Think of this plan (the word for map in French) as the map to your essay that will guide you along your journey to completion
I like this because it reminds me so much of the mind map we would do in class honestly I like how this relates to a lot of the stuff we have done in class because all the stuff professor dan has told us about how to write a paragraph has helped me out a lot and I think helped me become a better writer
For this step, use the information from step one, set a timer for 30 minutes, remove all distractions (the phone with the alarm on it?!) and write continuously
this helped out so much with the timed write I had to do because I feel like I was more or less in the zone and was surprised by everything I wrote because normally I have trouble thinking during a timed write. But I feel like with all the distractions removed it helped so much
“Shitty First Draft.”
this has me laughing but also kind of impressed by this because I remember professor dan mentioning this but I didn't really think it was true until now that I saw it and I actually like how they called it because I feel like thats how everyone feels about there first draf myself included
One way to break into your thoughts and/or opinion about a writing assignment is to turn the assignment task into a question.
this article has such great tips because I had never really thought about to break or develop my idea by using this I am actually surprised about how much this has taught me about how to think and break down my idea much better and successful with out stressing myself out
The first step, the biggest one is just getting started by collecting your ideas.
I do this a lot ever since I got into this class because of the amount of time we have to actually think about what we want to write thanks to the due dates and it actually helps a lot it helps me think better and not get stressed out and I feel like my work is done way better when I actually think about what I want to write about
I think the hard work of writing is just how long a book is terrible before it’s good
I can feel this on another level because this reminds me of the whole not judging a a book by a cover mainly because by personal experience because I do this a lot when I read the first pages and I don't like it I immediately think its bad you know then a lot of people tells me its good and that I judged too quick
Take breaks to avoid being overwhelmed and losing focus.
I feel like I need to do this more because me personally I save some big writing projects for last minute because that is when I think best but I feel like I get too overwhelmed and stuff also and I don't like it because then I get stressed out about it at times
“Start writing, no matter what. The water does not flow until the faucet is turned on.
I like this quote it really grabbed my attention basically saying like start writing whenever you have your ideas and just let them flow from your brain to your hand I like that I had never really thought of writing like that
Keep in mind, whatever discipline your major is in or the profession you choose, you will need to write, wel
I feel like this is something people need to keep in mind a lot because I feel like people think depending on there career they won't have to write or do other things they don't like doing
expressive writing is a process that takes time since thinking and expressing your thoughts, and considering and developing your ideas takes time.
I can agree to this mainly because of what I have learned throughout professor dans class is to well prepare and develop my idea before writing thanks to Eli review which is something I have grown to do now more often now but still too used to the free writing still
Writing, the kind we want to read and share and read again,
I can relate to this a lot because me personally when I read I like it to be something engaging that grabs my attention not something well is quite boring or short to be honest
Consider and reflect on your writing process by reading about the steps writers take as they write for academic and professional purposes
I like this because normally I don't think when I write about a strategy I just right just like that most the time so I like this maybe It can be something I can use in the future
SF State encourages its students, faculty, and staff to engage fully with the community and develop and share knowledge
I think this is cool how they want you and in a way motivate you to interact with the community and be part of it in a way so you well you know can get used to well who knows maybe a whole new family
Building on a century-long history of commitment to quality teaching
I feel like his is important because I feel like as always with a good teacher and someone who has a good connection with his/her students can make the learning environment a whole a lot I speak personally because I had that experience with some of my teachers and I ended up passing there classes just fine
From the heart of a diverse community, San Francisco State University honors roots, stimulates intellectual and personal development, promotes equity, and inspires the courage to lead, create, and innovate.
I think this is real important and something I am glad that SF State has is that they care more about the person as a whole and trying to help them succeed rather then just throwing them there and expect them to succeed on there own
In addition, it guides and focuses your program’s decision processes concerning important assessment questions and directions needing investigation, based on your program’s larger direction, values, and goals
I like this one because it emphasizes on the previous one in more deeper depth and I like this because a lot of schools say this but don't really act upon it and my first year I can gladly say that this was true for this school
First, it synthesizes the many unique talents and goals of your faculty and aligns them into a single, common purpose.
