this glossary entry should not tag "the" and should come under "u"

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This glossary entry should tag: true nature of things

this glossary entry should not tag "the" and should come under "h": holy life

after "preceding sentence" add in brackets: (see note 24)

[DF has been consulted} - delete "While" - after "noted" add period [.] and start new sentence - delete "also" So it should read:

No citations..have as yet been discovered..., as Skilling has noted. Another complete Tibetan..can be found..

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please add at the end of the note 7:

Pelliot Tibétain 89 consists of two sūtras, the first of which is a version of the Maitreyaparipr̥cchā (cf. Toh 86), and the second of which is a version of The Questions of Gaṅgottarā. The latter begins on folio ta-2, line 2.

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argument

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pp. 31–33.

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present narrative