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8 Matching Annotations
- Oct 2020
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- May 2020
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www.nytimes.com www.nytimes.com
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The Republican bill
Paragraph 7
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- Apr 2020
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dyquisto.wixsite.com dyquisto.wixsite.com
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the number of outbreaks among birds and poultry remains high. In addition, the virus in constantly evolving.
Could potentially bridge sentences together and shorten it
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but work has shown that the virus only needs five favorable mutations to become transmissible among ferrets (Herfst, 2012)
The virus could mutate and become a danger to ferrets
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which may kill millions of people
Could omit or shorten to, "may prove fatal."
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60% of the infected people have died (391 cases) (WHO, 2014
Omit the number of fatal cases, keep percentage
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outbreaks among humans have been only sporadic so far
Outbreaks only go so far
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first reported in humans in Hong Kong in 1997
First case of the virus was in Hong Kong in 1997
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