I like this because it illustrates how everything always comes down to one common goal yours you know
What do we do, why do we do it, how do we do it, who are we doing it for?
I find this interesting because it is a great hook to be honest it caught my attention real quick to be honest
Finally, counternarratives are a resource rather than an obstacle that must beovercome through management
I like this one saying counter narratives are more of a resource I feel like this is rigth mainly because someone who masters well the art of counternarrative can be quite successful in using it and being sailent in tense situations as oppose to someone who doesn't so I found this one very intruigng but interesting at the same time I liked this one a lot
An attention to counternarratives can help organizations make tensions among dif-fering perspectives salient, by bringing the unheard and unsaid to light and makingalternativeviewpointsvisibleforanalysisanddiscussion
I find this very interesting on how I guess it is saying in a way that we should use counter narratives on the daily life I guess so that arguments or anything like that aren't brought up
Counternarratives play a role in the construction of identity, with identity under-stood as relational, taking form through interaction in social contexts.
I find interesting how counter narrative is kinda of a way of who we are and that its a part of us
In this sense, counternarratives play a role in storytellers positioningthemselves against, or critiquing, the themes and ideologies of master narratives.Used in this way, “counternarratives” refer to “the stories which people tell and livewhich offer resistance, either implicitly or explicitly, to dominant cultural narratives”
now I find this interesting because I feel like this makes a lot more sense to me personally of how counternarrative should be explained because me personally like I got in trouble a lot and would try to pin stuff on me and I would always counter it so I can say from experience this is more or less what a counter narrative really is instead of what I was kinda taught at school
In general, the positionality of counternarratives has been seen as a means of opposingor resisting socially and culturally informed master narratives (about, for example,gender, sexuality, ethnicity, and profession), which are often normative or oppressive,
this is so true to me because I was taught in school that the counter narrative is always going against what the other person is saying no matter much of the situation
including how members position themselves narratively, how tension can be madesalient, and how resistance to change may become a resource rather than an obstacle.
this surprised on how they think about using more for like for oneself and how it can be used for various of different ways
University of Pennsylvania’s Annenberg Public Policy Center, found that about 15% believed the pharmaceutical industry created the coronavirus and more than 28% thought it was a bioweapon made by the Chinese government
I find this interesting because this the #1 thing going on in the social media too when I would see it and It would surprise me a lot how many pole would agree with it just because of a post
There’s often a lot of uncertainty in crisis situations,
because with uncertainty people get scared and don't know if what the government Is saying is true especially when something like this took everyone by surprise
Six “degrees of manipulation”—impersonation, conspiracy, emotion, polarization, discrediting, and trolling
this is so interesting because I always thought conspiracy was its own little thing like section I didn't all these others were connected like this
If we later hear a correction, it doesn’t invalidate our thoughts—and it’s our own thoughts that can maintain a bias, even when we accept that the original information was false.”
I know about this because my self I have experienced it in the past in a way where I hear the correction of something I've said but for some reason I have a hard time accepting
The fundamental problem with misinformation is that once people have heard it, they tend to believe and act on it, even after it’s been corrected,
this is so true because when my teachers were saying that it was cause of that they all said that it was just because of the stuff that was going on while Donald Trump was still in presidency
In March 2020, nearly 30% of U.S. adults believed the Chinese government created the coronavirus as a bioweapon
I can relate to that so much because my parents were thinking the same thing and thought that the coronavirus was fake
. Being Indian has never been about returning to the land. The land is everywhere or nowhere
this last quote is so good idk why but it just grabbed my attention a lot when I saw it I find it very interesting
When they first came for us with their bullets, we didn't stop moving even though the bullets moved twice as fast as the sound of our screams, and even when their heat and speed broke our skin, shattered our bones, skulls, pierced our hearts, we kept on, even when we saw the bullets send our bodies flailing through the air like flags, like the many flags and buildings that went up in place of everything we knew this land to be before
this sounds like a inspirational speech like it gives you a vivid picture almost like you can see it in your head
One thing we should keep in mind, moving forward, is that no one ever rolled heads down temple stairs
based on how they told it I thought it was real and because I remember my high school teacher talking about this too and now knowing that it didn't happen it just surprised me
Three of his men were hanged. His brother Wamsutta was let's say very likely poisoned after being summoned and seized by the Plymouth court. All of which lead to the first official Indian war. The first war with Indians. King Phillip's War.
