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  1. Aug 2024
  2. Sep 2023
  3. Apr 2023
    1. (Josh Lucas. Is that his name? I know it’s two first names. Josh George? Brad Mike? Fred Tom? Yes, it’s Fred Tom.)

      What is the purpose of this section of this paragraph?

  4. Mar 2023
    1. And so we have a generation of young people on social media so terrified of having the wrong opinions that they have robbed themselves of the opportunity to think and to learn and to grow. I have spoken to young people who tell me they are terrified to tweet anything, that they read and re-read their tweets because they fear they will be attacked by their own. The assumption of good faith is dead. What matters is not goodness but the appearance of goodness. We are no longer human beings. We are now angels jostling to out-angel one another. God help us. It is obscene.

      Is it obscene? What do you think, angel/reader?

    2. Asking that my name be removed from your biography is not sabotaging your career.

      Notice a direct addressing of the reader here, as if she knows the subject will read her blog post.

    3. This person has created a space in which social media followers have – and this I find unforgiveable – trivialized my parents’ death, claiming that the sudden and devastating loss of my parents within months of each other during this pandemic, was ‘punishment’ for my ‘transphobia.’ This person has asked followers to pick up machetes and attack me. This person began a narrative that I had sabotaged their career, a narrative that has been picked up and repeated by others.

      Grounds/data/evidence

    4. d not been asked for permission to use my name,

      If someone did this to you--used your name without getting your approval--say as a reference on a resume, how would you feel?

    5. After I gave the March 2017 interview in which I said that a trans woman is a trans woman, I was told that this person had insulted me on social media, calling me, among other things, a murderer.

      What is the argument belying this ad hominem?

      P1: Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie declares a trans woman is trans woman P2: Labeling trans women in such a way promotes physical violence that leads to murder against people who identify this way. Conclusion: Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie is a murderer

    6. fame taints our view of the humanity of famous people

      How do you relate to people of fame? Are there any celebrities you stan? Why? If you met them, what would you talk about with them?

    7. I fully support the rights of trans people and all marginalized people.

      Why do we lump trans people into the categorization "marginalized?" What other communities could fall under this umbrella term?

    8. Then I gave an interview in March 2017 in which I said that a trans woman is a trans woman, (the larger point of which was to say that we should be able to acknowledge difference while being fully inclusive, that in fact the whole premise of inclusiveness is difference.)

      The debate:

      Is a trans woman a trans woman or a woman? Should we refer to the woman first as we do when referring to other ways of existing (often uncontrollable), such as melanin production? Why do some people argue that a trans woman (likely assigned male at birth) is a woman or not in the first place?

    9. OBSCENE

      ob-- word-forming element (prefix) meaning "toward; against; before; near; across; down"

      obscene-- Legally, "any impure or indecent publication tending to corrupt the mind and to subvert respect for decency and morality." In modern U.S. law, the definition hinged on "whether to the average person, applying contemporary community standards, the dominant theme of the material taken as a whole appeals to a prurient interest."

    1. As for the young women at the New Jersey clinic, they are visibly upset by one aspect of the egg-donation process: they can’t have sexual intercourse for several weeks after the retrieval.

      A con

    2. Some infertile couples and independent brokers are offering even more for “reproductive material.” The International Fertility Center in Indianapolis, Indiana, for instance, places ads in the Daily Princetonian offering Princeton girls as much as $35,000 per cycle. The National Fertility Registry, which, like many egg brokerages, features an online catalogue for couples to browse in, advertises $35,000 to $50,000 for Ivy League eggs. While donors are normally paid a flat fee per cycle, there have been reports of higher payments to donors who produce more eggs. College girls are the perfect donors. Younger eggs are likelier to be healthy, and the girls themselves frequently need money—college girls have long been susceptible to classified ads offering to pay them for acting as guinea pigs in medical research. One 1998 graduate of the University of Colorado set up her own website to market her eggs. She had watched a television show on egg donation and figured it “seemed like a good thing to do”—especially since she had spent her money during the past year to help secure a country music record deal. “Egg donation would help me with my school and music expenses while helping an infertile couple with a family.” Classified ads scattered throughout cyberspace feature similar offers.

      https://www.supermoney.com/how-much-do-you-get-for-donating-eggs/

    3. It is not a pleasant way to make money. Unlike sperm donation, which is over in less than an hour, egg donation takes the donor some 56 hours and includes a battery of tests, ultrasound, self-administered injections, and retrieval. Once a donor is accepted into a program, she is given hormones to stimulate the ovaries, changing the number of eggs matured from the usual one per month up to as many as fifty. A doctor then surgically removes the eggs from the donor’s ovary and fertilizes them with the designated sperm. Although most programs require potential donors to undergo a series of medical tests and counseling, there is little indication that most of the young women know what they are getting themselves into. They risk bleeding, infection, and scarring. When too many eggs are matured in one cycle, it can damage the ovaries and leave the donor with weeks of abdominal pain. (At worst, complications may leave her dead.) Longer term, the possibility of early menopause raises the prospect of future regret. There is also some evidence of a connection between the fertility drugs used in the process and ovarian cancer.

