I added this bit and pushed it higher up, because I think it's important to articulate early on... thoughts?

Since it's been general the whole way through, wasn't sure if you wanted to personalise here or just keep it general, so I removed Brooke's name.

Other option is to clone the page and send out customised links to everyone with just this bit customised (less work) but could be a nice personal touch as it's the last thing they read?

Eg. https://theladyalliance.com/the-lady-alliance-course/brookewillson

This is a pretty long link though, so I'd consider changing the slug to /empowerment-course

then...

Eg. https://theladyalliance.com/empowerment-course/brookewilson

Up to you!

Added this wording so it's clear they only get 30% of the sales they bring in, not all sales made across the board. The more times we mention this, the better just so we cover ourselves.

It originally said 'No, this is a partnership' but it is an affiliate program. Changed this.

A lot of this needed changing from a JV format to affiliate. See my notes in the relevant drop downs.

I thought of adding Mike's first week stats in here, but I realised that his is a JV, not affiliate. Earning 60% on an $89 product will earn you way more than 30% on a $50 course. They aren't really comparable.

So I also removed the example of @darelistfamily here, because those numbers are misleading as it was technically a JV, not affiliate. I think we can just give the @kate example at 0.5%.

I've taken the focus off CourseFolk being educators who craft the lessons and made that something The Lady Alliance does and CourseFolk just does the techy website/members stuff. I think influencers will balk at a random company doing the lesson writing part for them. I'm still happy to do the interviews and workshop the lessons, but maybe I can do that with a Lady Alliance tag somehow. We can chat more about how this will work

I've also made this page mobile responsive as I assume most people will view on mobile.

added that they can login to their affiliate dashboard as this is standard across influencer programs.

Referring to these 2 options again so it's consistent.

added this bit to get them inspired

Creating a call to action here.

I think it's getting a bit long for a general pitch document so I deleted the section with all the steps. Our original pitch was designed to send to JV partners writing a whole course, hence the level of detail. Shorter is fine for affiliates I think.

I think once they're interested, we can send that info to them.

0.005 is written 0.5% not 0.05%. Changed this.

Added this bit, because it's VERY unlikely people are going to covert 3% of their audience without paid ads.

I've merged a part that talked about attribution higher up with this part about Your story.

I think we need to make this clear up-front so we don't get screwed around by people running past deadlines.

I've written this section so make sure you're happy with these 2 options.

I've put this high up so people know there are two ways they can create their chapter.

I added this to get people moving through.

Image is brighter.

I've shortened this section and pushed the rest down to the next paragraph. Let's make it short and snappy going in to get their attention.

need to link here when it's complete

Which chart are you thinking here Mike?

This is a personal example haha. Not pointing any fingers Leo 😂

Needs a task

Estimate number of hours per week

link:

number estimated.

I assumed this but wasn't sure?

Mike to insert story about hiking with BearBear here.

Is this more direct?

Here are my edits

Ok

This is an interesting headline