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  1. Oct 2020
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    Microsoft Word - PLSI-200 Midterm Essay Prompts (comp).docx
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    1. Jac186 09 Oct 2020

      Check Module 5

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  3. May 2020
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    The Health Debate Shows What Both Parties Care About Most
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    1. Jac186 18 May 2020
      The Republican bill

      Paragraph 7

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  5. Apr 2020
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    Paraphrasing a Paragraph
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    1. Jac186 12 Apr 2020
      the number of outbreaks among birds and poultry remains high. In addition, the virus in constantly evolving.

      Could potentially bridge sentences together and shorten it

    2. Jac186 12 Apr 2020
      but work has shown that the virus only needs five favorable mutations to become transmissible among ferrets (Herfst, 2012)

      The virus could mutate and become a danger to ferrets

    3. Jac186 12 Apr 2020
      which may kill millions of people

      Could omit or shorten to, "may prove fatal."

    4. Jac186 12 Apr 2020
      60% of the infected people have died (391 cases) (WHO, 2014

      Omit the number of fatal cases, keep percentage

    5. Jac186 12 Apr 2020
      outbreaks among humans have been only sporadic so far

      Outbreaks only go so far

    6. Jac186 12 Apr 2020
      first reported in humans in Hong Kong in 1997

      First case of the virus was in Hong Kong in 1997

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