      Cons

  5. Oct 2022
    1. November 7 – The capital of Idaho Territory is moved from Lewiston to Boise; North Idaho declares the move illegal, and proposes secession.

      That time when North Idaho tried to secede! :P

  6. Oct 2021
  7. May 2021
    1. Hi, Professor Goodwin's students! This is a page note--an annotation of the entire webpage. Cool feature, huh? One other cool feature of this is that you can attach images, hyperlinks, lists (bulleted or numbered), as well as make your text bold or italicized.

  8. Apr 2021
  9. Mar 2021
    1. I sent the Regent a note in which I quoted to him the question I had put to the Foretellers ofOtherhord and the answer I had got. Tibe made no response

      Oh, hey!

    1. We ought to regard the present state of the universe as the effect of its antecedent state and as the cause of the state that is to follow. An intelligence knowing all the forces acting in nature at a given instant, as well as the momentary positions of all things in the universe, would be able to comprehend in one single formula the motions of the largest bodies as well as the lightest atoms in the world, provided that its intellect were sufficiently powerful to subject all data to analysis; to it nothing would be uncertain, the future as well as the past would be present to its eyes. The perfection that the human mind has been able to give to astronomy affords but a feeble outline of such an intelligence. (Laplace 1820)

      Meshe

  10. Feb 2021
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  12. Nov 2020
    1. pot, but

      Here is a comma preceding a coordinating conjunction, or we can just say it's a comma before a FANBOYS separating two independent clauses. GRAMMARBOMB.

  13. Sep 2020
    1. I

      This is indicative of the poem's speaker. It's unclear who it is distinctly, but it's not very distant from the poet himself. Remember that poets don't write poems from their perspectives, necessarily. Often they write from a mask, or persona, or character's point of view.

    2. a gigantic Leg

      Both poets were likely inspired by seeing actual statue fragments. When you write poetry based on art, it's called ekphrastic. One famous ekphrastic poem is Keats' "Ode on a Grecian Urn"

  14. Aug 2020
    1. April 14, 1995

      I am sure some of you were not yet born, eh? Let's think . . . Clinton was in office; this was five days before the Oklahoma City bombing; the Unabomber was active; congress passed the Child Protection and Obscenity Act; O.J. Simpson was found not guilty for murder . . .

  15. Jul 2020
    1. turning California’s forests from carbon sinks to carbon sources.

      A carbon sink? Well, a place that all the carbons "sinks" in and is held there. Permafrost is a great example of a carbon sink.

  16. Jun 2020
    1. ‘Free Speech!’ cry the snowflakes seeking a place to vent about their triggered feelings.

      Does this phrasing indicate tone? What are the specific words/places that show how the author may feel about this topic?

  17. Mar 2020
    1. echolocation

      If you really think about what she's writing here, it's bleak. Essentially, these dying whales cannot see each other and cannot speak to each other.

    2. Last year a non-profit spent $10,000 transporting a whale to an aquarium in Florida, where it died only three days after arriving. That same $10,000 could have purchased hundreds of thousands of food rations.

      What could you accomplish with $10,000?

    3. When we hear that the lady on the next street over has cancer, we don’t see the entire town flock to her house. We push and shove and wet whales all day, then walk home through town past homeless men curled up on benches — washed up like whales on the curb sides. Pulled outside by the moon and struggling for air among the sewers. They’re suffocating too, but there’s no town assembly line of food. No palpable urgency, no airlifting plane.

      Disparities in health outcomes • Life expectancy at birth in low-income countries is 18.1 years lower than in high-income countries. Much of this difference is attributable to preventable and treatable conditions. • In low-income countries, one in 41 women die from maternal causes. Such deaths rarely occur in uppermiddle and high-income countries. Maternal deaths contribute more to differences in life expectancy in low-income countries between men and women than any other single cause. • In low-income countries, more than a third of children are stunted (short for their age), reflecting long- term nutritional deprivation, and one child out of every 14 born will die before his or her fifth birthday. • In 2016, life expectancy in men was 4.4 years lower than for women, with higher death rates for multiple causes, especially cardiovascular diseases, road injuries, lung cancer, chronic obstructive pulmonary disease and stroke. Men are generally exposed to increased occupational risks, and have higher prevalence of tobacco use and higher per capita consumption of alcohol. In many settings, men use health services less than women, even after taking into account reproductive-related consultations. The health gap between men and women is widest in high-income countries.

