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  1. Apr 2021
    1. 750 and 800 words

      Our op-eds will be a little longer, at 900 words. This does not include the Works Cited page, but does include titles, subtitles, and other formatting and style elements.

  2. Jul 2020
    1. States should be reporting much more data on infections, testing and measures to control the virus.

      The author's argument is crystal clear. Words like "should" are strong indicators that the writer has taken a position, rather than simply stating a fact.

      I would consider this the thesis statement. In a traditional essay, we typically find the thesis at the end of the introduction, which you can still adhere to in your op-ed if you wish.

    2. useful list

      The author could have presented this as a graphic within the text. Remember, you need at least one purposeful multimodal component in your op-ed (i.e. photo, chart, graph, table, map, etc.).

    3. Other data might take a bit longer to gather

      This is a potential counterargument--the author needs to refute it.

    4. standardized manner

      This would be an ideal place to include additional research. What does this "standardized manner" look like? What are the benefits? Since the author mentioned Germany and South Korea earlier, perhaps they could provide excerpt from one of their reports as an example.

      What other places might the writer include more research? We don't need citations in excess, but there are bound to be places where a additional justification or clarification is needed.

    5. make it public on their own

      The author could elaborate on this important "So what?" idea; why can't we afford to wait for new leadership? What are the implications?

    6. That leaves the question of exactly what data states should be providing.

      This supports the thesis as well, as indicates that readers will see specifics in the sentences that follow. Illustration--or a developmental pattern that involves providing and explaining examples--is an effective method in persuasive writing.

    7. Countries that report standard national data on the virus — including Germany and South Korea — have done a better job of controlling the pandemic.

      This is another support point for the thesis.

    8. review

      Logos!

    9. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention

      Ethos!

    10. reckless disregard

      Strong example of pathos!

    11. Because this hasn’t happened, states have concocted their own dissimilar reporting systems, many of which are grossly inadequate.

      This is another support point for the thesis, located in a traditional topic sentence position, as you would see in a paragraph in an essay.

    12. a well-functioning CDC would’ve gathered clear, uniform information

      This is a support point for the thesis.

    13. undermine

      As in the NYT op-ed, the in-text citations come in the form of hyperlinks. Again, for our purposes, please use traditional MLA parenthetical documentation and include a Works Cited page at the end of the piece.

    14. officials need to see where exactly outbreaks are occurring and whether the measures they’re taking to defeat Covid-19 — including mask-wearing, testing and treatment — are working. The U.S. needs to know more specifically which people are being infected and where they’re picking up the coronavirus

      This is an elaboration on the thesis statement. It outlines what readers can expect in the body of the article.

    15. By Tuesday, the case count was over 4 million, more than a quarter of the global total, and U.S. deaths had climbed above 149,000. Per capita, the American death rate is the fourth highest in the world.

      Statistics make for powerful hooks at the start of an introduction.

    16. To Fight Covid-19, the U.S. Needs a More Detailed View

      The word "fight" exudes pathos. I don't love the wording "detailed view," but it definitely builds intrigue.

    1. The best alternative is to have meals packaged and delivered to classrooms, which would also reduce contact between cafeteria workers and students

      Identify ideas like this one that appear to have merit, but aren't directly supported with research.That doesn't mean you need an excess of citations, but consider which ideas might need more validation or justification. When I saw this, I wondered what packaged meals would look like--who will prepare them (the cafe workers or an outside company) and what will they cost compared to a traditional cafeteria buffet? Is there a school already implementing this strategy that others could look to for guidance or precedent?

      See if you can identify other places where additional research would have offered more substance or clarification.

    2. Opening Schools Won’t Be Easy, but Here’s How to Do It Safely

      The title leaves no mystery about the content of the op-ed. There is some pathos here, but the title is a great place to include more of it (in fewer words).

    3. A classroom prepared to open in Fairfax, Va.Credit...

      This image is ok. It serves a purpose, but isn't especially compelling. Consider graphics that will really engage readers, while illustrating specific claims.

    4. Ezekiel J. Emanuel (@ZekeEmanuel) is vice provost of global initiatives and professor of medical ethics and health policy at the University of Pennsylvania. Saskia Popescu (@SaskiaPopescu) is an infectious disease epidemiologist. James Phillips (@DrPhillipsMD) is chief of disaster medicine at George Washington University’s School of Medicine and Health Sciences. The three are partners in a consulting firm that advises companies on how to respond to Covid-19.

      Important ethos here! As you cite experts/reputable organizations, you can include their ethos directly in the text.

      Example: According to Ezekiel J. Emanuel, vice provost of global initiatives and professor of medical ethics and health policy at the University of Pennsylvania...

    5. First, schools cannot reopen safely when community transmission is high and climbing.

      This is a supporting point for the thesis. Think of it as the topic sentence of a paragraph in a traditional essay; the components of an op-ed are very similar, but have a different layout and approach.

    6. We all want schools to open, even as we recognize the risks attached. Will the measures we outline permit a normal school experience? No. But these recommendations will permit relatively safe schools and allow in-person education and as much socializing as possible.During this pandemic, that is the best we can hope for.