im curious as to what happened that ignited this
hat meal is why we still eat a meal together in November. Celebrate it as a nation. But that one wasn't a thanksgiving meal. It was a land deal meal. Two years later there was another, similar meal, meant to symbolize eternal friendship.
this was real interesting because I didn't know there was two at school they only told me about the thanksgiving one so to me this one was very interesting
It's called the Indian Head Test Pattern. If you left the TV on, you'd hear a tone at 440 hertz—the tone used to tune instruments—
the imagery in this is so vivid
“Knowing the right answer is overrated,”
this is true because sometimes you may know the answer but now how you got it because it has a deeper meaning to it like what did you learn from the answer? did you learn? and all those type of things
When day comes we step out of the shade,aflame and unafraidThe new dawn blooms as we free it
gives hope that everyday is a new day
I speak three tongues
I agree with this because I have a different way of speaking when Im home at work and with my friends
Many lower-income and middle-class students excel in high school only to falter in college. They then struggle to get good jobs.
I believe this to be true but it is the first transition into adulthood and also sometimes lower income people don't have the money most the time
As You Develop Your Paragraph with Analysis, Ask Yourself How, Why, and What Questions…
I think this is important because as a reader I think this can help you have a better understanding of what you are reading and go more in depth to it
Remember, findingthe Balance Is Key
I believe this to be true because me when I'm writing I tend to put a lot of this and not a lot of something else and I don't tend to be good at balancing my writing at times
Analysis is the most challenging aspect of composing your body paragraphs since you are sharing with your audience the connection between and relevance of your ideas and opinions;
I believe this to be true because this would be something I would struggle with a lot
ultural traitor, you're speaking the oppressor's lan-10 guage by speaking English, you're ruining the Spanish language,
I don't believe this is true because if anything it benefits the other person for knowing two languages
talking back to my mother, hablar pa' 'tras, repelar. Hocicona, repelona,
this is relatable because talking back to you mother in latino culture is like one of the worst things one can possible do
34 GLORiA ANZALOOA train it to be quiet, how do you bridle and saddle it? How do you make it lie down? "Who is to say that robbing a people of its language is less violent than war?" -RAY GWYN SMITH1 I remember being caught speaking Spanish at recess -that was good for three licks on the knuckles with a sharp ruler. I remember being sent to the comer
this shows she would get in trouble or hit if she spoke her native language at school
To properly develop these mindsets
I agree with this about developing the mindsets because to me the mind is everything and it is where everything happens so by educating the mind you are educating one self also
Everybody learns differently
I agree with this because everyone learns different and others learn at a different pace then others some are quick and some are slow others are visual learner others are are better by just hearing it and this is good because that way you don't have to do what other people do you can do stuff at your pace and how you want to
we take constructivist teaching and learning further,
as someone who gets bored if topic is not interested this is defiantly. good way to keep students focused and on top of there school work
through the importance of questioning.
it is important to ask questions because without asking questions one cannot learn and expand the mind
wenty-two, colored, born in Winston-Salem
this stands out to me because he could have started it with anything but this shows there could have been even more racism going on back in that time
Helping each other through Eli Review to peer review, make revision plans, and reviseyour writing in order to grow as writers.
this shows you value teamwork so we can grow and strive to become better writers
what areas we need to practice more, andwhere you may be especially engaged or stimulated positively by your learning. I will set asidetime in class to start your Labor Journals each week.
shows you are ready to help a student whenever he needs it
Make-up Work”: Late and/or Ignored activities can be made up on an individual basis
this shows you are patient and understanding