      Source: WHO's World Health Statistics 2019 Report

    4. Jonah

      Margo Schlanger, a Professor of Law at the University of Michigan Law School, in her essay "In The Story of Jonah, an Urgent Lesson About Solitary Confinement," retells the Biblical tale to which Keegan refers in the following passage:

      Jonah’s first chapter tells us about God’s call to the prophet Jonah to go to Nineveh—an enormous, distant, and non-Jewish city—and inform the Ninevites of the errors of their ways. But Jonah does not do what prophets do. He does not answer God in words; he does not inveigh or argue. He simply disobeys, running away as fast and far as he can. He hires a ship to Tarshish, at the other end of the Mediterranean. On the ship, too, Jonah declines the prophetic role of speaking to God. As all the sailors cry out to their gods to save them from the deadly storm that threatens, he sleeps. Even when the lots are cast and it is apparent that he is the source of the storm, he explains to his shipmates what is going on but does not deign to pray, or even talk, to God. He has them throw him into the water, and when he is in the water, drowning, again he fails to seek salvation, intercession, explanation. But then things change, the text tells us: “God appointed a great fish to swallow Jonah; and Jonah was in the belly of the fish three days and three nights. Then Jonah prayed to the Lord, his God, from the belly of the fish.” So we learn from the Book of Jonah the possibility, the aspiration, that stress and discomfort, hopelessness and fear can lead to some kind of redemption. Jonah uses his three days alone with his conscience to good effect. He ends them with obedience in two ways: First, he re-embraces his relationship with God, by calling out in prayer to him. And second, he goes to Nineveh, as commanded.

    5. People are strange about animals. Especially large ones. Daily, on the docks of Wellfleet Harbor, thousands of fish are scaled, gutted and seasoned with thyme and lemon. No one strokes their sides with water. No one cries when their jaws slip open.

      Do you agree that "people are strange about animals," as Keegan claims?

      Activity!: Respond to the above question by putting a "thumbs-up" or "thumbs-down" into the Zoom chat!

  18. Feb 2020
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  20. Oct 2019
  21. Apr 2019
    1. have had

      The present perfect form of have is have had.

      ‘Have you had your breakfast?’ ‘I have had a cup of coffee, but I haven’t had anything to eat yet.’

      I haven’t had any rest since morning.

      The past perfect form of have is had had (had + past participle form of have).

  22. basdwpweb.beth.k12.pa.us basdwpweb.beth.k12.pa.us
    1. The food he liked was broughtto him without hesitation by the attendants; he seemed not even to miss his freedom; his noble body,furnished almost to the bursting point with all that it needed, seemed to carry freedom around with it too;somewhere in his jaws it seemed to lurk; and the joy of life streamed with such ardent passion from histhroat that for the onlookers it was not easy to stand the shock of it

      Why does Kafka include this sentence about the panther?

    2. Many more days went by, however, and that too came to an end. Anoverseer’s eye fell on the cage oneday and he asked the attendants why this perfectly good cage should be left standing there unused withdirty straw inside it; nobody knew, until one man, helped outby the notice board, remembered about thehunger artist. They poked into the straw with sticks and found him in it. “Are you still fasting?” asked theoverseer, “when on earth do you mean to stop?” “Forgive me, everybody,” whispered the hunger artist;only the overseer, who had his ear to the bars, understood him. “Of course,” said the overseer, and tappedhis forehead with a finger to let the attendants know what state the man was in, “we forgive you.” “I alwayswanted you to admire my fasting,” said the hunger artist. “Wedo admire it,” said the overseer, affably.“But you shouldn’t admire it,” said the hunger artist. “Wellthen we don’t admire it,” said the overseer,“but why shouldn’t we admire it?” “Because I have to fast, I can’t help it,” said the hunger artist. “What afellow you are,” said the overseer, “and why can’t you help it?” “Because,” said the hunger artist, liftinghis head a little and speaking, with his lips pursed, as if fora kiss, right into the overseer’s ear, so that nosyllable might be lost, “because I couldn’t find the food I liked. If I had found it, believe me, I should havemade no fuss and stuffed myself like you or anyone else.” These were his last words, but in his dimmingeyes remained the firm though no longer proud persuasion thathe was still continuing to fast.

      How is this artist's view toward his art affected by society?

    3. he could astound theworld by establishing a record never yet achieved, a statement that certainly provoked a smile among theother professionals, since it left out of account the changein public opinion, which the hunger artist in hiszeal conveniently forgot

      What, logically, would taking hunger artistry to its extreme entail?

    4. The impresariocame forward, without a word—for the band made speech impossible—lifted his arms in the air above theartist, as if inviting Heaven to look down upon this creaturehere in the straw, this suffering martyr, whichindeed he was, although in quite another sense; grasped him around the emaciated waist, with exaggeratedcaution, so that the frail condition he was in might be appreciated; and committed him to the care of theblenching ladies, not without secretly giving him a shakingso that his legs and body tottered and swayed.

      How many sentences do you count in this section?

    5. season tickets

      Have you ever purchased season tickets or a season pass for a team or institution? Did you use them as much as you had intended? Did you purchase them out of pressure from a sales artist? Reflect upon this!