      This conclusion effectively answers the "So what?" question and examines the bigger pictures. The authors acknowledge that the situation isn't ideal, but having something to hold on to is better than nothing at all.

    7. Being safe is not free

      This is another potential counterargument--that these measures are costly--and a great example of pathos.

    8. Schools must adhere to public health measures and reduce density in classrooms and elsewhere on campus

      This is the final supporting point for the thesis.

    9. Yes, the classroom may pose the most risk, as students will spend the most time there and are in proximity to others who may cough or sneeze. This will certainly be the case during cold and flu season. But we think that with proper funding, classrooms can be made relatively safe

      And this is another counterargument + refutation.

    10. Third, focus on the basics where risks are tolerable

      Here is another supporting point for the thesis.

    11. We know that this will be both disappointing and difficult. But close contact for prolonged periods of time with forced exhalations is what increases the risk of transmission. Playing football and basketball and wrestling simply cannot be done safely. We understand that missing a season could lead to missed scholarships for student athletes. But these activities will have to wait a year.

      Here, the author recognizes some potential counterarguments and refutes them.

    12. Second, schools should avoid high-risk activities.

      This is another supporting point for the thesis.

    13. below 5 percent. By our count, 12 states and the District of Columbia

      In a real op-ed, citations take the form of hyperlinks. For our purposes, we will stick to MLA parenthetical documentation with a Works Cite page at the end of the article.

    14. Safety First

      This is a great example of a purposeful multimodal component. Include at least one in your op-ed.

    15. C.D.C. and the National Academies of Sciences, Engineering and Medicine

      These are credible sources. Make sure to cite from a combination of reputable news sources and scholarly materials. You can also cite from organizations like these.

    16. In all reopenings, basic precautions are essential: low community spread, physical distancing, mask-wearing, hand hygiene, adequate ventilation and cleaning of facilities at night

      This supports the authors' notion that safely reopening schools is about more than just the classroom itself.

    17. We must ensure that all five of the core school-based activities — transportation, time in the classroom, mealtimes, gym and extracurricular activities — are safe.

      I would consider this the thesis statement.

    18. not all of them will be safe to restart

      This is another component of the argument and a continual point of debate. The authors' position is clear.

    19. the focus should be on more than just the classroom

      This is the authors' argument, in a nutshell.

    1. a wide range of intellectually honest opinions

      "Intellectually honest" = back your claims with credible research!

    2. The goal is to supply readers with a steady stream of big ideas and provocative arguments, and to entertain them

      The "entertainment" part of our op-eds depends on tone and voice. Remember, you can write conversationally in an op-ed, but still need to keep it professional. Engage readers.

    3. collegial combat

      You may find a classmate writing about the same current event you are--and expressing a completely different opinion!

    4. greater opportunity for exploration of issues and presentation of new insights and new ideas

      Keyword: NEW. That's you!

    5. challenge it

      As you learn about your current event, you will likely read through many news publications, some of which are strictly fact based, and others which are op-eds themselves. You are coming to the table with your own viewpoint, and you are prepared to defend it.

    6. Get people interested in important issues of the day, with the right balance of fact and thoughtful analysis.

      This is exactly what we are going for: engaging in a persuasive discussion of current events, where our analyses are supported with credible research.

    1. Check the consistency of your opinion

      This is crucial to persuading an audience! Yes, you will recognize the opposing viewpoint, but only in an effort to strengthen your own. You are absolutely taking one side in the argument around your current event.

    2. A good method of perfecting your voice is to get in the habit of reading your column or op-ed out loud

      This is a good habit to get into for any type of writing! Listen for areas that might be awkward, wordy, vague, confusing, repetitive, or aggressive.

    3. Columns are most typically conversational in tone

      You have some flexibility here, and aren't limited to third person point of view, as in other types of writing. This op-ed is still a formal piece, however, so use some of the adjectives below as a checklist to ensure a strong voice. :)

    4. Contains a final epiphany or calls the reader to action

      Remember, this is the "So what?" of the piece. Why does this topic matter? What is its overall impact?

    5. hook

      Just like the essays we've written, your op-ed will have a hook to engage readers!

    6. Library, academic, or internet research

      We started working on this earlier in the semester and will continue to refine our skills. You will consult a combination of reputable news sources and scholarly materials.

    7. Field research

      Please don't hesitate to reach out if you need help developing a survey, interview questions, etc.

    8. to be successful the columns must be grounded in solid research

      This is an essential component of this final exam! You are required to cite from three credible sources (primary or secondary). Within your op-ed, you will include a total of five paraphrases, summaries, or direct quotes (or a combination of these).

    9. clearly defined topic and theme

      In this case, we are focusing on current events--national or international--from the last year.

    10. strong, informed, and focused opinion of the writer on an issue of relevance to a targeted audience

      For our purposes, you are the writer, and you will be expressing your opinion on a current event.

  3. Apr 2020
    1. The evidence directly linking children’s screen time to cognitive and social harm seems, in reality, to be paper thin.

      This is reassuring, given that schooling for our seven-year-old has moved completely online.

    1. Use the button to get a sharable link to the page with annotations

      I can use this to show students how to annotate an article on the web or in the library database.