So it should read:

No citations..have as yet been discovered..., as Skilling has noted. Another complete Tibetan..can be found..

change to bzhin

please add at the end of the note 7:

Pelliot Tibétain 89 consists of two sūtras, the first of which is a version of the Maitreyaparipr̥cchā (cf. Toh 86), and the second of which is a version of The Questions of Gaṅgottarā. The latter begins on folio ta-2, line 2.

change to

argument

change to bzhin

add

pp. 31–33.

change to:

present narrative